Pyar To Hona.....-FF LAST PART!!!PG. 55 - Page 11

i quickly wrote part 11. so here it is. Oh and i have made a bit changes in the story. I've decided to make jai 30, instead of 35.

Part 11:

Bani heartbeat increases, and she begins to sweat. She stays in her seat, panic struck. "what am I gonna do?," she thought hopelessly to herself. "I don't want to see Vijay, and I don't want him to see me!". Bani looks back and watches pushkar and Vijay, stuck to their spots, talking and hugging. "Should I leave?….I have time to…," bani thinks to herself. She quickly gets out of her seat, and starts to walk away, but stops by a confused Tanisha.

Tanisha: Bani? Where are you going?
Bani: I'm going to the bathroom! (she quickly says)

Bani quickly runs over to the other end of the restaurant, pushes open the huge glass door, and leaves. Tanisha watches her run pass the bathroom and go outside. She gets out of her seat and is about to follow when pushkar and his friend come over to the table.

Pushkar: Tanisha, this is my friend Vijay. We go way back!
Tanisha: hi, Vijay.
Vijay: hello.

Pushkar notices that bani isn't around and looks all over the restaurant.

Pushkar: Tanisha, where's bani?
Tanisha: She just left.
Vijay: wait, bani?
Pushkar: (ignores Vijay) why'd she leave?!
Tanisha: I don't know. She told me that she was going to the bathroom, but she just left the restaurant.
Pushkar: wonder why she did that?

Vijay becomes confused and is in deep thoughts. "Bani was here? My bani?…no, they might be talking about someone else…"

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Bani walks down the hot sidewalk, relieved.

Bani: that was a close one. (she says to herself)

She checks her watch, and sees that it's time to go back to the office. Bani searches the streets for a rickshaw, but sees none. She can't go back to Tanisha, because Vijay is with her. Bani looks around and sees a bench, near a store, so she sits on it and waits to see for a rickshaw. Bani's attention wanders to the sky, she watches the white puffy clouds turn slowly into gray angry clouds. After a minute or so, it's starts drizzling rain. "no worries, it isn't raining that much," bani says to herself. Another minute goes by, and it starts pouring rain. Bani squeals and quickly gets off the bench and runs to shelter. Bani's clothes and hair are mostly wet. Feeling cold, bani rubs her hands against her bare arms, trying to make them warm.

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Jai is driving his white Mercedes, on his way home to meet his Mausi, who has just arrived. You can tell that Jai is excited. (there is going to be a little change in the story, I have decided to make jai younger. So he is going to be 30 instead of 35.) He is going to meet his mausi, who is like his mother to him, after the longest time. The last time he had seen her, was at the airport, dropping her off. Jai was 25, then. It's been 5 years since he had last seen her, but it feels like a century. Mausi is the only one who jai loves with all his heart. After jai's mother and father died from a car accident, when he was 12, Mausi took care of him and gave motherly love to him. If mausi didn't take him in, who knows what would have happened to him.

Jai looks through his window, looking at the heavy rain pouring down. As he looks out of the window, he sees someone familiar, and a huge smile emerges on his handsome face.

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Bani begins shivering and continues to look out on the streets for any rickshaws going by. There are none in sight, but a white Mercedes with tinted black windows pulls over to the side, near bani. She continues to watch the car park right in front of her. The engine turns off, and the driver's door opens. Bani's heart flips, when she sees who the driver is. She begins smiling at him. Jai walks over to bani, with an umbrella.

Bani: you have no idea, how glad I am to see you.
Jai: what are you doing out here?
Bani: Trying to get back to work.
Jai: here, come with me.

Jai brings the umbrella over bani's head, and they both walk over to his car. He seats bani in first and then gets into his seat.

Jai: You're soaking wet.

Bani looks at herself and sees that her suit was stuck onto her. You could also see the outline of her bra.

Bani: yeah, I know.
Jai: should I take you back to your house, so you can change?
Bani: no, it's ok. I just need to get back to work.
Jai: you're going to get a cold, bani. No, I'll take you back to your house.

Jai starts the engine, makes a U-turn to take bani home.

Jai: so, what were you doing outside of the office, in the first place?
Bani: well, it was lunch break so Tanisha, Pushkar, and I went out to eat.
Jai: well, then why didn't you go back with one of them?
Bani: well, Pushkar invited another one of his friends, and it turns out that his friend was Vijay.
Jai: oh.
Bani: yeah, so I didn't want to meet him, so I just left. And now, here I am.


Jai's car stops moving.

Bani: why'd we stop.
Jai: well, bani. If you pay attention to your surroundings, we're stuck in traffic.

Bani looks in front of her, and sees a ton of cars in front of them. She puts her back against the car seats and sighs.

