Tere Ishq Mein - Page 30 (tiny note)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys!!😛

Attempting something a little more mature than CCK......For those of you who haven't read my earliers FFs, here's the link to CCK4, where you'll find the eralier links as well:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=472968&K W=Chup+Chup+Ke+4

Hopefully I'll get as much response as I did for my last one!😳

The credit of this storyline goes to Shafu who helped me a lot with this.......Thanku hun🤗, and if anyone doesn't like the FF, you know who to throw your johoothes at!😉

Don't know yet if this will be a series, or if anyone will die!🤔........hopefully it'll be no longer than 10 parts!

Okie.......here's part 1......as usual, waiting for your comments - good or bad!!

*****

"Bani wait!"

Ignoring his shout, Bani giggled as her dainty heels came in constant contact with the lush green grass underneath, the sun shining overhead and the light breeze drifting through her hair as she ran amongst the trees. Finally he seemed to have caught up with her as his hands circled around her waist, causing Bani to shriek as she found herself being twirled in the air, her screams mingling with his deep throaty laughter.

"Sorry, sorry! Put me down, please!"

Seconds later she was once again on her feet, her back resting against the rough bark of a tree as she breathed heavily, laughing at the same time as he leaned slightly against her, regaining his breath.

"For someone who jogs every morning, you don't seem to be a good runner."

She teased as he looked up, mischief reflecting in his eyes.

"Oh yeah"

All air seemed to have left her as he took a step closer, his gaze not flickering once as his warm breath tickled her skin sending her heart pounding against her chest. She clamped her eyes shut and breathed heavily as his lips trailed painfully slow across her jaw line, while his hands lightly pulled her against his torso.

"Bani…"

His husky voice and his fingers playing lightly across her waist sent her head reeling, a small moan escaping her lips as gently nipped her ear.

"Bani…Bani…Bani di…Bani di! Get, up!"

"Ow!!"

Bani struggled in to a sitting position and rubbed her eyes, gently massaging her head as she found herself in a tangle of sheets on the floor with Rano rolling in laughter on her bed.

"Rano!!"

Picking up a pillow that had taken the short flight down with her, Bani threw it at her sister before releasing herself from the sheets and jumping on top of the bed. Soon the girls found themselves in the middle of pillow fight, giggling without a care in the world.

"Wassgoingon?!!

Rano and Bani turned towards the door to see Pia walk in wearing a pink knee-length nighty as she rubbed the back of her sleepily, her dark brown curls bouncing on her shoulders. Once inside, her gaze swept disapprovingly over both her sisters, dressed in large oversized t-shirts, the end brushing their mid-calf's, as their hair lay dishevelled on their shoulders, their cheeks red and laughter in their eyes, each clutching a pillow. Wanting to be no part of it, Pia shook her head and attempted to walk out of the room, when a soft pillow hit her back. Whirling round, Pia gaped at Rano and Bani, as they lay sprawled on the bed, doubled up in laughter.

"Right! That's it!"

Retrieving the pillow, Pia jumped on to the bed and joined in the fun, enjoying with her siblings like she had last done nearly two years ago.

A tiring twenty minutes later, all three fell back on the bed breathless, the younger two cuddling up to Bani.

"The last two days have been so much fun di. I wish I didn't have to go back"

Pia nodded, agreeing with Rano as the thought of leaving Bani all alone again entered her thoughts.

Smiling fondly at the forlorn face of her sister, Bani pulled her into a hug and gently stroked her hair, like her mother had done to her when she was small.

"I don't mind you two staying here, but I don't think Sahil and Pushkar will be to happy about the idea"

Bani grinned and even Rano managed a small smile, though she still felt a little weepy. In a last attempt to cheer her up, Bani scrambled to her knees and pulled Rano and Pia up with her.

"Ok, enough of this, I'm starving! You two get dressed while I go and make breakfast"

"Di, are you sure? I mean, me or Rano could…"

Smiling, Bani ruffled Pia's hair adoringly as her sister looked at her with concern.

"I think I can manage making breakfast for another two people. Now both of you hurry up and get ready. Breakfast in 10 minutes!"

