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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Piscean

I know eh Aditee! I guess Kekta mai ko hum par taras aagaya! Chalo we'll take whatever we get esp if it means watching RK in a younger version😉 Can't wait to see that white shirt on him! And what an apt ending to the raaz! I'm finally proud of Bani! She's working her female instincts finally! And what a beautiful thought....communication without words! Jai already declared how much he loves her by pushing her off the bomb and saying that he won't let her die! Now it was Bani's turn....and what a majestic confession! No words needed! Absolutely love the creatives for thinking up this one! I guess they do some things right at least!😛



I haven't seen it PI but I am assuming that it will give u a feel of how RK was in GEM and Dhadkan as u had not seen him in those...though I think in there he in general had a younger look overall...his face wasn't as mature looking...
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Posted: 19 years ago
AD get onto the post by Aditee....AWESOME FOURSOME AND THEN SOME and post something so all 4 of us would've made our stamp in there! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago



PI

Here you go here is part C
Ab main post office aur library jaakar aati hoon 😃

Part C
J: Speak up Bani
Bani hated her situation today. She wished she had never borrowed that money. Why cudnt she have told Pia that Pushkar cud asked Mr W directly. Why DID SHE DO IT.
Her husband was not an easy man, he was easily the most ruthless, arrogant, insensitive man she had ever had the misfortune to meet.
B: Mr Walia, shaayd main woh paise aapko itni jaldi nahi lauta paaoongi
J exhales as if his tension was being relieved her she thinks sarcastically
J: to?
B: Meri salari se aap woh har mahine kaat leejiye, I know usme bahut time lagega, but jaldi hi Pushkar is promising ki uske paas profits aane lagega to he can repay the principal faster
J just looks and listens intently
B: Main yeh nahi keh rahi hoon ki main return nahi karoongi
J interrupting her angrily
J: I knwo what you mean (reaching for a purple vinyl folder from his desk)
B:Mr W?
J still thinking and reading
Its B's personnel file
J: You make Rs.x a month.......
B: Mera file aapke paas kahan se............
J: I own........... (locks his eyes) leaving teh rset unsaid.......
She shoots daggers
J continues to read
J: Hmmm tum itna advance kyon leti ho?
B: None of your biz
J: (shrugs) It is mine now Bani......... tapping the copy of the loan form
Leafs thru the rest of the file
B thinks tartly "Look all you want its just my official data! I cudnt care less, its not like it has my bra size or anything"
Just that moment he looks up meets her eyes
J (huskily) I already know THAT! 😳 lowering a heated gaze to her neck transparently visible under the peach saree.............
B gives him a "Go away" kind of look.................
B: (cannot take it anymore) It was ALL our plan YOU wanted me to be indebted to YOU. YOU LET mr A lend it to me, aapne wait kiya dekha, aur mauka paakar company khareed liya. I HATE YOU.
J: Be very careful Bani.... aur kya kaha tumne? I want you to be indebted to ME? Do you have any idea what I want you to be? (looks intensely and then looks away, she was the most infuriating woman he had ever met)

B: Aapne kya decide kiya hai?
J:(going off on a tangent) I am trying to get into some South east Asian franchise for a leading hotel chain based out of Bangkok. They have 7 resorts in the south east
B: Kya matlab? (confused)
J: Oh! I mean, meri aaj kal kuch Thai biz men se baat cheet chal rahi hai us baare mein......
They want to visit India next week, around 5 of them I think............ They are very impressed with India's cultural image and values............
B: Mr W looks like aap mujhe tang karne par tule hain. I want to go.
Gets up to leave
J pushes her back gently in her chair and his voice takes on the haunting/husky threatening quality again

J:I want a WIFE!
B ( She gets it the moment it spills from his mouth) YOU ARE CRAZY!
J: Mr Kim is bringing hsi wife along
B:(angrily, flustered) YOU ARE CRAZY MR W. NOOOO!!
J calmly:I am not letting go...............
B totally scared......... looks up at his eyes
J: Of my money.......... I meant............
J: Banee........Whats mine is MINE. You knwo that..............
Bani unzips her purse open and pulls out a Kleenex and folds it up carefully with nervous shaky hands and presses it over her upper lip, despite the room being chilled like the North Pole
J: Mr Kim was wondering if I was married, I suddenly realized I HAD A WIFE (tauntingly) and her name is............ Ms Banee Di,............... Walia.

