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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi guys here is the part five' hope u like it and sorry for keeping u ppl hanging 😉 :

Bani says " I've made my decision mr walia and …. 😲
Jai interrupts bani in middle of her sentence and says I will agree to whatever decision u'v made but whatever ur decision is, I will always support u and the your .. I mean our child in the future bcoz I know that it's my responsibility and… 😔

Bani "bus mr walia I don't want to listen to u and u have no responsibility towards me plz just listen to my decision and come what my I won't change it" and then she tells him her decision she says "I will stay at walia house … when jai hears this his heart leaps with joy then it starts to sink again when bani continuous what she was saying. 💔

…..till this baby is born than I will leave, giving u the baby, I want u to know that I am not doing this bcoz I have any feelings toward or that I don't want to take the child away from u I am doing this bcoz of my love for my child bcoz I don't know where my life will go once I'll leave and I want my child to have a secure future but with me that's the only thing he won't get. 😭 Jai starts to say something again but bani stops him and says that I know what ur gonna say but I don't want any help from u, I want my future free from u. I have only one question for u plz answers in yes or no "will u.. are u willing to take the responsibility of my child ? 😭
jai is to stunned and shocked to speck and can do nothing but node his head in the affirmative. 😲 😭

I bani "I have one more request: that we will treat each other each other as strangers for the time I am here" 😒

Jai just cannot speak anything he has his full of tears and a lump in his throat he just nodes and leaves the room. He goes to his study room and is sitting there with a look of sheer pain on his face and tears flowing down his cheeks. a while later masi comes in and stands besides him, he falls to the ground and hugs her knees and says "bani ne mujhe bahot badi saja dede usne mujhe apne aap se alag kar diya aur apna sab kuch mujhe de diya. masi wo mujhe agar fasi ki saja de de to mujhe manjoor hogi per main uske bina kese jionga masi plz kuch karo…. masi plz kuch karoo masi main aisi nahi ji paunga main is guilt ke saath nahi ji paunga ki mainey bani ki jindagi barbad kar di main usay bahot pyar karta hoon masi usay kahao na ki wo mujhe plz ek aur muka de de" saying this he slides down on the flour and puts his face in his hands and starts crying brokenly. 😭


Tommrow : bani shifts to the guest room much to the shock of everybody.

Edited by minks - 19 years ago
min2103 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
hey no replies is this part sooooo baaaad 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
its not bad!

but its soooo sad!! 😭 😭 poor jai!!!!!!!!!!




but cant wait til u cont!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omgggggggg 😭 that was so emotional. plz cont soon.. that was gr8888 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it was very touching.loved it.plz cont soon. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
😭 It was so emotional. But I loved it. 👏
Plz come soon with the next part.
Love
Sadaf
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
👏 👏 great part u making me cry ..... 😭 😭 😭 i feel so sorry for jai plz do cont.... soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very sad but beautifully written.. please do make it alittle happier!!

thanx

PLEASE DO CONTINUE!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi ppl i am really sorry that i did not post updates today and yesterday bcoz today i was really very busy with submitting my addmision form and everything and yesterday the electric power of our house failed in the aftrenoon and it did'nt come back till late in the night 😭 😕 😡 but i promise that i will update two posts tommorow. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi guys here are the part six and seven bcoz I promised but I don't know if I should continue writing bcoz no one seems to be waitin for them, I am really hurt, so if u ppl don't like my FF I'll discontinue u only have to say so.



DIL SE- PART 6

Bani comes down from her room for the first time after two days, every one offers her congratulations on her becoming pregnant which she accepts with a very small smile. Everyone sits down for breakfast. Jai tries his best not show his feelings of hurt and desperation due to bani's behavior towards him, she is ignoring him completely. He had to dress up himself in the morning had to find his own scarf, wallet, watch etc without bani's help although he had to bite his tongue several time from calling bani for her assistance. Breakfast is over with both bani and jai eating less then nothing.

The three newly wedded couple leave for there honeymoon in paris a wedding present from aditya, although the two couples of the three wanted to go somewhere alone with each other and the third couple would rather not go anywhere but all the three couples could not say as much to the others and agreed to go together for their honeymoon.

In the night jai comes from the office to find much to his joy his nightdress ready for him to wear on the bed, a thing which bani does for him but the next moment tony the butler comes in and asks jai that would he be needing anything else and also informs him that he was the one to put out his dress for him bcoz bani instructed him to do so. Jai feels a bit sad when he hears this but not very sad bcoz he feels that maybe bani still cares for me just a bit bcoz she instructed tony for my help.

Two months pass by with things betw jai and bani still cold. Jai is away on a business trip and would be returning tomorrow, bani is at home when an aunt comes to visit her from mt. aabu (this is the same aunt who came on rano's wedding if u guys remember) they sit and start talking about old days when bani's mom was alive as aunty was a very good and close friend of bani's mom and in the process of talking she reveals something that stuns bani.

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