Aap Ki Khatir- FF :Part 7, Pg 13 - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey

u wrote it veru well... just keep updating ur ff

pls cont.... soon

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.. she recognized him and called him jai awwwwwwwwww.. 👏 can't wait fo d nxt "longer" part 😆 .. luveddd it
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwww!!!! she remembered him!!!!!!!1 😃 😊 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was such a sweet part
bani called him jai and not mr walia
awwwwwwwwwwww
and she also remembered rano and not pia
good pretend pia doesn't exist
great part
pls cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
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yeah bani recognized her hubby and called him jai, and yeah she didn't recognized pia 😡
i hope the misunderstanding goes away and they start their life fresh and i hope just jb go on a vacation that doctor 😡 better tell jai to take bani out for and outing 😉
next time Vedo hun please write longer parts,😆 your ff is just super!!!
plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
wow hun outstanding job!!!...just loved it and do plz continue soon! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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di.. i loved this part.. plz make the next part a lot longer!!

plz do continue!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8 part 👏 👏 ...just finished reading both parts....its amazing!!...plzzz continue soon!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 3.

❤️...aye ho meri zindagi mein tum bahar banke
mere dil mein yuhi rahena tum pyar pyar banke
ankho mein tum base ho sapne hazar banke
mere dil mein yuhi rahena tum pyar pyar banke...❤️


Bani felt a shiver through her body as he placed his hand around her shoulder and led her into the house. His every touch did that to her. Mausi met them at the door and took their aarti before letting them into the house. As they bent down to take her blessing she handed the thali to Rano and pulled them into an embrace.

M: "May you always remain happy and together!"

To everyone's surprise, except Bani's, Jai took the thali from Rano, dipped his thumb and index finger in the sindoor container, filled her maang and kissed her on the forehead. She smiled and looked up to him, her eyes conveying the immense love she felt.

❤️...mere sathi mere sajaan mere saath yuhi chalna
badle ga raang zamana par tum nahi badalna
meri maang yuhi bharna taare hazar ban ke
aye ho meri zindagi me tum bahar banke...❤️


Turning to face all the family members that had gathered there to welcome Bani home he said "Now everyone, you've to introduce yourselves one by one so form a line and please...go easy on her!"

Everyone burst out laughing and obeyed. The first in line was Dadi

"Oye meri Rani Mukherjee, I'm your Dadi."

"Bani, I'm Aditya. You call me Aditya Uncle."

Pia, Saahil, Ranveer, Raashi and Pushkar followed suit introducing themselves and either hugged her or touched her feet. Jai left them to go meet Rohit at the door.

"Hey Rohit, how are you? And where's Anu, you haven't brought her with you?"

"I'm fine, Mamaji. Anu didn't feel comfortable meeting Mamiji because she has just lost her baby and..."

"I understand. You tell her that I'm very proud of her!" he said as they walked back to join the rest of the family. He sat on the couch next to Bani and put his hand around her.

"What happened Bani, why are there tears in your eyes? They don't belong there!"

"Mr. Walia, she's crying because Saahil told her a joke....and you know how bad his jokes are!" Rano remarked, making everyone laugh.

Bani: "No it's not that, his joke wasn't that bad! It just felt so good to see you all here. Those were tears of joy! Anyways, why do you call him Mr. Walia, Rano? He's your Jeeja...call him that!"

Everyone became quiet on hearing what Bani said. Saahil took Rano's hand into his own and squeezed it reassuringly.

"Je...Jee...Jeejaji...!" Rano stammered.

Bani: "Now, that's much better, isn't it Jai?'

Jai: "Yes, much better!"

Jai to Mausi: "Where's Jigyaasa?"

"She's in her room, maybe she not feeling well," Mausi lied. She knew Jigyaasa hated every bone in Bani's body and would never come down to welcome her.

"It's okay Mausi, I can meet her later," Bani said then leaning over to whisper into Jai's ears, "I'm tired, will you take me up to our room?"

Jai: "Sure. Ok everyone it's time for Bani to rest. I'm going to take her up."

