Updated_Kahi Pyar... Last Part pg 53

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goldie_ever

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Posted: 19 years ago

#311

🤗 🤗 awwwwwwww hun hope u get better soon
awesome part
poor jai run or else
take care
and pls write soon
eagerly waiting for bani to get her memory back

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Maninder

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Posted: 19 years ago

#312

awww feel betta soon babe!...i love dat movie kuch kuch hota hai...anywayz..this part waz just FAB...you are doing such a good job onit..plz continue soon..cant wait to read more. 👏

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preet

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Posted: 19 years ago

#313

hope you feel better soon.superb part.loved it.too good.plz cont soon. 😊

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harpreet

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Posted: 19 years ago

#314

that was great i can't image what will happen when she finds out
please continue sonn
will be waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111111

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TINK

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Posted: 19 years ago

#315

omg...raania that was great...as always 👏 ...i luve it when jai calls her baby 😳 ....its just sooo sweet, ok i have started blushing again 😆 ...but hey...getting bck to serious business....yaar...can't you chuck....roshni...over the cliff or sumething...kissa hi khatam hoga 😆 plz cont soon....keep it up 👏

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Aakriti Mehta

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Posted: 19 years ago

#316

mwah! raania di.. whilst doing maths h.w.. i am thinking of jai bani.!! going
to watch ks after like 2 weeks in 10 minutes!

thanks for evoking some josh to see them!
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N. N.

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Posted: 19 years ago

#317

gr8 job 👏 👏 im cheering for more scenes... 😳

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princess

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Posted: 19 years ago

#318

woww...soooo intenseeee...i luv ittt....plzz continueeee ...come onn plzz updateee soooooon imm waitingg ..its soooo gooood..im in luv with ur fanfic if onli it was tru.....plzz hurrry and continueeeee

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Raania

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Posted: 19 years ago

#319

thank you all so much 🤗

a very happy diwali to all

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Part 34

Jai: all done…sorry baby woh kaam ki thi
Bani: who was she?
Jai: she she
Bani; what???? Lookin curious
Jai: loosing colour didn't know what to say….Bani

Bani sensing something wrong…..kaun thi Jai…why are you sweating so much???

Jai looking at Masi and than

Jai: woh ek sour business associate…we didn't approve her shipment under our company name so she wanted to know why??

Bani; no wonder itni rude thi..i would suggest u stop dealing with people like that….with a stern voice she said….

Jai heaved a sigh of relief…..great she doesn't remember anything …..but an inner voice said to him…kaab tak Jai…kaab tak …sooner or later she will remember things…she is already getting memories back….

Bani: jai meh tumse kuch kehrahi hu…kaha dhiyan hai
Jai: sorry baby…kya hai
Bani: meh aise hamari party meh kaise jaugi…mer per toh yeh cast….
Jai: laughing…simple jaise abhi jati ho

Jai would carry Bani around every where …Bani had taken the help of the crutch around her room but elsewhere Jai would nottake no for an answer and would just sweep her up in his arms…..the most embarrassing time for Bani was when one night he had arrived home unexpectedly and taken her out to dinner …..and upon many requests from bani he still picked her up infront of the car and carried her in infront of the huge restaurant that was houseful ….and it wasn't a Walia's Hotel either!1…Bani was beetroot red and couldn't look up to people and their smiles looking at them…

Jai: kya hua

Coming back to reality….

Bani: nahi kuch nahi …smiling….u know meh dance kaise karugi…

Jai with memories from Sydney…smiling….oh ha tum dance kaise karogi?? Laughing…..

Bani: us raath maine kafi pili thi thank u very much….aise aab nahi hoga!!

Jai like a hammer pounding his hearts……looking at Bani…..: tumhe woh yaad hai

Bani: her hand to her head…trying to recall…patani kaise kehdi….trying to think hard……..her head started to ache….kuch bhi yaad nahi araha abhi…bus mu se nikal geya….

Jai notiched her making faces

Jai: honey its okay…don't stress it…dheere dheere saab ajayega….in his soul he was hurting…..and than smiling…but ha us roz toh tum meri bijli thi

Bani: smiling and slapping him…bijli???? Stop it…..both of them laughing….

