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Posted: 18 years ago
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hahahahahahaha she's tooooo smart..... poor JW.... 😛

its TOOOOOO GOOOOD buddy.... 👏

plzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzz plzzzzzzz cont soon.... 😃

love this Bani... she's sooooooo coooool... 😛 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Min_3088

hey Mamta!!..wow that part waz Fantastic..loved the way she teased him!..haila Jai tu to gaya kaam se..Bechara Jai, he will have a heart attack any time soon
I also loved the song..and the dress was too cute 😳 😆..wonderful job..plz continue soonMin I will continue tonight, i need a dress why not a red one

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Auditi

😆 hahahahahahaha she's tooooo smart..... poor JW.... 😆 😆 😆 😉 😛 of course Bani is smart two can play in same games😉

its TOOOOOO GOOOOD buddy.... 👏 👏 👏 plzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzz plzzzzzzz cont soon.... 😃 love this Bani... she's sooooooo coooool... 😛 😉


Hey Audi i am glad you like the previous part, Bani is clever
Lets see what happens next😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Ahhh, she is a sweet seductress not a behenji anymore!! Very nice, keep it up.

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Ahhh, she is a sweet seductress not a behenji anymore!! Very nice, keep it up.


Well she is a behenji for the family but in private she is something else😉
thats her revenge for him
thanks for reading

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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 4b
Happy New Year🤗
Thanks Jins and Navs for the peer pressure for making me update😆
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Jai is at the balcony breathing some fresh cool air. In his mind he keeps rewinding what Bani just worn. He runs his hands into his thick hair. "What has happened to Bani, what is she up to?" But he is smiling, also he likes her like this open, bold, flirting, she is just his sweet seductress. She is just for him and only for him, and he is only for her and just for her.
He looks out up the sky's, and sees the stars. What a cruel game has my fate played with me. When i thought I loved Pia and wanted to settle with her she ran away and married Pushkar. Then Bani entered my like, it was like we both were destined to end up marrying each other, two souls made for each other. How i wanted her out of my life because the Park Road Raaz was a burden in my heart that was making me hate her, and i wanted her out of my life, then started hating me when she was pregnant with my child, and asked for a divorce. Then that black and white night happened (he puts his hands on his forehead) that I can't remember anything about. Sometimes i doubt that the child is mine, can't it be. Should i tell Bani the truth that I am the father of her child, and I will bear all of her hatred but won't marry her cunning sister. He looks at the star he closes his eyes, and he wishes to himself, I wish that the night didn't happen with her, and I wish from the bottom of my heart that I am not the father of her child even though i long for a kid. As he was saying this a shooting star was going down. He opens his eyes that has tears in them and wipes it quickly because Bani will question him about the tears that he has and he doesn't want to spoil the mood.
He hears the bathroom door shut. He says to himself straighten up, with a smile, Well Mr. Jai Walia get ready for option 2, and this time you will be prepared. I will let Bani come to me. Mr. Walia, Mr. Walia her voice calls. Bani I am out in the balcony he response back. What are you doing in the balcony, its chilly and cold. Come and Join me in the bed, her voice is full of mischievous. Jai is confused, what has happen to Bani. Mr. Walia I am not coming going to come out there. Ok he replies, I will come in only with a condition. She is confused, only if you sing to me. She is confused, me, me no way. Then fine come here. Ok I will sing, but you have to come in first. He hears her footsteps of running, and he enters the room, the candles are low, the room is low, the moonlight is reflecting in their room, there she sits on his side of the bed, her hair is covering her face. She has her one head on so it his supporting her back. Bani, Bani, no response. He walks up to their bed, and sits down slowly. He also lays on his side, and looks at her facing her, even though her face is covered with her hair she can feel him staring at her, which is making the colors of her cheek rise. He runs her bare arms with his hands and goes upward, and then he slowly takes his hand and moves her hair behind her ear. Her eyes are lowered, but he can see the color of her cheeks, which matches the color of her lips. He tilts her chin up with her finger, and makes her face him, and he looks at her with a intense eyes. He stares at her, and brings her face up to close to him slowly and whispers into her ears with a seductive voice "Temptress of my heart, I am waiting for you" and he kisses her cheeks. And he moves her face back and looks at her. He goes to put the other side of her hair behind her ear. When she places hand on his, and stops him, by nodding her head. She comes close to him, and brings her face to him and whispers in his ears with a voice that is fill with passion

Yeh Hai Reshmi Zulfon Ka andhera na ghabraiye
Jahan tak mahak hai mere kesuon ki chalye aiye

Touching his cheeks with her hands, and holding her hair and running along face, making him ticklish, and she gets out of the bed quickly, and walks out, and he sees her back he is shocked, it to straps one from each side it makes an x, and her back side is open to the slow back. Then she does her face to the side and smiles, and turns around giving him the proper view. She is wearing a olive green alter neck silk dress that has side slits from her knee down, showing her perfect figure and curves, showing her legs as she walks wearing a strapy heel.
As she is walking she is singing this to him

Suniye to zara jo haquiqat hai kahte hain hum
Khulte rukte in rangeen labon ki kasam
Jal uthenge diye jugnuon ki tarah
Ji tabassum to farmaiye

And goes wear he is and sits down and places her hands on his chest and leans her head (she is on his on his back)

Yeh Hai Reshmi Zulfon Ka andhera na ghabraiye
Jahan tak mahak hai mere kesuon ki chalye aiye

