ff-ishq concluding part. - Page 33

i know many friends and readers r waiting for the next part.

i'll update tonight....


honey11

hey honey,
studies are important part of ur life right now and u should concentrate onit we will wait for ur ff dont worry about it for timebeing you can just put it on hold and work hard fir ur exams best of luck and remember we will wait for ur update......

I SINCERELY WANT TO THANK MY FRIENDS AND MY READERS FOR THEIR LOVE AND SUPPORT AND OVERLOOKING MY MISTAKES.

i have to end this ff,b'coz i do'nt have time to continue it.
so here is the last part.....

doctor comes in the icu and gives bani an injection.jai's face is completely pale.he is completely scared to see bani's condition.

now bani is breathing normally.

dr.informs jai that bani's condition is serious and if she does'nt open her eyes within next 6 hours then its difficult to save her.saying that dr.leaves.

jai is shaken from inside.he slowly goes to bed where bani is lying.he is looking at her with empty eyes.he took her hand in his.

his condition is miserable.tears r falling from his swollen red eyes.he is only praying in his heart for bani.

suddenly,he feels some movement in bani's hand.he shockingly looks at her.slowly bani opened her eyes and sees jai's tear strained face.

jai is so haapy and relieved to see her.he kissed her head in happiness.he is still crying but now his eyes r wet in happiness to see his life .

bani......he says with taking her hand in his own hands.

bani weakly smiled at him.with tears in her eyes,she looks at her twins and says..

"jai...i love yu.......saying that a tear falls from her eye and her hand fells from his hand.her heart stops beating...now only her body is lying there.

jai is numb to see this.time stops there....he feels like his soul left his body.today he is feeling lifeless.

then we hear a scream of jai

baniiiiiii.........................



Jo aayi thi hamara saath nibhane....saath chod kar wo chali gayi.....

kuch na pucha kuch na kaha, bus muh mod kar, wo chali gayi....

zindagi ke safar ka hamrahi jise samjha tha, anjaane raasto pe akela chod kar wo chali gayi......

thi hame jis se khushiyo ki ass, zindagi bhar ka gum de kar , wo chali gayi....

rabb se zyada kiya tha jis pe vishwas, vishwas tod kar, wo chali gayi....


shayad kismat mein unka saath yahin tak tha.........



magar kehte hain ki sachi chahat kabhi nahi marti.....woh insaan ki rooh mein bas jaati hai.....aur bani bhi jai ki rooh mein bas gayi thi........



friends,i know yu r disappointed from my decision and also the last part is not even good in terms of writing.

but i promise that i'll come back with a new story.and till then yu can read my ff rishtey.


i am ready for critism now.

honey11

who could she die??? 😭 You ended the fanfic, so she can't even come back to life. 😭


-Rimpy 😭

Originally posted by: punjabi#1

who could she die??? 😭 You ended the fanfic, so she can't even come back to life. 😭


-Rimpy 😭

do'nt cry dear.

Mohabbat main itna door nikal jayenge kabhi socha na tha
Hum wafa karke bhi bewafa kehlaayenge kabhi socha na tha
Zamane se tanha hi takrayen ge kabhi socha na tha
Hum to Pyaar ke naam se hi na aashna the
Chahat ki itni bari saza payenge kabhi socha na tha
Us ka her andaaz doorson se judda lagta
Uske rang main hum rang jayenge kabhi socha na tha

honey11

she died?????
thats it????
😭

That was a very sad ending
She died and the last words she said was I Love You Jai😭
Can you do a epilogue saying that Jai moved on his life and took care of his twins the last memory of Bani because i don't jai to neglect his and Bani's kids😭😭😭the babies are innocent😭😭😭

not all stories have a happy ending to it 😭 😭 😭 but then if no body is happy it is not ending it is called interval of their story and their story continues from where they left on the sad note to an happy ending 😭 😭 😭

Honeeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy !!! Yaarrr itnii sad endingg !! Nahinn !!! thtss not fairr !! y did bani die..and the last wrods she said was " ilove you jai " ....awwww !!! my heart is meltingg sooo much noww !! 😭 aww i am ssooo sad !! i wish she statyed aliveee !!! 😳 a happyy endingg would havee beenn niceeee !! 😉
hun ! we can understand that u ahvee studiess to get along with ! and soo makee suree u studyy ahrd !! but pleasee contiuee ur other ff.....lovee that one ....itss absoluetley amazingg !!! 😃
Thnksx honey ! For a great ff ...with somee reallyy beautifully tremendous partss !! lovedd to read all the sher's and everything !! it was totallyyy amazingg !!! 😃
Thnksxx oncee again !
👏

Originally posted by: honey11

Jo aayi thi hamara saath nibhane....saath chod kar wo chali gayi.....

kuch na pucha kuch na kaha, bus muh mod kar, wo chali gayi....

zindagi ke safar ka hamrahi jise samjha tha, anjaane raasto pe akela chod kar wo chali gayi......

thi hame jis se khushiyo ki ass, zindagi bhar ka gum de kar , wo chali gayi....

rabb se zyada kiya tha jis pe vishwas, vishwas tod kar, wo chali gayi....

yaar honey...that was a lovely poem 😭 u wrote...i thought it was sooo sweet 😳 ......aaaaawwwww...bani left jai 😭 .....that was such an emotional ending 😭 tink can't stop crying 😭 ...it was great though yaar....keep it up 👏 👏 👏