Ek Anjana Sa Rhista _Last Part pg178

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Posted: 18 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: Auditi
yeaaa c every1's waiting..... i also started singing..... intehaaa hogayi intezaar ki.... aayi nah kuch khabar ff update kiii..... 😆

if it continues like this soon my parents will shift me in a mental hospital..... 😛

hahahahahha! yeah yeah yeah raania! plz cont soon! we cant wait anymore and plz mujhe mental asylium nahi jaana!

ps: auditi, dont worry u wont be alone there, i'll join u soon! lol😆

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harpreet

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Posted: 18 years ago

#302

raania, omg i was reading this and thought how can thisfinish already and why leaving it at a cliffhanger,
tum bhi nah

i was gna scream cus i thought it was over there
but will imaptiently be waiting for your reply

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
don'rt make us wait tooo ;ong

luv'd it

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Mamta Singh

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Posted: 18 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: ovaltine
Beautiful ff. I went with the flow and it had to end, awaiting the continuation.0 👏 BTW how old is your JW?

he is 30yrs old and bani is 10 yrs younger then him

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Pooja

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Posted: 18 years ago

#304

hey Raaina jaldi se update kardo ... aab aur intezaar nahi hota... 😭 😭

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Raania

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Posted: 18 years ago

#305

😆 😆 😆 you guys are so funny yaar.....
Auditi please yaar dont get into trouble hun...i wouldnt want to have that on my concious 😆 ....and My Jai just turned 30 and Bani is 20....

oh guys im sorry i couldnt update yesterday.....the weather change is getting to me...running nose and all that u know...but must say Autumn is great...love it 😳

And nope this isnt the last part yet to the ff... 😆 😆 😆 got some off you big time.... 😉

Part 22

Jai was the main man for the night and the ladies in the party were dying to dance with him…Bani having a bit of space to breathe had to leave the party running like a maniac she ran to the roof top…the air was chilly but she needed it to calm her senses ….her body…her mood…everything….she couldn't uprehend the feeling or the emotions engulfing her…kya maine joh mehsus kiya usne bhi kiya???? Kya yeh Pyar hai???? …her hands traveling to her lips…her heart beating faster to the thought of it….anyone seeing her could tell she was having trouble breathing…..Bani smiled…blushing to the core of her roots but smiling…..she couldn't believe it…her first kiss…her first dance with a man….it was none other than the great Jai Walia….she smiled further her hands traveling to her stomach trying to control her emotions…"hey ram" yeh kaise hua….jika meh sapne dekti thi woh khud mere hi ghar meh hai……as she closed her eyes she now could envision the man who haunted her dreams…she saw Jai's face…his eyes lingering on her that cheesy smile playing on his mouth…

Calming herself she opened her eyes….yes Bani…u are in love……..admitting to herserlf she jumped in happiness…..oh my God im in love…I am in love…hey Ram…mujhe pyar hai…

RAno looking for her sister came up to find her smilng and jumpting…Rano a bit worried…

Rano: di app theek to ho
Bani running to Rano and hugging her…: Rano Rano…tum theek thi…u were right…..i am in love….mujhe pyar hogeya hai….i am so happy Rano…..mujhe pyar hogeya hai

RAno thought her sister had lost it…spinning her like crazy and just looking at her…Di??? Di???

Rano; masi aapko dhoond rahi hai chalo Di..

Bani looking at Rano: ha chalo…a beautiful smile playing on her lips

Jai spotted Bani as she entered the party again…his stomach doing a summersault ….just mersmerised looking at her…there was a different glow in her ..and oh God she was smiling that beautiful smile….she looked at Jai…this time with a shy smile…smiling she looked back at Masi who was talking to some people and introducing her…

bAni would steal glances and look at Jai..smilin all this while…

Khwabon Khayalon Khwahisho Ko Chehra Mila
Khwabon Khayalon Khwahisho Ko Chehra Mila
Mere Hone Ka Matlab Mila
Koi Mil Gaya Koi Mil Gaya
Haan Kaun Mil Gaya
Koi Mil Gaya
Ho Ho Ho Ho Ho Ho Ho
Ho Ho Ho
Yuh To Hum Tum Milne Ko Milte Rahe
Yuh To Hum Tum Milne Ko Milte Rahe
Par Kyon Aaj Aisa Laga
Koi Mil Gaya Koi Mil Gaya
Haan Kaun Mil Gaya
Koi Mil Gaya

