FF:AT FIRST GLANCE- The End on pg 88 - Page 40

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sabsj

Anothe magic part from you sabj... πŸ˜ƒ

You got me this pit....😳

The clock struck midnight at that very moment. Jai dropped a kiss on the top of Bani's head and she trembled. His voice waxed husky. "Come with me darling, I have a surprise for you" he said to her and led her to the porch outside…………. there she saw a bucket of champagne lying chilled, waiting to be popped open, a huge bouquet of red roses, her favourite, heart shaped balloons swaying to the music and the wind, a fresh cream pineapple cake in the shape of a farmhouse which resembled her house in Mt. Abu, some horse figurines on it holding a banner which read "Happy Birthday Sunshine" ……………….. a heart shaped candle, waiting to be lit and blown, a bowl of fresh strawberries topped with cream, a platter of stuffed chicken and roasted onions and potatoes, again Bani's favourite and the works ………… How can a man like him forget your special day when you're his everything and very special to him...? 😳 πŸ˜› 😳

Jai then gently kissed her again, lit the candle, gave Bani a knife to cut the cake and sang "happy birthday to you ………………..". I think I am nearly going down...πŸ˜›

"How could you even think for a second that I would forget your birthday Bani ……….. you are the best thing that has happened to me, nothing is more important to me than you. I just wanted to spend this special day alone with you, am sorry if you were expecting a big Walia style party instead, we can have one when we return, I promise you that, but today, I just wanted it to be you and me only, just the two of us …………. two hearts, one heartbeat, one soul, one body ………..Ok now I think am really going to faint....😳 😳 😳 πŸ˜›..." before he could complete his sentence, Bani had claimed his lips and magic was let loose all around.

As tears welled up in her eyes at that memory, she was jolted out of her dreamy flashback when Jai walked back into the room, took one good look at her sitting on the floor playing with her shoes and asked once again …………This pit was very touchy sabj... 😭 😭 😭 😭

What went wrong... thats really what you have to find out darling... what is wrong with you...? why the distance between you two, when you both are soo close to each other...?..πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Come on give each other a second and a third chance to sort out the reason behind whats going on...πŸ˜‰.. I know you two want too... 😳 😳 😳

"Relationships are like crystals, you don't realize how much you love it until it breaks." soo true.... 😭

Humour for the day

Perfect Husband?

1. a perfect husband does not smoke,

2. he does not drink,

3. he is not unfaithful to his wife,

4. he does not gamble, and best of all ...

5. he does not exist - RED HERRING πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Sabj it was too good to even describe how much...I loved it.... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Always luv...

hanaane...

Edited by hanaane - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
WOOOOW buddy.... simply WOOOOW... πŸ‘

just read all the parts now from 1 to 11.... its simply awesome... πŸ‘

cont soon.... πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sabsj

hello once again, so did i manage to guess anything else ...... u know what i am referring to right πŸ˜› ....... trust bani to be confused ..... she can never make up her mind as to what she wants.

u have life membership on this airways ....... don't worry have already started putting together another itinerary ........ pretty good, atleast my friends are maha khush with it ........ so my dear, don't worry about your journey ever coming to an end.

u r right ....... what the hell has this ice queen done to our studdman, will have to teach her a lesson now .........

thanks for ur encouragement dear ........ truly appreciated, makes writing even more enjoyable.

love...sabs

You came soo close sabj... I guess thats God gift to you... Mansha Allaah.. I must say...We're all enjoying a high time here thanks for your effort, talent and hard working...πŸ˜‰ 😳 πŸ‘

Every mistake that is done has a price to pay in return..soo I please and personaly request to you... make her pay the price.... if she's really the one who driving the relationship away.. Yaar she's too much but make him handle her if you know what i mean.. πŸ˜‰ 😳... I want the ice queen running after him almost... I know I am asking too much but please take to count hun... we can wait np...πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Thanks for the update we truly appreciate your hardworking... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Always luv...

hanaane...

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sabsj

haan late toh hain, lekin neend nahin aa rahi hain kya karoo, tv bhi nahin dekh sakti ......... feel like crying out of boredom, just wanna get up and run home ......... issi liye forum pe chit chat kar rahi hoon. aane doh nurse koh, aaj main hi usko daantne wali hoon, ho sakta hain, she will convince the doc to discharge me earlier πŸ˜†

Bas little time more, then you will be back home.

Anyway rest as much as you can here. Once back home and "Bani and Krishna" are together, then where and what rest.?? Life will be pleasantly busy.

Edited by shish - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Does not drink, smoke, gamble and is faithful............hmm...........I'm sure I can find someone like that Sabs!πŸ˜‰

Last two parts were awesome.........How can Bani think about divorcing Jai?!!!............he's just to😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
EXCELLENT PART SABSJ!! you've ripped Jai and Bani from Kasamh Se and so neatly patch-worked them into a world of your own, i often forget that they are the jai and bani we see on tv!! πŸ‘

i'm wondering what that question is now... i have an inkling but i shall wait for you to divulge.... πŸ˜› πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: loka

awesome part yaar
continue soon πŸ‘

thanks loka, will update in a while

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Vedo

awesome part Sabs!! thoroughly enjoying the flight! πŸ˜ƒ
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Jai the bhaloo!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† lol!! the two of them are too much! I loved their fight! they had me laughing with their remarks!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
n the humor of the day too..it was hilarious! πŸ˜†
aww I feel so sad for Jai 😭 ...he still loves her n I'm sure she still loves him too toh phir yeh divorce kyun? πŸ˜•
plzz continue soon! 😊

hey vedo, am glad u r enjoying ur flight. ........... their tu tu main main is what keeps them going ........... love toh hain, magar ........... dekhte hain aage kya kya hota hain

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: TINK

πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ AWESOME PART YAAR PLZ CONT SOON

thanks tink, will just post another update in a while

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: inavars

OMG 😳

it's taking some time for me to recover........ it's like God picked him up from a romance novel and dropped him in the cabin......aaaaaaaaaaahhhh 😳 😳 😳

he's my hero 😳 😳 okay i'm done!!

i'll be back to leave a real comment πŸ˜›

hai, cho chweet .......... sach yaar, this guy is like a greek god ........ too hot to handle ........ apni aadaoo se toh maar hi deta hain .....mera bhi Hero No. 1 hain

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