romanticise it!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi guys.

i was reading a few of ur comments yesterday about the consummation scene - although we all loved it 😉 😃 😳 a lot of u were saying how they could have made it more romantic...therefore, i thought that it would be nice if we could all write our own little versions or improvements here!

Ps i really liked the fanfic "chup chup ke"!!! something like that would be great here.

You can have as many goes as u like!!!!

😳 😳 😉

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namo thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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kewl 😛

....k firstly a cute romantic hugg was missing which i guess wud have made a scene evn more btr.....cz hugg is a sign of a support n comfort 😳 i guess which jai walia cud have given bani by hugging her 😳 😳 😳 ......dey nvr hugged i guess 😆......den...jai shud have been in less clothes atleast an open collar shirt 😳 ... not dat tight fitted suit... 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok i'll try 1st...sorry if its not that great am s'pposed to b revising for my exams that start monday...

Jai walks into the room and sees Bani standing by the window. He stops and looks at her profile and thinks that how beautiful she looks in the soft glow of the moonlight that is streaking in through the open curtains. Suddenly he shakes himself - what am i thinking?? This is wrong...

He continues forward and realises that something is wrong, he questions bani as to why she left the party early and without him.

Bani doesn't answer and tries to turn away, quickly wiping away the tears that had fallen so freely a moment before.

Jai sees this, and concerned walks further towards her, gently he takes her by the shoulders and notices that bani has suddenly gone tense and that she has sudddenly gone breathlesss. This makes him want to bring her closer more, but he resists the urge, he needs to know whats wrong...

"Bani, please tell me whats wrong?? I can't see you cry like this...please, has someone said something to upset you?"

Then Bani gently pushes his hands away and backs a few steps away until she feels less threatened by the feelings Jai arouses in her...

"Bani.."

"Mr Walia, you shouldn't be here, you should still be at the party, after all its your neice's engagement"

"Bani i left the party to come to see you, right now you are more important, the engagement was done when you were still there, now its more music, so please tell me whats wrong?"

Bani tries to hold back her emotions but the more she tries the more the tears fall...

"I don't know my head...i think the drink.....then you and..and...roshni...the room"

Shocked Jai stares at her, suddenly he felt as though for the first time in his life what someone else thought of him really mattered, he needed to make her understand that what she thought was wrong, he doesn't have any feelings for roshni, he doesn't desire roshni as he has started to desire Bani...

He walks towards Bani again, holds her by her shoulders and gradually brings her towards him, she tries to resist, but his hold is firm. he tilts her face upwards until she is forced to look into his eys and brings his face near hers...

"Bani...nothing happened..."He whispers in her ears...then he starts to kiss away her tears... 😳

he runs his hands down her arms and brings her hands up towards him and kisses her wrists, he then pus them around his neck and gently picks her up in his arms and carries her towards the bed.

THe rest you know 😳 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#4
You girls are really too much 😆 😆 😆 . Please concentrate on ur studies. 😆 😆 😆

I guess Ekta has more romantic scenes in store for us JnB fans 😉 so we will all get to see liberal doses of hugging and comfortinf to satisfy all our senses. 😉 😆 😉

Till then, keep your patience 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i think bani should've worn a different colored saree...something like dark red or maroon..it would've added to the affect 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I should be studying too but I don't know...yeh Ram kis janam ka badla le raha hain...aur kuch soch hi nahi sakti. I thought it was absolutely perfect but I just wish she had atleast once looked into his eyes. Maybe right when he first holds her face and kisses her forehead...after that he looks at her for a brief moment bfr he goes on that kiss-frenzy. If just then she had looked at him for one second bfr closing her eyes again (come on girls like we would keep our eyes open...our jiya would not be able to dhadak fast enough if we were to keep our eyes open while having Jai look into your eyes).

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