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guyz, this is short ff about how jai and bani are going to get back. it is really short (three parts.) i already posted parts one and two, but i lost the link 😭 😭. so i will post all three parts now.

I am continuing from Fridays episode. Bani is in the operation theater. And there are a few changes. Bani falls unconscious so she doesn't say anything to pushy. She is rushed to operation theater. Meanwhile, jai somehow finds out the bani is in the hospital, so he goes there to find pushkar waiting for the operation to end.

Hospital

Jai in a worried tone: Pushkar, what happened to bani? (he forgot all his hatred toward him)

P: someone hit her hard in the stomach and she fell unconscious. So I brought her here.

J: who the did this and why?

P: actually, and he tells him everything.

Jai, shocked: why did bani save me pushkar? She only wants my money.

Pushkar stares at the floor unable to answer jai's question. Jai repeats the question understanding that there is something which he doesn't know. Just then the doctor comes from the operation theater. Jai immediately turned to the doctor.

J: how is bani doctor? Is everything okay? How is my baby?

D: Mr.walia, I am sorry, we couldn't save ur child. Ur wife had a miscarriage. Jai didn't believe what he just heard. His heart refused to believe what the doctor just said. He just stared at the doctor, expression less. Pushkar understanding jai's state, said

P: how is bani doctor? Can we meet her?

D: Yes, right now she is unconscious. she will wake up in 10 minutes, though u can go in now. Jai just walked into the room without saying anything and pushkar followed suit.

The first thing jai saw when he walked into the room was bani unconscious holding her stomach. Tears were streaming down her face and she was mumbling something. Then suddenly she woke up can screamed

B: NAHIIIIIIIII!!!!!!! Krishna tum mujhe chod kar nahi jaa sakthi ho!

Part 2

Bani sees jai and pushkar standing right in front of her. She has no clue what is happening and asks

B: what happened to my child? My Krishna?

P answered since jai is still expression less and is just straring at bani: Bani, vo… vo…

B: vo kya pushkar? Meri bachi ko kya huwa?

P quietly: Bani… u had a miscarriage.

B: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. Yeh nahi ho sakta.

J: Bani yeh sach hai. For the first time there, jai spoke. U can clearly see sadness and hurt in this voice. Tears formed in his eyes and he just turned away from bani. Aur yeh sab kuch tumari wajah se hua hai bani. And with that he walked out of the room.

Bani just stared at the door. She was stunned. Tears were flowing down her cheeks. Puskar came and sat down beside her. P: bani it is okay. Bani started sobbing loudly.

After ten minutes, pushkar came out of the room to find jai sitting in a chair with his face in his hands. He came and sat down quietly beside him.

P: Jai sir… jai looked up at once. His tear stained face told so much.

P: vo… bani… Jai stood up at once.

J: mujhe uske bare main, kuch nahi suna hai. Today, because of her I lost everything… even my child. I just hate her. Puskar unable to hold it any longer said,

P: NO Jai sir. Bani ne apke liya kya nahi kiya. Voh apke kushi ke liya, sab kuch ko beti.

J in a bitter and angry tone: And today, she took away the biggest happiness of my life

P: nobody knows what bani is doing sir. Today she saved your life and the cost she had to pay was her life. Do u no how much bani loves her child? Do u have any idea how much pain bani is taking? Do u know how bani is killing herself everyday by doing all this? NO, u don't. to all of u guyz, she just loves money. But let me tell u the bitter truth Jai sir. Bani is doing all this to save u and ur property. Jigs and ranveer took all ur property and bani had no choice but to take divorce from u so that she can claim almoniy. By doing that, she can transfer all the property on her name and put it permentaly on ur name. She didn't want any of ur money. She didn't even take one penny of ur money. All she wanted to do was good and she had to pay a very heavy price for it. And today, it was not even her fault the baby died Jai sir. She was just trying to save ur life. Right now bani is suffering more than any one… more than you, sir. She is in a state of shock and she needs support not hatred. I told u all this because I cannot see my friend suffering even more.

Jai was listened quietly. He didn't know how to react. Should he be happy that whatever bani has been telling him is all lies or sad that his Krishna left…leaving him…leaving them

J: how is bani?

P: Bani is sleeping right now. he paused and said, Jai sir… I am sorry for all the troubles me and pia gave u. If it hadn't been for us, today things would have been better.

J: Nahi pushar, because of that one mistake or I should say fortune, today I understood what love is or actually, what bani is. I am sry for all the trouble I caused u two. Just then a nurse comes and tell jai that the doctor wants to meet him.

Part 3

Doctor's office

J: is everything fine doctor?

D: yes everything is fine Mr.Walia. but I am just worried about Mrs.Walia's mental condition. She is right now in a complete shock. It will take time for her to digest the reality. Till then, I request you to take good care of her. Make sure there is always someone with her, other wise there is a chance she might go into depression. Just make sure she gets back into her daily routine. (guyz don't know anything medical stuff) and u can take her home tomorrow.

