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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ive done quite a few fanfics which u all gave loveavle remarks so i thought i might give it another try. If u dont like it i dont mind beacuse i knoe im not a profressional. Here it goesz.

It starts from where bani sayz itz only her baby. Jai is just smiling sweetly when he suddendly gets a blackout. She sayz oh my god mr walia and starts crying and she runs to the doctor and the doctor tells her that he iz losing blood and he iz between life and death. She starts to breakdown as she remember all the wonderful moments and she remembers jai as the song judda ke bhi aka aadat from kalyug plays. ONE HOUR PASSED AFTER THE OPERATION. The doctor sayz they cant confirm anuthing just that tonight will be very critical for him. He then sayz that he iz calling out your name and he wants to see you.

She runs in with her hair swaying and he mangulsutra is 2. She wruns in as he calls her. She sits on the bed as he says bani I love and dont ever leave me and he sayz i will take care of u and our baby. As he sayz bani I love you. She then replyz and said i love u jai i loved from the begiuning i love u now and ill love u forever. As she lies on the bed beside him and he pulls her into his arms.

They doctor them gives bani good news that he has improved alot and he can go home. BaNI changes jai and takes him home. Everyone iz relived that he is home. He goes upstairs and she puts him to lies down. She gives him his medicines and she feeds him his food. SUCH a romeantic moment. As jai then tells bani to come closers as he plants a kiss on her forehed. As he sayz i love u.

Next morning. It iz time for bani's first ultrasound. Her stomach got big. And jai takes her to the hospital as they doctor comes out but bani iz still inside getting ready and the doctor comes out and sayz Mr waila we found two heartbeats in Mrs. walia. Jai is llike i dont understand. Then he sayz mr waila u are having twin girls. As this time he squeezes the doctor and runs to her room and then he runs in and hugged her and kissed her. Bani is overjoyes as the go home and everyone is sitting together in the living room. He then tells them the great news that they are having twins. Mausi then starts to cry with joy. Everyone is happy except jigs aur ranveer. Jai then takes bani upstairs to this room. When they open it jai had decorated it so beautifully with baby toys and its a beuatiful room with stuff for newborns bani iz overyjoyed and starts to cry.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.. wat a cute lil room.. and twins awwwwwwwwwww 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hun that such a sweet part
wonderfully done 👏 👏
pls do cont
take care hun
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwww such a lovely cute story 👏
plz continue soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was so cute plzz continue..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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That was adorable!!! Pls continue soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aww i wish ekta wud do as u said 😃
well she shud learn sumthin frm u 😉
gd work 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 wow
please do continue soon
thanx 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was really cute and sweet.plz cont soon. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww how sweet...plz continue soon!!! 👏 👏 👏

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