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Posted: 18 years ago

I third that Tinni,😃

Superb and fantastic as usual dear👏. Looks like something has happened to Bani dear, I really hope nothing serious.

And really wish that she is found soon, or comes back, as Neev, needs her and so does Jai, and both need to tell each other that they love one another.😳😃

Hope Bani comes back soon.😃

Till your next update dear.😃

Love

Krishna

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Posted: 18 years ago
owww y did Rano call JW??? I hope everythings alr8... 😕

where the heck is Bani??? 😡

Poor Neev 😭... y is it that alwayzz the kid suffers 4 their parents problems??? 😡

Its really goooood buddy.... 👏

plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz cont soon... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Good as usual 😛 .
Hope Jai realises his feelings soon and bring Bani back 😳 .
Poor Neev hope he gets his Bali back soon 😭
Please continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
I am tired of writing "good part, as usual" - bad part!!!! chalo keh diya, feel better 😃 ...just kidding, amazing part as usual tiny...look forward to your update everyday..


👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: btkr

I am tired of writing "good part, as usual" - bad part!!!! chalo keh diya, feel better 😃 ...


👏 👏 👏
bt

Naughty Naughty😆😆..but seriously guys..all of you...if you do not like anything...please feel free to write...I will appreciate your comments..honestly😊 😊...love tin

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Posted: 18 years ago
Part XXX (its not adult...only weekend spl 😆 )

Jai disconnects the line, starts signing few documents kept by Mary, he was hurrying through them, his mobile rings again, curses,

Hello,
Jijaji mai Rano…
Nobody calls him Jijaji : Wrong no..….
Just then a realization struck him…Rano, kaun Rano, from Mt Abu
Ji, mai Bani di ki cousin…
Ha bolo Rano,

Kal raat humlog jab phone kiye the, Masi ki halat janne ne ke liye to Nachiket ke saath bath hui meri, uske baato se mai mehsos kiya shayad aaplog Bani di ko doondh rahe hai….matlab mai sahi hu na?

Errrr Bani ne abhi tak contact nehi kiya….

Aap jante hai woh kis university me gayi hai...

Usne mujhe Harvard bola tha, lekin udhar nehi hai…tumlogo ko contact kiya hai ki nehi..

Abhi tak nehi…aur sabse ajeeb baath hai Papa ko bhi nehi, woh to har decision Papa ko batati thi, lekin …khyar chhoriye mera bill bar rahe hai ….

Tum kaha ho…

Ek PCO me, apka no. maine WM se abhi abhi liya…yeh batane ke liye…ki aap Princeton University try kar sakte hai…

Princeton, lekin Princeton kiyo…

Udhar Bani di ki pen friend Suzie parti hai, Economics me masters kar rahi hai...bahut saalo se dono me dosti hai, 5 saal pehle woh Bani di se milne ayi thi, Jaipur me, Suzzane McLloyd, Chicago se hai woh, Suzie ko jaroor maloom hoga Banidi kaha hai…mujhe agar pehle maloom hota toh yeh information mai apko pehle hi de deti after all apne hamara family ke liye itna kiya…

So the jigjaw puzzle now was falling into places…..Maine keya kiya…
Kiyu apne Papa ka loan 5 lakh ka chuka diya…
Woh toh Bani ka paisa hai…
Lekin usko itna paisa kaha se milega...
Woh actually woh ....mere project me kaam ki hai na...usko salary mila ….
Tabhi Papa ne accept kiya…achha mai abhi rakti hu, keya huwa jaroor batayiga….
Thanks a lot Rano….bahut dino baad mujhe ek asha di kisine…thanks a lot…
Jai looks at his watch, it must be late evening there, no use of calling anybody….he quickly writes an email to his contact and then goes to google to search for Princeton University, as the results open, he feels unusually excited……

Looks into different sites and students forum, yes Suzie McLloyd is quite a famous person there, latest by tomorrow evening he should hear something positive…..

His mobile rings, Aditya, must be Neev once again…
Ha beta mai raha hu….
Aditya: Jai jaldi ayo....it seems Masi's time has come....
Jai's world comes breaking down….mai abhi pahuchta hu….masi ko bolo…mai a raha hu…achhi khabar dene a raha hu….Jai runs through the corridors of his office …..
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Jai enters his bed room, he is too tired with the passing away of Masi, he performed the duty of a son, today her shradh just got over, at least before her end came he could assure her that he has found out where Bani can be, its just a matter of time he gets to her….shayad yeh baath unho ne register ki hai, kiyuki when she passed away, she had a smile on her lips….Jai flops down on his bed and reaches out for the glass kept on his bedside table for water…and drops his hand on seeing a few flower petals kept in front of Bani's portrait taken by him on Neev's Birthday…a shiver runs through his body…is this a joke? Who could have done this, nobody enters this room except Neev & Tony….just then Neev enters with Nachiket…Jai signals Nachiket and shows him….Nachiket looks towards Neev…

Beta idhar ayo….Jai calls him….yeh tumne rakha…
Ha
Kiyo…
Masi gayi, Bali gayi….
Jai gives a bewildered look at Nachiket....poor Neev...he does not understand the difference...to him its one & all the same, because of Masi he got delayed and now he has to move fast, there are no other reason to be delayed….Nachiket, Neel aur Mera jald se jald jane ki taiyari karo

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Edited by tintiny - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great part tinni!!!
but one thing you had me there when massi entered 😆 😆
anyways i really love that how JW is sulking without his wife but just one thing make him the ruthless and stubborn one, where he's showing his anger...
i hope Rano has some news about Bani because from the looks of it she kinda does...
please continue soon
Rooj
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok this is good news...
so now JW and neev will go to Chicago to look first hand...
i'm all excited....
but poor massi... 😭 😭
please continue soon
Rooj
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: tintiny

Naughty Naughty😆😆..but seriously guys..all of you...if you do not like anything...please feel free to write...I will appreciate your comments..honestly😊 😊...love tin

U know I was pulling your leg right?? 😭

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Posted: 18 years ago
good part 👏 ,i feel sad for neev.
plz continue soon

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