FF-Ram banye jodi...ek andha ek kodi Pt11

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part I

the story stars with bhajan " Om Jai jagadish" with background

Kiran: Bani................O bani......................................kabsay utarahi
hoon.....................aaj friday hai............... papa abhi pooja say
nikalthay hoongay....................... uth............... abhi tak nahayee
nahi hai.......... dekh ranoo ko dekh... subah subah utkar pooja karkar
padrahi hai......... aur to badi hookar............. abhi tak sorahi hai


Bani: sone do na kiran (she likes to call her mom by name)....uth
jaoongi....jaldi kya hai…..meri koi bhi class 10 baje se pehle nahi start
hoti….


Kiran: hey bhagvan................. ethini badi hoogayee hia bachpana nahi
gayaa….Baniiiiii


Bani: Kiran, tum roj subah ki tereh mere hisse ki puja aaj bhi kar lo na


K: dekh aaj friday hai....................... tujhey madhir lejaanay hai
mujhe


B: oh no madhir phirsay bani muttering to herself...... yeah phir say mujhe
saree pahanay kay liye majboor karege.........oh god.......................kahan phas gayee.

k: bani beta sochlay....... aaj to pehle taareek hai.................... agar kuch paise chahiye too

Bani: sure mom, Rs. 3500 milenge (bani wants to start her own arts and
crafts business so she keeps taking money from her mom. Her mom thinks that she is spending but she is really saving up for her business)


B: [Thinking] ab to jaanay hi padegaa..... kiran ko to mere saaray weakness
patha hai


B: Mama which saree shall I wear (Bani calls he mama only when she wants
something)


Tarun: maa maa............ meri tiffin kaha hai ….maa jaldi karoo


B: bhai............. tum apna khana kudh kyon nahi lagalethe... maa kya
tumhari naukar hai


T: jaadha math bol phir woh 500 nahi dunga


bani very sweetly goes and get breakfast for her bro


B: ok bhai, please de de...aur Kiran to mat batana


K: kya kusar pusar ho raha hai yahaan


K: bani jaa tayyar hojaaa


B: acha madam...bye sir


after about hour bani gets ready in a saree( she hated it.....................) but for kiran she did that………..


B: (Thinking) aaj to paise mil hi jayenge now I can put the deposit for the
materials she takes her kinectic Honda and take her mum to the mandhir

After coming back, she goes to her college.Bani is in flower shop while coming back …….. gang kay saath ………… bani is wearing strapped kurti…….( I mean like a tank top kurti).................is in the flower stall...............................she finds one of her friends drooling over the guy in the coffee shop near by...................looking at him.......... bani finds him very attractive looking in a black suit...............

Bani(thinks): aray wah delhi ki garmi mein black suit......... lagta hai apne aap ko wirpo software kaa president samajtha hai.......................... Her friend Nisha is still drooling gets a slap on her head..........


B:kya horaha hai.... yeah........ kya tukar tukar dekrahi hai...... kabhi
admi nahi dekha kya................ tum aasay karogi naa... to tumhe baav
nahi degaa... usnay tumhe ek bhar bhi nahi dekha.......................

N: acha tu itni smart hai to uskay attention grab karke dikha

B: theek hai, lagi shart

N: acha 500 ki, you have to make him come behind you

B: any more bets? (Asks all her friends) several accept

N: paise baadh mein pehle to jeeth to (she takes the money away from bani)

B and group waits and waits bani is praying just one glance at me god ………….god plz..............................

just then the guys gives her a passing glance, not really looking at her as if, fate has given her this one chance, she does not want to let it go, cant think of anything and so winks at herstranger is shocked.............you can see his eyes go wide, then keeps looking at her for sometime. Stranger is not sure if she winked at him or was it his imagination…………………..then concludes he imagined it…….

And relaxes………………………..


bani looks at him again and wink……………………he chokes his drink…………………he is not sure what is going on. …..bani goes back to her regular pretend stuff just then

bani whispers to nisha.......................lets go ………….

nisha is like wat......... then calls a cab and leaves......................one by one they get into the cab..........

bani is the last just before she gets in she gives him one last glance.............. and gives hima flying kiss he drops his drink....gets up of his seat....................tries to cross the road to come near bani but she
quickly gets in and drives away...........

bani laughs.......: i won i won... give me the money…..yipee......
At the station everybody is standing waiting for the train the local to
come......it comes they get in……........bani just goes out to get some
water............ just the she spots the stranger smiling at
her....................to her utter shock………………… coming close to her………….bani goes backwards and almost trips.........

note: if you guys want me to continue plz let me know............

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part II

Bani walks backwards…….. almost trip the stranger tries to hold her……………gets a tight grip of her hand…………………………just then his cell phone rings………

Still holding her attends the phone………………….

Stranger : haan----------- haan-------- nahi………………haan………………

The gang is calling her " BD BD"(bani dikshit )…………… jaldikar………. Train nikalrahi hai………….."

Bani is struggling…………………………fighting the stranger………. Who is amused by her fight…………………..bani gets all pissed

Bani throws the water bottle on him …………… he is unmoved…………… still talking over the phone but not letting her go.....the train starts moving........ bani panicks……… she has no support…all her friends are in the train…… what the hell is she going to do……

bani to herself think bani think........... then it clicks ………………she quickly comes closer to her…………….. bites his hand……………..

Stranger: Ouch draws his hand....... swears " bloody hell "cing bani run towards the train………………he runs behind her…………. tires to catch her……… but catches her pink scarf

Bani gets into the train and sticks her tongue out…………………………… J is standing there catching his breath…………………………

Bani: "Oye Mister Black suit………….. Olympics may try karoo………….. shayad first aavogay……practice jaari rako...…………..kya huwa prize chahiye…………………yeah low " gives him a flying kiss...... and gets into the train giggling …..

Nisha: hey bhagwan…………….tu boori pasay gi……………………mein kahathi hoon………………..

Bani: kya yaar…. U know we never take the local……… if my bro had not taken my dhanno( her kinectic she calls it dhanno)……….. I would have never seen in train so no worries...... he will wonder for the rest of the day will be forgotten soon..........Bechari bani has no idea who she has played prank on....................................goes home happyly..................

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Jai walia……the Great Jai Walia........ For the first time in his life was standing there like a stupid…….. did not know what he was doing………………………Nobody ever dared to play a prank on him………. until today………………………….damn her……………… rubbing his hand(bitten by her)…………….. someday he will get back to her…………………………..

J goes back to his call……….: Jai kya huwa……………..

J: kuch nahi jiju………… ghar aakay bathavunga…………………………didi kaisi hai……………………

J had come to delhi from Mumbai to visit his sister's family…………. Jigyasa(jiggy is the same jigs but is elder to Jai……….married at a young age of 18 to adi…14 yrs older than J…..… her life is only parties, clubs, her kids…… ranveer, anu and sahil………..)…………….. and Aditya her husband…………… adi is more like Jai friend than …………..his jiju……………….. since ran and J were only 4 yrs apart………….. they were more like bros……………

J comes home and meets his stern sister who is rushing off to a kitty……………. Leaving him with adi ran and anu………………..J relates the whole incident…………………..

