FF:Kyun!HoGayaNa...ImpNote:PG19:Plz Read - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
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angel.41 Your FF is sooooooo good please continue it very sooon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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enjoyed the part plz do continue sweetie!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 1 IS ON PAGE 1, PART 2 IS ON PAGE 2, PART 3 IS ON PAGE 3.. PREVIEW OF PART 4 IS ON PAGE 3, AND PART 4 IS ON PAGE 4, PART 5 IS ON PAGE 5, PART 6 IS ON PAGE 8

Hey everyone, thanx for all the exciting and motivating comments.. they've really helped. Hope you enjoy this part too..

Part 5 -

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!

The Party went exactly as planned by everyone, and boy - was Poohja ever surprised.

P: Aww... thank you guys sooo much, you all are sooo sweet!
P: Oh Bani, I never imagined sucha grand surprise! So thoughtful of you.. thank you sooooo much.. I luv you soo much lil sis.. [Gives her a hug]
B: [Hugs her back] I love you too di.. I'm so glad you loved it. Anyways, come.. let's cut the cake.

Pooja blew the candles and cut the cake. Everything was nearly done, when Jai walks in at the end moment - with Priya.

J: Hey everyone!! I'm here! Hope you guy's haven't started without me!!

Everyone stared at Jai in surprise. He's late,Bani thought.

Bani, seeing this, walks up to Jai.

B: Jai! Where have you been? It's almost 9...
J: Uhh.. Bani I..
B: You missed the cutting of the cake.. Di opened most of the presents..
J: Actually, I..
B: You also missed the dance! How could you forget Jai! I told you to come earlier..
J: Bani listen to me for a sec..
B: Oh! And you didn't even help arranging.. how unorganized of you Jai..
J: Enough Bani!!
B: [Surprised] ...
J: Stop telling me what to do!! I've been noticing since the afternoon.. you've always ben telling me what to do and what not! First, you're telling me to watch my tounge because it could influence my little brother! God!! He's MY little brother! I think I know what's good for him and what's not! Then you're telling me to help set up party preprations instead of spending time with Priya! [Looks over to Priya] And now you're passing judgement on me as if you're my wife?!! Cut it out Bani, it's my life! I'll do whatever I want to do with it, you dig?!
B: [Getting teary] Jai..
J: Hmph! [Throws the gift on the floor] Sorry for the inconvenience, Pooja..Happy Brithday. See you all, [He says in anger, and then leaves.]

After Jai leaves, Priya goes with him. Bani goes running up to her room crying. Everyone is left shocked with looks like "What was that?!"

P: This party's over guys... everyone can go home.. I need to go check on her..

well guys, sorry for the long wait.. hope you like this part, I promise to publish part 6 and 7 soon before Monday since no school on weekends.. have fun reading!

Edited by angel.41 - 18 years ago
jigna_07 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yess i am the first person!!!!!
that was awesome!
please do continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
nice part... 👏 👏
how rude! jai.. 😡 ...plzz continue soon!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice part!! i loved it.. jai u made bani cry...!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
Nice part.
How rude of Jai can't believe he did that.
Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 awesome part
cant wait for the next part
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momtajbegum1 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
realy good part cant wait for your next part,
keep it up.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome!!! mean sexii jai... oh plz dun make jai fall for priya (nooooooooooo).. anyways-- i can't wait-- plz cont. sooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!

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