Bani: I'm gonna be late for work.
Jai: don't worry about it, you can have the rest of the day off.
Bani: no, I couldn't do that, it's only my first day.
Jai: So? Plus, you did a lot of work today, and I can see that you're tired.
Bani: how'd you know?
Jai: I'm the boss, I know everything.

Bani grins to herself. "maybe he was watching me…," she says hopefully to herself. Jai begins to get frustrated from the very slow traffic, and makes a turn elsewhere.

Bani: (confused) where are we going?
Jai: it's going to take forever to get you back home. I'll just take you to my house. My niece can let you borrow clothes of hers.
Bani: ..your house?
Jai: yeah, my house. Why?
Bani: …nothing. It's fine.

Jai turns the car around and drives straight ahead.

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Pia walks into the Walia Group of Industries office, in search for her big sister, bani. She is wearing a nice lacy white tang top with a very cute looking short white skirt, and has her hair out, curled. In her hand, she's holding a brown paper bag. Pia looks around the office, but doesn't see bani anywhere, so she decides to ask someone. Pia goes up to the first person she sees, who is a pretty tall, handsome looking man.

Pia: um, excuse me.

Pushkar turns around and looks at pia. He puts the file that he was reading, down. He examines pia, and smiles to himself with approval.

Pushkar: you are excused.
Pia: Do you know by any chance, where I can find Bani Dixit?
Pushkar: well, first of all, why do you need to meet her? (he asks while flirting with her)
Pia: (puts her hand on her hip) because I am her sister.

Pushkar walks around pia, slowly and continues to look at her.

Pushkar: has anyone told you, that you are very beautiful? (changing the subject)
Pia: (rolls her eyes) can you just tell me where Bani Dixit is?
Pushkar: I can't believe you're bani sister!
Pia: (sighs) forget it! I'll ask someone else.

Pia turns away from pushkar and begins to walk away. She is stopped by pushkar holding her back, by holding onto her hand. She looks at him, very pissed off. Pushkar walks up to her, a little too close.

Pushkar: The last time I saw her, was at lunch. She's not here anymore
Pia: what? But, I made lunch for her. (holds up the paper brown bag to show pushkar)
Pushkar: how about I have it?

Pushkar reaches for the lunch bag, but pia moves it away from him. She glares at him and walks away towards the exit. Pushkar smiles to himself and leans against a desk. "Beautiful….", he says to himself, as he watches pia leave the building.

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As bani enters jai's mansion, she comes across family pictures. Bani looks at them, while walking past them, with jai by her side. One picture catches bani's attention, and she stops in her tracks. She looks at the picture, with jai and a middle aged woman. In this picture, jai might have been in his 20's. The middle aged woman is hugging jai, affectionately. Bani smiles to herself. For some reason, the picture of jai and the woman made her feel happy inside, especially the woman. Jai walks on ahead, without noticing that bani had stopped walking and was looking at the picture with him and mausi. He looks behind, and sees that bani is at the end of the hallway. Jai walks back to her.

Jai: bani?

Bani snaps out of it and looks at jai.

Bani: hain?
Jai: come on.
Bani: oh, right. Um, jai?
Jai: yeah.
Bani: (points at the picture) whose this woman?
Jai: (smiles) you'll find out soon.

Jai leads her to the living room, where a few people are seated down. As bani and jai enter, everyone stands up. One of the people, that bani recognizes, is the woman from the picture. Jai runs to her and hugs her.

Jai: Mausi!

Mausi laughs and hugs jai back. They share a sweet moment together, and catch up with each other's lives. Jai then introduces bani to everyone.

Jai: Bani, first of all. This is my mausi. (he points to her)

Bani says her greetings and takes blessing from Mausi. Mausi is happy to see that bani is a very cultured girl.

Jai: This is aditya, my best friend. (points to him)
Bani: yes, I know him. We've me before. (shakes hands with aditya)
Adi: nice to see you again.
Jai: This is my older sister, jigyasa (points to her)

Jigs gives bani a fake smile.

Jai: and this is, anu. My niece.
Anu: nice to meet you. (shakes hands with bani)

Jai kindly requests anu to lend bani some of her clothes. Anu obeys immediately. She takes bani by her arm and takes her upstairs to her room. As bani and anu leave, mausi talks to jai about bani.

Mausi: munna, you've brought home a very beautiful girl. She's beautiful, very well cultured, and very kind. I'm starting to like her all ready.
Jai: (smiles at her) I had a feeling you were gonna say that, mausi....


hope you guys liked it! 😛

part 12 on pg. 18

awww...thats sooo cute...wow now things are gonna role with Maasi in the picture lol...anywayz it waz reallie good!!..plz continue soon 👏 👏 👏 👏

that was very sweet.loved it.plz cont soon. 😊

that was an awesome part.....massi is the fairy god mother 😉 ......plzzz cont soon!!!!