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It was early Saturday mrng when Sahil returned from his jog…looking fresh and ready to eat he stopped in his trach to find the back of one sexy girl…..her hair all wavy and deep black….wearing hipster jeans and a tank top….a suitcase by her side…..and Bani Mami infront taking a aarti…..yeh kaun hai…

Jai: aareh Sahil come…meet our Doctor…Doctor Rano Dixit..Pediatrician …almost there

Rano turned to meet the gaze of Sahils…

Sahil to geya bechara

Maine jisko chaaha mil gaya
Chain jab se aaya dil gaya
Dekhke tumhaari yeh ada
Jaaneman hua main to fida

Mujhe kar de paagal yeh aankhon ka kaajal
Deewaana kare yeh hansi
Teri uthti jhukti yeh qaatil nigaahein
Sikhaane lagi aashiqui

Maine jisko chaaha mil gaya
(La la la la la la la la la la la la la
La la la la la la la la la la) - 2

Tera ishq dil mein chubhe lamha lamha
Tu jaan meri main teri saans

Rang aisa chhalka pyaar ka
Yeh zamaana saara hil gaya
Maine jisko chaaha mil gaya

.her glasses all gone….contacts in place…her hair not exposing her forehead but rather loose curls flowing to the side ….make up done perfectly….eyes standing out by the black kajal right round…..….long dangling earrings…..she smiled

Rano: hi Sahil..she knew he always saw her as a geek …Rano smiled to herself and thinking….Sahil us waqt meh par rahi thi and my main aim was my career aab meh sab kaar sakti hu…..hows that….

Sahil slipped…not getting a grip and thinking he was going to faint he started to squint his eyes…..and blinking profusely…….Rano????? is that you??/

Rano lifting her eyebrows at him not responding….: thnking to herself…yes Sahil meh hi hu

Rano after the aarti…bending to touch Bani's feet when she notiched the cast

Rano: aareh di yeh kya hua/??? Kaab hua??/ aap logo neh mujhe batay kiu nahi

Bani: getting her up and hugging her…tears of joy in her eyes…aaj agar papa hote toh bhouth hi garv hota unko ki tum uski beti ho?? Making Rano cry

Rano: nahi Di yeh aapka pyar aur jiju ka saath hai joh meh aaj yaha par aise hu
Bending to take blessings from Jai….

Jai: Sali ji….yeh meri hi faida ke liye hai....jaab thumare chote chote pyare pyare bhanja aur bhanji ayege toh ghar ke log hi toh kheyal rhakege right??

Rano smiling with tears?? Right!! hugging him…and than greeting everyone …Jigayasa was the most impressed…afterall rAno soon to be a Doctor and the top In her class …

Jigs: yeh hamari Bhabi ki beti hai….dheko na masi doctor hojayegi….everyone smiling
…
Sahil just starring at the transformed Rano…she was pretty yes…but damn shes hot he thought…

Jai: aahem Sahil….breakfast nahi karna

Sahil: jee mamaji..meh fresh hokar atah hu

Rano: di Pia kaha hai??

Bani: woh toh apne ghar meh hai…tum nahi ai thi shadi meh…..

RAno: apne ghar…shadi…yeh aap kya kehrahe ho….Pia toh aapke saath thi na

Jai: who laughing and trying to hide the fact…..sab kuch itni jaldi hui na Rano ke kisi ko batane ki time nahi tha….plus u had ur major exams going on

Bani looking from Jai's worried expression to Rano's confused look……something is not right….mujhe hi pata karna pade ga

Jai from Bani's behind indicating to Rano …: shhhhsshh…will tell later

Rano getting the hint : mujhe toh bhouth bhook lagi hai….di khana khaye….

As the ate chapping away of how Rano's trip was and what all had happened…..Rano telling them all excited how she enjoyed her stay in London and the experiences she had….she had some vague memories from her travel as a little girl but now she knows it all……Bani was very proud of her sister and Jai well he was glad that he could do this for them and most of all he had someone who could count on now….

