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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: mandu

when I talked abt tarun deceiving...I meant the kneejerk reaction that bani will have first off and then as you said will remember her later relationship with him...but 1st off even though she wanted him to not let jai know and all..her 1st sense will be betrayal...i mean that is what Im guessing...

and where Jai is concerned....yes he is going to be pretty burned up...and that will make for some misunderstandings before all is well I guessšŸ˜†

Its fun to toss ideas about what is my guess about where you are going to take us...Im happy if im somewhat close and even happier when Im totally off base

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cheers

mandu

I completely agree with what you are sayign about Tarun...and infact...I think Tarun has also realized it...atleast in my next part...I have it ready just tweaking it a little so that I can move the story forward...

As for Jai...I am not going to have him any misunderstandings...I mean I will make Tarun fess up to him...so that he does not misunderstand anything...but bringing back Bani is going to be a whole another issue...

And thanks for tossing ideas...it helps me think and put down some ideas I can use in the future episodes...so please do continue..

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Posted: 18 years ago
rivya nice part
cont soon
n happy new year
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hello all...I am back with another update...and possibly my last.

There seem to be new people reading this FF...but somehow again the lack of response is causing me to feel that this FF is not upto the mark and I would rather stop it here...

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Chapter 15:

Once Bani left the room…Jai felt like his whole world turned upside down in what seemed like just a few minutes…maybe half an hour…how was this fair God? Or was he destined to suffer for the rest of his life for a mistake that he did not commit? See the love of his life married to his best friend? 😭 And his own child growing up away from him? As soon as he thought about this, his thoughts returned back to Tarun who was still standing there flabbergasted at the happenings of the past few minutes.

Tarun at this moment felt like the biggest je*k šŸ˜• on the face of the earth…what has he done now? He knows that Jai's life without Bani was a torture for him…but the deed was done. How could he, without a moment's hesitation have married Bani when he knew she was still in love with Jai? šŸ˜’ And even though she did not remember anything about her past, it was evident from her recent encounter with Jai that there was something inside her that still stirred when she saw Jai. šŸ’” How was he to undo what has happened? And what will Binita's reaction be if she finds out about her past? Will she believe Tarun and trust him like she did in the past? What if she turns against him? Will he be able to survive her hatred? šŸ¤”

"What have you done Tarun? What have I done? Tell me now…my great friend…why did you not once think that you could have contacted me and we could have together done something at that point? Why did you just make up this cock and bull story? 😔 And what is with the whole Binita thing? 😔 Ohhh…let me see…now I get it…you…you who still claims to be my friend…is in love with Bani…the woman you know I cannot live without…the woman who accepted your story as the truth since she did not have any memory of her own…why Tarun… why did you deceive me and Bani both? And what about my son…is he to grow up and live all his life not knowing who his father is?" said a cynical Jai, sarcasm laid in his every word.

(Let's say while all this was going on…prankster Krish had managed to slip out of the room again. I do not want the baby to be witness to any of the verbal assault that is about to take place)

Tarun was guilty, yet as he thought of that day he could not get over his anger. 😔
"Enough of this cr*p Jai. I have had enough of all this. Listen to me now will you. I gave her a new identity since she had wanted one. She wanted a new name even before her attempted suicide and consequently lost her memory. She wanted to go away from you and you keep forgetting that the two of you were officially divorced. No, correction, you did not forget that…and that is why she is in the state she is in now…you are the one who is solely responsible for her current state. And don't even get me started on what all she had to go through because of you." šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ (I love Tarun so could not help it)

"Me? What did I do? You took her to Mt. Abu and promised me to convince her to talk to me. I waited for you to come back. And you never came back until now. How am I responsible for what happened? šŸ˜• "

"Wait you did Jai, but you could not wait any longer, right? The day she decided to end her life was the day you had announced your engagement to Pia. 😔 It was there, the headline news on all the dailies. That is what had prompted the sudden change in her behavior. That was the last nail in the coffin, she did not think twice before she jumped. I was shocked too, but only after Bani was better again did it register that it was your engagement's news that caused her to take that drastic step. And you ask me how you are responsible. Could you not even wait for me to come back to Mumbai? Or were you so desperate to be with Pia?"