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Pushkar has no idea what he's getting into 😆

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plzz continue it soon

i won't be able to post the next part until late tomorrow, because i am going to Kings Dominion (an amusement park) and i have no clue when i'll be back, but i promise to post the next part up tomorrow! 😉

PART 12:

Jai grins to himself, while he watches bani laughing with mausi and aditya. "she looks even more beautiful when she laughs…," jai thinks to himself. Jai can't seem to take his eyes off of bani, especially because of the clothes she is wearing. She looks nice with the lacy white top, showing some of her midriff, and light faded jeans. Jai can tell that bani feels uncomfortable wearing anu's clothes, because she keeps trying to pull down her shirt, and tries to adjust the jeans. He laughs lightly seeing bani doing this.

Bani just can't stop blushing and feeling shy. She very well knows that Jai is staring at her with his gorgeous eyes. Her body immediately heats up, by jai's staring. She tries to stay focused on the conversation that she is having with aditya and mausi, but is too distracted by jai. Bani pushes a strand of her hair behind her ear, shy fully.

Mausi: you are very adorable, bani beti. (pinches bani's rosy cheeks)

Bani, still very shy, smiles and looks the other way towards jai. Anu comes walking into the living room, with bani's clothes, in a bag. She hands them over to bani, carefully.

Anu: here you go. All dry.
Bani: Thank you.
Anu: no problem.

Bani looks at her watch, and sees that it's quite late, and getting dark outside.

Bani: um, mausi. I think I should leave. It's getting quite dark outside, and I am probably being waited at home.
Mausi: (disappointed) oh, what a shame. And we were having so much fun.
Jai: (interrupts) …bani, I'll drop you off.
Bani: (smiles) ok.
Mausi: Drive safely, and I do hope to see you again, beti.
Bani: me too, mausi.

Bani takes blessings from mausi and says her goodbyes to everyone. She follows jai outside of the mansion. As they are walking towards jai's car, jai asks bani a question.

Jai: bani, (looking at her clothes) do you always wear suits?
Bani: no, not always. I occasionally wear shirts and jeans. Why?
Jai: no, just asking. You look nice.
Bani: (blushes) thanks.

Bani and jai get inside of his car and drive out of the driveway.

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Pia enters the dim Bombay restaurant and approaches a waiter. She looks beautiful with her hair curled out and wearing a tight black dress that comes down to her knees.

Waiter: Do you have any reservations, ma'am?

Pia looks around the restaurant and sees the person that she has come to meet.

Pia: (looks back at the waiter) yes, under the name Malhotra….Vijay Malhotra….

The waiter begins to lead pia to the table, but she tells him that she knows the way and leaves him behind. Pia walks over to the small table in the corner, with Vijay waiting impatiently. He is looking down, when pia approaches him. Vijay finally looks up and is surprised to see Pia in front of him. He stands up.

Vijay: Pia?…what are you doing here?
Pia: why are you so surprised to see me, Vijay? Who were you expecting? …Bani di?..
Vijay: (silent)
Pia: Did you really think that bani di would come here to meet you, to forgive you after you hurt her?
Vijay: (still silent)
Pia: (understands his silence) I didn't think so…
Vijay: pia, first hear me out.
Pia: (puts her hand up to silence him) I don't want to hear anything you say! You are going to listen to me….stay away from my sister! Don't even try coming near her or trying to contact her again.
Vijay: pia--
Pia: you hurt her, Vijay.
Vijay: I didn't mean to--

Pia turns away from Vijay, is about to leave, but is held back because of Vijay's firm hand over her wrist. She becomes angry, quickly lets go of his grip, and faces him. Pia stares at Vijay with full hatred and gives him a harsh slap.

Pia: Don't you dare touch me!!!

Vijay is taken aback and looks at pia, puzzled. Pia eyes a glass with water, takes it in her hand, and throws the water at Vijay. He did not expect this and becomes pissed off.

Vijay: What the hell pia?!

Everyone in the restaurant hear raised voices and turn to watch pia and Vijay. Pia glares at Vijay for one last time before leaving. He watches pia walking, frustrated, out of the restaurant, and doesn't stop her.

Vijay grabs a napkin and begins to dap it onto his wet shirt. He stops drying his shirt and begins to wonder to himself. "So this means that…bani didn't get my message…".


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Three Weeks Later:

Bani stays rooted to her spot, staring at the noisy, crowded nightclub in front of her. She watches Pia and Rano walk quickly towards the entrance. Pia turns around, before entering, and sees that bani is still staring at the nightclub, looking dazed. She walks back over to her.

