(FF) Pyar Mein Twist! Note Pg. 100!!!! - Page 44

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: vaidahip



the sahil, lakshya and Mia also Bani Jai and Shina.. i hope i've been reading your ff right! 😕 clarify if i'm wrong.. 😕 now i feel bad ...sorry meera.😭



Awwww Vaidu don't feel bad yaar!!! U have it all right!!!! 🤗Don't feel bad!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: inavars


hun...if it's difficult...take your time writing it...but don't stop!!! pleaaaaaaaase....*puppy face*😛



Fine...Srav...we'll see....me and Shina are discussing it on msn, and she's ready to kill me, but she's giving good ideas so.....thanx, cute puppy face!!😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: indiandoll89



Awwww Vaidu don't feel bad yaar!!! U have it all right!!!! 🤗Don't feel bad!!!!




phewww... well i'm going to get going.. i hope you continue soon and pm when you do continue this one and Devil... love ya lots

vaidahi🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: vaidahip




phewww... well i'm going to get going.. i hope you continue soon and pm when you do continue this one and Devil... love ya lots

vaidahi🤗



I will def pm u love u Vaid!!!!🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: THiNKiN OF YOU

GREAT FF HUN!!!!!!!!!!!!



Thanx Ruhi!!! I'm glad u like it!!!😃😃😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: THiNKiN OF YOU

PLZZ CONT SOON DREW 😆



Working on the next part right now Ruhi!!😃
Edited by indiandoll89 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: THiNKiN OF YOU

ok do tell when you finish 😉



I'll pm u when I post an update!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 21


After Sahil left the hospital room, Laksh stays over, expressing his love for mia, and telling her that he will never let anything happen to her.

Shina and Bani are both deciding on how they will beat each other, because it is vital for both of them to win this bet. If not for the love for jai, but just for beating the other.

Sahil spent the entire night, thinking about Mia, and the way he behaved with her.

The next morning in Mia's room, As sahil walks in he sees laksh sleeping on a chair close to Mia, holding her hand, this site just makes sahil really mad.

Sahil: Laksh what the hell do you think you are doing here? (he already woke up laksh).

Laksh(in a sleepy voice): Good morning to you too Sahil(really calm, but sleepy)

Sahil: Stop this act of being nice, just answer me, what the hell are you doing here?

Laksh: I am with the person i love taking care of her.

Sahil: Love my foot, i know you are only doing it to irritate me. If you had truly loved her, you wouldn't have left her in the first place.

Laksh: I know i shouldn't have left her, that was the only mistake i did, and i am regretting every moment of it. But instead of crying over the past, i am going to make the most of it now. Now that i am here, i'll make sure, my love for Mia is evident in such a way that she will never leave me.

Sahil(by now really angry: Laksh, like time doesn't come back, neither does love. Even if you were Mia's first love, i don't care, i am not leaving her, even if it means i have to kill you i would do it.

Laksh: You are right time doesn't come back, but if you hadn't heard, you never forget your first love, so it's not the case of coming back, because you always love your first love. and you rightfully admitted i am mia's first love. As for as killing me, you can't even touch me.

Sahil couldn't take this any longer, and both of them get into a physical fight. Both of them being equally strong was not helping. They were both over powering each other.

Mia was lying there, tears in her eyes, she could not believe, she had two people who loved her so much. Laksh, her first love, the person who taught her the meaning of love, he was the same person who gave her grief, but nonetheless, she loved him. Sahil, the love of her life, she cannot imagine a single moment without him. She loved him more than anything, sahil is the only person in her life, that made her feel alive, and make her feel like the most beautiful person on this earth. Seeing them both fight for her like that, made her cry, she wanted to reach out and stop the fight but she couldn't.

Finally the doctors come in and stop them from fighting. Sahil and Laksh didn't were really furious at each other, after they were stopped sahil just leaves from there.

Back in the Walia mansion, bani and shina were getting dressed up, all ready to woe jai.

Jai was as usual dressed in black, just out of the shower, making him look fresh and all the more sexy. He was in his study trying to do his work, but he was worried for mia. Now that he was sure, that he didn't love mia, Mia was nothing but a girl who lived in his house, and what he thought to be love, was just an attraction, a kind of feeling for someone who he got used to.

Then his thoughts drifted to Shina, the girl who made him happy. He remembered all the past moments with her, no one could ever make him feel the way she did. Shina was the person, any guy would love to have in their life. She is pretty, fun-loving, caring, and most of all her attitude makes her different from all. The time he spent with Shina, were the most wonderful moments in his life.