Late in the afternoon Bani retired for her afternoon nap…since she still had her cast on she needed her rest….on Monday she would know if it would be removed…

Jai on the other hand told Rano what happened the past few months that she had been away…including how he loves Bani now and that he was the reason she got into the accident …roshni….and she has lost partial memory and it can come whenever….

Rano: jiju isme aapki fault nahi hai…infact im so happy meh bata nahi sakti ke didi aapke saath kitna khush hai….mujse joh hoga meh karugi…I promise…I love you as much as I love Di…aap dono mere liye ma aur papa jaise ho….she hugged Jai cormforting him…….

Pia and Mohan arrived with Pia's bulge showing in her skirt and top…
Pia: Rano..coming to hug her
Rano: stop there…don't even come near me…meh yaha nahi thi toh socha tum ho Di ka kheyal rhakne ke liye…magar tum….i don't know what to say…tum hamari mama aur papa ki beti aur meri bhen ho hi nahi sakti….
Pia: meh im…
Rano: no please get out of my sight ……and if u have any shame than don't bother coming into this house again

Jai not wanting to get in the middle of things left to check up on Bani

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Monday day of Bani's check up came….Jai as usual carried her to the car and than to the doctors room

Doc: itna dedicated pati maine aaj tak nahi dheka Mrs Walia…meh bhi nahi
Bani just smiled…
Doc: I must say he loves u very much….and shows it…
Bani: looking at Jai zipping up her bag after taking the papers out and returning in the office… yes doctor he is…bhouth hi ache se meri dhekbal ki hai
Doc: kiu Mr Walia….ever think of changing careers let me know

The three of them laugh

The doctor observed Bani's leg and smiled

Doc: well Mrs Walia I guess all the special attention did its magic…..we shall remove the plaster today….

Bani beaming with a smile…..and Jai on top of the world…yes

Doc: slow at first as it hasn't been used but in a few hours to a day should be good as new smiling

Bani and Jai left hand in hand to go home….

Jai in the car: im so happy baby u are getting better….

Bani: smiling and glowing..thanks to you….u are the best husband in the world

Jai full of emotion looking at her and just being sentimental….

Bani: aareh aareh the great Jai Walia and crying…..kya yeh ho sakta hai

Jai ignoring her comment and looking ahead.: what crap no way…mst be the air outside..

BAni; pati jee AC on hail...giggling

Jai: oh yah I meant the air from the AC…..

Bani: touched his side of he face caressing it…..: its okay…I love you…u big strong emotional man…my man!!!

As they entered the house..jai picked her up

BAni was shouting …meh chal sakti hu Jai…choro na…Jai Jai!! And before she knew it she was in their room on their bed…..

Jai: u rest…I can go to the office with a clear mind and get a lot done today

Bani: phele ki tarah der nahi karoge…mujhe akele toh nahi choro go na??

Jai : like an arrow piercing his heart…no baby I wont I promise…a lot of the things were coming back to BAni…not long Jai till she remembers everything he thought…..kissing her forehead…meh geya aur pach che ghante meh ghar par…theek hai…..

Bani not really happy to let him go but gave in smiling

Bani had lost a lot of weight during the duration of her recovery..but looking a herself…but in the right places…giggling again…

…While Jai was at the office she was going to prepare for his arrival…it had been a very long wait and t oday passion shall engulf the atmosphere and all pent up frustration shall be let gone…..

Masi as usual had left for her poojas and the rest of the household were busy with their own stuff…and Rano was busy on shift at the Central Hospital…she had already started her residency….

It was just her and him……

Bani got the whole room changed around….long light orange curtains (the softest material ever) draped on the windows….shimmering windchimes placed near the sliding door entrance that was tingled by the waves of the wind…..clean deep red satin sheets on the bed…..followed by drapers on top falling down to the ground….one would gasp at the sight …roses clad all over the walls pinned to balloons sayin I love You…....placing scented candles all over ready to light just before time….

Taking a long bath in rose petals Bani lit up all the candles……it was close to 10pm and Jai would be home soon…..draping herself in the most seductive outfit she set herself near the door to let the cood air cool her as she was hot….hot for him…. waiting for him…..

