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@wite_rainbow

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Posted: 19 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: lonely14

I like the mystery part, and i like how there is no pia, and that jigyasa is dead.

I just don't like how Bani talks rudely to jai.

I like all the other parts though. Itz quite interesting.

haha wait n see.

Mugambo khush hua...MUAHHAA

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lonely14

@lonely14

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Posted: 19 years ago

#42

is there any reason for bani's behavior towards Jai? and why does Jai not say anything besides sorry? 😕

I think the killer is jai...

loved the dialogue jo dar gaya so mar gaya. wasn't that gabbar???

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MOE

@wite_rainbow

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Posted: 19 years ago

#43

i guess ull have to wait for yer answers to be questioned...i havent decided who the killer will be as of yet and am making this as i go. the only thingi kno is that ill make it super filmy by using cheap cliched bollywood dialogues from various movies.

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Mamta Singh

@Piku_S

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+ 7

Posted: 19 years ago

#44

Mera Mughambo use Mughambo's dialogue not Ghabbar singh's dialogue 😆 😆 😆
I have feeling that the killer is bani or Jai 😕
I think bani can kill when she is mad or something, sleep walk kill, or day walk kill 😕
someone in the walia family is a pyscho😕because your story is reminding me of something, that i have read and seen!!!😉
can't wait hun

Edited by ziddi - 19 years ago

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lonely14

@lonely14

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Posted: 19 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: wite_rainbow
i guess ull have to wait for yer answers to be questioned...i havent decided who the killer will be as of yet and am making this as i go. the only thingi kno is that ill make it super filmy by using cheap cliched bollywood dialogues from various movies.

lol can't wait for the cliched dialogues!!!! I love reading the cheap filmy dialogues, itz a good form of entertainment!!!!

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Maninder

@Min_3088

Voyager

Posted: 19 years ago

#46

OMG hun it waz hilarious and soo entertaining to read..just loved it plz keep up with the great work 👏

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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

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+ 4

Posted: 19 years ago

#47

i just read the 3 parts.. damn its twisted and its gr8!

plz do continue!!

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MOE

@wite_rainbow

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Posted: 19 years ago

#48

O MAN....this morning I HAD A LIGHT BULB MOMENT...i kno who the killer is....but i have yet to decide who i killed in part 3.

i appreciate all u guys liking my ff...it sure is twisted!!!

MUGAMBO KHUSH HUA...MUHAHHA!

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MOE

@wite_rainbow

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#49

im not self centered or concieted but when i was reading my ff for my mom while she was cooking this morning I could not stop laffing...i think my ff is amazing funny...the dialogues r the best part...wow am such a miyan mithu....ranting about my own ff!

well thats cuz no one else would!