With their concerned warnings falling on deaf ears, Bani left her two sisters to freshen up as she made her way towards the kitchen.

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naa re naa re, naa re naa renaa re naa re, naa re naa rebarso re, megha megha barso remegha megha barso re, megha barsomeetha hai kosaa hai, baarish ka bosa haikosaa hai, kosaa hai, barrishon ka bosa haijal jal jal jal jal jal jal thal jal thal

Shaking her hips to the music blaring out of the radio, Bani sang along as she busied herself in preparing the last of the breakfast while taking a quick few sips of the cup of coffee in front of her. Would Pia notice if there were a few drops missing?

Her debate on whether to prepare another cup of coffee or not was disturbed by the insistent ringing of the doorbell. Before Bani could do little more than turn her head, Pia's heels clattered against the stairs as she rushed down.

"I'll get it!"

Satisfied, Bani turned back to the problem at hand and finally decided to make a fresh cup, also draining the remainder of the one in her hand. After all, why waste it?

naa re naa re, naa re naa renaa re naa re, naa re naa retu tu turu, tu tu turu, tu tu turukaali kaali raaten, kaali raaton meinyeh badarvaa baras jaayegagali gali mujh ko, megha doondegaaur garaj ke palat jaayegaghar aangaan angana, aur paani ka jharnabhool na jaana mujhe, poochenge varnare beh ke chali, main toh beh ke chalire kehthi chali, main toh keh ke chalire megha

While she bopped over to the cupboard her ears strained to listen to the muffled conversation following the shriek of excitement.

"Probably Tarun"

She mused. After all, it had been a while since her younger sisters had met with Tarun, and Pia had extracted a promise of a visit from him last night over the phone.

As she poured the last of the coffee into a mug, the front door closed and Pia's chatter filled the hallway, closely followed by Rano's surprised voice.

Piling the cups and plates onto a large tray, she listened as the RJ wished a couple a Happy Anniversary and prepared himself to play a romantic number.

Smiling, she was about to turn around when an all to familiar voice filled the kitchen.

"Isn't that t-shirt a little to big?"

Face losing all colour, Bani whirled round to look into the eyes of her (ex-) husband as the RJ switched tracks.

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do ZaraDheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do ZaraLamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa JaayeHum… Hum Tum…Tum… Hum Tum…

"Hello Bani. So this is where you've been hiding all this time."

Jai drawled.

*****

Good enough to continue?!😕

Pages: 1, 5, 10, 12, 17, 22, 28

Edited by nibbles - 18 years ago

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Himmi_K thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i am first....i am first...i will go read and come back hun?? 😆

hey read full part...😊

starting took my breath away.....how can you make your FF so sensuous evertime???😳 i read all 3 CCK....and i am sure this FF turns out even more successful than that👏👏👏

are JB already divorced??? i am sure Jai must be wooing Bani back and thats simply wonderful......

continue soon honey.....

Edited by himali_kokate - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: himali_kokate

i am first....i am first...i will go read and come back hun?? 😆

Lol........okie Himali!!😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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😳 I like it........seems fun!
Am like pia in it 😆 ..Hai bani dreaming about a guys 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey that was good can you up date a second part please today that would be nice yaar
do cont soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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welcome back nibbles 😉
back wid a bang
good one dear cont soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Fantastic start 👏

Update soooooooooooon

Poo

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow, what a wonderful start jaanu👏
So are all three of the sisters married?
Bani n Jai are divorce
Whats this Tarun funda?
I wonder who Bani was dreaming about😉
Please write soon😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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what are you talking about.......

you better continue..........

this is one hell of FF i have ever read ..............mind blowing, excillent (my vocabulary ends right their)

and yes please continue soon...................

pooja
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Posted: 18 years ago
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you're back with a FF!!!! 🤗 I was going through CCK withdrawal 😭 😆

But wow hun..this seems even more interesting 👏 👏 EX husband eh?! 😉 😳

so she's been hiding from him?! I'm assuming Rano and Pia are happy with Sahil and Pushy?!

awesome start!! 👏 👏 continue soon 😛

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