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Posted: 18 years ago
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Too good Aditi!!! 👏 👏....would give an arm and a leg to be in B's position!.....not only does she get a hubby like J but also an adorable MIL....Gosh!...how did i ever miss these relatives living in Auckland(**nudge nudge wink wink**)...i am going back to my faithful Whitepages again to locate them!😆 😆

Love
Ritika

PS: Thanks again for sending me back home to BOMBAY!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82

Empress,
you've done it again!
Exquisitely brought out the contradictory emotions Bani harbours when it comes to JW.....and their interaction together....amazing how much in sync they can be and yet fail to truly acknowledge some things....or rather acknowledge them subconsciously but never openly....and certainly never to each other in words.....actions are of course another matter entirely.....
and i love this Masi...way too cool...

Great going...
👏 👏 👏

Armana
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
Aditee,


excellent parts, i can pin point which is the best one.

I have read all the parts over and over again like million times and still love to read them..

I love the interactions (hate and love) between them, you potrey them very well..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
wooww !! Aditee 47B
wass grr88 !! aww u madee my day !!
i cna see the changess in bani !! towardss jai....and i hopee they remiain likee that !!!
andd i hopee dey confess tehir love to each other !! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 i loved it...jst too good..... 😉 this Jai and Bani rock yaar 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
hej!

just w0000000000000000000w 👏
and I LOVE YOU 😳 😳 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
diwali ke din shaadi.. hmm JW cannot stay away from Bani any longer huh 😉 ... so much for the couch that she was planning!!! 😳

Shopping for JW at Benzer.... now that is a treat.. She does not want be with him.. but she needs to make sure he is dressed right... or is there any other feeling?? 😉 I will do a review later, Adi
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88

Aditee,

Superb! I don't know what I am more excited for.. more cat and mouse... and lips locking, or the engagement and wedding!!! Maasi's a little devil isn't she..? Hmm.. apple doesen't fall far from the tree with her Munna! 😆

Loved the descriptions, and the clothes, and the hesitations. Your dialogues are so close to real life conversations,..... witty, humorous, tempestuous, and driven! You KNOW these characters...and it seems that they are as real to you as they have become to us! Thats whats so engaging....

Am turning pages with excitement....or rather scrolling down like a fiend!😆!

Can't wait to see more... shall do a proper review later..

Soap

Edited by soapaddict - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
thank you aditee... that was awesome 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Aditee,
👏 👏 👏 Bravo 👏 👏 Love 47B. Love massi cheekiness, bani's excitement (engagement dress)and ofcourse the cat& mouse game between J&B.
Bani's appetite always makes me 😆 😆 she reminds me of soo much of some i know (Myself) 😆 And ur description of shopping escaped all over breach candy, haji ali, cross roads and benzer brings back wonderfull memories.
Thank u very much.

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