J: okay doctor. Thank you.

Outside

P: what did the doctor say?

J: nothing. Everything is fine. Pushkar, can u go home and inform everyone that bani is in the hospital and not to worry everything is fine. I will stay her and we will come tomorrow.

P: okay. And he leaves. Then jai calls up tarun and calls him to the hospital.

Outside Bani's room

T: jai, why did u call me all of a sudden. And jai tells him everything. His eyes welled up when he had to tell about the miscarriage.

J cleared his throat and said: tarun I need you to cancel the divorce (guyz they didn't take divorce yet. They were suppose to sign the papers tomorrow). Also, find a way out of this whole mess.

T: what about jigs and ranveer?

J in a determined tone: I will take care of them.

Tarun smiled as he got his old friend back.

The next morning

Bani woke up and stared at the celing, when a face loomed over her.

J: Good morning bani! Bani sat up and started at her smiling husband. It took her a minute to understand where she was and then everything came back to her. Tears flooded from her eyes. B: meri bachi…

J: Bani, it is okay. And he went near her to wipe away her tears but bani just pushed him away. Jai quietly said: bani I no the truth.

Bani stared at jai. J: u should have came to me bani. And I should have told u this along time ago, I love you. Bani couldn't take it anymore. She cried openly and went into jai's arms where she sobbed on his chest.

KNOCK KNOCK

Jai and bani separated and stared at the door surprised. There stood the whole walia clan. Massi, dadi, adi, rano, sahil, pia, pushkar, raashi, ranveer and jigs (sry had to include ethe two) pia and rano rushed towards bani.

Pia: di, kay huwa. Yeh sab…

Bani didn't say anything. But jai spoke: kuch nahi huwa pia. Sab teek hai.

M: par munna, yeh sab kaise huwa.

J: massi, I will explain everything later. Right now, we have to take bani home.

Jigs: ab is ladki ne kay kiya? Jai glared at jigs and she shut her mouth at once. Just then the doctor came.

D: hello, mrs.walia, how r u feeling? He checked her and confirmed it that she can go home now if she likes. And with that, the whole family went back.

Walia House

Jai carefully led bani into their room and made her lie down on the bed.

B speaking for the first time: I'm sry mr.walia… for everything. Today, because of me, u lost ur child… the biggest happiness of ur life. I'am sry.

J: bani, its just an accident. Forget all the past and lets start a new life. And this time I promise u that our world will be full of love, care and understanding. There will be no place for hatred.

Bani smiled. J: And now, u need rest. And with that jai walked out of the room, to settle some things, which he should have done a long time ago.

J: JIGYASA, RANVEER screamed jai

M: kya huwa munna? Y r u yelling?

J: massi, ask jigs and ranveer what happened. All because of them this house had to go through so much… bani had to go through so much.

Adi: what happened Jai? And jai tells them everything.

J: now just get OUT of this house. Get out of our lives. I don't want to see ur faces again.

Jigs who is scared to death just leaves the house followed by ranveer (guyz I no it isn't dramatic, but I wanted to make it simple)

After a few days, u see jai trying to find something. He is really fustrated and yells BANI!

B rushing into the room: mr.walia, kya huwa?

J: how many times did I tell u not to call me mr.walia and where the hell is my scarf?

B: ur scraf is right there and I cannot stop calling u mr.walia. now hurry up everyone is waiting for breakfast.

J grabbing his scarf and walking towards her said: accha? Do u know what will happen if u continue calling me like that? Bani starts walking backwards and hits the wall.

B: N…N…No she stammered.

J: well let me tell u. his face was inches away from her. he came closer and closer and kissed her on the lips and said: this is just a start mrs.walia…

Ten minutes later, both jai and bani descended down the stairs (bani being a little red).

Dadi: kitne pyare lag rahe hai dono. Hai na billo?

M: haan. Kisi ki nazar na lage mere munna aur bahu ko…

Well guyz, that is it. I thank all of u guyz for commenting and I hope u enjoyed reading it as much as I had writing it.

Bye for now

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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww plz cont soon.. that was gr888 👏
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amazing... 👏 kaash yeh sab sach nikalta 😳
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very fabulous. you make a great job. It's short but amazing. 👏
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wow! very good! i loved it! pls cont soon!
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great starts
plz add more jb romance
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thank u for a happy ending...i loved aji getting a reality check...i think its about tiem the actually did it on the show...but great job...short and sweet and fun... 👏
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HEy Continue Soon. It's Awesome
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Short and sweet and wonderful. 3 words to descibe your FF. well done. 👏 👏 👏
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hey when r u posting the next part??? im waiting! 😊

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