Ran almost gaps……. In shock………" oh she did not do that to you…………. OMG…………… "

Adi: must be a real talent………. For once J walia the prankster becomes the bakara…………………. I must meet her……. congratulate personally…………. BTW how old is she……………..

J knows where the conversation is going rolls his eys..........

J: oh god jeej common…………. She was one young thing…………. Must be barely 18…………………..

Anu: my age……. Mama…………. She got u good ah……………from when have you started wearing pink scarf.…its her isn't it…………. You like her mama……….. may be u can marry her………….

ran rolls his eyes on his sister romantic fantasy.................

Adi: haan haan why do u still have it………………..

J: becoz I don't want to forget that she played me………………. i am going to make her pay and give this back to her................

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couple of weeks pass.............. at bani's tarun leaves for his software assisgment to cyprus...................will be back in couple of months...................

JW and Ran are busy talking about some business... when anu comes and interrupts... tells them she wants to go to the maatha rani temple..............

ran: anu tu kab say religious hogayee hai............

Anu: woh jab say tilak ko dekha hai...........

J: yeah tilak kyun hai bhaiyya zara hamay bhi bathayengi..................

A; woh mere class kaa naya student hai........ bilkul john abraham ki tarah diktha hai......... I am going to the temple so that i can get him to fall in love with me....... ...

ran is making action that anu is gone mental. ......... J wants to laugh but controsl it..........

J acha anu tu jaa........... ...

R: nahi....... hamay bhi chalna chahiye....................

J madhir... buddy are u nuts............ i havnt gone to mandhir like for ever..................

R: trust me we cannot leave anu alone........... u know how mentally..........unstable....

anu : what...............glares at ran...........

R: how young anu is................

all the three go to the temple........................

anu bachari drags along both of them.....................walks in the temple....... does all the pooja........ makes both the guys do the pooja ....... much to there reluctance..............

While coming down.................one of the guys come and dashes on anu.............. then says sorry........ so J and ran keep quiet............... he does this three times........... so both conclude that he is making a pass......... the next time her comes........ ran punches him..................... the poor stalker........runs..........with J following him.............................they keep running......... and finally it comes to dead end with a bunch of shops............ with ppl buying stuff....................

J knows that the stalker has nowhere to go................

Just then the stalker takes out the knife......pulls the person from the nearest stall and pts the knife to person's neck......................

St: kabhardhar........ agar aagey bade to iska gala kaatdunga....................

J: has this serious look on the stalker ................changes into wide grin.........

Part III

Jai: kya kahan tumne.... agar aaagay badunga to eskay galay ko kaat dongay...............

Stalker: haan

Jai takes a wide step...................

Stalker: aagay mat badna.....................warna......

(ladies you guessed it right........ it is bani........ who is with stalker.............)

Bani: bhaiyya............ plz.......... aap aasay kuch maath kiyegee…. ye to chahate hai ki mein marjaavon...............

Stalker: dekho, main keh raha hoon, main isse maar doonga…..

Jai: good, (takes out the pink scarf from his pocket and gives to the stalker) lo bhai, iska muh dhakne ke kaam aayega maarne ke baad……

Stalker: Tum pagal ho gaye ho, tumhe is ladki ki jaan bachani hogi……

Bani: (thinking, good if only these two can get into a fight, I can escape, and then says to the stalker) mujhe chod do bhaiya

Jai takes another big step........................

Stalker gets confused........... "agay maath bado"

Bani: (mutters) pagal

Stalker: kya, tu kal ki choikri mujhe pagal boli

Bani: nahi bhaiya, main to us aadmi ko pagal boli

Stalker: agay maath badna....... Jai takes a huge step........ confusing the stalker..............

Bani thinks to herself ( ek tarak kuwa.......... ek taraf khaii......) hey bagwan kahan pass gayee

Bani: Bhaiyia, please meri mummy ko prasad charana hai mandir mein, main deke aati hoon (thinking maybe he is a fool)

Stalker: aye chokari............... bahut hoshiyaari maath dikaa

Jai: dekha... isko tum lekha jaavogay naa yeah tumhe 2 taakay mein baych degee.......isey mere pass choddho................... mein tumhe kuch nahi karoonga..............

Stalker is thinking

Bani: Ary bhaiya, aap iski baat nahin mano, (cant think of anything else so gets really close to the stalker......... in order to protect herself from Jai….now the stalker feels all good to see her leaning on him.......................)

Jai gives one amused look........... then Bani realizes what she is doing................. and gets back to the original position……Jai laughs….

Bani gets irritated and she again gets closer to the stalker guy and says, bhaiya, yeh aadmi pagal hai, yeh pehle tumse mujhe maryega aur phir tumhe pakadkar tumhara sar narial ke jaise phod dega…..iski pooja to yahi ho jayegi aur hum dono maare jayenge.....

Stalker: glare at her and then him, then pointing to his head "mujhe pagal samjha hai, dono mujhe mama banana chale hain"

Bani slips out of his grip and runs. Jai looks at her, she turns back for a second, their glances meet, she makes a face at him with her tongue out and hands flapping at her ears and runs for her life!

Part IV

B: Thank god aaj to bal bal bache

B: mein to tumhare dware............. next week aakay prasad jadavungi

Bani leaves from there....... along wiith her mom.......................

Life was usual for the Dixit clan for the next couple of days. Bani was missing Tarun bhai as she had most fun with him and could play jokes on him without fear of any reprimands.....Rano did not like her pranks....it was Wednesday morning and she remembers her promise to god………, papa wanted her to come with him to the temple.....she conceded

J has been again made bakra and the gal escaped......... both ran and adi made fun of him now... saying he has lost his finese which irritates and torments J.......... makes him more determined to get back from that day on... J is going to the temple everyday..........

Bani as usual does her prayer for her family…… then for her business………… for her pops happiness……..etc etc……………….adjusting her dupatta...by doing so she realizes…. That she has hit the person behind her with it…………..... she turns back once...... smiles...says sorry .............then looks forward....... and her eyes turns wide and round…………… mouth forms a big "o"

J is standing right beside/behind her..............J: aaj to achi passi yeh...................... (thinks)

Bani on seeing jai at the temple thinks " OMG, yeh aadmi phir se....is duniya mein ise aur kahin jaane ko nahin milta"

Bani loudly: Poppy, (he father) jaldi karo na, mujhe college jana hai

J bends down and whispers........: etni jaldi kya hai.... aaj kisay kis karrahi hoo obviously enjoying………………..

Bani(thinks): ab kaise bachu

Dad: mujhe disturb mat kar, wait I want to finish praying………..

J bends down again whispers:is that your father...............??

Bani: ignores

J: kahoon kya tumne mere saath kya kiya hai

she is visibly scared on her pops reaction if J says anything.

