Silence says it all ff prt31 pg65 NOTE67 - Page 30

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Posted: 19 years ago
sweetu yaar ! I ahve no clue wut "trip" ur on.. buh i wish u all da luck šŸ˜•. LOL.. i jsut loved the part.. sorry i havent been able writeback... srsly... life'z reallie hectic deze daiz !! i luved all the new Partz... lol..oh and are u also gonna write MP.. šŸ˜‰ if u r plz do let us know šŸ˜‰

Oh yea.... man i asked u bout ur age? lol... i guess ihz tru wut they say... There'z only one secret that a woman can hide and that secret is her age.. šŸ˜‰

PLZ AAB TAU BATA DO !!!.... ITNA MAT TARSAO YAAR !! lol... catch ya la8er... And once again GREAT PARTS !! 😳

šŸ¤—Luv ya loadz šŸ¤—

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Edited by square1 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetu144


Nabz jaan....yeh kya hai...ahem....don't make funnnnn of me..it's not funny...you try doing what i have to do....its seriously madness!

Aww jaanšŸ¤—...........you know I'm joking..........but seriously, have fun!.......you won't be able to do all that stuff in 10 years time!........you'll look back and remember how much fun it was!

Anyways..........continue soon!............I wanna read before I go to sleep!šŸ˜›

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Posted: 19 years ago
part 20 was awesome sweetu! šŸ‘
it gives me chills when I imagine him whispering "Baneee..." in that sexy voice of his!😳 😃
plzz continue ASAP...ad all the best on your trip! šŸ˜‰ 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 21
Guys I am not feeling well and I have a trip to go to this Monday…pray that I am well for it….its unfortunately important that I go!
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Nothing can be heard but her faint throbbing heartbeats.
Both their breathing is heavy and raspy and their hands are interlinked.

His eyes are closed enjoying….the kiss so passionate so filled with longing.
He moves his hands through her hair whispering…
"Bani"
No response.

She is lost in a world of her own….just wanting him ….
All anger and frustration is forgotten it's just him and her…
Every time his voice hits her ears her body tenses.

He unlinks one of his hands drawing away from the kiss only to stare at her and her heavy and laboured breaths.
He smiles knowing that he had caused it.
He trails his finger down her neck….feeling her tense….yet not protest as it travels….
He once more covers her lips with his….

She gasps as the potion of his touch takes over….he is such a good kisser…it sends her mind churning…how would he be in….but then…her lips part open….
And then it hits her…..
"Jai…."
Her eyes fly open…reality hits her and it all comes flooding back…..
She feels his lips on her neck…..so soft…..she notes her hands interlinked strongly in his…so gentle…..
She once more closes her eyes….allowing her passion to fuse through her body….yet then her eyes open once more…..and she realizes all….
She struggles from his grip only to hear him whisper in protest…
"Baneee….what are you doing" tone is soft so gentle…filled with a tiny minute tingle of threat…as if warning….
She struggles once more making it obvious of her discomfort yet his hold is strong…he ignores her protest understanding her…knowing her…knowing what she really wnated...
His voice touches her ears….
"Banee….trust me…" His lips trail her neck… and then she whispers…
"Mr.walia…please…" Her tone is desperate and scared….
His lips once more covers hers…their hand is still interlinked….his one hand holds the back of her neck…the kiss is forceful yet still gentle…
Minutes pass and she finally gives in…allowing the fire that he has ignited to fuse her body…she shivers….

His lips once more move from hers…nuzzling her neck………
"Baneee….trust me….don't be scared" voice is soft and whispery…
"I won't touch you…" trails his one finger down her neck making her body throb….
"I promise baneee…." Tone is harsh and whispery…
He steps back from her….savouring all….how much self control can a man have…???????

He observes her frame….he knows what she wants…..but he won't free himself to have her…till she readily accepts that what she wants is what he does too….
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There you go part 21…I have written part 22…will post it soon!
Guys I am feeling really sick…I can't be sick for Monday…pray that I am well!
I do hope that no one found this part boring or inappropriate…as it truly was not ment to be like that!
Sorry if it was inapropriate!
Thank you all once again for your sweet comments!
Luv ya
Sweetu.
P.S. I hope that no one hates or is dissapointed with this part...i don't actually like it...i think its boringšŸ˜•
will be posting part 22 later (its already written up) or tomorrow!
Edited by sweetu144 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
😃 plz cont soon!i loved it!!i hope you feel bettter! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
hope you feel better soon sweetu, hey incase you don't get better keep a packet of Dayquil with you it should help you make it through the day 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
Sweetu jaan, I hope u feel better soon, and ya I understand for the delay!!! Those last two parts were simply fab!!!! I love the way your write and just everything about each and every one of your parts!!! Jaan please continue soon, can't wait for Part 22!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
sweetu that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awww ou are sick .
feel better sweety (hehe sweety -sweetu: see the connection) !!!!!!!
sorry i am rambling....
please continue soon!!!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow that was gr88.. so intense 😳 i hope u feel betta before ur trip on monday - so enjoy ur trip.. get some rest.. thanx fo continuing even though u not feelin good.. šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ OMG i just discovered your fanfic today and spent 1 1/2 hours reading it totally glued, wanted to make a post at page 4 but had to wait till pg 38. WOW really amazing and awsome, please continue, its 12"30 hear right know and if my mom wakes up she is going to kill me. šŸ˜†

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