Ehsaas (End, Pg 79) - Page 15

Awesome part Rivs...
BTW...when I said sad...i didnt mean depressing..I meant sad in the sense of so may lives being affected and changing course...sad in a good way...i hope i am making sense....this sadness is what is making the story more powerful making me as the reader yearn for a happy ending..
pata nahin if I made any kind of sense at all.
I like this Jai...he is back to being direct.

and what a place to stop...Jai seeing Krish playing at the door and Binita/Bani standing there...
Now Im going to be a greedy person and ask for more...
pretty please...
mandu

Lovely, leave us hanging just like Ekta maiya, kafi asar aa raha hai 😆 😆 !! Nevertheless, great part and please do continue soon!

dude that was awesome!
bechara jai ki halat kaisi hogayi! 😭 😭 😭
continue soon!

Originally posted by: mandu

Awesome part Rivs...
BTW...when I said sad...i didnt mean depressing..I meant sad in the sense of so may lives being affected and changing course...sad in a good way...i hope i am making sense....this sadness is what is making the story more powerful making me as the reader yearn for a happy ending..
pata nahin if I made any kind of sense at all.
I like this Jai...he is back to being direct.

and what a place to stop...Jai seeing Krish playing at the door and Binita/Bani standing there...
Now Im going to be a greedy person and ask for more...
pretty please...
mandu

Thanks for the wonderful words Mandu...I absolutely understand what you mean...And you know what...if my r4eaders can feel the pain and sadness of my characters...I am sure I feel my job is done...and thanks for reinstating that feeling in me..

The new Jai (or rather the Jai that used to be) is a result of his failure in finding Bani and ofcourse the realization that almost all his family was out to get him...he is more shrewd and more careful now...lets see how this changed Jai gets his Bani back...

Thanks once again and happy new year...luv rivs

Originally posted by: kripa0521

Lovely, leave us hanging just like Ekta maiya, kafi asar aa raha hai 😆 😆 !! Nevertheless, great part and please do continue soon!

Thanks hon...I was just trying to bring the story to a point where I can twist is based on what the readers want...meaning...she could have heard everything if you want it that way...or she could have not heard anything...like Ekta did for atleast 3 straight fridays...

I will continue soon and will let you know when I do...happy new year...luv rivs

Originally posted by: jigna_07

dude that was awesome!
bechara jai ki halat kaisi hogayi! 😭 😭 😭
continue soon!

Welll...I am not sure Jai would appreciate you calling him bechara...I mean he may feel like one but definitely not lety anyone know what he feels...anyways...thanks for you comments...will let you know when I update as usual...happy new year...luv rivs

OMG this is so sad 😭 i'm a bani support and always be but i'm so sorry for Jai i love him too and feeling worried for him. Just tell me if Bani has heard everything. I'm not totally sad for Tarun because i'm sure he will get married with simi. but i think bani has the right to be still mad at Jai until she didn't know the entire truth. it's an amazing ff, just read all the parts in one go 👏

Originally posted by: Miss_Diey

OMG this is so sad 😭 i'm a bani support and always be but i'm so sorry for Jai i love him too and feeling worried for him. Just tell me if Bani has heard everything. I'm not totally sad for Tarun because i'm sure he will get married with simi. but i think bani has the right to be still mad at Jai until she didn't know the entire truth. it's an amazing ff, just read all the parts in one go 👏

Thank you honey for the wonderful response....I am glad that you read everything in one go...as far as whether Bani heard anything...its upto you...tell me do you want her to hear everything? And as for Tarun...trust me...he thinks he loves Bani but he has to still meet his match...but I dont want to develop that track since I dont know if you guys want me to talk about Tarun and Simi...

I will let you know when I have the next part up...happy new year...luv rivs

missed you a lot rivya 🤗 but I am sure you had a fun time in India!
As usual wonderful parts!!
👏
wonder if Benita will get her memory back 😉 and Jai will have to woo her all over again 😳 😳

Originally posted by: Treasures

missed you a lot rivya 🤗 but I am sure you had a fun time in India!
As usual wonderful parts!!
👏
wonder if Benita will get her memory back 😉 and Jai will have to woo her all over again 😳 😳

oh girl...you will make me cry...i am glad you missed me...i missed hearing from you too....India was a lot of fun..attending one of my very good friends wedding...it was so much fun...one thing I most wished to do...stop by the KS shoot but unfortunately I did not know where it was...anyways...back to the FF...

Binita will have to get her memory back... otherwise she will never be able to forgive Jai completely right???...anyways...tell me should Bani have heard the conversation? I am stuck at this point.... and ofcourse happy new year

luv rivs