Bani: (faking innocence and almost weeping) please try to understand, lets go aside and talk

J(thinks): ab aayee raste pay........ but still not convinced about her innocence

J: suniye.............(calling her dad)

Bani: iski kya zaroot hai, why involve my dad, lets resolve it among ourselves

J: teek hai agar tum ithna kaharahi hoo too…………i wont tell him anything......... but there is a price...... Kiss me........

Bani: Are you out of your mind! then sheepishly....please....

Bani:r u crazy.... i dont even know u

J: acha......... pehle kaisay kiyaa......

Bani: woh to....woh to....mumbles (she is not about to tell him that it was a bet…….) that was different………………

J: fine then suit urself…………

Bani looks at him pleadingly……………..

J: oh no!!!! dont u give me that..........the only way i am going to leave you atleast u have to kiss me

B: No Way

now J is saying : Suniye...............again…….. bani pales………..

bani father now taking the prasad..............looks at J Questioningly

Dad: beta yeh kaun hai?

Bani: papa, yeh woh, yeh woh, mere business project ke mentor hain (cant think if anything so just blabbers)

Dad: What Business Project?

Bani is confused and stuck Before bani opens her mouth

J: woh I am Jai.........i have a small business..... and i had some projects......... research to be done.........

Bani: And my college sent me to their office to learn how to run a business ( playing along……….)

J: i met her in a cofee shop along with her friends when............

(scaring daylights out of bani)

J: i asked her some thing...... she refused to it……………tells me i am stranger

Bani is rooted to the spot and truning different shades of red

nishi: beta kaam mein dyan dena chaiye....... u do wat he wants.... then only u can learn

Bani: woh, woh....does not know what to say (thinking. aaj to main mar gayi)

Dad: what is this woh, woh, just do as he says

Bani: Ji poppy....(head drooping)

Dad: u guys talk i will do the parikrama

J grinning: now..........

Bani tries to follow dad, but Jai holds her hand, says "My Kiss"

Bani: how can we? here....this is a temple....

J takes her to a secluded corridor bani has no choice..... she has to do it before dad comes

comes near J........ who is grinning at the gal's plight

Bani standing there….. refusing…………….. then after long fight with herself……………….she come really closer to him only inches away.....

J holds her saying that...... : U know what lady mein rasthi ki jeezo kay mu nahi lagtha, patha nahi kitno kay mu lagi hai……………….

Bani is left with a confused feeling………. She was glad that he did not make her kiss him…… but then his comment leaves bani fuming.......

J leaves there with triumphant smile

Dad: J chalagayaa…………..

Bani getting angry

Dad: beta, u did what Jai wanted? such a civilized man na?

Bani: choking....ji....chalen

Part V

Jai had never been so happy ....... he finally did it...... her look was priceless.... he kept gloating about it for a week...................finally that kal ki ladki to patha chalgaya ki Mein Jai Walia hoon... mujse panga...... bhaari padegaa.............

Maasi and Dadi flew from Mumbai.......... to meet Jigyaasa and family..............everybody was ecstatic...............today they had to attend the function in mrs.chabRia place........whose daughter is Anu's classmate................ after lot of persuasion Jai agrees to tag along..................... Maasi always wants Jai to come...........so that she can find a good gal for him.....all of them go there......................

Bani is all mad at that " Jai" guy...what does he think of himself. Hope God gives her one more chance to meet him and she will teach him a good lesson. Oh! how she was missing Tarun Bhai, coz she really wanted to share this with someone. And on top of that Papa wanted to take them all for this stupid business party/dinner the only consolation Bani had was that...........Nisha would be there at least the party would not be boring

Bani: Kiran.. mujhe saree nahi pehanni........... plz............. mein choti hoon mujhe choti hi irehne dho

Kiran: chup kar.................

Bani: gawd Tarun bhai kab aayenge............he is the only support I have........

Bani does not know how to wear sarees................her mum is helping her…..

Bani: Kiran, now that it is unfair, I am only 18 why can't I wear some T-shirt and jeans and come along…….. I am a kid………….

Kiran: at your age I already had Tarun…….. so don't give me that young crap again…………… and stand straight…… how am I suppose to help you with your saree………..SIDHI KHADI RAHOO…………..

Bani: mumma.... u wont even be there at my sight in the party....... kuch nikalgaya tho............................

Kiran: Baniiiiii.....just do what I say (irritated by Bani saree tantrum…………..)

Bani: last time to mujhe poori party mein yahi saree ki tension thi.................

finally Bani gets all ready........ looks too old for her age........... but very beautiful................

Kiran: agar iyse functions pay jaayege tho you will know how to behave…… thodi ladkiyon wali harkath bhi karege……….

Kiran and Bani leave first. Rano and papa are supposed to come in later................. becoz of Rano's tutions

Bani comes in earlier and starts helping out with the things................but more than working she is worrying that her saree shouldn't come out.......... and praying to god..........

As she is helping............ Maasi looks at this young gal.... who is helping.......... she looks so pretty..... and seems to be from a good family

Anu: hi Bani......... how are you??

Bani rolls her eyes........ as she thinks Anu is some bimbo with no brains

Bani: I am good how are you..............u alone??

Anu: I am here with my family Look that is my nani, that is my Dadi my mum. my dad, my bro...................and my mama.............

Bani looks at them really bored............... but then as soon as she sees Anu's mama........ spark comes back to her eyes

Bani: Oh, (shocked to see her mama) just then Jai leaves as he gets a call.......................

Maasi indicates anu to get Bani to them..............

Bani: thinking with a wicked smile, this is my opportunity to take revenge from this "JJJJJJerk"

Bani goes to Maasi.......... and pay her respect to all the elders

Maasi: Kya naam haim tumahar beti?

Bani: Ji....... Bani

Maasi: Tum kiske saath aayi ho beta?

Bani: Ji apni maa kay saath

Bani: ( why does she want to know about my mum.......) ji woh hum delhi kay hi hai..............

Maasi Thinking "kitni choti si payri si hai" ladki anu say badi lagthi hai………. 10 saal kaa faasla hoga…… to kya huwa………

Maasi thinks puchnay mien kya harj hai

Maasi: Beti tumahri shAditya hogayi kya?

Bani colours.......shocked........: Ji.....

Bani: Ji nahi.........

Maasi: sagayee hogayee hai………….

Bani: Ji, ……..Ji Nahi.............

anu: nani what r u asking her...sorry Bani................

Bani: its ok................

Maasi: Nahin main to bas aise hi poonch rahi thi, kitni pyaari hai teri friend

Baani: blushes

Maasi: isne saree pehni thi na isliye

Now Bani wants to kill her mom…thinks "Kiran aaj teri kher nahin!"

On the other side Aditya and jai re talking….

Jai: Who is that lady with maussi....???

Aditya…hummmm…..?

Preeti: Hi Jai darling! Where have you been? looks like u vanished from the face of this earth....

Jai :woh haah... mein (thinking of her name.... face looked familiar)........... i am fine who kaam mein busy that..................

