Fanfic what will bani do part5 update pg3

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Posted: 19 years ago
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All Every one.

i have log in after long time............

miss alots😭

but i am happy to be back😊😊

i will sart this fanfic from where it ended on friday:

jai and bani's room.

bani is facing jai with a question on her face. jai is not able to look at her, he look down.

bani: mr walia....... with a big phase..... is it true whatever rano said..........

jai how look up at her with a lot's of courage........... he had tears in his eye's........

bani eyes also got numbed...

bani: mr walia anwser me....... but jai couldn't say a word..

bani: mr walia tell me with a louder tone......batayia mujhe kya rano ne jo kaha kya ho sach hai........ batayia ..... app ki khamosyi mujhe mardal rahe hai......

jai look at her and say: bani ......his voice is shaking........ bani i am sorry........ ho mera............ but before he finish's bani cut's him off. by lifting her hand up to stop him saying anything further.

bani hadthis kind of death of hope expression.... and tears was rolling down her eyes........ drop down on her kness and cry her heart out ..... jai goes close to her and holds her in his arms.....

jai: bani ......bani mujhe maff karo.... ho main hosh me nnei ta..............

bani push him away........... bani: mr walia how could you do this to me.......

she got up so did jai........

jai : bani plz forgive me.........

bani: how can i......... a women can share everything of her's but not her husband.............. no mr walia....... u haven't finish who is she.......

jai: bani plz ......i love you ..

bani: mr walia who is she........

jai: bani.......you wouldn't be able to bear it

bani: her name......... tell me.... with a very loud tone..

jai: PAI

listening to this bani competely break down and she fainted.....

jai hold her and put her on bed.......and call the doctor.............

the doctor came and check her........ and give some medcian and went.........

bani was still behosh............ jai come and sit beside bani and looked at her

jai: bani plz forgive me .......... i never wanted this to happened but sometimes things are not under your control......... i did the biggest mistake of my life.......... bani i didn't tell u this bcoz i was fear that you wouldn't be able to bear it ......... and i can't see u in this way i don't want to loss u bani I love you......... he kiss bani's hand and go................

next moring.......

jai come to his bedroom and look for bani but can't find her anywhere.......... and he saw a letter on the bed..............

jai read it............ and he is shock!!!!

plz do reply😊

sorry 4 any spelling mistake or if i bored u.......

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Posted: 19 years ago
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😳 thats nice ! ...so cute please update soon 😛
👏 well come back as well!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thats a nice story. Can you increase your font size. Thanks and update soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Great Start👏
Poor Bani😭
I think she is pregnant
can you increase the font size little bit
please write soon😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
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great start ,please keep updating
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thank alot you guyz 😊

part 2 is on the way
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hello guyz…….
I am sorry for the delay , it was cause I had exam……… sorry once again….
Before starting the second part thanks alots for you replying back with lovely comment.

Here we go..

Part 2

Jai is all shock and can't believe what he has just read…….
Jai call out ………… masi, dadi ,, rano….. running downstairs.

Masi: kya howa munna
Jai: masi …… his voice shakes………. Masi who bani…………
Rano: kya howa didi ko
Jai: who bani and hand the letter to rano…………
Rano after reading it : didi gayi liken kaha……. With tears in her eyes………
Mr walia if anything happene to my didi I wouldn't leave ……it all your fault………
Masi: rano what are you saying how it is munna's fault………..
Jai how is not saying a word
Rano: masi mr walia ne didi ko doka deya hai………… and when didi found out she couldn't stand it and she has gone leaveing everyone behind……….. it all mr walia's fault……… and I am more worried of where di is what if she harm herself……..
Jai: no rano nothing would happen to bani ……… I would not let anything happen to her …………..
Aditya: jai we should not waste any more time lets go and look for bani……….. she must have not gone very far yet………..
Jai nods his head and they go to look for bani………….
Rano continue telling masi the all truth about ons of pia and jai………….

Jai and aditya is looking for bani every where and in the background the song tere bin plays…………….

After 18 hours jai and aditya come home jai who look sad and lost……..
Mai: kya howa bani ka kuch pata chella………..
Jai not saying anything ………..
Aditya: neyi masi pata neyi bani kaha chelli gayi hai……………we tell police and they are also looking for her……….

Jai: masi what should I do………….i can't live without bani…………
Masi: it all your fault ……I am a shamed of you …..how could you do this ………..before she continues she sees pia coming in all happy………

Masi walk toward her and slap pia across her face …………
You are not even worth of being called a sister……. How could you think that you would take bani's place ……your are not even worth for it …………..
Now get out of my house………..

Pia very rudely: say as jai wife in future I would stay here but for now I am staying here cause this is my sister's house ………. Somjea…….
Rano: pia……. How dare you talk to masi like this ………now get out of this house there is no one in this house for you…………
You have ruin dis life (crying) she have lift the house she is gone…….

Pia: rano………… one day dis has to leave mr walia so that is was today……..
Listening to this rano slap pia across her face…………..
Rano: get lost …………dragging her out
Pia: Rano……. Let me make it clearer that I am not leaveing until mr walia tell me to leave so ……………
Rano look at mr walia but mr walia look down and walk off to the study room and pia followed him………….

study room

pia: mr walia I am glad that you have told every one the truth ………
jai: pia leave me alone…….. it all your fault now go away……..
pia: it not my fault I was going to abort the child but you said not to and………… before she could continue……… a voice come out saying
WHAT CHILD YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT
And it none other then pushker………….
Pia: pushker what are you talking about…………..
Pushker comes to her and SLAP her on her face…………
Jai: pushker…..
Pushker: mr walia pia is lieing to you the truth is that she is not pregnant ……….. she is doing all this to gain her own dreams ………….. she is such a cheap women that cause of her greed she can distory her own sister's house and poor bani doesn't even know anything……….
~Jai who look stunned by listening to all this
Pia: mr walia he is lieing believe me……….
Pushker: mr walia here is the report which I collected from the hospital ……..
Jai take it and look at it …………
When he finish reading it anger come across his face………..
And walk to pia…………pia who is now frighten
Pia: mr walia who me………
Jai slap her and say: shut up just shut up ……………… how dare you…………get lost before I kill you …go away …………..jai start dragging her out of the house and every one is looking pia beg in front of masi and rano but both of them trun around and jai threw her out of the house and shut the door on her face……….
Pia wipe her taer and say to herslf: I will come back mr walia and that day would be your last day………and that is my promise……………

Jig to herslf : wow what a day two of the sister are send out of the house and one to go……..and start lughing…………in her usually way.

JB room.
Jai is remember all the good moment which he spend with bani and the song tere bin start playing
Jai o himself: bani where are you ….i need you without you I am so lonely………..where did you go…………

Here we see bani walking on the street on her own…………….and has tears in her eyesand bani to herself: why mr walia you did this to me why…………… the song tere bin plays………

Tuta hai mere har ashiana
Sajan tu ne yeh kya kiya
Koiya hai her rasata
Soyase hai her ye jaga
Ab kya karo kis se kaho
Ajanna se yeh sab jaha
Tere bin me u kis jane kis jana tere bin

There is heave rain and wind is bowling bani hold her head and fell down unconscious, on the floor………….
Just then a car stop and a man come out and ……. He take bani with him…………………

Ok I have to stop here………..
Thanks alots………..

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Posted: 19 years ago
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oh man!! i loved this!! this is awesome!!!! 👏

is the dude natu? 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
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holy mother..i like the way this fic is going...UPDATE>..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I love it, please cont. sooner!!!

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