(FF) Pyar Mein Twist! Note Pg. 100!!!! - Page 5

Originally posted by: salmansgirl

hun that was awesome! i cant' wait to read more. jai can't be falling for mia lol!, he's gotta go after bani.

waise bhi, u can have Sahil since he loves u!!!

update soon!

anam

Thanx Anam!! For not pointing out the "Me" thing so loudly!! hem hem Srav Navs hem hem!!!😉 Anyway Don't worry guys, u have to wait and watch aage aage hota hai kya??😉

really nice, please write soon....

wow...gr8 FF...i caught up wid all the parts today..it was gr8...made me crazy..it was simply gr8 👏

Thank-You for all your comments!! I'll continue in the evening!!!

Originally posted by: inavars

i see how it is...........he's kissing you?!?😉 😆 he grabbed YOUR shoulders😉 awwww.....meera u sooo cute!😆

meera.....that was such a cute part hun......awww Sahil and Mia are soooo cute! so when are we going to see Bani's jealousy?!😉

can't wait for the next part........sorry for teh short comment.....i have to hurry to read the devil😉

😆😆😆srav i noticed that too.... Meera your too cute😉.

i just read your new ff and am so happy that you started another one.. more for me to read😉. This ff is awsome and can't wait for your next part

Part 3
This part is dedicated to all my darling friends who identified the whole "Me" thing!! I still love all of you!!!

Recap: Sahil confesses that he loves Mia, and Jai is taking Mia out for dinner. Bani comes in and asks Mia how she has a rash on her jaw(BTW if anyone doesn't know, she got it from the hard kiss that Sahil gave her)

Mia runs out of there to her bedroom

The phone rings

Mia: hello?

Jai: Main bol raha hoon

Mia: Ji, aapko koi kaam tha??

Jai: kyun main tumhe yoon hi phone nahin kar sakhta? Waise mujhe tumse kehna that ke uhh dinner pe sirf hum dono honge, aur koi nahin

Mia: ji, that's fine

Jai: i just wanted to make sure you would be okay with it.

Mia: it's fine

They hang up and Pia comes in

Pia: (sing-song voice) I'm in LOVE!!!!!!!

Mia: who is poor guy this time??

Pia: shut up Mia!!! It's not the same kind of crushes!! This is love, i can tell. This time I actually got to know the guy, and I didn't just fall for his money and looks!

Mia: wow!!! i'm so proud of you!!!

Pia: enough about me, where did you get that rash from??

Mia: rash, what rash??

Pia: this one!

She points to Mia's jaw

Pia: It looks like a kissing rash

Mia: what......uh.......no it's not!!!!

Pia: it is one!! why are you sooo shy?? Who is it from?? Hmmm... is has to be Sahil or.........OMG is it the one I love???

Mia: It's not Sahil, and who's the one you love anyone??

Pia: Ranveer

Mia: ewwwwwww Ranveer?????????????? It's def not him!!!

Pia: then it has to be Sahil, he's the only one with a stubble

Mia: So that's what the rash is??

Pia: Meaining it is Sahil??

Mia: Shit!!! Well how do I get rid of it??

Pia: Here, we'll use concealer, fondation, and make-up to cover it!

Mia: ok?

Pia: But we're staying home, why do u need to cover it??

Mia: i'm going for dinner with Mr. Walia

Pia: Mr. Walia???? But u kissed Sahil???

Mia: I didn't kiss Sahil, he kissed me

Pia: So u kiss someone, and go out to dinner with the other one???

Right at that moment Bani comes in!!!


Did she hear Pia and Mia's conversation?? What will happen now?? Will Mia be able to go out for dinner with Jai?? Watch out for the next part on Monday!! I DON'T POST ON WEEKENDS!!! Sorry for the inconvinience!!

I loved it hun!!!!!!

Pia and Ranveer, man i always wanted to see them together. hehe i think they would be perfect for each other.

Mia is interesting. how come you don't know how to cover up a rash???? lol. (okay tried to be funny but guess not).

Okay i don't think the dinner will happen, or if it does Bani should go, that would be amazing!!!! hehhe.

Yaar itz enough torture that KS doesn't come on weekends how am i going to survive without your ff????

once again LOVED IT!!!!

Shina

Meera...you're soo cute! I don't post on weekends 😆 why not sweetie?! 😉

anyway fab part meera! i loved it! awww..pia's already in love with ranveer 😆 but how come bani isn't around that much?! mia seems to be more important....i know why 😉

so i have to wait the whole weekend for the next part?! 😭

di..

i just read the 3 parts and its awesome!!

wow!!

plz do continue on monday!

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Originally posted by: lonely14

I loved it hun!!!!!!

Pia and Ranveer, man i always wanted to see them together. hehe i think they would be perfect for each other.

Mia is interesting. how come you don't know how to cover up a rash???? lol. (okay tried to be funny but guess not).

Okay i don't think the dinner will happen, or if it does Bani should go, that would be amazing!!!! hehhe.

Yaar itz enough torture that KS doesn't come on weekends how am i going to survive without your ff????

once again LOVED IT!!!!

Shina

Thanx Shina!!! Mia isn't exactly me, I'm not that weird!! and ya I've always wanted to see Pia and Ranveer together, the dinner will happen with Mia and Jai, and it will be slightly unusual!!😉
Meera