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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: jnawaz

navs...first of all...
🤗 hehe no worries.. i thought pia was enough.. 🤢
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yeh..for not having roshni cobra... 🤢 🤢
ok...here i go...
glad businessi is booming... 😃 😃 😃
aww...jai thinking about bani...he will get her back...
just a matter of time right... 😉 😉 😉 oh yea matter of time..
and what this...anu calls jai "MAMU"..how cute... yep she'd the kid in the family y not
jai watch out...hell u all watch out...you r in for a shock... lol yep par abhi nahin.. maybe 2 more parts.. i still gotta torture 'em sighhhhhhhhh
jigs toh shayad gir jayega zameen par...
hey not bad idea...have her fall..then break her hip...out of comission... now that'd be worth it.. for sure
navis...ill tell u...i work at a physical rehab center as a nurse...send jiggs to me...
tab dekh naa...main khund uski illaj karungi...
bachke kahaan jayega jiggs...
tu aaja...im wating...reesrving a special room for you...sound proof...
when i torture no onw will know...lol... 😉 lol jigs toh gayi kaam se.. i'll start the ram naam satya.. well she deserve the special sound proof room u know.. afta all its jigs hehe
love it navs...cant wait for more...hope the comfrontation is next... thanx jaz.. hmmmmmm wat if they don't even talk 🤔🤔
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thanx jaz.. nxt part'll be up soon.. im gonna start workin on it




JAZ

Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: perveen

hey it was good but i want to know jai reaction when he seee bani 👏

thanx jaan.. yaar i don't even know wat his reaction's gonna be 🤔


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Posted: 18 years ago
great part navs 👏 👏 👏
I know jai is gonna be all senti as he misses Bani a lot. I really wanna see Ranveer reaction after seeing Rashi.( I m so mad at Ranveer after yesterday's episode).He needs a good dose(fanficition me hi sayi)

waiting 4 next part
ratisha
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Posted: 18 years ago
part 7.. enjoyie... sorry if i let u down.. wit d jb scenes that SOME are really waitin fo 😆 😆 😆 and im sorry it got LONGGGGGGGGGG.. i couldn't stop typing

*~*~*PART 7*~*~*



The Walia's make their way in the restaurant.. the three musketeers have no idea they're coming.. they're sitting there sipping their drinks.. waiting for their food.. talkin and laughing.. pushy's facing the entrance... as well as the table (the big table) that's booked just fo d walia's.. bani and raashi have their sides to 'em.. not their back.. their sides 🤔 the manager goes welcoming the walia's.. who r happy.. as they all enter.. makin their way inside

jigs is checkin the place out.. along wit pia.. as the interior dancing of the restaurant is done amazingly.. jigs is busy thinkin only HIGH class ppl come here probably no wonder it was already booked.. so fast.. jai's lookin around...also amazed.. this restaurant was different.. it was good.. fo a new business.. pretty good.. as jai's lookin around.. he stops in his footsteps.. as he hears a laugh.. a laugh that he neva heard much but CAN recognize in a instant

as he looks around... lookin ahead... yep his heart skipped a beat.. he was sure his heart skipped a beat.. if not 1.. maybe more than 1 😉 as he stood there frozen in his footsteps.. simply amazed by the sight of bani.. he hadn't seen her in months.. and in these months she was the same.. she looked the same.. but a little different.. different how?? she was smiling.. not just smiling.. she was laughing.. enjoying her life..