Preeti: Oh come on Jai...... (pouting) how can you do this to me......we should make plans to get (suggestingly) together

anu comes there : mama.... what are you doing here.. nani is calling you....

J: do you know here name anu ( whispering)

anu giggles: Preeti.........

Jai: Preetiji..................... someone is actually calling you.......................

Preeti: dont go anywhere my dear....i will be right back

Jai making his way towards maasi and the hot back female... was dying to see her face...............

Ria: hi Jai! when did u come to Delhi?

Jai: err... i just came like a week ago......................

Aditya comes and joins the conversation….

Aditya: hello Ria how are you..... long time no see...

Ria: I was right here.....u guys are the ones who live in mumbai

Ria gets busy in talking with another lady guest....

Aditya: yaar Jai yahan kya karrah ahi... aur yeah kisay dekh raha hai...

Jai: woh lady kaun hai.... to Maasi kay saath............ hai.........................

Aditya: woh to mrs chabria ki friend ki beti hai....

Jai: maasi kya baath karrahi ahi...

Aditya: you should k now by now...............

Jai: o h god not again.. phir say shaadi ki baaath............

Aditya: mujhe to laga tuje achi lagi........

Jai: woh to pechay say to hai... par shaadi who are you kidding

Maasi: Jai beta yahan aa

Jai: excuse me Ria... Maasi is calling me

Ria: R U trying to avoid me Jai

Jai : you finally got it..............

Aditya: nothing like that Ria, he is actually engaged!

Jai yes, yes, engaged trying to get Ria out of his way

Ria: All angry and not convinced at all....Really? to whom?

Jai and Aditya are in fix...................... they look around and spot the gal with Maasi

Jai points his finger... Her....................

Ria : oh congrats.. and leaves without asking about other details........

J like bal bal bache.... lets go there Maasi has been calling...........

in the mean time Ria goes around spreading the word........... and it reaches Kiran... who is shocked to know that her own daughter is engaged to JW

Jigyaasa is furious..............................................

Jai finally makes his way to Maasi, where all the guests are creating chaos...............................

And Jai is trying to get to Maasi but is not able to see the girl's face

Jigyaasa: Jai tumne bataya nahi ki tumne iskay saath engagement karli.....................

And then it all happened in just one fleeting moment……..Bani is so shocked and moves only to trip on the pleats of her saree to be held by Jai.......................they both looked at each other at the same time……the reports takes pictures...................

the epi ends with one confused Jai and one really really furious Bani…….

Part VI

Jai looks at Bani and does not recognize her at first........... then there is shock in his eyes.....................:YOU

Bani: You ……………….

Photographer: Please come closer and smile! It will be a beautiful picture!

Maasi: Are Jai beta, tume to mujhe bataya hi nahin kit um aur Bani ek doosre to jaante ho…..mujhe to dekh ke hi laga tha ki Bani ek bahut special ladki hai!

Jai: Ji Maasi woh……main….woh……..

Maasi: (interpreting his stuttering as embarrassment)…theek hai beta….par mujhe to batate sagai karne se pehle…..

Kiran: (coming up to where Bani and Maasi and Jai are standing) Bani yeh sab kya hai?

Bani: Mamma, woh……main….woh……..

Maasi: Arey, to aap Bani ki mummy hain? Main to usse poonch hi rahi thi aap logon ke bare mein. Aaj kal bachhe bhi to humey kuch nahin batate hain…..

Kiran: Ji, aisi baat nahin hai, Bani ne to kabhi kuch nahin chupaya……(but now is unsure)

Maasi: Chalo koi baat nahin…..mubarak ho ab aapki ladki humari aamanat hai aapke paas shaadi tak….

Jai recovers a ….bit and rolls his eyes

Bani's eyes are like hot coals with anger…..she is ready to kill

Maasi: jao beta...tum log jaake party enjoy karo

Jai drags Bani along with him……Bani is now really angry and about to explode.....she does not know what to say or do.....so she pulls out her hair and screams and bites his hand that is holding hers.....yes, you got it right...she bites him

Jai: ouch… you are such a wild cat………………….

Bani: should I be thrilled………… oh I think I should………….. now why should I be… lets count the reasons……… alright……………..

Bani: you are the great Jai Walia……. Who sleeps around with gals…………… and to escape from being caught he lies…………… which just proves that you are a man of no morals, no values, no culture…………………..

Bani: I would say the gal is most unfortunate to be engaged to you even for fake....

Jai is now visibly very angry and raises his hand to hit her.....

Bani: I would rather wish death than be your fiance...

Bani: I am going to go inside and tell everybody the truth......... you can explain to your Ria and Preeti keep me out of it................................ Get me out of this hell………………

Bani storms inside.....................by the time Jai is all red becoz he is so angry... he wants to shake the life out of her... follows her closely

As Bani gets inside................. she is encountered by the entire Walia clan and her poor shocked father.............

Jai kay dimak ki ganti bajthi hai............

Papa: yeah sab kya hai Bani..........................

before Bani could reply......................

Jai: hello uncle aap kaisay hain..............

Papa: tum beta to tum hoo... woh mandhir waale............. tabhi mein sochu...... ki Bani say milne ladka..................

Bani: nahi papa aap..................

Jai: Bani.......... mujhe us din hi batha dena tha....... par tum ek nahi maani

Papa: mujhe to usi din hi shak hogayaa tha............tumhari story to bilkul poor thi............. tabhi mujhe dal mein kuch kaala nazar aarahaa tha....

Bani is too shocked to react.........................

Jai: woh uncle... acts sheepishly....................... I wanted to tell... but...... u know Bani right... ek baath pay ad jaathi hai to phir mushkil hai..................

Papa: haan beta who to hai.. ek ziddi goday ki tharah hai meri Bani........ khair thats good that u understand her..................mujhe to yeah rishta manzoor hai..................

everyone including jigs is happy as she find out that kiran is her childhood friend......... and from a rich family

Jai: so now you are going to be in h ell...... right... Bani.................. becoz you r going to get engaged to me soon!

Bani is too shocked to react thing what is happening with my life??

Part VII

All the people are congratulating Jai and Bani....

Bani is unable to say anything..........she looks unhappy.............but in front of her parents she has to act as if she likes him..........God, what torture!!!

Maasi: acha bhai ...........to ab sagai ki date fix kar lete hai….

Bani: (thinking) how do I get out of our mess that I have landed myself into….

Papa: Ji hum apne pundit se poonch lete hain kal aur aapko phone kar dete hain, aapko koi aaitraaz to nahin hai na…

Bani: (thinking) I will go home and tell my parents as soon as possible….if I tell now it will be insulting……..maybe when they talk about engagement...... I will tell them to cancel it…….that would be better than to create a scene here…..

Maasi: Arey jab bachoon ne faisla kar hi liya hai to pundit ki kya zaroorat hai. sagaai is weekend ko kar lete hain aur shaado ke liye pundit se poonch lenge.

Both the family are very excited about the prospect except of course our dear Jai and Bani......... every time Bani sees Jai.............he smirks at her.............making her blood boil even more….

