my first fanfic(pt 25 updt 23jan) - Page 16

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Posted: 18 years ago
I usually dont read FF but i read urs today and it was awesome great job do continue



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Aleisha 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
WOW what is the big raaz dont tell me jai was married before to this sonia
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part. please continue soon.

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Posted: 18 years ago
preview for part 25
jai wakes up from his dream
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Posted: 18 years ago
sorry
tht was long
part25
jai wakes up from his dreama nd is like tht was bad.
j- bani whr r u?
bani is in the restroom throwing up and yes guys she is pregnant.bani come out and jai asks her if she is alright. bani is like ya i am fine but i need to talk to u.
j-wht is it
b-wo wo wo
j- kya bani
b- i am pregnant
j- bas it ni si bat and is about to leave whn he realizes wht she said
j- come again
b- i am pregnant
jai just drops on the bed and gapes at bani for like eternity and this is killing bani
b- jai u alright
jai just shouts so loud tht the next thing u know is tht everyone is standing outside the room.
massi-wht is it
j-masi i am going to be a dad
everyone is so happy and they all congrats thm and thn they all plan to go to farm house.
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Posted: 18 years ago
sorry guys but was alittle busy but now i will give u like a scene at a time ok but soory for the delay.
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