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Posted: 19 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Tazmanian_Devil

wow! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
That was such a sweet fanfic with such a lovely ending!!
i enjoyed reading every bit of it.
i would love reading another fanfic from you soon Sabs.

Luv Taz

hi taz,

sweet fanfic for sweet readers like u ๐Ÿ˜› am glad u enjoyed it. will definitely try and write another one soon esp after all the positive encouragement i have received for my first effort.

love..sabs

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Posted: 19 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: maria-n

Wonderful end Sabsj!
I would have liked to read more, but since it has a perfect , completed shape as a not so short fanfic,I guess it would just have got spoilt if you'd made it longer.
Sadly I couldn't understand the Hindi poem in the end.

I wonder how many romantic lines in French they would have tried in Paris? (Paris est fantastique seulement pourquoi tu as ici avec moi!)(This line should be with several mistakes though)

Or perhaps "Je t'aime avec tout mon coeur" was all that they need! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Sabsj I almost can't believe it was your first ff, would love, like most of us, to read more!

Thank you! ๐Ÿ‘

hi maria, am glad u did not mind me ending the ff so quickly, i just cud not stretch it any longer, i guess my imagination is very limited ๐Ÿ˜‰

it is a hindi song in the end and not a poem, it basically is about a guy telling his girl that whether u stay in my heart or my soul, i want to see your face in front of my eyes all my life. it is a beautiful song from the movie Nazar which means sight.

Paris is very romantic, guess v can let our imagination run wild just picturing j&b there.

i too cannot believe i managed to pull of my first ff ......... not a bad response also, very encouraging. it would be my pleasure to start on the second one, will do that very soon, have an idea already, just need to pen it down.

till then take care.

love...sabs

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Posted: 19 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: jeenal20

gr8 ff
loved it
so thoughtful
cant say about it
that it was just awesomeeeeeeeee
thanx dear for giving me such an experience while reading ur ff

thanks jeenal20, all your posts were very encouraging. am glad my ff could be of help to u. will start another one soon.

take care....sabs

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Posted: 19 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: sweetu144

๐Ÿ‘Sabs..... WOW just wow!
Such a cute ending ๐Ÿ˜ณ !
You truly do write very well..like i said before i love the idea of having french dialougues...makes it sound so different ๐Ÿ˜› .
I do hope that you will be writing more, as i really did enjoy reading your ff.
You do truly have a way with words...they all flow so well together.
I couldn't help but get emotional when Bani and Jai met...when he turned her around ๐Ÿ˜ญ ...i don't know...that was really heartmarming!
Do hope that you write more. i loved this ff!
Luv ya
Sweetu

P.s. Vous crivez trs bien, cette ff tait vraiment superbe! ๐Ÿ˜‰ and i am telling the truth!

hi sweetu, thanks a lot sweetie for ur lovely msg in french at the end, i am honoured. just wish i cud reply back in french too, but i know i would make a mess of it.

i aimed at making the ending emotional, cried a bit while writing it too, am glad u guys liked it too. seeing the great response i got, i will definitely get down to writing another one soon.

till then take care.

love....sabs

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Posted: 19 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: pondy

amazing amazing amazing Sab ๐Ÿ‘

wow after a long time im reading a fairy tale how butiful and romantic can it be i love them coz they have happy endings with the one they love and here the beast(jai)found his beauty(bani)back.....wowwww

You gave a fabulous ff Sab thanks for your gr8 work ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ and this is for you ๐Ÿค—

hi s,

thanks so much, cinderella, sleeping beauty and beauty and the beast were my favs as a kid, always dreamt i would meet my prince like that some day.

i told u i am a succor for happy endings ............. thanks for the hug and all the support. hopefully i will write another one soon.

take care....sabs

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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
๐Ÿค— Thats for u for such a sweet and perfect ending....I loved it...T๐Ÿ˜ณhank u so much for this ff...I cudnt help smiling while reading it, but now I am already regrettng tht its over... ๐Ÿ˜ญ Can we have another one again soon???...Please... ๐Ÿ˜ณ
lots of love
Rupy
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: heyitsrupy

๐Ÿค— Thats for u for such a sweet and perfect ending....I loved it...T๐Ÿ˜ณhank u so much for this ff...I cudnt help smiling while reading it, but now I am already regrettng tht its over... ๐Ÿ˜ญ Can we have another one again soon???...Please... ๐Ÿ˜ณ
lots of love
Rupy

hi rupy,

thanks so much for the hug. i told u i was a succor for sweet and happy endings ........ am a hopless romantic at heart. am glad my ff managed to bring a smile to ur face, but pls do not regret that it ended, i did not want to just drag it on, i would have totally messed it up and lost the essence of the whole story, that is why i ended it.

don't worry will def write another one thanks to all ur good wishes and encouragement. have an idea already, just have to start penning it down.

till then take care and keep smiling.

love...sabs

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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
aaawwww.....that was soooo nice... a perfect happy ending.... ๐Ÿค—
I loved it... U did compelete justice.....

๐Ÿ‘

Ok now coming to the next one.... dekho .... we need u motivated... so jab tak Jai Walia na mile tum Pooja Walia se kaam chalao...(atleast i'm a real Walia ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† ) and waise bhi wo kahe ya main kahoon ek hi baat hai na... ๐Ÿ˜†
so please can we have another ff soooooooooooon

Poo
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: sabsj

hi s,

thanks so much, cinderella, sleeping beauty and beauty and the beast were my favs as a kid, always dreamt i would meet my prince like that some day.

i told u i am a succor for happy endings ............. thanks for the hug and all the support. hopefully i will write another one soon.

take care....sabs

Well Sab those are my fav ones too but what a coincidence me too had the feeling what if they turn out to be real, i mean the fairies give you hope and the dream come true kinda stories smtimes they are childish to read them at this age but still the essance is the same LOVE.

See you soon with another fairy tale๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 19 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

aaawwww.....that was soooo nice... a perfect happy ending.... ๐Ÿค—
I loved it... U did compelete justice.....

๐Ÿ‘

Ok now coming to the next one.... dekho .... we need u motivated... so jab tak Jai Walia na mile tum Pooja Walia se kaam chalao...(atleast i'm a real Walia ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† ) and waise bhi wo kahe ya main kahoon ek hi baat hai na... ๐Ÿ˜†
so please can we have another ff soooooooooooon

Poo

hi poo. happy ending likhna hi tha, nahi toh mera "the end" ho jata๐Ÿ˜†

am glad u liked it all including the fairytale ending, i know it was more for kids, but this was my first attempt so i guess sab maaf hain ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

as for the next ff, thik hain jab tak jaidas turns back into the jai walia that i fell in love with, main pooja walia se hi kaam chala loongi ๐Ÿ˜† ........... dekhte hain kya hoga iss walia ke raaj mein ๐Ÿ˜‰

will def write a new one soon, got a story in mind, just have to start penning it all down.

till then take care and keep inspiring me.

love...sabs

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