Maasi: kyon Jai beta......... kya kahathe hoo tum....yeh weekend theek hai na?

Jai looking directly into Bani's eyes and saying ............................. Maasi weekend tak rukhna hoga kya…

Maasi: dekha, ab kitni jaldi hai in bachhon ko….

Bani to herself "haan haan tumhari liye to ek mazaak hai....... meri to jaan jal rahi hai...........hai hai soch Bani... soch"

Papa: tho phir teek hai.................this weekend engagement is final!

Bani ( dimag ki ganti bajthi hai) :kya!!!!!!!!! nahi!

Everybody is looking at her shocked.............

Papa: kyon beta why are u saying no

Jai mock sadness: Bani kya kaharahi hoon.................... (knowing fully well she wont dare to create a scene in public insulting her family and his)

Bani narrows her eyes and : papa woh Tarun bhai to yahan nahi hai naa.... mein unke bina.......... aur phir......... (stops looking at her mothers pleading eyes)

Jai mocks a sad puppy face...."woh to hai….lets wait till your brother comes back…. "

Maasi: arey thero,….

takes her 2 chains off gives one chain to Jai and another to Bani................ both making mean face to each other exchange the chains

Maasi: yeh lo, ab Bani humari hui.....humne aapki Bani ko apne Jai ke liye rok liya

Now J and B are shocked.....................both the families start to leave.................... its decided that.................the engagement will be fixed as soon as Tarun comes

Maasi asks Jai to say good bye to Bani... both the families leave................... them alone

Jai: Bani yeah chain acha hai naa............

B angry........... closes her fist. .....................bahut achha, it feels like a snake is crawling on my neck

Jai: ofcourse thats the idea....... .........Bani, yeh chain nahin hai tumahre liye phaansi ka phanda hai

Bani: ethna kush honay ki zaroorath nahi... i will go and tell my parents the whole thing and I will be out of this mess in no time

Just them rano comes and introduces herself. Jai and Rano hit off the bat immediately….Rano starts calling him jiju and he actually likes her. This saves both Jai and Bani to have any more "alone" time…

Bani reaches home.......... everybody is so excited....... later in that night Bani goes to her parents bedroom to tell the truth. Bani goes to her parents room and just as she is about to knock, she hears her mom telling her dad.......................

Kiran: mein to ethni kush hoon.............................

Papa: mein bhi...... i was always worried about Bani................ usay kaisa ladka mitha..........J to har angle say fit hia........( dad jokes here.......)

Papa: sighs acha hai...............: mere treatment say pehle yeah sab hogayee to

Bani now alert what treatment.........

Kiran cuts in saying ............: apko kuch nahi hoga.............. its just a bypass.... u will be fine

Papa: I know Tarun will take good care of you whether i am here or not.................. now that Bani is getting married................ I dont have to worry much about rano................... Tarun will do his best….

Bani is rooted on the spot…thinks….papa has heart problem...............decides not to tell them anything....... and find another way.................goes back to her room to think…..cannot think of anything that she can do to cancel this "rishta" without hurting her parents…..looks towards the sky................... talks to herself: "Fine if this is what u want(to god)........ so be it.............................. But I hate that man for putting me in this situation and he will have to pay dearly for this.... JW what did u say yeah mere galekaa pandha banygaa..................... dekthe hai.... yeah kiskay liye..............upar chadne gaa seedi banegi aur kiske gale ka pandha banega"

Bani could not sleep through the night. She could not believe that such a small action of her a couple of days back just to have fun with friends would cost her so dearly. It seemed like ages ago that she was a fun loving happy go lucky girl, who was up to playing tricks all the time. Now in a split second, she saw her life as she envisioned crumbling down. What will happen to her dream of starting her own business of Arts and Crafts! And all the plans she had for her future....

Moreover....that.....Jai Walia was not at all her kind of guy.....heck....she was so involved in her own life that she had never thought about what would be her kind of man...she had so many dreams to fulfill before she would have even thought of her prince charming....

But it looks like God had some other plans for her as far as her so called "husband" was concerned....how can she accept this…..

Before slumber took over her consciousness, she remembered taking a vow that God has chosen her spouse, but she will choose her future....she will not let this "incident" change the course of her life.....she will still go after her dreams and make sure that that JAI WALIA suffers like he would have never imagined possible!

Next day early in the morning, Bani walks up with a shock............... as if she has been thrown into a pool......... walks up only to find her best friend and cousin.... Raashi standing there.................with an empty bucket…………….

Raashi: tussi hamay chod kay chalay jaavogay...............mock sadness……..

Kiran who is with her: jaana to tumhe bhi hai.............

Raashi: woh to hai.. ab Bani kaa number to aagaya bua........ mera number kam aayegaa..... fufu say baath kiyeya naa

Kiran: acha tum log baath karo i will be back with breakfast.............

Raashi: ab yeah kya naya naatak hai.. tell me u r not in a mess

Bani: i knew it i knew it...... u will never believe it..............

Raashi: duh........... even if u sneeze u tell me and pyaar shaar to definitely bathayegi.....

Raashi: acha batha kiskay karma putnay wale hai

Bani : very funny............................. woh mein jisko.............kiskiya..................

Raashi listens to whole story.................. looks at her......: main na kahathi thi......tu kachi khiladi hai.............. tu chali Raashi singhania bannay............ab dekh kya huwa...............

Raashi: chal abhi chal..................

Bani: kahan

Raashi: aray bua aur fhoofha ji ko bathanay

Bani: no i cannot

Raashi: why do i have a feeling i am not going to like what i am listening

Bani tells about her dad...... both Bani and Raashi are sad

Bani: man tu buri tharah pasi yaar

Raashi: no worries I am here why fear..........

Bani: Raashi yaar serious hojaa..................

Bani: I cannot tell pops and momzy....... about this they will feel humiliated...................... what can I do.......

Raashi: Fufu will feel bad only if something bad about u comes out......................... so if u make Jai bad before the engagement........................ then...............

Bani: idea to acha hai... par how...................

Raashi: dont worry... men are like dogs….. he will do some mistake for sure we can cash on it..........

just then Kiran comes and tells that they have to go to Jigyassa's place and that everyone should get ready. She had also talked with Tarun and he is coming next week........... Bani and her parents along with Rano, Raashi arrive at Jigyassa's place

Jai standing beside Bani............in low tones: kya baath hai Bani... did not tell ur parents.................................

Bani: I was hoping you will be man enough to tell your family about your misdeeds and mistakes and resolve this problem by now!

Jai: I told u naa... I am pretty good catch......... did they explain to u how important it is for u to get married in a good house with a good husband….

Bani(rolling her eyes): what was I expecting.... u and man........ they dont go well... anyways now the engagement is inevitable....... since you are such a good catch..... I got you a gift...........gives a red pouch

Jai opens is to his shock finds "Bangles". He gives her a confused look…

Bani (smirking…dripping with hatered): haan..chudiyaan… pehanay kayliye…… ..... ap jaise logokay liye hi hai yeah......... u know just becoz u have a oozing sexual appeal does not make you man....... for that u should have guts.. how about wearing them now……. don't u want to show others…. how pretty they are……. Huh………….

