Jai's dilemma. updatd on pg 26 the end - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
awesome fanfic......love it....i think bani is going to explode slowly......she is like a volcano.....taking her time.......

cant wait for them to go to london alone for 6 months......something is going to happen 😉

continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22

Bani's explosion is worth a day yaar

Kamy really it is very amusing to see bani like this.

Tough girl 😊

Just a request, could you edit your topic name with page when you update next as it will be easier to know that you have updated

thanks for a lovely update

looking forward for your next update
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
Cool!!! 👏 When are you posting the next part? I'm loving this Bani. Finally, she's got the guts to shut Mr. Walia up 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
great start.loved it.cant wait to read more.plz cont soon. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey hun i just loved this part!!...he probally never had to deal with a girl with pms before..haha...great job hun..just loved it..plz plz continue soon..i want to noe what happens next...im impatient!!!
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Edited by Min_3088 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Min_3088, canadiankudi,coolgurl,crystalbue,msrk ,caddy, princess. and every silent reader out there a big thank carry on with ur comments guys it really helps.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
g8 part kamy at least bani is having a jaban to talk.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank u for all the feed backs thanks Swati
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Roshni came to walia mansion . Jigyasa ran to greet her. They hugged like long lost sisters.
Jai muttered under his breath.
'Good morning Jai..' Roshni greeted with her usual fake sweetness
'Morning..'
Bani was clearing the breakfast table Jigyasa ordered. 'Bani Roshni keliye khana lagao….'
Bani gritted her teeth. She hated fake people and Roshni was one of them.
'han Mein Tony se kahthi hoon…'
"ToNy kyon? Thum kyon nahi.. jigyasa seethed.
Roshni smirked. Jai held his breath he saw Bani's face turn red.
Maasi interrupted, ' mein dekthi hoon…'
'aap kyon maasi? Bani kyon nahi?' Jigyasa was not letting it go.
Roshni humara mehman hein..' Jigyasa continued her banter. Roshni fixed a smile on her face enjoying the situation.
Bani with out much of a word walked to the kitchen with maasi to get break fast. Tony had arranged it on the tray by then. Bani dismissed maasi asked her to go get rest.
She took the tray in hand and walked towards them. Jai had left them to get ready for office.
'LI jeeye aap ka break fast Roshni ji..' Bani said with a smile. She put the tray on the table and turned to go.
'thum kahan chali?' asked Jigyasa ready to pounce.

'Kyon? Bani turned.
Thum yahan rukooo' jigsyas ordered.
'Kisliye?' bani frowned.
Roshni looked from Jigsy to Bani thoroughly enjoying.
"Kisliye ka kay mathlab?.... roshni humara mehman hein…' Jigyasa continued trying her best to humiliate BAni.
"Aap tho yahan hein na…' BAni said and turned towards the exit. Jigyas felt insulted at her action.
'thum apne aap ko kya samjthe ho?' Jigyasa flared.
'Kya samjthi hoon mein?' Bani asked calmly
'Do takei ki ladki Humari naukar hone ke bhi aukadh nahin……'
'Acha! Naukar hone ki aukadh nahin teek hein… lekin is gar ki malik ke patni hone ka aukadh tho hein?' Bani challenged.
Jigyasa's mouth fell open. How dare she?
"How dare you?... how dare…. Jigyasa flared holding Bani's shoulder.
'Keep your hands off me my dear sister-in-law." Bani said calmly. Her eyes bore into jigyasa.
Jigyasa held her hands back. Roshni stared at Bani. 'Itni himmat kaisi aagayi is ladki mein she thought.
Jai was on his way to the living room he heard them.
'Kitna uchaloge thum Bani? Jai bayya is leaving to London in 3 weeks what will you do then?' Jigyas threw her trump card.
Bani studied her face. Jigyasa smiled victoriously.
'What so big deal about it? I too am leaving.' BAni was calm again.
"where?' asked Roshni bewildered.

"who mein aap ko batana zaroori nahin samajthi..'
Jai stood rooted. She is going? But where?
Jigyasa spotted her brother and ran to him.
'Jai bayya aapne suna ki Bani yeh kya kah rahi hein….'

'bas jigyasa thum humesha kyon hungama kada kar rahi ho. Let go off things .' He dismissed her and walked out of the house. Bani walked to her room ignoring Jigyasa and Roshni.

