my first fanfic(pt 25 updt 23jan)

jai and bani are married but both of them were forced into this marriage by their moms and both of them like each other but pretends to hate each other thinking that other doesn't like them. both of them are from a rich family background but bani was their friends daughter who died in a car accident. bani is from middle class background. rano and pia are rich.

people against bani- jigayasa and roshni

people supporting bani- aditya,rana,sahil,mausi,dadi and pushkar and SONIA(18)

people turning from evil to nice-ranveer

people turning from nice to evil-piya

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wedll soundd grr88 !!
do cotninuee soon...
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sounds great can't wait to read it
plz continue soon

loll dat sounds really gd do continue soooon please it sounds real gd
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mwa'hz luv ya xxx aloo (lol) aka almass

sounds great
can't wait to read more

sounds great
can't wait to read more

seems great and very interesting
with a new angle
can't wait to read more

1st part
jai and bani got married today and its their suhaag raat. jai comes in the room and is drunk(he looks so cute with his buttons open sleves rolled up 😳 ) and looks at the bed and no one is their and then looks at the window and sees bani near the window listening to the music. jai thinks to himself what the hell.
J-(read in drunken style)arre tumhe ho to badasa ghooonghat nikal ke mera intzaar karna chahiye tha aur tum yahan pe muzis sun rahi ho.
B-kyun mujhe koi aur kaam nahin hai 😡 tumhare liye yahan per 5 by5 feet ka ghoonghat nikalne ke sivaye.
J-hey bhagwan ye chudal meri liye hi rakhi thi.
B-chudal 😡 ,ooee tum kaun se salman khan jaise hot ho.(thinking to herself u r much hotter than him andblushes)
J-janta hoon ke main hot nahin hottest hoon
B-hottest my foot. chup chap so jao nahin to
J- hoor deti hai teri toh and starts coming closer to her.
bani is stepping backward and thinking oh god oh god oh god until she hits the back wall and now is trapped between jai's arm
B-(statering)yeeehhh aapp kaaaya kaaar rahe hain
J- AB IS BILLIE KO KYA HUA. ab batyo agar main nahin soya to kya
B- to kya main so jaoungi.
before jai could do anything else bani pushes jai and runs to the bathroom and chages and comes goes to bed.
jai thinkingg tum jaise chudal ho toh main kuch bhi karne ke liye tayar hoon.god thank so much for giving me my love and now i will make this fake marriage into real one.



how was it guys. please reply and some suggestions please and one more thing bani is going to be a hottie in my fanfic so she is going to wear stuff that can blow anybody's hosh. so bear with me for a while cause i am not a writing person so i need suggestions.
thanks

nice but please, please write in English 😊