As he was reliving his past moments, he hears a knock on his door.

Jai: Who is it?

When there isn't any answer, he gets frustrated and hears another knock, this time he gets up, and goes to open the study door, ready to blast off the person.

Jai: Who the he..... but he stops midway, with the sight presented in front of him.

Shina was standing there, looking hotter than he could imagine. Dressed in nice black knee length skirt, showing her long bare legs, and she had a pink anklet on her right leg, wearing black jimmy choos, her top was just too sexy. A pink tank top with a deep neck, showing some of it's cleavage, with a black shrug on top it. She had a simple necklace with an "S" on it. Hair all done, little curls at the bottom, giving them that extra touch, no earrings. Jai was just blown away by her beauty. Even though, she was dressed simple(the type of dresses shina wears, this one was very simple compared to that), she took away his breath.

Shina: Hi Jai (sexy voice).

By then Bani came there too, and she noticed the look in Jai's eyes, if she didn't know any better, she would say that he was in love with her. Bani on the other hand was dressed in a simple pink saree, hair all straight, parted in the middle. She wore her pink bangles, had a little make up on, making her look really pretty. Any guy would die to be with her, but looking at shina, and especially jai's reaction towards her, made bani really sad. She wanted to be the one, who made jai that way, not shina. She was determined to make jai her own, by hook or crook.

Jai: Shina, what are you doing here?

Shina: Jai now that i live here, i wanted to spend some time with you. After all we did have a past together.

Jai: Well in that case, why don't we go out tonight?

Shina: Night is too far away, how about we begin our day together, the night will follow suit? (winks at him)

Jai: you haven't changed one bit. Okay, tell me what do you want to do?

Shina: Anything, after all, i am in your city.

Jai: Okay, let's go out.

Shina: Sounds good, and Jai where are your manners? You don't even compliment a lady anymore?

Jai(laughs): A lady? Kahan par? (looks around and spots bani), Oh hi bani, You look really beautifully. Goes to her, and kisses her hand.

Bani is just rooted to the spot. Jai's touch, arouse so many emotions in her, that she couldn't control her heart. No wonder, she loved him so much. This one gesture, made her stand more stronger, She will win against shina, no matter what. She has to, this became a life and death situation for her.

Shina(laughs too, but you can see a little spark of jealousy which she is trying to hide): Jai Very funny, fine if that's the case you go with Bani, i'll go with someone else. (pretends to be mad).

Jai(leaves bani's hand, which he was still holding): Shina, now don't be mad, you know i was just playing with you. No one can ever look prettier than you. In my eyes, you are the most beautiful woman on the earth, i guess not only me, but all the men on this earth would agree with me.

Shina has a wide smile on her face, with an evil glint, which is only visible to bani. Shina hugs jai, while giving an evil smirk to bani. Bani is just burning with jealousy, Jai saying all those things to Shina, made her want to kill her right then, but she couldn't. She wanted to win his love, not some type of compliment. If Shina thinks that this would stop her, well she has to think again, because Bani Dixit, never backs down.

Bani looks at them, and has an evil smile.

Bani(thinking): They want to spend time together don't they? Let's see how they will, especially after what i am going to do.


What is Bani thinking? Will she be able to stop Jai and Shina from going out? How will Shina react? What is going to happen with Laksh? Who will Mia chose? When will Mia come out of the coma?
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Posted: 18 years ago

awww mia is lucky to have sahil and laksh and their love.

Both of them are so cute(yes cute), fighting for her.

hehe well laksh would've won the fight, after all he is my brother 😆

I am sure laksh has a reason why he is doing that, my bro can never harm anyone😉

Wow shina is well just wow. heheh. Dressed like that, and with the attitude, bani doesn't stand a chance. Her evilness, is nothing compared to mine, so yeah i am going to win. 😆

Jai is already awed by my beauty, in no time, he'll be in love with me. heheh. Bani you don't have a chance, when i am around.

come on how can jai pick anyone over me? After all it's shina. hehe.

Amazing update meera.

Shina

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Posted: 18 years ago
ab tak mia. sahil, aur laksh ka mamla ab tak khatam nahi hua....
oh man i guess mia feels really wanted!

bani jalan........oooo.....
hmm...what is she going to do???
that i have no idea!

awesome meera!
continue soon!!!!

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