BAni went to the furniture shop. She decided to get the day bed. She finally liked one which matched with the room's decor and decided to get it. She paid through the credit card wrote down her address and asked them to deliver it in the evening.
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The furniture arrived in the evening and maasi was surprised. She found Bani giving instuctions to put the bed in the room.
'Beta Yeh sab?' Maasi asked.
' wo h maasi unhone kahatha ek day bed lene keliye. He wants to use while watching TV.'
'Lekin beta TV tho study room mein hein…' Maasi was confused here.
'Han woh study room mein se shift hone ki bath kar rahe the.'
Oh Bani you are getting too perfect with lying. She thought sadly.
'teek hein beta un logose kahna ki teek se lejayein'
'Han maasi.'
As Bani was heading to the stairs she saw Jigyasa staring at her. She shook her head not believing a word Bani told to maasi.
Bani ignored her. She went upstairs to set the bed. She was satisfied with the end result. She put few cushions she had brought and looked admiringly at it.
Ab TV ka kya karein.. let Mr. Walia come she thought.
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Jai came back from the office and Jigyasa stopped him on his way to the room.
'Jigyasa ab kya bath hein..' he was tired.
"Jai bayya aap ko nahin pata ki aap ke peeche Bani kya kar rahi hein…' she complained.
'Jigyasa ab bas bhi karao mein thang aagaya hoon Bani ke shikayath sun sunke..' he dismissed her and strode upstairs. Bani ne ab kya kiya….? She has become very unpredictable these days. He thought. He opened the door and was pleasantly surprised to see the room. He recalled BAni telling him she needed a day bed. She had done a good job. the room had a new look he thought. It had slipped his mind about getting her a day bed But Bani hadn't forgotten. He looked around for her and heard her speak on the phone.
'Han.. teek hein… yea kanchan….. han address tho yehi hein lekin jaisa meine kaha 3 hafthe keliye…… han….. date?... nahi pata….. teek hein.. bye..'
She disconnected the call and found Jai in the room looking at her daybed and his gaze swept her.
'Mr.Walia…'she said.'Han… meine aap se kahatha na…'
He nodded.
'Meine who aap ki di hui card se kareedi thi.' ( I brought with the card u have given)
'Han who thumhare liye hi hein Bani you can use it however you want…'
"thanks but no thanks Mr.Walia . mein apne liye kabhi bhi use nahin karoongi. Main yeh sab paise keliye nahi kar rahi. I am paying the price of my sister's stupidity.'
'Oh Realy ! thum bas isliye yahan ho?' he challenged not knowing why he was upset suddenly.
"Han aap ko koi shaque hein?' she asked not taking her eyes of him.
Kya bath hein itna magnetism uski aanko mein' he dismissed the thought as it sink in.
Staring back he asked.'Are you challenging me Bani?'
'Nahin.. I was simply stating a fact. You wanted to punish me. You punished. Are you still punishing me I don't know. You have agreed for the annulment…. I am tired of fighting with you guys'. I do not want to continue so. You have your life to live mr.Walia why do you want to waste it like this? I bore every insult and humiliation because Of Pia……. Who din muje abh bhi yaad hein… who press… Aap ki izzat sab kuch.'
She took a deep breath and continued. Miene socha aap ko muje hurt karne mein kushi milti ho yahi sahi. Leki ab bahoth hogya.. aap ne kudh who snide remarks dena bandh kiya. Aap ko samjamein aagaya hoga ki nothing is worth and no one is worth any fight. Aaj hum sath isliye hein kyon ki maasi yahan hein.
Jai stared at her feeling guilty realizing what ever she had said was right. He turned abruptly not wanting to continue this ridiculous conversation. He opened the cupboard and started searching for his dress.
'It's on the second shelf.'
With out much of a word he took his dress and closed the door he found a list on the back side of the door. He opend it to see what was it. It was a long list of his things arraneged in so and so shelf and drawers. His mouth curved into a smile.
'Han meine socha yeh ek acha idea hein. Aap ko apni cheez jaldi milenge.' Banii said.
'"han mr.Walia.. ek aur bath…'
Now what? he thought and turned to her.
'wo maasi ne day bed dekh liya tho sawal pae sawal karne lagi….
He frowned.
'meine kaha aap ki kahne par meine yeh bed kareedli'
Jooti' he thought.
'Aur maasi ne poocha kisliye aur meine kaha aap ko TV dekhne keliye yeh……
'I don't believe this…' he muttered
'me neither..' she said shaking her head. 'maasi ne kaha TV tho study mein hein..aur mein kaha TV room mein shift hone ki bath kah rahi thi Mr.Walia……' she stood looking at him uncertainly. And he felt he was seeing the cutest sight ever. A wide smile appeared at his lips and with out concealing it he said. " You are becoming one hell of a lier.'
'Han muje sharam bhi aarahi thi lekin mein kaya karoon…..' she stood looking at him like a child caught lying to her parent.
Jai looked away from her controlling the urge to simply get up and take her in his arms.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was great kamy. jai is developing feeling for bani, but don't want to accept that and ya of course bani gave answere to jigs wow and now she is having her own plans for life also. please continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Kamy, nice ff. I like your bani she is bold and stands up for herself. Yeah that is the way to go girl. Esp the part she gives it to pia. So jai is going away for 6 months, where can she go if maasi is still there? can't she go with him.? can this long distance between them bring them closer? pls continue soon. 👏

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