The party ended some 3 hours later and It was around 2pm in the mrng when Masi Rano and the rest of them retired…the cleaners done with the cleaning and Bani finishing with making sure the leftovers were placed in the freezer….as she finally switched the lights off in the kitchen and made her way up the stairs….she got the biggest shock of her life…Jai sitting there on the stairs waiting for her….his coat gone…..only in his vest..looking up at her….Bani toh khalas….she wanted to run and than not run…."kya karu"…before she was shy and scared of him…now very much aware of him…especially with all the new feelings coming up in her….

Jai: hi
Bani: looking at the ground..hhhii.. really shyly
Jai: mujhse bhag rahi ho??
Bani: nahi toh…woh khana ko…
Jai: maine dheka Bani…
BAni: oh….biting her lower lips…
Jai: chale??
Bani: jee???
Jai: jee laughing now..sone Bani…aur kahi nahi
Bani: jeee….acknowldeging him…

Jai extended his hands for hers…Bani looking at It and than his face…..Jai closing his eyes and extending his hands further…..: Bani…??

BAni: looking down and smiling and giving her hands to him….

Jai taking it as they made their way up the stairs…..

BAni: her body doing all the weird things and she needed ice….tons and tons of ice…she was on fire and she needed something really cold to cool her down

Jai: woh maine thumare liye kuch aur rhaka hai…..aaj tumhe is sari meh dheka toh aab …I mean now Im conviced that u look ur best in a sari…so I wanted u to have it

Bani: taking her hands slowly…itne raath ko..aap kaal bhi

Jai: abhi Bani…tum arahi ho yeh meh thumare kamre au???
Bani: woh..meh…than nodding lets go

Jai leading her into his room and making her sit in that huge bed…bAni immediately thinking how she had cradled him to sleep and than herself sleeping in that huge bed …suddenly getting up…jai turnd to see : kya hua??

Bani: looking at him sheepishly…kuch nahi…woh..meh aise theek hu

She couldn't help looking at him…and just kept starring…..

Mujhse Milkar Kya Hota Hai Yeh Batlao Na
Yeh Batlao Na
Baat Yeh Hum Kaano Mein Kahenge Paas Mein Aao Na
Paas Mein Aao Na
Jo Baat Tum Kahoge Woh Baat Main Bhi Jaanu
Yeh Paas Mein Aane Ki Main Baat Nahi Maanu
Suno Na Suno Na Suno Na
Yuh To Baatein Karne Ko Karte Rahe
Par Kyon Aaj Aisa Laga
Koi Mil Gaya Koi Mil Gaya
Haan Kaun Mil Gaya
Koi Mil Gaya

She didn't even realise that jai had taken another parcel out and was standing infront of her

Jai: laughing now…BAni??? Kya hua

Bani coming to the present: oh…nahi…woh …meh..gdnight going…before Jai held her hand pulling her back….

Jai: Bani looking down as she stared at the floor…ice definitly ice Bani thought

Jai: thumare liye…..Bani looking at the parcel and than at him…..another gift…

Bani; aapka janamdin hai aur aap mujhe yeh

Jai: it makes me happy ….take it…..

Bani taking the gift bag waiting for him to leave her hands….but nope Jai just held on…….Bani's hands were closed into as fist….

Jai: woh kya hai???
Bani: taking her hand and opening it….a red velvet pouch in her hands…..

