Inteqam- ff lpart 14 onpg 23 last on pg25 - Page 7

aww you killed masi n adi??? now i am really starting to wonder about the killer, who could it be? i am sure itz either Jai or Bani.

yep your fanfic is wicked and twisted, itz very interesting.

spooky, scary, but sad mughambo you killed Massi and Adi 😭 😭 😭 , but the dialogues btw jai and bani are hilarious
could tony be the killer? 😕
i think the walia house is haunted 😕
plz write soon

Originally posted by: ziddi

spooky, scary, but sad mughambo you killed Massi and Adi 😭 😭 😭 , but the dialogues btw jai and bani are hilarious
could tony be the killer? 😕
i think the walia house is haunted 😕
plz write soon

Tony ko maar dala to dr ko kaun phone karega??

im not gonna answer who is the killer or even hint it cuz i perosnally dont kno yet...my mom is also hooked on this ff!

ok i have finally read all the three parts now....good job... 👏 please continue.....

one suggestion though.....without JB romance it is not gripping. Bani sounds too rude and Jai sounds meek....This is not the Jai Walia we fell in love with .....

Please continue though... i think romance is on the way.....

Originally posted by: pmtwist

ok i have finally read all the three parts now....good job... 👏 please continue.....

one suggestion though.....without JB romance it is not gripping. Bani sounds too rude and Jai sounds meek....This is not the Jai Walia we fell in love with .....

Please continue though... i think romance is on the way.....

argh...thats one thing i can right about without being vulgar....i assure u my romance is not suited for IF...I think i will stick to murder and blah blah...bani being not BANI n Jai being hmm NOt Jai!

plus i wanna keep my ff unique not like all the other ones with lovey dovey hugs n kisses after each word...meh!

wow.. i just read all d parts.. wat is up wit bani.. she can talkkkk.. its halarious between her and jai though.. and yeh KHOONI kaun hai.. is it tony? i think its tony too now that jigs, adi and masi r dead.. hmmmmm.. then i think its bani.. 😕 .. that was gr8888.. very diff.. can't wait fo d nxt part 👏

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

wow.. i just read all d parts.. wat is up wit bani.. she can talkkkk.. its halarious between her and jai though.. and yeh KHOONI kaun hai.. is it tony? i think its tony too now that jigs, adi and masi r dead.. hmmmmm.. then i think its bani.. 😕 .. that was gr8888.. very diff.. can't wait fo d nxt part 👏

hahah....hmm bani or tony...hmmm.....hmmmmmmm
thx yo at first i thought no one would read my ff!

Originally posted by: wite_rainbow

hahah....hmm bani or tony...hmmm.....hmmmmmmmthx yo at first i thought no one would read my ff!

oh come on.. this is the first spooky ff written.. of course had to read it.. its DIFFERENT.. fo sure..

i guess am starting a trend 😉

parts 3 and 4 great
i think dadi will go next
and tony's killing everyone
oh pls cont soon
cant wait to read more