New FF: Dono Taraf Aag Hain Lagi - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
Haila!

I think its Jai's company where she got hired!

No probs...kahin to love shuru hona tha...ghar nahin to office hi sahee😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32

Haila........Jai stop drinking yaar.........liver karab hojayenghe..........and the love story hasn't even started yet!😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
Hey,
Mindblowing start!!!!
Love ur new fanfic!!!
I seriously think u should consider writing a fiction novel!!!!
ur ff has everything from romance to intrigue to funny moments and u capture them so well!!!
Cannot wait to read the next part!!!!
pls continue soooooooooooooooon!!!!
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Keep smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
👏 abh kyaa 😕
cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
Part 5

Bani is all excited!

She's like thank god I got the job!!!!

She starts tomorrow!

She goes home

And she tells her dad!

She's happy!

He's happy for her!!!

Guy is walking!!

He comes inside a cabin…

He says that they have hired someone new!!!!

Person: What's her name??

Guy: Bani Dixit!!!

Person is like okay!

You can go!

Guy leaves!!!!!

Person is like Bani Dixit????

Next Morning

Bani wakes up

And she goes to work!!!!

She's there on time!!!!!

She's given work and what not

And she does it!!!

She does a good job!

She doesn't disappoint!!!

Her work is always good!

And then

She is called to the boss's cabin!!!!!!

Bani is walking!!!

U see her walking in slow motion!!

And then

She knocks on the cabin door!!!!

And she comes in!!!!

Person is talking

But the chair is turned
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
Part 6

Bani cant see the person!!!!

Person is asking her questions

And is like

U just joined?

Bani is like yes!

And person is just saying..

On what is expected

And what is to be done!!!

Bani is like I will do it!!!!!!

Bani is all shaking

She's talking to the boss!!!

And then

Then seat turns around

Bani looks up

And she's shocked like anything!

Cuz yes

The person is none other than Jai!!!

Jai is looking at her

Bani's shocked!!!

Bani is like omg!

Whats he doing here?

She cant believe it!!!!

Jai is like welcome!!!!!

And he talks to her…

In the most sarcastic tone ever!!!

Bani doesn't know what to do!!

Jai is like

No matter what happens….

We always keep meeting!!

He's like

Even though I don't want to see you…. Why do I keep seeing you?

And he's being mean!!

Bani is looking at him

And she has a mean face!!!

Bani: Its my bad luck.. that I always have to see you too!!!!


The End!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37

Preview for tomorrow:

Bani and Jai are always rude to each other!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
OMG!

It is Jai!!!😳

Bani...teri to life ban gayi yaar!!!😳 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39

man get them married already!!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
isn't hate the first step to love. 😉

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