7 months later.. LAST PART..PLZ READ! - Page 32

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Posted: 19 years ago
Things are going to go real quick in the Fanfic i hope you all don't mind that i skip some details like more love scenes between Jai and Bani and what the other members of the Walia family are doing. I thank you all for reading.. and i hope you enjoy the next part! p.s. do skip over my quick writing.. i probably have a lot of grammer and spelling error 😕 sorry

Part 17

Jigyasa: TUM! Your calling now! Where have you been all these months? Do you have any idea what has been happening?

Roshini: Clam down Jigyasa! I was undercover for few months… but now I'm back.. and in full force… this time I will get Jai back…

Jigyasa started laughing on the phone

Roshini: Why are you lauging?

Jigyasa: ummm (still laughing) how do you plan to accomplish that/

Roshini: What do you mean! Bani must be way out of his life by now and Jai must have had enough time to forget about her!

Jigyasa: Bani…. Leaving this house! (jigyasa laughs even more) .. Arre Roshini.. tsk tsk… did hiding undercover cause you too loose part of your brain

Roshini: Jigyasa! Careful!

Jigyasa: Okay okay.. .but you have it all wrong.. arre… Bani is still very much in this house.. and Jai, her and their child are living happily as a perfect family (with an evil tone)

Roshini: KYA! Bani forgave Jai! But how! This can't happen! Well.. .don't worry… now that I'm back things will change.. there is no way that Jai will live happily while I die here everyday! It won't happen!

Jigyasa had the evil and hopeful look after Roshini said that.. She knew that things had to get better with Roshini returning back….

The scene shifts to Roshini after disconnecting the phone

Roshini to herself: Now how can they live happily when Roshini is alive..(slight smile).. I won't let that happen… cause now Roshini has come up with a plan that will separate Jai and Bani forever!!!

The scene shifts to couple days later when the whole walia family decide to head to the temple to give donations.. as Masi had promised at the hospital. Everyone is in great mood, even Jigyasa and Ranveer seem to be enjoying with the family.

Jai held Dhruv in one hand and held Bani's hand in the other as they walked up the steps of the temple. Masi and the rest of the family followed… They reached the top and the Jai and Bani tilted their head to give respect as the rest of the family followed. Jai rang the bell above and Dhruv gave a slight smile that made Bani smile as well. While praying….

Bani to herself: He Bhagwan.. you have given me everything I've wanted. A perfect husband… a beautiful child and a happy family! There is nothing more I could ask from you except that that you keep this happiness in tact and that no ones evil eye falls on this family

Jai to himself: God, things are perfect. My dhruv is safe and most of all my wife is with me and has forgiven me for everything that I've done before. I couldn't ask for anything more. Dhruv stays healthy and my wife remains happy is all that I ask.

Everyone finishes praying and Masi starts to distribute the goods to everyone.. The rest of the family help out. Jai decides to help and places Dhruv in his stroller near the idol of god and asks the priest to look after him for few while he helped to pass the goods. The priest agreed and Jai leaves to help out.


The scene shifts to an old lady who approaches the idol and prays. The face of the woman is not shown. Only the back.. She finishes praying and just when she is about to leave, her eyes fall on Dhruv and she stands still. Her face is still not shown… She notices that the priest is busy talking to another couple. She approaches a laughing Dhruv in his stroller…..

The scene cuts to Jai passing out the goods when he glances to see if Dhruv is okay.. He looks then looks away but then looks back to realize that Dhruv is not there in his stroller!


Where is Dhruv… who was that woman…Find out in the next part
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part
old lady 😡 roshnii 😡
poor little guy
pls cont soon
Jai-Bani_Kasamh thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
Why can't roshini leave Jai happy with his family
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part~!!

it is stupid roshini who has kidnapped Dhruv!!

plz do continue!
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Posted: 19 years ago
omgosh omgosh omgosh....plzz write soon....this is the best one so far...love u for this talent.
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Posted: 19 years ago
the case of the missing child!!!!!!!!!!!!

cant wait!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow ........................... that was so nice 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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who is this person 😡 i hope its not roshini 😡 because jai and bani won't spare her 😡
plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow..poor Dhruv hope hes okay...dat old lady better not try to ruin their perfect family 🤢
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 !!
awesome part!!
omg..no where is dhruv?
pls do cont soon!

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