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Posted: 19 years ago
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PREVIEW
ADITYA SONIA RANO AND SAHIL COMES UP WITH A PLAN TO GET BANI AND JAI TOGETHER IN A NIGHT(PART3) BUT WILL THEY SUCCEED. TILL WHEN WILL JAI AND BANI BE ABLE TO HIDE THEIR FEELINGS.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its funny chudali 😆
plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
Hey! Its fun
pls have longer parts.It was so small but continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Gosh!😆😆😆.............That was awesomne hun!👏👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
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2nd part

JAI WAKES UP AND LOOKS AT BANI WHO IS SLEEPING LIKE A BABY AND THINKS I SO WANNA KISS HER AND THEN THINKS THAT SHE IS MY WIFE AND THEN NOOOO I CAN'T DO THAT,OFCOURSE I CAN AND THEN KISSES HER ON THE FOREHEAD AND THEN CHEEKS AND SUDENLY BANI STARTS MOVING AND JAI GETS UP SO QUICKLY AND RUNS TO THE BATHROOM AS HE HAS SEEN A GHOST.BANI GETS UP.
B-WHERE IS JAI?
SUDDENLY JAI COMES OUT OF THE BATHROOMAND STARES AT HIS BEAUTIFUL WIFE.BANI CAN'T KEEP HER EYES OFF OF HIM EITHER AND THEN JAI COMES NEAR BANI AND HOLDS HER BY HER WAIST AND BANIS THINKS WHATS GOTTEN INTO HIM TODAY AND JAI STARTS KISSING BANI ON HER FOREHEAD THEN ON CHEEKS THEN NECK THEN HER BACK AND NOW COMING CLOSER TO SEAL HER LIPS WITH HIS WITH HIS HANDS ON BANI'S BACK TO OPEN HER NIGHTY'S ZIPPER AND KNOCK KNOCK. BANI COMES OUT OF HER DREAMS AND GOES TO OPEN THE DOOR AND ITS SONIA.
S-GOODMORNING BANI
B- GOODMORNING SONIA
S-EVERYONE IS CALLING U GUYS FOR BREAKFAST.
BANI LOOKS AT THE CLOCK AND IS SHOCKED ITS 10 AND SONIA IS LOOKING AT THE BED AND THINKS EVERYTHING IS OKAY.
S- (MISCIVIOUSLY)WELL IF U WANT TO I CAN TELL THEM THAT WE CAN HAVE OUR BREAKFAST CAUSE LOOKS LIKE THE NEWLY WEDDED COUPLE IS STILL ASLEEP AND U KNOW WE R QUITE HUNGRY AND I DON'T KNOW IF U GUYS R HUNGRY CAUSE LAST NIGHT SOMETHING MIGHT HAVE HAPPENED AND MAYBE U GUYS R NOT HUNGRY ANYMORE.
B- SHUT UP S AND THEN SONIA LEAVES.
JAI COMES OUT OF THE BATHROOM AND BANI DOESN'T LOOK AT HIM CAUSE SHE KNOWS THAT IF SHE DID THEN SHE WON'T BE ABLE TO TAKE HIS EYES OFF OF HIM AND LEAVES FOR THE BATHROOM.JAI GETS READY TO LEAVE WHEN HE SEES HIS WIFE COMING OUT OF THE BATHROOM WEARING A DEEP RED COLORED SLEVELESS SARI WITH A BARE BACK AND BANI IS STRUGGLING WITH HER DORI. JAI WITH A EVIL SMILE (WHICH BANI DOESN'T NOTICE) COMES NEAR HER TAKES THE DORI IN HIS HAND STARTS TO TIE THE DORI AND IS SLIGHTLY TOUCHING HER MAKING HER SHIVER BUT THEN THINKING OF THIR REALATIONSHIP THINKS NO THIS IS WRONG AND TELLS BANI TO GET READY AS THEY HAVE TO GO DOWNSTAIRS FOR THE BREAKFAST.BANI IS DOING EVERYTHING AS FAST AS SHE CAN BUT BECAUSE JAI IS STARING AT HER IT IS MAKING HER UNCOMFORTABLE.
B-LETS GO JAI.
