A tryst with fate - updated final chap 11

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Sujata

@Garf

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Posted: 19 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: gujuhero
tomorrow ..................man i will be dead by than.... this is so good please continue soon.. if you don't wan't me to die

Hey gujuhero, hope you find chapter five as good as the other chapters...and I seriously don't want you to die...so please aisa kuch mat karna...😊 and thankyou sooooo much for liking my fanfic...

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sabsj

@sabsj

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Posted: 19 years ago

#32

hey garf, awesome ff, really addictive and so different. love the banter bet j & b ........... keep it up and keep more parts coming.

btw, the song Life is a Rollercoaster ...... is my all time favourite. can't wait for the next part 👏

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Pooja

@pooja.walia

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Posted: 19 years ago

#33

Awsome part sweety...
My my.... this guy sure has the guts...why wouldn't he... He's JAI WALIA.. 😉
but honestly...i loved every word u wrote... wonder how it would feel to see this on the show... but ekta mayi can't let us have this pleasure...can she... 😡
He's well aware of his effect on women.... 😳 .. boy oh boy...n has no qulams publicising it... 😉
N now he wants tea....bechaari Bani...must be cursing the moment she asked him for coffee..... 😆 😆 😆
Please Continue soooooooooooon 🤗
Poo

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heyitsrupy

@heyitsrupy

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Posted: 19 years ago

#34

Hi..just caught up with ur ff..Its really great and thoroughly enjoyable.. 👏 ...Amazingly well-written...And I like the fact that the rain seems to be everywhere....lends it a great atmosphere...Will be looking fwd to it eagerly... 😳
love
Rupy