Mausi: "Theek hai beta...aur suno I'll send up your dinner with Tony, so there's no need for the two of you to come down here again."

Jai and Bani: "Thank you, Mausi"

When they reached the stairs she squeezed his hand suddenly, startling him. He understood her hesitation and gathered her in his arms, carrying her all the way to their bedroom.

"Awww look at them, they're so cute together," Raashi said.

Rano: "Yes, I hope they stay like this and things don't go back to the way they were...they make an awesome couple...don't u agree Pia?"

"Yes they certainly do...NOT" Pia said to Rano the "NOT" inaudible. She was green with envy. "If I hadn't married that loser Pushkar who totally ruined my life then that could have been me in Mr. Walia's arms instead of Di!!"

Rano and Raashi walked away from Pia to join their respective husbands...noting the scowl on her face.

Bani walked into the room followed by Jai and she threw herself carelessly on the bed.

Jai: "Bani ...I have some work to finish in my study. I will come to join you for dinner. Will you be okay?"

Bani: "No I will not...I don't want to be alone right now. Come join me, you can finish your work later."

It was too good an offer for Jai to refuse...and besides he wouldn't get much work done as his thoughts would linger on her only so he took off his jacket and scarf and went to join her in bed.

Jai: "Okay... I will on one condition, you will not sleep, we will stay up until dinner comes...in fact we will stay up all night...!"

Bani saw his mischievous smile and slapped his hand, "Jai Walia what is going on in that evil mind of yours?!"

Jai: "What? You didn't even let me finish...I was going to say we'll stay up all night talking!"

"Yea right!!...With a sexy husband like you who wants to stay up all night talking???" she replied naughtily.

She rolled over to where he was and rested her head on his chest.

"Bani...I love you!" he declared as he hugged her tightly.

Bani: "I know...and I love you too."

❤️...gar me jo rooth jao to tum mujhe manana
thama hai haath mera phir umar bhar nibhana
mujhe chod ke na jana waade hazar karke...❤️


They stayed like that for the next few minutes...enjoying their hugging position and absorbing that beautiful moment. Jai smiled, silently promising much more beautiful moments like this to his wife.

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Jigyaasa was furious, not only was "Bani Bhabi" back in the house...but she was there to stay forever!

How on earth could Jai Bhaiya accept her after everything she's done to him? He's crazy...they're all crazy. I don't even think she has amnesia...that must be another one of her schemes! I will not let her get away with any of this...mai Jai Bhaiya ke saare property apne naam pe transfer karke hi rahoongi!

She got even more furious when she remembered her conversation with Ranveer yesterday.

Ranveer: "Mom, I've changed now...I've finally realized my mistakes...I have realized now that whatever we were doing wasn't right. It was outright evil!"

Jigyaasa: "What are you saying? How can you say that now when we are this close to getting everything? What is wrong with you, you idiot?!!"

Ranveer: "I have finally come to my senses, Mom and I think its time you do too. How can you deceive your own brother like this? Whatever he owns he has worked very hard for it and I intend to do the same! I have a wife now and I wish to have a family of my own soon. I can't do this to Mamaji...and I won't let you do it either!"

Jigyaasa: "But Beta, whatever I'm doing is for you...for Anu and for Saahil, so that you all will have a secure future!"

Ranveer: "I don't believe that for a minute and I'll never let you ruin his life...more than you already have!"


She was astounded to hear her son speak to her in that manner. What the hell happened to him???
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Jai called for Tony to clean up the room after they ate and he went to take a shower before retiring for the night. Bani helped Tony and then decided to see what was showing on tv as she waited for Jai to finish. She flipped through the channels carelessly...finding nothing interesting to watch.

Jai: "Bani...I done, you can use the b..."

Bani suddenly started to scream. "Aaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!"



So that's part 3. I hope u guys liked it! I made it longer...just for u! 😊 Comments and Criticisms are equally welcome and will be highly appreciated!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks hun for the longer part
WHy did Bani scream? 😕 Did she get her memory back?
thank god ranveer is good 😛
plz write soon

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