Originally posted by: maria-n
Wonderful end Sabsj!
I would have liked to read more, but since it has a perfect , completed shape as a not so short fanfic,I guess it would just have got spoilt if you'd made it longer.
Sadly I couldn't understand the Hindi poem in the end.
I wonder how many romantic lines in French they would have tried in Paris? (Paris est fantastique seulement pourquoi tu as ici avec moi!)(This line should be with several mistakes though)
Or perhaps "Je t'aime avec tout mon coeur" was all that they need! ๐ณ
Sabsj I almost can't believe it was your first ff, would love, like most of us, to read more!
Thank you! ๐
hi maria, am glad u did not mind me ending the ff so quickly, i just cud not stretch it any longer, i guess my imagination is very limited ๐
it is a hindi song in the end and not a poem, it basically is about a guy telling his girl that whether u stay in my heart or my soul, i want to see your face in front of my eyes all my life. it is a beautiful song from the movie Nazar which means sight.
Paris is very romantic, guess v can let our imagination run wild just picturing j&b there.
i too cannot believe i managed to pull of my first ff ......... not a bad response also, very encouraging. it would be my pleasure to start on the second one, will do that very soon, have an idea already, just need to pen it down.
till then take care.
love...sabs