EVERYBODY IS LOOKING AT THE BEAUTIFUL COUPLE MAKING THEIR WAY DOWN.JAI AND BANI SIT NEXT TO EACH OTHER.JAI AND BANI ARE MAKING SEPARET PLATES.
M- BANI JAI WHY R U MAKING SAPERATE PLATES. KEHTE HAIN KE IK THALI MAIN KHANE SE PYAR BADTA HAI.(THEY SAY UR LOVE WILL INCREASE IF U EAT IN THE SAME PLATE)
BOTH BANI AND JAI R SHOCKED.SONIA THINKS Y ISN'T BANI BLUSHING ANS ISNTANTLY KNOWS SOMETHING IS WRONG.JAI IS LEAVING FOR THE OFFICE AND TURNS AROUND TO TELL MASI "MASI I AM GOING TO THE OFFICE"
M- Y R TELLING ME MUNNA TELL UR WIFE THAT
J- SAME THING MASI
M-NO MUNNA
J- MAIN CHALTA HOON(I AM LEAVING)
B-JALDI AAYEGA JI(COME BACK SOON)
SONIA GOES TO THE OOFICE TO TALK TO JAI ABOUT HIM AND BANI.
S- HAI JAI
J-HEY WHAT R U DOING IN THE OOFICE?
S-IS EVERTHING OKAY BETWEEN U AND BANI.
J-WHY R U ASKING THAT
S-TELL ME THE TRUTH
JAI TELLS HER HOW MUCH HE LIKES BANI BUT FOR BANI THIS MARRIGE IS A COMPROMISE.SONIA JUST LEAVES FORM THEIR GOES HOME AND CALL RANO SAHIL AND ADI UNCLE TO HER ROOM AND TELLS THEM WHAT JAI TOLD HER.
R- BUT BANI LOVES JAI
EVERYONE IS SHOCKED TO HEAR THAT
S-THAT MEANS THEY DON'T KNOW THAT. LETS DO SOMETHING TO GET THEM TO CONFESS THEIR LOVE.
SONIA MAKES A PLAN AND TELLS THEM THEIR PLAN AND MISSION JAI AND BANI BEGINS.

Edited by got2go2go - 18 years ago
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JAI WAKES UP AND LOOKS AT BANI WHO IS SLEEPING LIKE A BABY AND THINKS I SO WANNA KISS HER AND THEN THINKS THAT SHE IS MY WIFE AND THEN NOOOO I CAN'T DO THAT,OFCOURSE I CAN AND THEN KISSES HER ON THE FOREHEAD AND THEN CHEEKS AND SUDENLY BANI STARTS MOVING AND JAI GETS UP SO QUICKLY AND RUNS TO THE BATHROOM AS HE HAS SEEN A GHOST.BANI GETS UP.
B-WHERE IS JAI?
SUDDENLY JAI COMES OUT OF THE BATHROOMAND STARES AT HIS BEAUTIFUL WIFE.BANI CAN'T KEEP HER EYES OFF OF HIM EITHER AND THEN JAI COMES NEAR BANI AND HOLDS HER BY HER WAIST AND BANIS THINKS WHATS GOTTEN INTO HIM TODAY AND JAI STARTS KISSING BANI ON HER FOREHEAD THEN ON CHEEKS THEN NECK THEN HER BACK AND NOW COMING CLOSER TO SEAL HER LIPS WITH HIS WITH HIS HANDS ON BANI'S BACK TO OPEN HER NIGHTY'S ZIPPER AND KNOCK KNOCK. BANI COMES OUT OF HER DREAMS AND GOES TO OPEN THE DOOR AND ITS SONIA.
S-GOODMORNING BANI
B- GOODMORNING SONIA
S-EVERYONE IS CALLING U GUYS FOR BREAKFAST.
BANI LOOKS AT THE CLOCK AND IS SHOCKED ITS 10 AND SONIA IS LOOKING AT THE BED AND THINKS EVERYTHING IS OKAY.
S- (MISCIVIOUSLY)WELL IF U WANT TO I CAN TELL THEM THAT WE CAN HAVE OUR BREAKFAST CAUSE LOOKS LIKE THE NEWLY WEDDED COUPLE IS STILL ASLEEP AND U KNOW WE R QUITE HUNGRY AND I DON'T KNOW IF U GUYS R HUNGRY CAUSE LAST NIGHT SOMETHING MIGHT HAVE HAPPENED AND MAYBE U GUYS R NOT HUNGRY ANYMORE.