jai continues to stare at her.. as he takes a deep breath in.. continuing his stare at her.. not able to keep his eyes off her.. he looks around noticing everyone about sit at their table.. he goes seating himself by masi/dadi.. in the perfect seat.. perfect seat - where he can see bani from.. where could see her clearly.. as he sat there smiling.. thinkin who would've thought his day would've been goin so good then great.. he saw bani.. HIS bani

as a sudden terror took over his thoughts.. as he remembered the day bani had left the house.. she hadn't even turned to look at him.. not even ONCE... he remembers the tears in her eyes as he closes his eyes then gets out of his thoughts.. lookin at bani again.. then concentrating on his family..
Pushy: oh snap
Bani: wat happen???
Pushy: ahem both of u.. wateva u do.. DON'T turn
both of them r about to turn when pushy stops 'em
Raashi:wat.. wat.. wat is it??
Pushy: its uh
Raashi: its what??? hurry up.. im gonna look
Pushy: its the walia's
bani freezes at the spot along wit raashi
Pushy: actually its the walia's and the chopras as he looks at raashi.. who had tears in her eyes.. but she closed her eyes not giving the tears a second chance to come out.. as she straightened herself out
Raashi: ab kya
Bani: mujhe kya maloom.. i don't wanna look
Raashi: who's sitting where?
Pushy: well mr. walia (jai) can see u perfectly bani.. and ranveer can see u too raashi he just hasn't noticed.. so can the rest of the family.. we're in sight for sure
Raashi: oh god.. inko aur koi restaurant nahin mila
Bani: i know right.. i can't even eat.. how am i gonna swallow
as memories r brought back.. they all give each other hope and continue wit their talks.. as pushy kept on glancing towards 'em to see wat they're doing.. the walia's/chopra's order their drinks.. and so on.. are waiting

Jigs: now this is wat i call a restaurant. its beautifully decorated.. designed... and its.. she continues wit her blah blah as pia joins in.. agreeing completely (finally they found somethin to agree on 😆)they're all talking.. enjoying.. by now masi/dadi have spotted the three musketeers.. who r talkin laughin.. so they're happy to see that.. as they smile quietly to themselves..

Jigs: oh god as jigs said in a low whisper.. gaining everyone's attention on the table
Jigs: yeh teeno yahaan kya kar rahen hain by now everyone had seen the three musketeers.. who were trying their hard not to pay attention to the walia/chopra's..
Pushy: oh shit
Bani: wat wat.. wat happen
Pushy: nothing i got an idea
Raashi: wat kinda idea
Pushy: just wait.. uh MANAGER??
he said in a loud voice. now everyone on that specific table was watching them.. as bani/raashi looked at each other confused.. the manager came to them (wat yaar they're the owners 😉) pushkar whispered somethin to the waitor.. the waitor nods leaving
Bani: wat did u tell him??
Pushkar: i told him not to mention to anyone that we're the owners of this business
Raashi: wat. . wat.. why not??
Bani: lekin pushkar most of the ppl here know we're the owners
Pushkar: haan most of 'em.. NOT the walia's/chopras
Raashi: wat r u getting at??

Pushkar: look if jigyasa or anyone found out we're the owners.. they're gonna be disgusted - well u know wat i mean.. especially jigs/pia.. so lets keep it a secret for now.. they'll find out eventually.. for now let's wait and see wat their reaction will be to the food.. and so on.. cuz so far. they luv the restaurant..u get it??
Raashi: hmmm smartttt
Pushkar: thanx i know i am
Bani: ya ya wateva
as they continue to laugh.. teasing each other.. jai was not the only one.. whose concentration had been on bani.. ranveer was also not on the table by mind.. his body was.. but his mind was on raashi.. he hadn't seen her in months.. and in these months not that it mattered to him but still.. he was just staring at her... he couldn't help it.. he couldn't stop.. that's fo sure.. wat was he feeling?? pain?? nope not pain.. anger?? no not anger.. wat was he feeling.. as he sat there.. staring at raashi..
Pushy: hey guyz.. y r they staring at us?
Bani: who's staring at us..

