FF: Life Chp27 Pg91(7/6)(Lst Prt) Nt pg93 - Page 63

Originally posted by: *Piku*

sv

Yet waiting😆

Originally posted by: *Guli*

haila that was just awesome!!!!

they coming closer!!!!😳

lets see what happens in next update

plz cont soon!!!!!

Thanx a lot Guli

Yup they are...will update soon 😊

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Shrut,

Nice part, poor Bani, had to go through a lot as an unmarried mother. Even though her parents seem to have a loving marriage, they really were not there to support her, so hardly the perfect family (In my opinion) - but I am glad for the grandmother.

Being envious of all the people who had partners, I kind of felt bad for Bani. But looks like JW is here, back in his life and he is trying too get the angel back into his life again....

Life does come full circle, doesn't it?

It does... as they say what you give is what you get...everything comes back again!

Well her grandmother had to be there - someone is always needed, that person could be anyone - someone you call your own or even a complete stranger!!!

Originally posted by: amiee

wonderrful part why did you stop there not fair cant wait to read more

Thanx! Should keep the suspense factor on na😉

Originally posted by: damilola

Great part shruti 👏

ohh bani went through a lot didnt she ?

and pple talking abput her

dat must not have been good

i cnt believe her own mother wanted her to abort poor jyot

im happy she didnt listen to her mum and went to her grandma

Loved this part

ctn soon

and tnx for d pm

Thanx a lot dammy!

Her mother didn't think it was right - and at some level she was justified!

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Awesome part.
liked it.
JB are coming closer...good
plz cont. soon

Thanx a lot ridhi!

Originally posted by: nikita28

Hiya,

Great part.

Please continue soon.

Nikita

Thanx a lot Nikita!!!😊

Originally posted by: siumi

Fantabulous update 👏
Loved it with my whole heart, please do update more often dear!!! 😳 😳
Thanks 😊 😊 😊

Thanx a lot sukh!

Not many parts to go - 1 or 2 more... but will try and update often...the long gap was cos of exams!!! curse them😆

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Great part Shruti. So when Bani needed the most her parents did not lend the shoulders to support her. Felt bad for Bani. The dance, the song and JB's unspoken feelings were portrayed amazingly. Thanks. Well done.
👏

Thanx a lot Khushboo!

I am glad I am able to depict the emotions and get them across!!!😳

Originally posted by: nema123

Wonderful update Shruti... 👏

Thanx a lot!😊

Originally posted by: swathi

A nice update Shruti...I always look ahead to this FF as I feel that this is one of the FFs where both Jai and Bani are quite mature age and mind wise..just coz Jai said that he loves Bani she does not rush into his arms....just the way you might possibly react that age...Bani's loneliness was very well depicted in the party..Made a very good read....Would be sad to see the story end but with a logical conclusion that it will surely get am sure am going to be happy at the end of it.

Swathi

Thanx a lot Swathi...I am glad that a story like mine, which is pretty unlike others is being appreciated...A risk well paid off😳

I didn't want to show them rushing into anything cos as you said, at that age and after so much history there is bound to be apprehension!

I'll try to end it with a logical conclusion and not to make it very dramatic...

Thank you so much for the very very encouraging comments!!!😊

Originally posted by: nandita1209

Poor Bani… had to go through a lot as a teenage unwed mother… Thank god…at least she had her grand mother to turn to…

Now Jai is back in her life… Hope she lets her apprehensions aside and gives Jai a chance… their future a chance…

Nice update… Will be waiting for the next part…

she may give him a chance but not yet - when she is sure of it then...its a case of once bitten twice shy!

Thanx nandita😊

Originally posted by: nir_jaanu

he shurti.
awesome update.
aww.. jai is so sweet.
continue soon please

Thanx a lot nir...
Will continue asap!!!

Originally posted by: btkr

That was a long part?? 😉 Didn't seem so.. Bani's emotions swinging back and forth- nice description of that and also the party - so natural to feel left out when everybody else has a partner. Glad that she is slowly giving in..
👏 👏 👏

Haha it was quite long...

I am repeating myself but am glad the emotions are being understood well!

She is taking her time but is getting there...

Thnx a lot!

Originally posted by: j&b84

hi yar, sorry for late comments re, well describe the experience of the unwed mother feeling re, i just hope so tt bani duffer well open her mouth and talk her. high time she speak up nw... looking for ur next upated

all the best for ur exams

Thnx hima...Man you sure dont like Bani do you😆

Originally posted by: Aveer_123

Do cont. soon!!!

Will do so asap...thanx

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

Wonderful Part 👏 👏 👏

Bani's feelings... her hardships... very well portrayed 👏

Pessimistic as she was and an eternal optimistic as she believed herself to be

Now where have I heard this before 😆
her parents... what do I say about them... what she did was wrong... but this kind of treatment 😡

Thankgod she had her grandmother for support...

Bani's longing for a perfect family... her lonliness ... was very heart touching...

I hope JnB's life takes a turn towards the happiness they deserve... and their kid deserves... (U know na 😉 )

I'm soo looking forward to the next part... and the track SHOULD be where I want it to be.... 😃 😃 😃

Poo

Thanx Poo and even I wonder where you've heard it before😆

The track remains in the dark for you...I'll try not letting you down...

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey
gr8 part
cont.soon

Thanx a lot...

Will asap!!!

Originally posted by: Ammukutty

Shruti,

Just caught up with last few parts of this ff....I love ur writing style...You are too good in writing emotions...beautiful updates 👏 👏 👏 ...w'll catch up from the start....absolutely beautiful...JB's characters h've been portrayed so beautifully....your characters seem etched in real life..2 mature characters....I love them...Jyot is a smart kid.... really touched my heart dear...enjoyed reading each n every dialogue written by you.....you are a fabulous writer....their emotions, their awkwardness ,depth of their love,poems,song, quotes, everything was beautifully penned....loved it....It's worth reading it....waiting for the next part....

Luv,
Ammu.

Thanx a lot Ammu - am glad you weren't disappointed after reading what I'd written!

Abt my writing, all I can say is that I try (sorry pathetic at answering to compliments!!!)😳

I'll try my best to keep the level the same - if not take it higher..

Will come back with the next update asap...

Originally posted by: jigna_07

hi shrutiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
😃 😃 😃
there is no way that is seven pages
i read it too quick
chal its an update 😃
sigh when will these two get it together
why does bani think their relationship has no future???
don't separate them noooooooooooooooo
and now continue soon 😃

Look who is here...I am honestly impressed!

You read it too quick cos you read it too quick😆

They will sabr karo...

You should be the last person to temme to continue but will asap...

Hey!

First I agree I deserve all the abuses you may want to throw at me for not updating! I don't have the best of the excuses but the first delay was due to exams and then due to b'day, christmas and now new year! Oh and in between writing 2 short stories!

Am not in town as of now so I promise to update latest by 8th-10th Jan!

Anyway this note was for that and to wish each one of you'll,

A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! 😃

Ring out the old, ring in the new,
Ring, happy bells, across the snow:
The year is going, let him go;
Ring out the false, ring in the true.
- Lord Tennyson


Love,
Shruti