B- SHUT UP S AND THEN SONIA LEAVES.
JAI COMES OUT OF THE BATHROOM AND BANI DOESN'T LOOK AT HIM CAUSE SHE KNOWS THAT IF SHE DID THEN SHE WON'T BE ABLE TO TAKE HIS EYES OFF OF HIM AND LEAVES FOR THE BATHROOM.JAI GETS READY TO LEAVE WHEN HE SEES HIS WIFE COMING OUT OF THE BATHROOM WEARING A DEEP RED COLORED SLEVELESS SARI WITH A BARE BACK AND BANI IS STRUGGLING WITH HER DORI. JAI WITH A EVIL SMILE (WHICH BANI DOESN'T NOTICE) COMES NEAR HER TAKES THE DORI IN HIS HAND STARTS TO TIE THE DORI AND IS SLIGHTLY TOUCHING HER MAKING HER SHIVER BUT THEN THINKING OF THIR REALATIONSHIP THINKS NO THIS IS WRONG AND TELLS BANI TO GET READY AS THEY HAVE TO GO DOWNSTAIRS FOR THE BREAKFAST.BANI IS DOING EVERYTHING AS FAST AS SHE CAN BUT BECAUSE JAI IS STARING AT HER IT IS MAKING HER UNCOMFORTABLE.
B-LETS GO JAI.
EVERYBODY IS LOOKING AT THE BEAUTIFUL COUPLE MAKING THEIR WAY DOWN.JAI AND BANI SIT NEXT TO EACH OTHER.JAI AND BANI ARE MAKING SEPARET PLATES.
M- BANI JAI WHY R U MAKING SAPERATE PLATES. KEHTE HAIN KE IK THALI MAIN KHANE SE PYAR BADTA HAI.(THEY SAY UR LOVE WILL INCREASE IF U EAT IN THE SAME PLATE)
BOTH BANI AND JAI R SHOCKED.SONIA THINKS Y ISN'T BANI BLUSHING ANS ISNTANTLY KNOWS SOMETHING IS WRONG.JAI IS LEAVING FOR THE OFFICE AND TURNS AROUND TO TELL MASI "MASI I AM GOING TO THE OFFICE"
M- Y R TELLING ME MUNNA TELL UR WIFE THAT
J- SAME THING MASI
M-NO MUNNA
J- MAIN CHALTA HOON(I AM LEAVING)
B-JALDI AAYEGA JI(COME BACK SOON)
SONIA GOES TO THE OOFICE TO TALK TO JAI ABOUT HIM AND BANI.
S- HAI JAI
J-HEY WHAT R U DOING IN THE OOFICE?
S-IS EVERTHING OKAY BETWEEN U AND BANI.
J-WHY R U ASKING THAT
S-TELL ME THE TRUTH
JAI TELLS HER HOW MUCH HE LIKES BANI BUT FOR BANI THIS MARRIGE IS A COMPROMISE.SONIA JUST LEAVES FORM THEIR GOES HOME AND CALL RANO SAHIL AND ADI UNCLE TO HER ROOM AND TELLS THEM WHAT JAI TOLD HER.
R- BUT BANI LOVES JAI
EVERYONE IS SHOCKED TO HEAR THAT
S-THAT MEANS THEY DON'T KNOW THAT. LETS DO SOMETHING TO GET THEM TO CONFESS THEIR LOVE.
SONIA MAKES A PLAN AND TELLS THEM THEIR PLAN AND MISSION JAI AND BANI BEGINS.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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When i read the first scene about Jai coming out of the bathroom and kissing bani 😳 i thought it was really
😆 😆
way to go hun
but i have request please do not use captial letters because it considered shouting and swearing, and can you make the font bold
plz write soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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It was really good hun, Can't wait for the next part!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
preview
their plan succeds but sonia does something which is not cool.is she gonna be in trouble or she is gonna mess up the plan.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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coollllllll.. luved it so far.. awwwwwwwwwww.. 👏 can't wait fo d nxt part

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