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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

Great part... 👏
their was past very well described... 👏

So what are his plans now...
Can we get an update soooooooooon

Poo



Thanks Poo!!

At least someone picked up on the description lol!!

All plans revealed in the next part!!

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: $h@aq...

waitingg ...and waiting ...and waiting....and still waitinggg ....updateee kab karnee ka iraadaa haaiii ....?? yyaarr mee waitingg soo badlyyy ...want an updatee nowww !!! nahi to 😭 😭 😭

Awwww!!

Sowwy, okie, here it goes!!

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Posted: 18 years ago

Sowwy for the long wait guys!!

But finally here's the last part!!.........I don't think I need to warn you all as my ending's are usually lame, so here it goes:

Gorgeous. That was the only word that came to his mind as he watched her walking – no, too simple - floating down the stairs, like an angel, though she looked no less than a queen.

He was glad that an amused Rano had agreed to be a part of his little ploy – 'accidentally' losing the sari before presenting her sister with the beautiful golden material, though on her it looked even more beautiful, the colour complimenting her fair complexion making her glow.

He watched with greedy eyes as she turned to acknowledge what one of the women had said, the material shifting slightly to reveal the side of her swollen stomach, before she turned her back to him, the sight of only one thin dori adorning her back causing his heart to skip which was definitely more than one beat.

Suddenly his reverie was interrupted by a fit of giggles. Leading Anu down to the hall, he realised that she was accompanied by a horde of women, much to his irritation. He needed to talk to her – alone.

*****

The next four hours or so left him cold, impatient, and nursing a splitting a headache.

Mausi had blatantly refused to allow Jai in to the main house, despite his convincing arguments that he had work to do and would be locked away in his study, quiet unaware of whatever the ladies got up to on the hall. In response, she had simply handed him his laptop and a few files.

"You can work in the outhouse where I've put all the other men up"

A second later, he was gaping at the door which marked the entrance to the Walia house. He had just been kicked out of his own home. All plans to watch Bani secretly from the landing were abandoned.

Instead Jai had entered the outhouse to see Tarun, Pushkar, Sahil, Aditya, Ranveer and a few other close friends seated on the plush sofas, chatting merrily and drinking. He had joined them for a few minutes before mumbling something about fresh air and hurrying out towards the main house.

Hanging around the large windows of the Walia mansion had attracted many curious and suspicious looks from the several women who scurried in and out. Not surprisingly he had breathed a sigh of relief when the guests had all left and Tony had informed him that he was allowed to go back in.

Entering through the front doors, he realised it was almost midnight and most of the family had retired to bed, thoroughly exhausted from the day's activities.

He had been surprised to see Pia, Rano and Bani still awake, and amidst the sisters sat Tarun, his arm placed casually around Bani's waist as Pia and Rano chatted animatedly. Through narrowed eyes he watched as Tarun grinned, leaning slightly towards Bani before kissing her lightly on her cheek, attaining giggles from her sisters and causing her to blush.

Clenching his fists, Jai strode over to the small group, which instantly grew quiet as they grew aware of him, though Tarun had refused to move his hands, much to Jai's chagrin.

"Bani, I need to talk to you, in private"

The last said with a meaningful glance towards Tarun who only tightened his grip on Bani, though she seemed unaware of the tension between the two men, her cheeks slightly flushed as she greedily drank him in, dressed in his trademark black with his shirt casually undone slightly at the top and hair tousled by impatient fingers.

Feeling as if she could follow him to the ends of the earth, she attempted to get up only to be pulled back down by Tarun who had adopted a cheery demeanour, though there was a slight edge to his voice.

"Private? Sorry Mr. Walia, but I'm sure Bani would rather stay here."

"I would prefer for you not to interfere."

Said Jai through gritted teeth, keeping control of his temper while Tarun also lost his smile and replied in a cold voice.

"She needs to rest"

"I'll make sure she does"

And before Bani could do little more than blink, she found herself being dragged towards her old bedroom with Jai tightly clutching her wrist, leaving the sisters to cajole a protesting Tarun.

