(FF) Pyar Mein Twist! Note Pg. 100!!!! - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH meerrraa darlinn!!! YAYY!!! another FF! 😳 😃 ME SOO hAPPY... wow... it sounds really interesting... JAI LOVES MIA????????? 😲 I cant wait to read more! PLEASE CONTINUE! !!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow!!! meera tht was awesome hun 👏 ......whooohoooo...watz this?😲 ... a new twist!!😛....jai n mia???😳....no jai n bani???😲......interesting hun 😃 ......definitely looking forward to the next part 😳 😳 ....so really hun...who is this jai going to b w/....bani or mia?? 😛 ....(cum on u cud tell me hun😉 😉 )... 😆 😆 😆

lol😆....luv the names...really creative hun 👏 ....lmao 😆 😆 😆

bani, mia, pia....

n w/ tht nice pairs... 😉 😆

jai n bani 😳 ...sahil n mia...ranheer n pia😲😆... 😛

it definitely suits the title "pyar mein twist" 😉 😉👏 .....excellent part hun 👏 👏 👏 .....egarly waiting for ur next part!! 😳 😛

luv,

- LiSa
Edited by KHJL - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
hmm diff i like it!

mia kiska mia?? 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
The name Mia reminds of me of Princess Diaries heeh
but anyways nice start!!!
please continue soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hmm...so im guessing there will be a flashback?..lol anywayz...great start hun..plz do continue soon..nice story line 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanx for all the encouragement everyone!!! I'll continue tom!!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow meera that was wonderful
I am ready with my bhelen 😆 , but your story is interesting and the title is catchy keep up the wonderful work! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thank-You all once again for your sweet comments!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 2


Sorry for confusing everyone, but there won't be a flashback scene, i'll just give you a little written description.

Bani, Mia, Pia came to Walia House because their mother and father died and in their will they wrote that the three sisters shud go to Mumbai and meet their old friend Kishen Walia. The three girls sell their house in order to get enough money to go to Mumbai. When they arrive in Mumbai they first go to the Walia house and they meet Mr. Jai Walia (who is not old he is only 28 yrs old) He sadly informs them that Kishen Walia died last month. Bani feels that now she has no place to go, but Jai consoles her and tells her that he will keep them in his house.

Note that there is no Jigyasa in this ff!! Sahil and Ranveer are Jai's brothers and Kishen Walia's son's.
Gradually Bani gets a job with Jai's company and they start sending time together and Bani feels an attachment to Jai. However Jai develops a liking Mia, who is completely unaware of his feelings. Since Sahil and Mia are the same age they end up getting along well. Now I will continue my story with Mia applying at Walia Group of Industries and Jai revealing that he loves her.


Mia applied for a job and she goes home and the minute she walks in, Sahil pounces on her

Sahil: to???

Mia: to kya??

Sahil: Mili?

Mia: Sahil mere naam Mia hai, Mili nahin

Sahil: Mia??

Mia: sorry Sahil

Sahil: Did u get it??

Mia: Yes I did

Sahil: OMG!!!!! I'm so happy for you!! I told you that you would get it!!!

Mia: I know, I'm so happy!!!!! I finally got a job!!!

Sahil: so what's my treat??

Mia: treat?? kaisi treat??

Sahil :I got you a job?? Don't I get anything from you?

Mia: Well actually, Mr. Walia gave me the job so the treat shud go to him na??

Right at that moment Jai walks in

Jai: kaisi treat Mia?

Mia: oh Mr. Walia I was just telling Sahil that you gave me a job and Sahil said that I shud give him a treat so I said no cuz u gave me the job so u deserve the treat na??

Jai: i think ur right we'll go out for dinner tonight okay?

Mia: ya

Jai: be ready @ 7:30pm okay?

Mia: ji...

Jai leaves and gos towards the stairs

Jai: Mia, pls wear pink aachi lagogi

Mia blushes like anything

Mia: Ji....

Sahil: so have fun at ur dinner??

Mia: sahil? Are you jealous? tumhara dil jal raha hain??

Sahil: shut up!!

He goes upto his room and Mia goes after him

Mia: sahil.....sahil......sahil???

Mia shoves open his door and walks in

Sahil: go away!! Please just leave me the hell alone!!

Mia: sahil, why are soo jealous??

Sahil: I love you god damn it!!! Can't u understand that?? I don't want you to go out with bhaiyya!!!!

While he was saying all of this he grabbed my shoulders and shoved her against the all.

Mia: oww Sahil ur hurting me!!!

Sahil: I'm hurting you??? And what are you doing to me??

Mia: i...i..... I didn't know you felt this way

Sahil: Stop lying!!! Tell me when I'm near you, you don't feel anything??? tell me this doesn't do anything to you??

He pushes Mia really hard into the wall and he gives me a really deep kiss.

when he finally stops,

Sahil: Tell me that didn't do anything to you??

Mia open the door to leave and....

Mia: di?

Bani: kya ho raha hain yahaan par?? Why was there so much shouting

Mia: woh......di Sahil made a bet with me and I lost it so he was cheering!!!

Bani: Mia, why is ur jaw so swollen??

Mia's hand immediately goes to her jaw and it hurts

Mia: woh....di....ummm


What will Mia say??? Will she tell the truth to Bani?? Or will she lie to save herself?????
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww that was cute!!!!!!

i see that the story is weaved around Mia,(hmm interesting). lol just pulling your leg.

awww Jai's heart is going to break. and so is sahil's poor guys.

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