Pushkar:well jai sir is staring at u.. ranveer's staring at raashi.. jigs and pia r gossiping.. its a funny sight too bad u can't look 😆
Raashi: oh shut up pushkar.. 😡
Pushy: sorryyyy.. sheesh
(rememba guyz they're best buddies)
Bani: they're staring.. i need air
Raashi: me too.. let's go.. lets run
Pushy: wat.. ur gonna ditch me here 😕
Raashi: we'll be back
they both get up.. the only way to exit the restaurant is to pass by their table..bani and raashi both took a deep breath.. got up.. pretended as if they didn't know who was at the specific table.. but both couldn't help but look.. as bani/raashi looked at everyoneeee on the table.. and much to their prayers.. they all looked back.. it was intense staring going back and forth.. bani looked around saw pia.. who was just staring at her blankly.. bani gave her a disgusted look and.. finally bani's eyes met jai's.. somethin was there.. was it luv?? well somethin was there.. they both felt at it.. as their hearts skipped millions of beats (millions goddamn 😕 )😉

as raashi glanced at the whole table..she saw ranveer... she looked past him 😳.. then saw her family.. nope not her family.. how can she call chopras her family after wat they did..as both bani/raashi came out of their trance.. made their way outside.. both breathin a sigh of relief.. in to the cold air
Bani: oh god that was hard
Raashi: u think.. did u see the way they were lookin at us
Bani: uh huh ready to go back in
Raashi: give me a minute
they were set to go back in.. no way they were gonna back down.. cuz u know wat ENOUGH was ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



oops i know it got LONG!!!!!! forgive me for that... will continue tomorrow

Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

I told you bani betta not be ignorant of my baby, how dare she just pretend he wasn't there?????? ughhhhh

and no communication b/w the two??? not even through their eyes??? how is that possible?

and pushky's idea, i just like pushky, not good.

I am glad rashi was just like whatever to ranveer. that's good.

hehe jigs and pia like the restaurant, i wonder how they will react when they know it's bani, rashi's and pushky's.

i want more of my baby in it navs.

Shina

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Posted: 18 years ago
enjoy i know it was long.. sowie bout that.. and ill update tomorrow... 😳 i think im gonna make it 1 part everyday 😃 no more 2 parts.. hmmm i'll see 🤔 anyhow enjoy
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Posted: 18 years ago
long.... bilkul chota thaaaa.....yaar kyun roka... continue soooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnn......GR8 part can't wait to see what happens next.

Waiting to see the walia and chopra faces when they come to know that the restuarant owners are.........

Jaldi se likhna....agla part...

Nidhi
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: lonely14

I told you bani betta not be ignorant of OUR baby, how dare she just pretend he wasn't there?????? ughhhhh watt?? no raashi ignored ranveerr like that.. bani ignored pia like that.. bani/jai looked at each other good lord

and no communication b/w the two??? not even through their eyes??? how is that possible? how much more connection u want.. their hearts skipped millions of beats.. goddamn it.. that's a lot of communication

and pushky's idea, i just like pushky, not good. hehe yayyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!! u like pushy.. u like pushy's idea??? i hope u do.. i have my reasons fo that

I am glad rashi was just like whatever to ranveer. that's good. i know right i don't got time to make her cry.. she cried a lot

hehe jigs and pia like the restaurant, i wonder how they will react when they know it's bani, rashi's and pushky's. that's the thing jaan.. they'll find out soon.. not yet

i want more of OUR baby in it navs. i'll try jaan i'll try

Shina

Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ratisha

great part navs 👏 👏 👏
I know jai is gonna be all senti as he misses Bani a lot. I really wanna see Ranveer reaction after seeing Rashi.( I m so mad at Ranveer after yesterday's episode).He needs a good dose(fanficition me hi sayi)

waiting 4 next part
ratisha

thanx jaan.. don't worry i won't torment jai so much.. but thoda sa toh u know.. chalta hai.. good ranveer - don't worry i'll get my revenge from him.. well raashi will
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nian

long.... bilkul chota thaaaa.....yaar kyun roka... continue soooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnn......GR8 part can't wait to see what happens next.

Waiting to see the walia and chopra faces when they come to know that the restuarant owners are.........

Jaldi se likhna....agla part...

Nidhi

thanx jaan.. haila that was not short.. i think it got a bit too long will update tomorrow

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