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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
hey,
yaar i just catched up with all the parts that i missed! and it was fantastic! really well done! i really like ur FF! plz do cont soon! very nice! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62
oh man! i just caught up!!!!

that was like omg!

Baby??? Haila!!!!

Edited by Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
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gr8 work yar
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plz update next part as soon as possible
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
i just read your entire fanfic...
I am so glad jai and bani's misunderstanding are gone far away...
The funniest part when bani comes back and jai was like to tony...that dont you hug my wife now...i fell off my chair ....i was laughing so hard.... 😆 😆

Amazing fanfic...waiting for more...and i think that the baby is either pushkars or someone elses.....and it is not jai's...

continue soon

CK❤️
Edited by canadiankudi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
Eid Mubarak.
What she wants this Pia i just hate her. i hope Jai doesn't lie yet to Bani. He said that nothing happened the KC night. Maybe Pia wants cheated them. Great part. It's just fantatic. If you want, you can make more english part and less hindi. 😆 😆 😆 I said that because i don't understand the hindi very well.
Update soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
Awesome parts i read it twice. Pia with a baby ok lots of questions there. What will happen pls have mercy and update soon with the nice long part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
* Great partd continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
g8 parts. Plz continue soon and please make that baby pushkar's or natwar's but not jai.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Bani stared at her sister holding a baby in her hand. Bani's mind raced like a horse.
She turned her head towards her husband and said slowly, "Bacha….?'
Jai had to strain his ears to hear her correctly. 'han piya ka hein..' and he looked at her white face and suddenly it dawned on him he said abruptly. 'Mera nahin hein..' she turned her face towards Pia who was looking eagerly waiting for her to come down the stairs. Bani couldn't move her feet forward. She stood hesitantly and Jai stepped down on the stair with her and he bent his head near her ear and whispered.'Don't you dare disbelieve me…' when his words didn't make any impact on her he continued…'BAni who bacha sirf 2 mahina ka hein.. Pia … hathi nahin hein jo apne bacheko 9 mahine se zyada pet mein rakkein.. who sirf ek insaan hein…'
Before he could finish he felt Bani's body shake in mirth. She suppressed her laughter and looked at him with all the love in her eyes..
Jai heaved a sigh of relief and smiled. On the way down the steps Bani whispered
"aap ki sense of humour bhi na…….
Bani stood infront of her sister and looked intensely at her. Pia stared at her sister tears in her eyes. Pushar walked in at the moment and took the baby from Pia's hand and smiled at Bani.
"Di…. Muje….' Pia couldn't control her tears she cried looking at Bani. Bani put her hand around her sister and they both cried. Jai turned his attention from them. He nodded at Pushkar touched the baby boy on his cheek and turned towards his room.
'Di…. Muje muaf kardena.. please mere wajese yeh sab kuch hua aap ko apni parivar se door hona pada. Pia cried.
'Koyi bath nahin Pia bas ab tho sab teek hogaya na. yeh bacha….kab?
'Meet our son Prateek Bani..'Pushkar said taking his son's little hand and waving at her.
Bani grabbed the baby from his hand and looked at the small bundle. The child looked frightened for a moment and then relaxed in her hand. Bani gave him a sound kiss.
Jai watched her from upstairs and a sense of loss struck him. He saw his wife's face lighten up looking at the boy.
RAno walked towards her di and said. 'di.. ab muje deejiye.. let me carry him.
'Oh.. Rano stay away from us. You had plenty of time to carry him. Now its my chance. Bani chided.
'Rano gave a guilty look at Pia 'Pia.. I am sorry….' Rano went and hugged Pia.
'Ab bas karo yaar, thum logon ka rona dona….' Pushkar scolded.