Saying this Bani walks off.... in a huff….. leaving a fuming Jai behind

Edited by Chandnichowk - 18 years ago
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Part VIII

now clearly J wants her to be with him for giving him bangles

so J stands there fuming... that he will make bani pay for it.................. by making her marrying him and pay everyday......................

J stands there fuming..............mumbling to himself................: oh bani u dont know what you have just done.................. u have invited yourself to hell............. now you are going to pay everyday............... being my wife......................... i will make sure you are married to me.........................revenge is going to be sweet

J walks towards the crowd.......................Is introduced to rashi by rano......

rano: jijs........... This is rashi..... yeah hamari.... mama ki beti hai.....................

Ras: just nodes.............. and J knows this gal doesnot like him much

J thinks Too bad.......................

J gets a call and goes out......................

Rashi moves to bani: kya huwa................... now what did u do............

Bani: I am so mad at this

Bani: Well, I am not sure if you will approve, but I was so mad that I gifted him a pair of bangles and told him that he is fit for that only.....(then she narates everythihg to rashi)

Rashi: R u Mad now he will never ever leave u………. enough of ur............... nonsense we will use my work

Bani: What do you mean.....

R: jaanay denaa.........we will go according to our plan...............lets spot.......... panditji...............

Bani; What will the pundit do.....right now I need a hangman to hang this Jai Walia

R: Dont ask.. just flirt with panditji

b: woh. .. no way

R: do u want me to help or not

B: yeah..............

R: so sweet talk.......................

they meet up with panditji........................ who looks like a BJP( Those who are from south <ST1:COUNTRY-REGIoN w:st="on">india</ST1:COUNTRY-REGIoN> will know what is BJP sorry super drooler) .............already drooling over the gals...............

Bani: Pundit ji Nameste....aap kaise hain

P: ( smiles stupidly) bilkul teek hoon ethni sundar kanya poochay gi to aacha hi honga right

B: (fluttering her eye lashes.............) panditji meine suna hai aap acha haath dekthe hai.................

pandit wants to take banis hand but has is file on his hand...................tries to find a place to put

B: aray pandit ji........ kya huwa................ yeah file aap rashi ko dejiye naa

he gives it ot rashi............................

rashi winks at bani................ ...

raashi quitely changes Bani's kundli with a fake one....

bani waits patiently......... internally cursing rashi for making her the bakara... this better work............

rash comes and : panditji.. woh bua aapko bularahi hai........ aap chaliye.. bani say baad mein milenaa...takes bani away...

Bani: Thank God Raashi....this pundit is such a chipku.....

Bani: look at the way he was heheheing me

R and B giggle

B: aray bathat ki tumne kya kiya yeah.

Raashi, maine kundli badal di.....

bani: ussay kya hoga

Raashi: Jab kundiliyaan hi nahin milegi to shaadi kaise hogi...

B: kya!!!!!!

R: aray budhu according to ths kundali....any guy who gets married to the gal in that kundali......will be dead in 40 days

bani: what............... then smiles

R; well after this neither ur papa nor his massi even in there worst nightmare

wont think of u two getting married

B; mangaye... u r a ustad

Raashi: kaha tha naa.....Main Hoon Na!

just then rano comes and takes them in

then the camera focus on the pillar behind them.............. J comes there with his evil smrik.................ab to tumhe mujse koi bacha nahi saktha

bani and rashi all morning keep giving each other knowing smile

after everybody gets settled

panditji... looks at thek undali................

Pan: i am so shocked........ how is this possible

Maasi: Kya hua punditji!

Kiran: Koi problem hai kya?

Papa: Punditji Kya hua?

Adi: Kya hua, kya hua?

Everyone said all this at the same time

P: bahut badi problem hoojaayegi... agar yeah..................

rashi and bani. .......................yeah yeah...........

Everybody else is sad..............

Pandiji complets... agar yeah shaadi nahi huwi tho.....

i have never seen 2 ppl complimenting each other so much

Bani and Raashi are shocked

Jai is giving an evil smile....

Pundit: lekin yeh shaadi agle 10 din mein ho jaani chaiyee...uske baad tara doob jayeega....

Bani: kya...chocking....lekin yeh kaise ho sakta hai?

Everyone: Kyon?

bani: woh woh...........

rashi: kuch nahi sab ethne jaldi horaha hai naa esliye... just nerves...........

Jai: oh come on Bani, I will make sure Tarun is here within the next couple of days!

Don't you worry about him……………….

Maasi and Dadi are doing all oohhhs and aahhhs

Maasi: Dekha humara Jai Bani ko kitna pyaar karta hai...

Jai winks at Bani.....evil grin: common bani give him a hug

Bani shudders

J: s bani common... that much u have to do for me............

bani looks at pale rashi......................

bani shocked at first... then widens her eyes. Then narrows……............. ... walks towards jai........ just as she is reaching him......... she trips... and throws the whole glass of cold water...... on his face with a splash

bani sorry... sorry... apko lagi to nahi naa.................

J looks confused. .......... then bani goes to him... running her hands on his coat............... with innocent eyes........bending towards him... very softly whispers....

B: lagthi kasi nahi............... mera nishana k abhi nahi chuktha

Jai blood starts boiling again...

J: bani...............

B turns back............

J gives her his brilliant smile.... bani blinks for sometime distracted

J slowly comes dripping......................... takes her saree pallo wipes it............. and hugs her............

Bani does not know what has hit her. She has never felt this before. Like a live wire hit her somewhere in the core of her being! All her senses are alive with a tingling feeling. She thinks, is this what one feels when one hates someone so intensely....that must be it....I hate him, yes, it is hate....

there is a lot of wolf whistling going on

B is all red.............. its upto ur imagination if she is mad or embarrased....a bit of both

the marriage is set up a week after.............

M: bhaisaab aur babi ji.....hum naa kal sagaayee raklethe hai.....

Papa and Kiran: Ji theek hai

M: munna...................

bani is like...... who the hell is the kid here..... only to see J answer.........

Jai: Ji Maasi

B almost burst out laughing..........he and munna.... he is a rakshas..........

M: munna jaa bani ko lejaa.. aur achi si engagment ring pasand karlo tum dono........

B: nahi..............

kiran is like : kyon beta........ kyon nahi......

B: woh mujhe jaanay ki kya zaroorath hai.. yeah jobi pasandh karenge... acha hi hoga...

Jigs: aray bani asay math karoo.. phir yeah sab tumhe naa ghar me bita denge................. abhi say decision logi to phir tumhare liye aasaan hoga

J: kya bani... mere liye to aavo na.........

rano :awww....... jiju u r too good..........agar mein badi hoothi naa to phir………….

B: chupkar…… doesnot allow her to complete the sentence…………..

Rano: di ethni jalan achi bath nahi……….