B: nahi Mr Walia.......... I need time.. I have to ask around..............aap mujhe sirf thoda sa waqt deejiye
J: TWO DAYS! (abruptly)
J: Friday morning I am sending Darshan over Banee apna suitcases pack karke rakhna ya usko check de dena
JW gets up leans over again , gently tucks an errant bra strap into her blouse on her right shoulder..........
J: (softly in her ear)The next time u wear this saree I suggest u go for a strapless bra, the neck on this one is too bloody plunging.............


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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

pI, Here is 5B THANKS A TON FOR THE IDEA SOAP I AM LOVING WRITING THIS ONE ITS MY ALL TIME FAVE ********************************************************



Ok Aditee this is not fair...since RK is on break right now I turn all blame on u...why do u always leave the best for the end??? That hair bit is just 😳 ...somehow they haven't shown anything like that in the show yet and so uske baare mein soch soch ke mera dimaag thakta hi nahi...
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Piscean


Cute scene AD! Now reading it I just thought of a slight modification...how about making Jai turn and face the other way so Bani can change in the room while he is there 😉 This brings out another chivalrous side of him and I just am dying to see him make that little head spin with that cute smile of his decorating his face like never before! His anticipation of seeing Bani in the sari and his temptation to turn around will make JW's expression priceless and I'm sure RK can capture it so well that it'll make our hearts flutter for the millionth time! 😳 Hope you don't mind the slight modification....but then again it's RK we're talking about I"m sure you wouldn't! 😛



Arre nahi yaar the more the merrier...I was actually thinking even in the bit where he presents her w/the package at the party it would be nice if he came up from behind...sort of let her wonder for 30-40 seconds where exactly JW is...as he is all she cares to see amidst the crowd...and then let him come from behind and see that sense of relief w/her finding him closeby...
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

Oh Soap, the couch on the movie nite.......... no i thot i'll let them just make out for a few minutes, JW withdraws with a SWEAR ofcourse runs his hands thru his locks ( 😉 ) in complete frustration, goes off and takesa cold shower in Bani's and works from her bed until morning.............
She was almost molested that nite u see so even tho she wants what he is doing to her, he is too much of a gentleman to do it that nite

Jab bhi "hoga" EXPLOSIVE HOGA 😉



We are SO going to get in trouble...I love it...but lol it's guilty love and I'm not even married...
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

AD
Kahan gayab ho gayi phir se?

Excellent fabsly cute scene, kyon nahi dikhaate yaar aise, how I wish RK wud turn away in order to let her dress .......... MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM.

Hum sab log galat profession mein hain I tell you

AD ek poora FF likho plz plz



How do we get hired in Mumbai for the profession we SHOULD be in??? Arre yaar abhi I have that written bit from the airplane but am in the lab and will have to go (uggghhh) in 5 minutes...so will type up the second scenario during break...
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: armaandeewani



Umm ok...can u please write one entire FF on his watch alone...I guarantee u my viewership and PI's if no one elses...I think I would read that FF religiously as if it were a moral responsibility that needed to be fulfilled to live in this world...I'd write abt the earlier part of the FF but sorry...far too pre-occupied w/that last bit...and yes Bani dear...that Rolex is PRICELESS...

I love the fact that so many people care about THE ROLEX!! 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Piscean

Don't worry Aditee...I think it's 150 pages and waise bhi pata nahi yahan ke mods ke kya rules hai. I know in the II2 forum that it's 150 pages limit. I like the name of the next thread though 😉 We shall reserve it till we hit 150 pages...shall we? 😃



I am all for it...I wish this one could keep going...endlessly...lol then again ppl must be very tired of our bakwaas...din raat...yehi karte rehte hain...
Edited by armaandeewani - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Piscean


Chalo kuch toh phaida hua un sab ka! 😉 Maine toh kabhi pada nahi par ab shuru karne ki soch rahi hoon 😛



I haven't read it bfr but I don't think I will turn to it...I know it can't be as good as Aditee's which has the extra personal touch as it has JW and Bani...nothing beats that...

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