ff:AADAT pt 23 pg 45 5/5 - Page 6

Originally posted by: pakiza_srk

wow! arrey jaldi propose karwao na! hehehe excellent! i love ur FF! plz cont soon?

hi
wat shud i call u.thank u 4 likin my ff.it feels very nice.if any part of it u dilike plz fell free to tell me
debolina

Originally posted by: hp85

hey tha prt was great looking forward to the next instalment i ahve sent yo osme ideas if youwna use them on a pm hope you like.

HOPE TO SEE THE PART SOON
H

hi
got ur pm.i will surely use it.thanx and thanx for likin my ff.u guys r really gr8
i will continue soon.u see we hav puja's on air so was qiute busy.
debolina

hello guys sorry for the late update.i will be updatin soon.i am overwhelmed by the response
debolina

PREVIEW
Bani wants a tour to the Walia mansion.who escorts her........
Tarun comes.Jai is furious when he witness tarun and Bani's frienship.wat will be his reaction.
debolina

P.S:will be updatin 2mmorrow

sorry guys for a late update.
PART 7
Bani was shown to her room by tony.Jai was fumin inside his room.he was feelin jeolous.he understood that he cant let Bani walk out of life.he felt that Bani was a right girl to fill in his lonely heart.he didnt kno whether he loved her or not but it was for sure that she was som1 special n he cant let go of her.But when bani told him that he had another man in her life he was totally shaken.even now he didnt realize that he loves her.
coincidentally Bani was shown the room next to Jai's.it was a big room.every thing was beutiful n elegant.she had hoped that Jai wud show her around the house.she had never felt for any man like this as he felt for Jai.she was livin alone in New York.rahul was there.he was a good frnd to her.But Jai she had met him only 2day.then y was she so eager to talk to.yes he was handsome.but that cant be the only reason.these thoughts racked her mind.she somhow managed to brush these thoughts oyt and made way towards Jai's room.

Jai was near the window.lookin at the long stretch of garden.he was lost in his thoughts.

Bani coughed to get his attention.
Jai turned around.
B:ah Mr Walia when are my sisters comin.
she didnt kno how 2 start a conversation.but she only knew that she wanted to talk to him.

J:coldly i guess i told u Ms Dixit that they r comin in a while.b btw how did u like my house.

B:with sarcasm ya the outside of this house is nice.

Jai got the hint

J:i think u shud hav a look around the house.
with this he shouted...tony...........

Bani felt that this man is now gonna call tony upon to show her around the house.
seconds later tony came up.

T:yes sir.

J:with a smirk smile. bring a glass a juice for Ms Dixit.

T:yes sir.

Jai heard Bani heavin a sigh of relief.he suddenly grew mishevious.

J:ah tony 1 more thing.show..Ms Dixit...

he turned to face Bani.she had horror riden all over her face.he felt like laughin aloud

J:....'s sisters to their rooms when they com for i will be with Ms Dixit to show her around the house.

Bani blushed crimsone realizin her reaction.

J:so Ms Dixit wud u like to hav a look around the house.
with that he started walkin with Bani follwin behind.
she was really impreesed on witnessin the graduer of the house.
J:so how do u like.

B:it beutiful.

though when Bani was havin a look around the house Jai was busy lookin at her.

J:even i think so.

suddenly they heard a voice.it was tarun,.

T:watever Jai owns is always special n elegant.i am sure Bani likes it.

B:ya tarun its absolutely beutiful.

they continued talkin.a more of a friendly talk.
Jai was not likin all this.he felt like burstin any moment.their silly jokes were gettin on his nerve.while talkin tarun had accidentally touched Bani's hand.Jai noticed it.he was bolin inside.
J:uh tarun can u excuse us for a moment.
with this he grabbed Bani's hand and walked out of the room leavin a bewildered tarun and a absolutely shocked Bani.

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hope u guys like it.i will be postin another part 2day.but before that do want Jai to be more jeolous or both of them realizin their love for eachother and confessin.enjoy.😃

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debolina

wow! jealous jai!!

fantastic!

keep it up hunnii!

👏

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

wow! jealous jai!!

fantastic!

keep it up hunnii!

👏

thanx.jus wana a suggestion.shud i make Jai more jeolus n then propose later.wud like 2 read ur comments.
debolina

very nice part 👏 ....jealous jai..lol...nice idea of making him more jealous...i will love it!! 😆 ...continue soon... 😊

whoaaaaaaaa some one's jealous.. HA HA.. omgg i could so picture jai gettin jealous. i wonder wat he's gonna say to bani now haila.. she's gonna get it.. 😆 😆 😆 that was gr888 can't wait fo d nxt part 👏

hey dear debolina u've done a gr8 job, mind blowing,...
keep writing 👏 👏 👏