B had to give in ad goes with J...................while everyone else starts discussing the details of the engagement and Marriage, Jai and Bani leave to go get the rings.

Bani very reluctantly sits in the car. Thinks "The man did not even have manners enough to open the door for her.....coward...."she gets in.... sulks and sulks all the way...........

Jai on the other hand is very happy, he is now planning how he can make a fool of her yet again! J purposely takes bani to nisha's parents store................... sot hat bani cannot perform any antics........he goes there...................

J: pick anything you want....... from the jewelers dept.........

J: dont worry i can afford.............. anything....... just name it .... you can get it.............money is not a issue here......

J goes around.......................

B mimics money is not a issue...............

B with vengeance.... picks a really ugly big diamond ring for him............ and a really good one for herself........................

just as bani turns around to display her choice... finds J missing..... Looks for him... only to see him hug a pretty gal.............. in short clothes...............

B interesting......................

bani.... mind sparkles................. she makes a call..... waits for 15 minutes

massi dadi, jigs and kiran along with rano and rashi... come there

bani shows them the picked stuff..................impresses jigs by picking the stuff she liked......

Jigs:aray bani u dont hae to pick that... if you dont want to...... u know dont feel obligated...

B: nahi di mujhe patha hai di.. that you have class in choice

B: i trust your decision.........

jigs is like awww........................

they ask about J... bani says he left as he had urgent work...........

Then rano bani and kiran go into the clothes dept…. to get something…………………Rashi cleverly starts their plan…….. by taking all the walia clan to the place where J is hugging the gal……………..

all the walia clan are shocked....................

manisha: J tumharay peechey............

J: aray peechay nahi aagay ho tum

M;J woh...........

J: aray jaanu what are u looking else where............ look at me naa... let me drown in ur eyes..... usha...............

manisha: kya... i am manisha not usha..................

J is confused for a minute..............

J: naam mein ky ahia... i was so drowned in ur eyes that i forgot ur name..........

all the three walia woman are shocked......

rashi is rolling her eyes.......

jigs: jai yeah saab kya hai............

J: manisha... tumhari aawaz ko kya huwa...

manisha: jai woh tumharay peeche...............

J turns and is shocked to see the reaction of his family

MAnisha just excuses herself and slips away....

J is caught doing the deed........ it was the most embarrassing day of his life... being caught by his elder sister and aunts........

rashi just stood there trying her best not to laugh

Jigs: How can you do this Jai. How can you do this to Bani. After all Bani is your choice, we did not force her on you. Even then you are cheating on her. Think what she will feel if she sees you like this.....

Jigs: You both love each other....so I dont see what this nonsense is! This is not acceptable...EVER...

Jigs: i will not allow u play with that poor good gal bani

Jig: i will not............ u have to face me.... u cannot dump her.............

J(thinks) did i hear my sister right she is taking bani;s side... she never takes anybody's side

Jai: No di, I will never dump her (thinking: how can I cut her loose so easily)

Jigs: what u will take adv of her........... i will not let you do the same thing as..................i will not keep quite this time

M: jigs... control urself....................

Jigs: no maasi, he has to learn what marriage means.....

bani's pop: i cannot believe it................

P: i thought u were such a good man …….. I trusted you……………. And you turn out to be……….. you have no right to do this to my daughter…………….. this marriage……….. he clutches his heart…………………..

B: comes in screaming : Papa……….. aapko kya huwa……… papa……….

Part IX

Bani: papa aap galat samaj rahe hai.... woh actually naa humari shart lagi thi....

Papa: Shart?

Bani: Jai mujhse kah rahy they ki woh kisiko bhi pata saktey hain............ and mujhe jaalaa saktey hain

Bani: mera unkay saath chota jagda ho gaya tha to woh mujhe jaalaanay ki koshish kar rahe they

Bani looks all embarrassed and then goes to Jai and says sorry….. much to his shock........ and hugs him… in his ears........: papa ne tumhe bacha liya.... lekin iske baad kadham phook phook kai rakhna… harbar papa nahi bachayenge

Every body chides Jai and Bani for being playful but don't make an issue of it.

massi forces Jai and bani to go for lunch so Jai hurriedly pays for the rings and takes Bani with him. everyone else just goes off to their respective tasks….

Jai literally dragging her out with him…as they come out........... Jai leaves bani ........ bani almost.... falls backward.............. becoz of the force

Bani goes and sits in the car, she did not like the way Jai is treating her.

SHE saved HIM and he is behaving as if HE is doing HER a favor

They reach the restaurant….Dhaba…really rustic looking but the best food….

Jai is behaving as if she is not even with him, he is coolly looking around.............. Bani notices there is this gal in a short red dress.......... looking so chick.......... showing off... everything she needs to be covering…and Jai the Jerk (yes she like to call him that) is just staring at her..............

Bani: oh god............. rolls her eyes...............

Jai: what.................

Bani: nothing I am hungry, can we order or you stomach is filled by ogling at girls

Jai just shrugs.... :totaly busy checking her out...........

Bani: what are you xray vision man....... who can see beyond clothes


Jai: oh i wish................ i am just trying my imagination here

Bani: Food....you know the thing you eat to stay alive...ever heard of it? Your actions are making me sick…

Jai: come bani....... food is not the only thing u know....... busy himself................

Bani: oh god you men naa want only one thing from woman........... u r so cheap


Jai: stop calling me names.............. you are just jealous...... that i am watching another gal when you are sitting beside me

Bani: Jealous…. what are you? Salman khan kaa chaylaa…. batt karte hoo...

Jai: to kya tum kya koi Katreena hoo.............. nahi naa......kabhi shakal dekhi hai apni….aayenaa bhi darjaayegaa................

Bani:kyon meri shakal to kya huwa....................i have boys falling all over me.............

Jai: aray bani... patha hai mujhe tumhe dekkay to esahi hogaa naa... darkay maaray to girenge..............

Bani: kya matlab

Jai: yeahi ki tum mujhe se jaada us ladki say chidthi hoo… kyon ki she is mordern.... hot......sexy............ and have men falling all over just look at yourself........ skinny................ wearing behenji type of clothes...........obviously u will react like this…

Bani: kya hai......... saab kuch to dekha rahi hai...................

Jai: she has good assests what is wrong in showing off............ u dont have so u act all prim and proper.................starts acting with pity...................

Bani gets all worked up........................dumps the coke on his head........... and starts hitting him.........................

Bani: I am not prim.......... i am not................ behenji............ i am not..... (showering J with blows)............................

Every body looks at them...........Jai gets embarrassed and drags bani along with him while she is showering him with blows.............. into the secluded lobby and pins her against the wall.................... holds her hand tightly.................................... and ............ before either of them realize it, he was kissing her ……… and........ thats all bani remembers........ by the time she comes back to consciousness…….he was kissing her passionately................................and to her shock she is kissing him back with the same passion.........all the anger had dissloved into some other emotion stronger than anger...................................