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Bani and her sisters spent most of the evening making up for the lost time. Pia cried her heart out. Apologized to her million times and told her how Pushkar took care of her and they fell in love again. BAni was happy for her what ever discomfort she felt thinking about Pia went down the drain. Masi prepared grand dinner for her family. Aditya and Dadi came in the evening. Dadi hugged her and Aditya put his hand on her head and blessed her and then he added. 'Bani…. Thum ne mera Jai ko bahoth thadpaya…. I have never seen him hurt heart broken in my entire life.'
Aditya stopped as her face went pale. "Bani… sorry.. I was not accusing you dear. I am happy ke thum ne Jai ko dikadiya ki pyar kya hothi hein…
Bani forced a smile.
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Jigyasa and Ranveer walked in unexpectedly. Aditya and Jai exchanged glances.
Jigyasa walked up to her brother and said. 'Muje pata hein ki aap muje dekhna bhi pasand nahi karthe. Lekin mein kya karoon mein aap ki bahen hoon aap ki kushi mein mein bhi hona chahthi hoon. Mein BAni ko pasand nahi karthithi. Lekin mein ye jangayi ki aap ki kushi Bani se hein tho meine socha ki mein aaj aa kar aap ki kushi dekhoon..' Jigyasa ignored Aditya's smirk.
'Kyon jigs thum yahan kyon aayi? Thumse tho kisiko koi kushi nahi hothi .. thum zara apni ladle ko dekho kya kushi mili use? Aditya said throwing a glance at his son.
Jigyasa ignored Aditya and continued. 'Jai Bhayya I told you I am sorry we did wrong lekin aap ki wajese yeh sab kiya meine. If you hadn't spend unnecessarily on the three sisters me and Ranveer wouldn't dare do such a thing. .. she felt Jai's glare and said quickly. I am sorry bhayya I know what I thought and did was little selfish lekin….
'Bas Jigyasa…. Thum yahanse chalijao. Please. Jai got up from his seat.
Jigyasa's eyes filled with tears. 'aap nahin samjenge yeh humare samjne ka farak hein.
'Jho bhi…. now you saw me I am happy please leave.'
Bani walked in and she looked hesitantly at Jigyasa.
'BAni…… thum aagayi…kya bath hein bahoth …..
'Bas karo Jigyasa please.. jao yahan se..' Jai was sick and tired of her antics.
'teek hein mein jaa rahee hoon. But let me say something… BAni.. thank you for coming back. My brother really missed you and now I know his happiness lies with you ab usse chod kar math jana.. teek hein!..' and she turned and walked towards the door. Leaving BAni. Jai and aditya stunned.
Ranveer.. chalo…..' she ordered from the door.
Ranveer looked hesitant. '' Maa… aap jao muje kuch kaam hein Bani mami se…
JIgyasa threw him a look and went past the door. Jai and Aditya looked at each other.
Bani looked surprised. Ranveer walked up to her and said in a small voice
"Mami… aap se kuch bath karna hein..
'Ji… Aayiyee ' Bani and ranveer walked to Jai's study and shut the door.
'Who sab kya hein Jai?' Aditya asked shocked.
'God only knows. Did you notice the change in Ranveer?'
'mmm.. hope the change is for good…. Akhir mera beta tho hein..'
Jai placed his hand on Aditya's shoulder.
BAni and ranveer stepped out of the study after few minutes.
There was a smile on her face JAai noticed. He heard her invite Ranveer for dinner. Ranveer declined and went past them.

