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Posted: 19 years ago

awwwwww😳..........wow!!! hun tht was unbelievable n simply excellent 👏

sry for the delay hun😒.......since all my classes have started...n i missed out on sum of the parts......i had to go bak n catch up w/ the parts i missed earlier.....n omg....i can's believe i actually missed all this amazing parts of ur FF.....👏

haila!!! luved part 9❤️.......awwww wat a method to make bani confess😳....(wat a weapon...Roshni😆😆).......my cuddles got the "BRAIN" i tell ya😉😆.......hehe😳........(but then ofcourse all the credit goes to u 4 cuming up w/ it hun).......👏.....too good😃👏👏

i absoutely adore ur ff😳❤️.......luv the new twists n turns u give😛....n the way u always keep the story moving forward instead of dragging it like the real KS show😳......(where instead of solving prob...jb is facing w/ more misunderstanding😭)....

but then again when it cums 2 ur FF....itz simply wicked hun👏....i mean not only did bani n jai confess bout their love😃.....but they r actually going on a honeymoon😛.....haila!😳😳😳....tht 2 w/ our sexy sanyashi's help......😳

luved the kute moments b/w jai n bani😳😳, sahil n rano.....n as for ranveer......omg.....he is so sweet😃.......he is actually helping jai n bani out in their relationship😊.......trully hun......amazing parts👏.....how do u cum up w/ all these new ideas.....WOW!!!! ........simply too good🤗........n then the new twist w/ the new gurl........hmmm🤔.....tarun n anjali......not bad😉.....infact interesting...very interesting😉.........😆😆

so wat will happen now?....i mean.....wat wud ranveer do to save his mami?......wud jigz n roshni succeed in their plan?......wat bout tht new gurl?.....is there going to ne thing b/w tarun n anjali?😉......n now ofcourse for the importantly question....wat will happen in jai n bani's honeymoon?😉😆.......hehe😆

oh! yea....how cud i forget the real important question😉😆.....so hun watz the next... new twist cuming up in ur FF...?😛.......cum on u know u cud tell me😈...i won't tell ne 1😉.......lol😆😆😆

just pulling ur legs hun😳😆.......but trully i m just so excited ....can't wait to c wat will happen next😳😳.......continue soon.....once again dying to read more of ur FF......it totally rocks!!😛👍🏼👏

once again fabulous parts jaanu👏👏👏.......i LUVED 'em....each n every part😳

Luv you hun!❤️

*mwah*🤗🤗🤗

~*LiSa*~

Edited by KHJL - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: KHJL

awwwwww😳..........wow!!! hun tht was unbelievable n simply excellent 👏

sry for the delay hun😒.......since all my classes have started...n i missed out on sum of the parts......i had to go bak n catch up w/ the parts i missed earlier.....n omg....i can's believe i actually missed all this amazing parts of ur FF.....👏

haila!!! luved part 9❤️.......awwww wat a method to make bani confess😳....(wat a weapon...Roshni😆😆).......my cuddles got the "BRAIN" i tell ya😉😆.......hehe😳........(but then ofcourse all the credit goes to u 4 cuming up w/ it hun).......👏.....too good😃👏👏

i absoutely adore ur ff😳❤️.......luv the new twists n turns u give😛....n the way u always keep the story moving forward instead of dragging it like the real KS show😳......(where instead of solving prob...jb is facing w/ more misunderstanding😭)....

but then again when it cums 2 ur FF....itz simply wicked hun👏....i mean not only did bani n jai confess bout their love😃.....but they r actually going on a honeymoon😛.....haila!😳😳😳....tht 2 w/ our sexy sanyashi's help......😳

luved the kute moments b/w jai n bani😳😳, sahil n rano.....n as for ranveer......omg.....he is so sweet😃.......he is actually helping jai n bani out in their relationship😊.......trully hun......amazing parts👏.....how do u cum up w/ all these new ideas.....WOW!!!! ........simply too good🤗........n then the new twist w/ the new gurl........hmmm🤔.....tarun n anjali......not bad😉.....infact interesting...very interesting😉.........😆😆

so wat will happen now?....i mean.....wat wud ranveer do to save his mami?......wud jigz n roshni succeed in their plan?......wat bout tht new gurl?.....is there going to ne thing b/w tarun n anjali?😉......n now ofcourse for the importantly question....wat will happen in jai n bani's honeymoon?😉😆.......hehe😆

