jai aur bani ka pyar part 1

hi guys this is my first fanfic so i hope you love it more than liking

It starts with massi saying to jai and bani that they should go mall so they go to mall and jai sees a lovely painting but then bani looks at jai that whats he looking at and she sees the painting too but then bani takes jai away

BANI:jai are you daydreaming or what

JAI:no, it's nothing

BANI:alright come on i need to buy some cloths my baby

JAI: for my baby come on then let's go

and they buy cloths and toys for there baby then jai go's to the car when bani quickly buys that painting

BANI: come on lets go

so they set off home then they show everybody there baby's cloth sand and massi is very happy to see them happy and then bani quickly go's upstairs and gets a stool to put the painting up then she is nearly at the egde of the stool and she falls then jai quickly comes and catch her in his arms.

please reply back if you love this fan fic , please cause this is my first fanfic

awwwwwwwwwww.. that's so sweet 👏 cont soon.. i wanna see his reaction to the paintingg.. and her falling.. 👏 👏

that was a nice start pls continue

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awwwww that was so sweet 😛
plz continue soon 😊

..thats really cute!
do continue..i wanan read the next parts..lol
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awwwwwwww timothy mannnnnn that was cho chweet 😳keep up the good work!!!!
where were you before ha?
niceeeee keep goin 👍🏼
love,
Aragon 😳

please count sooooooooooon 👏 and please msmkj1 dont say that if you dont like it so dont read but others want her to count soon. please dont take it serious i am telling you as a friend 😉 😊

Originally posted by: msmkj1

i hate it i am serious i doesn't make sence don't
continue write a better ff

Excuse me.. how rude of you!! if u did not like ur problem!!.. and i would
love to read a ff written by u.... to see what sort of standard fiof fictional
wrting u have! dont take that i am being rude..

i found it to be nice!! good job.... would love for u to continue!

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nice first part!!
pls do continue!

good job dear
plzzzzz continue soon