FF-secrets of the heart-update pg33 - Page 22

Thanks for your PM Asha.
It was a great part and you should most definitely continue, but a little sooner please.
Sorry I couldn't comment earlier, I was on vacation.
Bechari Bani. So much has happened with her. I really hope everything gets better.
I hope Rano gets better too.
Update soon!

Yuks

hey plz dont stop it
update it as soon as possible.....plz........

omg asha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i jst read ur whooole ff in one go!!! wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! soooo gd!!!! loved it!!! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont!!!!! dnt even think of stopping!!!! 😃

bc x

Hi

Please update. Silent reader is asking very nicely

amar

theek hai guys, i'll try to update soon. but tomorrow i'll be VERY VERY busy! i''ll try parso.. thank u very much for ur encouragement! 😃

hello all....
soooo sorry for the delay... school is KILLING me yaar...
this is a very short part, sorry guys... im suffering from a writer's block and now my writing sucks big time... so yes its very boring... but bear with me... im gonna end this thing pretty soon...
ok, here u goooo....

Bani: khair… forget it…
Jai: NO, I don't want to forget it!
Bani was taken aback by jai's sudden outburst.
Jai(voice softening): baniii…
He placed his hands gently on her shoulders…
Jai: bani… kyon…why r u doing this to me?
Bani: k…k..kya?
Her voice was shaking… though her eyes glistened with a knowing look…
Jai: why did u leave me? Kyon chora mujhe?
With teary eyes, jai began stroking bani's cheek, moving closer to her.
Bani closed her eyes and felt his soft skin brushing gingerly across her cheeks…
Bani: mujhe… jaane kyon diya?
Bani collapsed into jai's chest again… holding on to his shirt and letting him stroke her hair…
jai wanted to take away all of bani's pain... he wanted to take all her pain for himself and let her be free of her torturous past...

Kuch is tarha teri palkain meri palkon se mila de….aansoon tere saaye meri palkon me saja de…
kuch is tarha teri palkain meri palkon se mila de…aanson tere saareee meri palkon pe saja de….
kuch is tarha teri palkain meri palkon se mila de...

Kuch is tarha teri palkain meri palkon se mila de…aanson tere saare meri plakon pe saja de…
To har gharrii har waqt mere saath raha hai….haan yeh jism kabhi door kabhi paas raha hai…
Jo bhi gham hai yeh tere….unhon to mera bata de…
kuch is tarha teri palkain meri palkon se mila de…annson tere saare meri palkon pe saja de…

Mujhko to tere chehre pe yeh gham nahin jajta…jayaz nahin lagta mujhe gham se tera rishta….
Sunn meri guzarish ise chehre se hatha de….sun meri guzarish isse chhehre se hatha de…

kuch is tarha teri palkain meri palkon se mila de….aanson tere saare meri palkoon pe sajja de…
kuch is tarha teri palkain meri palkon se mila de……


They sat engulfed in each other for so long… cuddled in their warmth and love… away from the world and all its complications… but nor for long…
Bani's eyes opened in shock… as reality came back to her… slapping her hard…
she cringed in pain for her inner torture and pushed jai away…
Bani: jai… jai nahin… no…
Jai: bani…?
He looked at her questionly…
Bani(voice rising): do u want to know wat happened after that? PIA didi mujhe sahara di… she took me in and gave me a home, a name, a family despite not knowing me… she gave me a place in her heart and welcomed my with open arms…
Jai was shaken at the mention of pia…
Bani rose from the bed…
Bani: no mr.walia… nahin… I can't…
Jai: bani, listen to me…
Bani: my sisters mean the world to me… they are everything for me… I can never betray them… mein bohut pyar karti hoon pia di se…agar pia di nahin hoti… to mein yaha nahin hota.. I'd be dead rite now.. DEAD!
And with that… bani stormed off… in a fit of fury, anger… and unconditional pain…
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6 months later…
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Everyone in the walia mansion was in a hurry to get things done… the cards, the decoration… everything had to be perfect. The news reporters had already been flooding the house… asking questions and making enquiries about the grand event. Jai was on his toes, tumbling between his new business deal and the preparations. Everyone was excited… and why should they not be? After all, it's the year's biggest event…in just a few weeks, the country's biggest business tycoon jai walia's was to be wedded with gorgeous supermodel pia dixit.

no replys?? 😭 i guess u guys didnt lyk it...

Hey Asha! You've finally updated!!! That was a great part, hun! 👏 👏 👏 Jai and Bani were just so 😳 😳 😳 awww, but they can't be together because of Pia 😡 Bani, forget about Pia, she isn't that great of a person anyways! 😆 😉 Can't wait for the next part!!! The wedding's coming soon! 😕

Love ya
Goddess

superb part.just fabalous.loved it.very emotional.cant wait to read more.plz cont soon. 😊

is jai gng to marry pia???????/
oh god
i hoped jai and bani together
anyway plz continue soon
i am waiting for next parts