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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was great.too good.loved it. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg debolina,
i just read the last two parts and all i can say is
OMG!
this sory is becoming sooooo interesting even betta than what i suggested.
Please continue i ned to see how jai reacts to this i really vcan't wait
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

debolina..

haila.. what??????? tarun and bani.. omg.. i am worried!

thank god .. jai u told her u loved her!

well done hunnii!

plz do continue!!!




wow thanx.ya there will be loads of confusion.maybe Jai n Bani wont be united 4 the time being.it has never happened in ne ff so lets see
debolina
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

that was great.too good.loved it. 😊



hi when will u be online next.ne ways thanx.
debolina

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: hp85

omg debolina,
i just read the last two parts and all i can say is
OMG!
this sory is becoming sooooo interesting even betta than what i suggested.
Please continue i ned to see how jai reacts to this i really vcan't wait



thanx.will continue soon.there will be loads of twists n turns comin up.
debolina
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG tarun and Bani are going to get married 😭 no Bani confess to Jai and ur uncle before its too late
plz write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ziddi

OMG tarun and Bani are going to get married 😭 no Bani confess to Jai and ur uncle before its too late
plz write soon



mamta iif not awrded with nething 4 this ff i guess i will be offered with jhuta n chappals if i get Bani n tarun married.
but yes there will be many ywist n turns.thinkin whether Bani n tarun will get married or not.
debolina
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 9

the whole Walia clan was gathered in the hall excepting Jai.Bani was also not present.Jai was busy strollin in the garden.he was feelin light.the heavy burden in his heart was now no more there.he had confessed but he knew it was not the right way.he was waitin for Bani's acceptence.he knew Bani may be shocked.but somwhere in her eyes he saw the same feelins that he felt for her.he was thinkin when Bani wud acept him he will take her to a proper place n make her happy.he was wonderin abt the way this girl whom he met in the mornin created havoc in his mind.he was not the same JAI WALIA.
this JAI WALIA was not obsessed abt work but abt BANI.the very sight of her brought a smile to his face.but when he saw this girl with ne man else his heart wud race up n he wud be in a postion to kill whoever the guy maybe.
two things were now unknown to him.1 that wat Bani felt for him n 2 wat was goin in the hall.

In the hall

every body were seated in the sofa.'they were enjoyin the evening snacks.suddenly two servants came in with stacks of sweet packets.

J:are yeh kya hai.

S:Maam these r sweets.

J:who in the world hav ordered so many.

U:I.i hav to share a good news with u.lit this house with lights.tarun is gettin married to.......

J:are wah tarun tum to chupe rustam nikle.

N:are didi shant ho jayiye.mamaji whom is he gettin married to.

U:Bani

K:Bani.meri behen.
he walked to tarun.

K:tarun i hav aquestion.does Bani knos abt it.

uncle interuppted.

U:kunal beta she is quite happy abt ur disision.

Kunal didnt sem convinced.he had seen a strnge feelin in Bani's eyes for Jai.he felt that these feelins very reciprocated with the same intensity.but frm where did tarun come into the picture.

K:will u guys excuse me.

as soon as kunal moved out Jai came in.aditya rushed to him and said

A:Jai Bani ne shaadi ke liye ha kar di.

Jai was thinkin abt goin to ask Bani abt her decision.aditya's word made him feel that she had accepted him.

J:such.Bani kaha hai.i want to se her.tarun tum ne suna Bani ne ha kaha hai.

T:ya Jai i am to happy.i will giv her all the happiness she deserves.

J:u.........he said softly.he looked bewildered.

U:mai chata hu ki yeh shaadi jaldi se ho jaye.Jai u will take all the responsibilities.aakhir ye tumari best friend ki shaadi hai.kyun.

the world broke into pieces in front of Jai.he was shattered.he still cudnt swallow the truth,how cud Bani.
without answerin ne thin he retreated back to his den.



Bani's room


kunal entered.

K:Bani mujhe se ek bata kahogi.

Bani was still in a state of exitement.the man of her dreams had confesseed his love for her.she was goin to go to Jai and tell him that she loves him to.

B:ya

K:tum ne is shaadi ke liye haan kyun kiya.maine tumari aankhon mai Jai bhaiya ke liye pyaar dekha tha.mujhe laaga tha Jai bhaiya bhi tumse pyaar karta hai.phir tumne....yeh kya kiye tumne.

B:bhaiya.u r right.i love MrWalia.magar shaadi.maine abhi to abhi tak unko yeh nehi bataya ki main unse pyaar karti hu.phir saadi.aap kiski shaadi ki baat kar rahi hain.

T:main tumari aur tarun ki shaadi ki baat kar raha hon.

B:kya.aap mazak kyun kar rahe hain bhaiya.mujhe jane dijiye.mujhe Mr Walia se baat karnu hain.

K:Bani main mazak nahi kar raha hoon.niche tumari aur tarun ki shaadi ki baat chal rahi hai.

Bani froze.

B:kya Mr Walia jante hai.

K:mujhe nahi lagta.main jata hoon ubse baat karne.

B:nahi.i will go.

with this she moved toward Jai's room which she thought wud be there's.

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guys how do u like it.plz comment.

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debolina
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
oh please continue, what happens next? I want Bani to tell Jai she loves him too 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
Bani tell Jai you love him instead of retarded Tarun!!!!!
awww my poor baby is soo shattered!!! 😭 😭 😭

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