The Walia mansion was lit with lights. Every one of them were happy in that house. The night was growing and Bani was down stairs talking and chatting with the ladies. Pushkar took his son and went to sleep in the guest room leaving Pia to catch up with Bani's tale. Jai paced up and down in his room. It was Half past two and there was no trace of Bani . He walked out of the room and shouted on top of his voice. 'B AAANNNNIIIIII'
The house stood still for a moment and Tony came out off his slumber.
'Jai glared at him. Thum bani kab se bangaya? go and sleep'. He shouted. Tony threw him a look and retreated to his room. Masi Bani. Pia and Rano came out of the room and stared up at him. 'Thum log muje kyon goor rahein hein. Kisi ko sona nahin hein kya?''' aur maasi aap bhi. Aap ko maloom hein ke waqt kya hein?'
"MAsi looked at the wall clock and Exclaimed. "Munna itna time hogaya? Baghwan! muje pata bhi nahin chala ….Bani ki bathomein…..
Bani is not going away tomorrow she is gonna stay here for ever if you people want to hear more stories she will continue the next day…' he shouted .Pia rano and Bani exchanged glances.
'thum kya kar rahi ho munna? Thum soye kyon nahi? Masi asked matter of factly.
Rano and Pia suppressed their giggle.
'I would have gone to sleep if you people had talked slowly you were loud'.. Before maasi could contradict him he walked to his room and banged shut.
Masi looked at Bani and smiled,' thum jao beti raath bahoth ho chuki hein.
Bani blushed with out looking at her sisters she marched upstairs. She opened the door slowly and shut it behind her. The only light in the room was from the table lamp. She looked at the bed he was not on it. He was standing near the window staring out. She knew he had felt her presence. He didn't turn stubbornly. Bani smiled and she walked behind him and put her arms around him. He turned abruptly and gazed at her. 'Sorry… mein apni bahen ke sath…'
'it's okay…. Lekin yaar thume pata hein ke mein kab se intezar kar rahan hoon.' He looked intensely at her. She saw the love for her in his eyes and she felt the she was the luckiest woman on this face of the earth. He put his arms around her and crushed her. She felt his chuckle.
She looked up to his face.
I was thinking ki thum hein aaj kitne logon ne hug kiya?
She smiled. 'aaj mein bahoth kush hoon.' Her eyes lighted.
Thum hein ranveer ne tho nahin hug kiya?' he teased.
'No he was little awkward first. You won't believe, he wants Rashi back. She said stepping away from his embrace and looking at him.
Jai lifted an eye brow.
'Mm it's the truth. He said he had lived like his mamaji not wanting to marry at all. And certain circumstances lead him to marry Rashi. He had insulted her long and she had never complained and when she left he started thinking and he wants her back. He doesn't want to waste his time like his mama and he was sure in the end he would end up like his mama…'
Jai's frown deepened.
'And he is sorry for what he had done with his mother about your property…..' she looked for some compassion in his eyes and she couldn't find one.
'Aap usse maaf kar dejieye….'
'Nahin Bani .. maaf nahin. Meine unlogon ko kya nahi diya? Sab kuch tho diya hein… han . agar who sudar na chahthe ho tho acchi bath hein… may be time will heal the wound they have caused.'
'Hope so…..' she didn't want to go on and on about it. She didn't want spoil his mood.
'mein aap se ek confession karna chahthi hoon……..'Bani took a deep breath.
'Han kaho…' he looked suddenly serious.
"woh mein.. jab Pia ko bache ke sath dekha tho……'
"Bas BAni.. he put his palm on her mouth… 'jaane do…hum done ke beech mein koyi misunderstanding mein bardhasht nahi kar sakhtha.
She nodded taking his hand from her mouth. Her eyes filled with tears. 'mein bhi nahi.. mein tho soch ne se bhi dar gayi thi… muje laga ki ….. I saw my life shattering infront of my eyes. Mein sahan nahi kar sakthi … ab mein kisi bhi hal mein aap se juda hona nahi sah kar paoongi….'
Jai groaned and pulled her back in his arms. She wrapped her arms around him. And murmured mein aap ke bhina nahin jee paoongi…. I wont live with out you Jai.
He stilled for a moment and asked? ' Kya kahan thum ne?'
'Kya?.....BAni pressed her cheeks on his chest.
Kya thum ne muje mera nam se pukara?'
'ji.'
'Ji Nahin Jai….' He said kissing her head.
'mm'.
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Okay guys I have ended my fanfic here. I didn't want to continue and spoil their love.
Jigyasa being Jigyasa loved her brother in her own way. She was happy for him that Bani returned. She may like BAni as the time moves on. Jai cloud forgive his sister for her deception. He loves her still for being his sister.
Hope you guys liked the end. Thank you for reading this fanfic and encouraging me to write. Love you all. Take care. forgive my mistakes. 😃
Luv
kamy
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Posted: 18 years ago
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happy ending kamy I loved yur last part. Thank god the baby was pushkar's. good work and hope to read many other ffs by you in the future. 👏

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