Pia: di, chalia!
Bani: …I don't know, Pia. I'm really not in the mood.
Pia: You may not be in the mood right now, but when we get in there, we'll start having fun. Trust me! And plus, you're looking very beautiful today!

It was true, bani does look very nice today. She is wearing her nice black skirt, that stops a bit above her knees, and a black tang top, with a silver border across the top, that shows some of her midriff. She is also wearing her silver hoops, her B necklace, and her nice silver high heels, to match her outfit. Her hair is a bit wavy and curly, but looks nice out.

Bani: (still hesitating)
Pia: please, it's your birthday, have some fun, di. (she pleads to her)
Bani: (gives in) ok. Let's go.

Pia smiles brightly at her sister, and takes her hand in hers to lead her inside. They meet up with Rano, who is standing against a counter, looking at everyone dancing and having a good time.

Pia: Come on, Rano! We didn't come here to watch other people have fun.

Pia also takes rano's hands in hers, and leads both of her sisters to the middle of the dance floor. Pia, of course, starts dancing right away, and rano follows. Bani watches her sisters dance, and smiles to herself, enjoying watching her sisters' happiness. Pia takes bani's hands and moves them side to side, to make her start dancing. For some reason, bani wasn't in the mood to dance, or to be in the nightclub right now. She was excited before, but now…all of a sudden her mood changed. Bani feels a gentle tap on her right shoulder, and she turns around to see her best friends. Bani squeals with happiness to see Tanisha and Pushkar standing right in front of her. Bani gives both of them a warm big hug.

Bani: (surprised) what are you two doing here?
Tanisha: your sister, pia, invited us here. Telling us that it's your birthday. Why didn't you tell us?
Bani: honestly, I forgot, but was reminded this afternoon by pia.
Pushkar: Happy Birthday Bani! (hands over a small wrapped box, to bani)

Bani takes it from him and smiles gratefully. Tanisha hands a small gift bag to Bani. She takes her gifts and walks over to the table, that is reserved for them, and places them onto the table. Bani walks back through the crowd, towards her sisters and friends. She feels a firm grip on her left wrist, and is pulled forcefully towards an unknown man. Bani stares at the man, nervously. He looks about to be maybe 4 or 5 years older than her. Obviously, he was quite a handsome guy, but appears to be very drunk. Bani could tell by the strong smell of alcohol coming from him. His green eyes stare at bani, evily. The man smirks to himself with pleasure. Bani becomes scared and tries to go away, but once again is forcefully brought back to him. His grip on her wrist, is solid tight. The man pulls bani closer to him, so there is no room between them.

Man: What's your name, beautiful?…

Bani ignores him, and tries to pull away again, but fails. His hands slowly travel to her back.

Bani: (struggling) let go of me!

He laughs while bani continues to struggle, but then gets confused when bani starts smiling. She was clearly not looking at him though. "Let go of her!," he hears someone say. The man turns around and sees an angry guy walking up to him, with his hands in fists. Pushkar comes and pulls the stranger away from bani. The stranger falls back and hits a woman. Pushkar grabs him by his collar and gets ready to punch him, but bani comes in the way. She stops pushkar from doing so.

Bani: pushkar, just leave him alone.
Pushkar: bani, this guy was misbehaving with you! I'm not going to-
Bani: please, pushkar. I don't want to create a scene!

Pushkar looks away from bani and back at the terrified man, he quickly lets go of his collar and pushes him back. Pushkar takes bani's hand in his and leads her back to their group.

Bani: Thanks, Pushkar.
Pushkar: no, problem. I just did what I had to do.

Pushkar and Bani meet back up with everyone.

Bani: (says to pia) it's kind of stuffy in here, I'm going to get some fresh air. Ok?
Pia: uh, I'll come with you.
Bani: no, it's ok. You keep on dancing. I'll be back in five minutes.
Pia: (smiles at her) ok.

Bani walks towards the exiting doors, and leaves. Immediately, cold air rushes towards her face, making her hair fly everywhere. She continues to walk on the sidewalk, and watches a bunch of cars pull up to the club. Bani spots a log on the edge of the ground and sits on it. She looks at the dark sky and looks at the beautiful white moon, surrounded by tiny stars. Bani starts thinking about her life, and what her and her sisters' futures will be like. After a couple mintues of watching the moon, in peace, bani hears twigs breaking and footsteps coming towards her. She quickly turns around to see who it is, and is surprised. But slowly, a smile spreads across her face. When she says his name, it tingles her lips, " Jai?…".

part 13 on pg. 19

awesome job! i can't wait to read more! update soon.