DIL SE -last part added pg 41

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi guys I am so excited about Monday's episode😛 that I have decided to write and predict what will happen on Monday's episode😳, this is my first attempt at writing a fan fiction so plz bear with me and I hope u guys like it, well here goes:

Bani just cannot bear it that jai is trying to talk to her about the baby and she runs away from him to her room where she breaks down completely and just falls on the floor start's crying as if her world has come to an end, she gets very heart broken because the day which should have been the happiest day of her life had become a nightmare in front of her on eyes and she starts crying even more when she sees jai entering the room and she keeps calling for her ma again and again.😭😭

Jai sees that bani has broken down completely and is very worried about her bcoz something could happen to her. he takes a step towards her to comfort her but realizes that if he goes any nearer to bani she won't like it. So in his desperation he runs to masi's room and asks her to plz go and take care of bani as she has broken down completely and it is all his fault, so he cannot dare to go anywhere near her as it would disturb her even more. Masi asks jai for some explanation as to why has bani broken down , jai replies that he will explain every thing to her later but first I beg u plz go and take care of her.😕

Masi goes to bani's room and sees her still sitting on the floor and crying her heart out. Masi goes and sits by her and puts her comforting arm around her asks her 'kya hua beta' bani sees masi through her tears and hugs her desperately for comfort and keeps calling for her ma again and again. Masi cannot see bani in this condition and has tears in her eyes. She picks her up and takes her to her bed where she makes her lye down with her head on her(masi's) lap and tell's her very soothingly that she is here with her, and to stop crying as she might sick which is not good for her condition.😕

Bani slowly-slowly stops crying and goes to sleeps due to her fatigue, with masi sitting by her and jai watching bani helplessly through the half open door.😕

Plz tell me ur opinion abut my fiction cum prediction. 😳

lods 'a' Luv

Minks.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwww 😭 then?!?!?! plz cont soon.. that was so emotional 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 !!
wow loved the first part!!!
pls cont.soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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brilliant part!! bechari Bani! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yes...very likely to happen.... i feel sooo sorry for the two... 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Nice part. 😭 😭 😭 Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😭 poor bani........
its really awesome... continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwww poor bani and jai 😭 😭 👏
plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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phir.. u stopped. continue plzz.. nice prediction for monday..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was wonderful minks...but why did stop...phir kya huwa????...do cont

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