oh! yea....how cud i forget the real important question😉😆.....so hun watz the next... new twist cuming up in ur FF...?😛.......cum on u know u cud tell me😈...i won't tell ne 1😉.......lol😆😆😆

just pulling ur legs hun😳😆.......but trully i m just so excited ....can't wait to c wat will happen next😳😳.......continue soon.....once again dying to read more of ur FF......it totally rocks!!😛👍🏼👏

once again fabulous parts jaanu👏👏👏.......i LUVED 'em....each n every part😳

Luv you hun!❤️

*mwah*🤗🤗🤗

~*LiSa*~

Thanks lisa!!!!! i love reading your comments!!!!! aww itz okay i understand you were busy, you don't have to be sorry hun!!!!!

Yaar our cuddles does have a brain, ekta just doesn't make good use of it. haha Roshini is my number one weapon!!!!

If i was dragging my story then there would be no diff. b/w me n ekta and i wouldn't want that.

Lol yep a confession was a must, yaar they didn't have a honeymoon on the show so they needed it. and you know never know it could turn out to be a nightmare instead of sweet lovey dovey moments. Roshini can't keep quiet now can she?

hahha i did give you a hint for the next twist!!!!!

Thanks again for such a lovely comment!!!!!!

will post up the next part tomorrow!!!!!

lonely14

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Posted: 19 years ago
hun that was superb
loved the whole mr shukla scene
awwwwwwww a tarun + anjali jodi awwwww
and who's this bro?
and ranveer duffer do something
a big bear 🤗 and ⭐️ from me
take care
and pls cont soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: goldie_ever

hun that was superb
loved the whole mr shukla scene
awwwwwwww a tarun + anjali jodi awwwww
and who's this bro?
and ranveer duffer do something
a big bear 🤗 and ⭐️ from me
take care
and pls cont soon 😃

aww thanks hun!!!!

Mr.Shukla scene??? huh i am confused.

you can guess who the bro is. When Arjun died you can look at people's reactions, it will give you a hint. hahah hints are everywhere hun you just gotta pick them up, then you will be able to write the fanfic without me. lol.

Thanks again!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
very very good! i loved it. koi roshni ko maar de please, mein us ko million dollars doon gi lol!

i hope ranveer ruins jigs and roshni's plan. i kinda like seeing the other side of him. maybe he can learn something from his mama ji about romancing the ladies. hehe.

can't wait to read more.

update soon.
anam
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: salmansgirl

very very good! i loved it. koi roshni ko maar de please, mein us ko million dollars doon gi lol!

i hope ranveer ruins jigs and roshni's plan. i kinda like seeing the other side of him. maybe he can learn something from his mama ji about romancing the ladies. hehe.

can't wait to read more.

update soon.
anam

hahahah i am sure a lot of people would want to kill roshini for free!!!!

hahha i hope he does ruin their plans!!!!!!!

Yaar i think Ranveer knows more about romancing the ladies just doesn't show it!!!!!

thanks for reading my fanfic!!!!!

Lonely14

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Posted: 19 years ago
Preview for part 12:

The men enter the suite where Jai and Bani are staying with guns in their hand and then ......!!!!

What will happen next? Will jai and Bani be safe? Was it Ranveer's plan to trap Jai and bani? hmm he could actually be a negative character. hahah you won't know till the next part. lol i love keeping you guys in suspense!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: khattimeeti

OMG u r bad....... please post update soon.......... the suspense is killing me.
KNM

i know right!!!!

Now you have to post soon!!!!!!

Jigna

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: lonely14

Preview for part 12:

The men enter the suite where Jai and Bani are staying with guns in their hand and then ......!!!!

What will happen next? Will jai and Bani be safe? Was it Ranveer's plan to trap Jai and bani? hmm he could actually be a negative character. hahah you won't know till the next part. lol i love keeping you guys in suspense!!!

uhhhhh.......guns? what are you upto now? I swear if it's ranveer's plan to trap JB, i'll have to kill him myself lol!

update soon. can't wait to read more.

Anam

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: jigna_07

i know right!!!!

Now you have to post soon!!!!!!

Jigna

Lol okay trying really hard not to be mean, but yaar a little suspense won't hurt!!!!!

and anam come on yaar guns add to the suspense!!! and about ranveer hmm thatz interesting isn't it?

i just hope i dont' disappoint you guys with the actual part.

thanks for reading you guys,

lonely14

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