And then Jai grabs her hand, and turns her around so she is quickly under him (just image lolz) and she he is looking at her from her face then his gaze drop down, and he leans his head towards her and starts kissing everyone expect her lips, and she pulls him closely to her, while he continues to nuzzle her neck, and she slowly whispers in his ears

Pyaasi hai nazar yeh bhi kahne ki hai baat kya
Tum ho mehman to na thehregi yeh raat kya
Raate jaaye rahi aap dil main mere
Arma ban ke rah jayiye,
and then her mouth is sealed with a deep passionate kiss. He pulls her apart from him, and whispers you sing beautifully, and you look gorgeous in this. His hands starts to go behind her back and open the knot. Mr. Walia she says with a sweet seductive voice. Bani not now, Mr. Walia there is one more left after this. Bani it can't wait. No it can't it will be morning. He lets go and she kisses his lips as a thank you.

He lets her go very resultantly, and she makes her way to the bathroom, and he lays down on his back, hands behind his head. Smiling, then he sees the bathroom door open and looks at it and Bani's head is popping out. That was quick. Mr. Walia can you get the black bag from the couch; I forget to take it with me. Bani come out yourself and take it. No shaking her head, the distance from the bathroom and the couch. Please pretty please or else I will lock my self in the bathroom, giving him a serious look, and you will have to go to the show your self. He goes and gets the pink bag, and gives it to her, here you are madam, she takes opens the door so she can take the bag, one hand holding the door, and she takes the bag but Jai isn't letting it go, he is pulling the bag towards him and Bani is trying to pull it towards her side. Mr. Walia please let it go, or with an angry look or else you will be for a surprise. Don't tell me I didn't warn you, I am warning you get ready for the shocker. Smiling Bani, darling when will you learn that Jai Walia isn't scared of anything. Oh really, she raises her eyebrow, fine have your way, you can keep the bag. Jai is smiling, so you are giving up. What happens next it will be your fault Mr. Walia pointing a finger. Then she opens the door, to give view to Jai of what she was wearing. Jai's eyes are popping, and the bag drops to his feet and he steps back. Bani is just in her under garments.😉 She steps out of the bathroom, and bends down to pick up the bag, and puts the stuff that has fallen into the bag, and before turning around and shutting the door, she blows him a flying kiss. Poor Jai he has gone completely and he goes and sits on the bed, and goes gulps down a vodka with rocks.

Its getting to hot in here he says, and opens the rest of the buttons of his shut. He goes and lays down on his bed, closing his eyes, waiting for Bani. Then he hears the door open he turns around and looks at her. Bani comes out wearing rusted orange faux georgette saree having a gold print with dark pink border and pallu. Mr. Walia get up and get ready, she says this ignoring his gaze and passing him, and going to dresser to do her make up and puts her jewelry on. Sitting up, Bani you are getting ready, he asked confusedly. Where is your blouse? Turning around, Mr. Walia i am wearing a blouse. He gets up and starts walking to her. Don't you like the saree, she says with an innocent face. I thought pink looked good on me. Pink does look good on you. Bani twirls around in the saree, but her pallu slips. How do i look? Beautifully, charming, sexy and attracting. Now go and change your blouse, if you are going to go to the event with me. Going up to him and putting her hand around his neck. Mr. Walia you don't like the blouse, Bani i love it but what will the media stay, instead of watching the show, they will be watching you. So, why does it matter? Loosing his control Why does it matter you are my wife, pulling her up close to his body so she is touching him, lips brushing lightly. And no one will look at you says with possessiveness and while gritting his teeth. Your pallu doesn't have a pin. My my Mr.Walia aren't you getting to possessive. Rubbing the back of his neck with her thumbs. I am possessive about you, putting a distance between them, i can't stand when someone looks at you in wrong way, his eyes have the intense passion, love, combined with anger that a love has and someone possessive has. Pulling the pallu of her shoulder, and kissing it, and kissing along side of her blouse, which is causing a deep sensation in Bani's entire body and sending shivers to her. While kissing, Bani this blouse will give wrong message to guys, and they will all end up in the hospital with broken bones. She is wearing a bikini type blouse, which has very very thin strap, thin strap at the back. Clenching is jaws, and holding her tightly, his fingers leaving a mark on her back. He lets go of her and sees her eyes is filled with passion, and love, and she whispers I only wear it for you. He tilts her head back and gently kiss it, and then bring her face upward and kisses her and picks her up and carries her to the bed. Gently puts her down and kisses her passionately and one thing leads to the other and the scene slowly fades away.😳😳😳

Her dress doesn't have the fish tell, and it has two slits on each side.
Here is Bani's dress
This dress was sponsored by Jins


Here is her Saree but the blouse is different

Wishing everyone a happy new year🤗
I hope you like it😳😳😳
Edited by ziddi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
mamta that was awesome!
man is it hot in here!
i thikn it is!
even though its like 39 outside!
i didnt get a warning today!
not like it matters! 😆 i still would have read even with the warning 😆
bechara jai ki halat kya hogi??
lol
and i alreayd told you
you have to update on the first
so start off the year with an update!
HAPPY NEW YEAR! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
I have added two paragraphs to part 4B has a new years present😉
Enjoy Happy Reading
Preview for tomorrow
Charity show
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Posted: 18 years ago
haila mamta!
thanks for adding two paragraphs!
aww jai possessive over bani
and bani just messing with jai!
please continue soon!

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