Jai had numerous time called to check up on bAni and ws told she ws sleeping all the time..he looked at the time 9.45pm…shit he should go home…masi bhi nahi hogi ghar par….jsut today and im free the rest of the week to go home at 5pm…..Making it into the house around 10.15pm he saw lights off…..wondering what was happening….running up the stairs taking two at a time he looked around to see if Bani was around……going up to his room…he opened the room to get the shock of his life…..well a good one

The room was beautifully done..each aspect done to perfection…from the laying of flowers to the candles….it smelt lavender throughout….Jai inhaled deep….his gaze taking into the ballons and roses on the walls saying I love you……he was touched….further across the room near near the door was his princess…the beauty queen who had captured his heart…his soul…his very being……draped in his favourite attire …creamish pinkish colour just mid t high length with a deep v to the neck…..absoulutely ravishing…her hair flying in the wind…looking at him

Yeh hawaaein zulfon mein teri gum ho jaaye - 2
Ho, choome nigaahon se chehra tera
Honton se chhoo le phir daaman tera
Apni panaaho mein tujhko bhare
Meri aarzoo ko pareshaan kare
Yeh hawaaein zulfon mein teri gum ho jaaye

Bani had heard Jai enter the room…..giving him a sexy pose….after Jai had taken a look at the whole atmosphere and the room his gaze fell upon Bani…..Bani could have melted there and than by that look…..as if by some sheer magic she felt hot inside…hot for him…

Yeh hawaaein zulfon mein meri gum ho jaaye
Haan, choome nigaahon se chehra mera
Honton se chhoo le phir daaman mera
Apni panaaho mein mujhko bhare
Teri aarzoo ko pareshaan kare
Yeh hawaaein zulfon mein meri gum ho jaaye
Hm, yeh hawaaein zulfon mein meri gum ho jaaye

.walking seductively close to him she grabbed his laptop bag and put it on the floor…lifting her leg she kicked the door close…"click" locked it……pulling Jai's tie looking into his eyes…

Bani; Mr Walia u have been a very naughty boy….

Jai: having difficulty breathing….Bani….are u drunk….coming closer to smell her breath nope she wasn't

Bani: yes im drunk…intoxicated in ur love….mesmerised by your touch…hungry for your feel……

Jai: holding her waist now……bringing her closer: oh really Mrs Walia

Bani: yes u have been a very very bad boy….undoing his shirt

Jai: really smiling now….her touch was pure bliss on his skin

Bani: yes its past 10pm…don't u know that if u arrive home this late u get punished for it

Bani was kissing his neck down and his shoulders…other hand caressing his back ….making it hard for him to breathe…..let alone think….

Jai grabbing her neck in a passionate bite ….than her ears: I didn't know Mrs Walia..what shall my punishment be…leading her towards the bed….

BAni: laughing loud seductively…..running her index finger down his chest to his stomach and up…….turning around and pushing him on the bed…..climbing on him……
Your punishment is to make love to your wife all night long till al those lonely nights are made up for…

Jai: turning her around in a second….he was too big for her and Bani laughing…: ur wish is my command princess!!! With that Jai bent down seizing those luscious lips making her his once again….claiming every inch of hers as his…..all night long

Bani: I love you in between breathes she whispered before Jai made it impossible for her to think again…..

Choome nigaahon se chehra tera
Honton se chhoo le phir daaman tera
Apni panaaho mein tujhko bhare
Meri aarzoo ko pareshaan kare
Yeh hawaaein zulfon mein teri gum ho jaaye
O yeh hawaaein

Edited by Raania - 19 years ago

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sweetu144

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Posted: 19 years ago

#320

😛 WOW....JUST WOW!
You had my heart hammering....and...just wow!
Amazing...my, my Bani we are being bold!
Tomorrow i guess you shall be all shy... 😛 ( shhh...but i don't think Mr.Walia is complaining!)
Awesome part....cute to see Jai love his wife so much awwwwwww 😃 !
Continue soon!
Luv ya
Sweetu 😳

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