Taking it Bani opened it and took a Krishun kanhaiya from that pouch and handed it to him …really shy…

Bani: woh…apke liye hai….mujhe sidharth uncle (Jai's dad) ne di thi…kaha tha mera raksha karenge ge…..aur meh aapko de rahi hu kiu ki

Jai really touched by her words….: tum apne itne pyare cheez mujhe derahi ho??

Bani: looking down…jaab mere janamdin par aap mujhe inte kareeb ke cheez de sakte ho toh meh…..smiling…yeh aapke hamesha rhaksha karege….

Jai smiling….looking at that…and at her….such a beautiful heart she had…..only Bani Dixit could make him feel so special

Bending down looking at her face really close……: thanks it means a lot to me…

BanI; aapko bhi….iskeliye….thank you..smiling she ran to the door

Turning as Jai stared at her:

Bani: umm….gdnight…..looking at him…opening the door…gdnight Jai!!!

Running out to her room…closing the door to her room and leaning on it…smiling and looking at the yellow sari in her hand….she loved it…from now onwards Bani would get more saris

Jai looked at the Krishna murath and thought of his dad..the man who had taught him everything in life…and was thankful to him as a tear slid down his cheek without him realizing …..wiping it away smiling..: thanks Dad he said silently…for sending an angel in my life…..

Jai to headed for bed….Jai….it sounds so good from those lips…that voice..those lips….closing his eyes….Jaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!

KOI MIL GAYAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!

hope u guys liked that..... 😳 😳 😳

Edited by Raania - 18 years ago

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91118

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Posted: 18 years ago

#306

finallly someone updated 😡 😆 itz okay...you're forgiven..since it was AWESOME!!!

loved the koi mil gaya bit 😉 😆

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TINK

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Posted: 18 years ago

#307

OOOOMMMMGGGGG 😲THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOO CHOOOWEEETTT...HAILA HE GAVE HER ANOTHER SARI 😆 IT GOT EMOTIONAL IN THE END.....NEARLY MADE ME CRY 😭 😆 😆 😆 ....DON'T WORRY I AM BLUSHING MORE THAN ANYTHING RITE NOW 😆 THAT WAS AWESOME YAAR LIKE ALWAYS...HOPE U GOT SOME MORE IDEAS IN TEH PIPE LINE.... 😉 SO THEN ITS SOLVED THEY BOTH LUV EACH OTHER....ITS THE CONFESSION LEFT 😳 😳 😳 .....DON'T WORRY I AM NOT IN A HURRY 😛 ....WANNA READ MUCH MORE 😛 😉 ....BEFORE U GIVE US A JHATKA 😆 ..ABOUT FINISHING IT 😆 KEEP IT UP 👏 👏 👏

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Mamta Singh

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Posted: 18 years ago

#308

👏
OMG Bani finally admited to herself that she is in love, now both have to say the magic word to each other, and she should stop acting so shy around him
halia bani don't day dream because your dream will come true soon
jai giving bani saris so cheweet of him
the last part where bani gave him a gift it was so touchy😭
Yup Jai aur Bani ko Koi Mil Gaya
Bani doesn't need ice not even bucket of ice she needs a mountain of ice and to take a jump in a swimming pool to burn of that heat😆😆😆
please write soon 😛

Edited by ziddi - 18 years ago

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***srk***

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Posted: 18 years ago

#309

wow! what a part yaar! i loved it! thanx so much! i hope u'll continue soon! hmmmmmmmmm when will u be updating? lol plz soon hein!
i loved it and yaar the songsu use i love them so much! lol plz cont soon!

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sweetu144

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Posted: 18 years ago

#310

😃
FINALLY!!
Yaar you made me wait so long...but it was so worth it 👏
hmmmm.......you made sigh in wonder at Jai and Banis amazing chemsitry...and all that in YOUR FF!! 😃
You made them come alive..truly 😳
She finally said Jai.... 😳 "sigh".
You made my day by posting this part...thank you so much!
Really love this ff! 😳 😃 😛 !
Do hope that you will update and write another part soon...will be wiating most impatiently 😳 .
Amazing once again!
Luv
Sweetu 😳

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