*****

"Who's child is this"

She licked her lips which had suddenly gone dry as Jai towered over her, anger flashing in his eyes and his mere presence filling the room, making her want to shrink in to the warm covers of the bed where he had deposited her a few seconds before.

"Tarun's"

She finally replied boldly, though instantly regretting her words as he clasped her wrists, pulling her closer until the feel of his breath on her lips sent her mind reeling.

"The truth Bani"

"It is the truth"

Her voice sounded squeaky and the words had 'liar' written all over them.

Surprisingly, Jai's lips curved into a smile and his lips brushed her ear as he said in a slow husky voice.

"Shall I tell you another truth Bani? That sari was gifted by me, and I'd quiet like it back"

Her eyes opened wide in shock and she grabbed a fistful of his shirt as he unclipped her pin, sending the golden material tumbling to the floor as he lightly nipped her earlobe.

She tried to protests, though her incoherent words were silenced as he devoured her lips with his, pushing his fingers through her hair until the several pins came loose, scattering over the bed as her hair fell to her shoulders and covered her back where he had already started to work on her blouse.

She shivered as his thumb gently circled her bare shoulder before his lips took its place, gently working up to her neck before following the neckline of her blouse, which he soon discarded of, and kissed every inch of visible skin.

It was a good thing that the door was firmly locked.

*****

"Are you cold?"

She turned round, to see him making his way towards her, his body tightly wrapped in one of the messy bed sheets. She was dressed no better. Awakening almost half an hour before, Bani had grabbed the first piece of clothing – his shirt – and slipped it on before leaning against the large window.

In response to his question, she shook her heads in the negative.

"You're shivering"

He said before wrapping her in the sheet and pulling her body closer to his, allowing her lean against his chest while he traced soft patterns over her stomach.

"Can I ask you something"

"Hmm"

He replied before nuzzling her shoulder softly.

"How did you know that I lied, that Tarun wasn't…"

"When I saw Tarun kiss you and then touch your stomach, I was jealous, not angry. Later I realised that doubting you has got me nowhere in the past which is why I pulled Rano away from her little trip with Sahil and stormed into Pia's party arrangements demanding to know answers."

"And they told you?"

He nodded lightly, pulling her closer to the warmth of his body.

"I made sure they convinced you to come to the godh bharai, and planned a civilised conversation where I told you how much I love you, but because of Tarun…"

She blushed a deep shade of red until something struck her. She turned round until his hands were caressing her back and looked him straight in the eye.

"Does that mean you really love me?"

"Of course I do Bani. When you left I felt like kicking myself for not being able to stop you. I searched for you everywhere, but no luck. I love you Bani, with all my heart"

And to prove his point, he bent and claimed her lips once again.

Thanku for the support everyone!!........Hopefully I'll be back with another FF soon!!

Edited by nibbles - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Okie........but you better be revising now Shafu!!

Willr ead your comments later!!😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: perveen

that was good nibbles yaar

Thanku hun!!

Glad you liked it!!😛

Edited by nibbles - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
That was an awesome end Nibbles.....to a really great ff...

It was soo short though, but it was still very sweet!!! 😳

Please start a new ff soon!!!

Luv ya,

Meera 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
I was gone for one week...and what do you do?! You end the FF?!! 😭 😡
okay i swear i'm done crying 😆

But wow...that was an AMAZING FF nibbles...I'm just disappointed that you ended it so soon...would have loved to see jai romancing bani 😉 😳

Loved part 4 or was it part 5?! the hot part 😉 😳

and tarun is too cute...all protective...poor jai all jealous 😆

loved the FF nibbles...i'm still sad though....you didn't even make it long enough for me to write my weird comments 😔 😆

but i'll be back w/ those comments once you start the next one.........you better be thinking of the next FF right now 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
That was a brilliant ending.
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was a beautiful ending.loved it.very short and sweet ff.throughly enjoyed reading it.plz do write many more great stories like this one.will be eagerly waiting for them. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Nibu!
that was awesome!
tears its over!
that means there is going to be another FF!!!
😃

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