"Tarun, what do you mean? You know the truth about Pia and what happened between us, don't you? I could never get engaged to Pia, let alone married. That news was her and Jigyasa's doing. I myself was shocked when I saw it."
Jai too was angry at this time and could not hold it anymore "Pia…what have you done…God… how I wish I had strangled her that day itself when I found out the truth. But I could not…because doing that would have meant betraying Bani once more. Now I just wish I had done that. She ruined my life and moreover almost killed her own sister in her stupid attempts to achieve what was never hers." (I wish you had killed her...but what was the use...the deed was done)

Tarun who was now able to gather his wits together calmly responded,
"Jai, I know now that you were not responsible for that. But when you accused me of tricking Bani into marrying me I could not take it any longer. I may have made a mistake, but at that time I am sure I did what I thought correct. With your engagement announced, Bani pregnant without any recollection of her past, doubting her character and child, my urge to protect her took over my sense of reason. šŸ¤— All I wanted to do at that time was hold her close to my heart and protect her from the likes of you and give her all the happiness in the world that she rightfully deserved. šŸ‘ She was, and is the most wonderful person I have met till date and yet all the misfortunes in the world always came her way Jai. I could not bear to see the sadness in her eyes anymore Jai."

Tarun had not realized when his almost calm had sudddenly turned possessive. Jai, who was the first to notice, could not help but sneer at the irony of their situations. Here were two grown men, best of friends, proclaiming, not so openly, their love for the very same woman, but both in their own manner. One who had lost everything in love and the other who had found everything?

"Looks like my friend has finally found someone who could steal his heart and tie him down. I am happy for you Tarun, but at the same time I cannot help hating you. You know that right?" Jai tried to his best to keep his voice free from his emotions. "We shall just have to let the best man win because I for one am not going to let Bani get away from me that easily this time." (Good luck you two... šŸ‘šŸ¼ )
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And that my friends is the end. At this point the story can turn either way. Tarun and Jai are both awesome and you can decide whom you want Bani to be with.

So long friends...please leave comments as to how you liked it thus far... I will be eagerly waiting for your comments.

Silent readers...please...do let me know what you feel...your words are the only thing that make me want to write further...
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Posted: 18 years ago
dude you have to continue!!!!11
please
please please
i read!
that matters!
please do continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: jigna_07

dude you have to continue!!!!11
please
please please
i read!
that matters!
please do continue soon

Thanks Jigna...maybe for you and treasures I may continue....but it may take time...I have to think of a good way to make Tarun back off now...

luv rivs

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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG, you can't stop there. We want to know how they could gain bani heart and who even if i guess Jai will win obviously. It's a nice part, i love Tarun confession and Jai sarcastic. Now he knows that there are an other man in bani and Krissh life. But please please continue. Readers silent please post your views, please we want an other part. šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
i loved it and ofcourse i want bani to be with jai so let jai win i want him to win
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Posted: 18 years ago
Loved it.
Beautiful part.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss_Diey

OMG, you can't stop there. We want to know how they could gain bani heart and who even if i guess Jai will win obviously. It's a nice part, i love Tarun confession and Jai sarcastic. Now he knows that there are an other man in bani and Krissh life. But please please continue. Readers silent please post your views, please we want an other part. šŸ˜‰

Thanks Miss Diey for your response...looks like most of you want me to continue...and thanks for appealing to the silent readers...I will see what I can do to make Jai win...but given the current circumstances I am inclined to make Tarun win...

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amiee

i loved it and ofcourse i want bani to be with jai so let jai win i want him to win

Thanks amiee...I will see if Jai can win...

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