Part X

after sometime..... a noise of ppl passing near the passage makes them come out of the embrace........ J doesnot let her go......... just stares back....................... at her l ips............ which are swollen now

Bani: too shocked to react looks at his face......... then on his lips.......... and the area around it is coated by her lipstick

Both of them get oriented back................ just as jai leaving....... bani holds his hand...................

Bani: Your lips... there is lipstick around your lips

Jai comes near....... bani................... brushing his hands on her exposed waist....... takes her pallu and wipes it

Bani shudders....

Jai coolly : lets go

Both of them drive back in silence

Wile in the car Jai thinks............... : god i was thinking that this marriage is going to be boring......... but now it looks darn interesting to me….. well he is a man he only thinks of one thing…

Bani is confused by her reaction...she is supposed to hate him....but what kind of hate it is that she actually enjoyed being kissed by him and to top that she responded to his kiss…it just felt so natural…so right….God, what is she thinking…..what he must be thinking....She thinks that she has to do some damage control before he gets any ideas…but cant think of how…it just felt so right…

Without another word they reached Bani's place and she just gets out of the car and goes into her house without a backward glance....

They dont even realize among the humdrum of the family and friends and it is the next day morning....the morning of the day they are going to get engaged...

next day in the evening..... bani and her family come to J place.... for the engagement

Bani is wearing a super hot...... rust ghagra....................... with backless choli blouse................the dupatta has gold sequin work on it all over…..it looks like gold dust is sprinkled all over her dress and dupatta….she has a combination od rust and gold bangles in both the arms….a simple gold chain with a single pearl pendant and pearl earings….three drops of pearls hanging from her ears…..she had verly light makeup…she did not like putting much makeup and raashi had forced her to put on some saying afterall it was HER engagement….

Bani looked at herself in the mirror and a thought crosses her mind, will he think I am looking good? And sees the blushed cheeks….then thinks…."wait a minute, why am I blushing….that Jai the Jerk is not supposed to mean anything to her…then why am I thinking if he will approve of me or not….no, I have to do something about it…but what?.....

Bani is still confused about her actions at the mall the previous day. She was so close to fixing this "situation". When papa saw Jai flirting wth that girl, it was perfect opportunity to cancel this fake marriage….and she would have done it if she had not seen her dad holding his heart….she had thought that he was going to get a heart attack….and she was terrified…and that's why she went and saved Jai from humiliation….but her sub-conscious was nagging her…did she save him just for papa's sake or did she want to save him no matter what….

Raashi's voice brings her back to present….

Bani: what? Did you say something?

Raashi: Bani are you ok? You are not telling me anything since you came back from your late lunch yesterday….you are behaving like a zombie….

Bani: nahi nahi Raashi, nothing like that……..

Raashi: Come on Bani…spill the beans…

Bani: We kissed….pheew…(there she said it…finally)

Raashi: You what?

Bani: ya, you heard it right….kissed…that Jerk…

Raashi: Care to explain?

Bani: (all her confusion now replaced by anger…tells Raashi everything.) you know what I hate that jerk….and he will have to pay for that…Jai Walia the JERK….here I come…..its payback time….

Jai dropped her at her house after their so called lunch. He waited till she entered her house. She did not even turn back to give him a goodbye wave….you know the kind you give to someone…anyone…who comes and drop you home….but the girl has nerve and she is stubborn….God! he enjoyed the kiss….it would be fun dealing with her stubborn pride on a daily basis living together….he smiles to himself as his devious mind starts plotting of all the things he would want to do just to annoy her….Yes, it will be interesting to live with her….she as his wife…and he as her husband…..

Edited by Chandnichowk - 18 years ago
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ok before we get into my update for today.................... Bani blouse is different one................... it has doris all along the back...they are tied already.............has a front opening...............

Bani and her family read Jigyasaa's place in time for the function. Jai had all eyes for bani........ damn she looked hot.......... all he wanted to do was.......open the dories at the back….and…..

Bani was damn uncomfortable...... in that dress... it was not only heavy....... but also did not allow her to wear a regular b_a becoz of the number of dories at the back.................she felt the zarbosi work.................the blouse material started bruising the her skin underneath it............... and she needed to go and adjust the dress...............

Bani looks around for help, not sure what to do....She spots Anu, and as it is Jigayasaa di's house, she asks Anu if she can go into her room to adjust her dress.

Anu: Of course mami, come I will take you to my room.

While walking to the room, Anu gets a naughty idea, she takes Bani to the room Jai is staying instead of her own room.

She leaves Bani into the room and tells her to fix her dress and she will be back in a couple of minutes.

Anu goes back in the hall and goes to Jai and asks him if he liked the gift that she left for him in his room. He says that he must have not seen it and Anu pouts and says that he should go check it out right now. He does not want to disappoint Anu, so goes off to his room.

Bani on the other hand in the room......... taking her chunari out.......................................... and neatly laying on the bed....... carefully bani unbuttoned her blouse....... enough to ................ see the rash.........................................tries to adjust the inbuilt support ......... so that the work doesnot prick her..........................finally gets it right.................................as she looks for herself in the mirror................. she is shocked to see so him

J had come awhile ago.................... when bani had laid her................... chunnari.................. on his bed........................................much to his shock............ had undone her blouse button..............J had been.................... staring at her from then.......................... he has closed his fist trying really hard............ not to go and sooth the rash.....as his own............................

Just then......... bani looks at the mirror as gasps........................................

shocked turns and faces J ............. giving him a view of what he wanted to see..................

bani stands there in daze........... colour creeping to her cheeks.............................they stare at each other..................

just then.....................some noise of ppl walking around gets them back to this world...........

B (embarrased) : woh mein..... apna

J still staring............................ bani hurries towards her ghagra.......................but forgets the procedure.............................

tries to wind it around...... looking confused............

J has moved closer to her........... creating havoc to her senses..................

J: bani...................

B stops doing everthing.................... drops her............... dupatta down.............................................. looks at where J is looking

B thinks oh god...... i forgot to button them back......................... and hurriedly....... tries to button them.....................................her hands shaking......... unable to get them right.............. much to her horror.......................... two strong hands came.............. and pulled her hands away.................let him do that and then while helping her wear her dupatta, he bends down and kisses her along the neckline.............bringing his attention to ......................her lips......................................coaxing her in response.....................................

That was all bani knew...................all her world collapsed............ and only sensation swirled...................the power of this man took over everything she had...................

Ok now what happens.... or what do u want to happen..............

let me know....... sorry if i have offended anybody.......................

Edited by Chandnichowk - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice try Chandini....please write more....soon... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#6
nice start hun 👏 👏 can u make the next part longer please?! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#7
OMG hun!! that was sooo cute and hilarious 😆 😆

bani being bold...and poor jai all shocked and flustered 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG...u cant sstop there...i cant wait for more...plz continue soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Halia ankhen mare ho laki ankhen mere dil dhakan yeh, good think she didn't whistle
Bechara Jai 😆 😆 😆
make it longer the next time without spacing
please write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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keep going lovely start hamari bani sharmati nahi hai haila jai to khallas 😆

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