confession - GAME!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi guys!

I thought - since at the moment we are all going from such and exciting episode (where J and B sleep together) to such a downer (where J considers it a mistake and Pia enters etc) I thought it would be fun to write our own versions of the confession scene to cheer ourselves up!!!!

So u can have as many goes as u like. U can make them as romantic as u like and even funny as u like....also, u can even suggest possible bakground music/songs...

good luck! šŸ˜‰

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Posted: 19 years ago
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They will got to a couple show. Bani will be asked to tell about her feeling for her husband and Bani will tell what she feels from her heart.

Jai on the other hand would have not told his feeling there.

When Bani is away it will be telecasted on TV and he will run behind her
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok here is my one...

The scene starts with Pia in Jai's arms, she is holding him tight with her eyes closed. Jai is embracing her but not as passionately...more conforting and a bit distant. He seems a bit awkward that she is in his arms and really guilty - like he is betraying Bani. they are standing in the garden in the little summer hut (I can't remember what its called but it was where Bani saw Pushkar and Pia kiss when she 1st found out about them). Oh, and its raining by the way.

Anyway, Bani comes and see them like this ... and u see a flashback of the pia and pushkar scene...She is just standing in the rain and you can see her red saree getting completely drenched.

Jai has enough of Pia in his arms and pushes her off, saying "yeh gahlat hai (this is wrong) main aur bani (me and bani),,,"

to which Pia replies "Why are you lying, you were so in love with me that you wanted to marry me...but because my mistake you had to marry Bani...now we can rectify that and give bani back her freedom"

At this Jai gets really irritated and just looks at her and is about to say something but sees the bak of bani as she is running away. He forgets Pia completely and begins to run after her. He thinks that she has gone into the house but when he gets there realises that she is not there.

He then starts to look for her and ends up at the mandir. As he goes in he sees Bani sitting by the pillar, she is completley wet and in shock with tears coming down, all she sees is first pia and push then pia and jai...

Jai goes to her and tries to talk to her and realises that she is not responding. He pulls her up and shakes her. When she looks at him and tries to pull away he holds firm and tells her to just listen to him first before she makes any judgements.

He says that i am really sorry for whatever you think you saw but i was just trying to console your sister about her divorce. i didn't know that she would think i am still in love with her...

Bani just looks away..

I am not in love with her bani...look at me damn it.. i am in LOVE WITH YOU...

Stunned bani looks at him...

This isn't how i wanted to tell you, but the truth is that i am in love with you...i don't know when it happened but i think it was right from the begining but in the form of admiration, thats why i always reacted to you in a harsh way for any small number of things. I admit i fancied myself in love with Pia but that was some type of infatuation...trust me like i have always trusted you...please don't leave me i don't know what i will do...you have turned my house into a home with your love please don't turn into hell with your sbsence...I love you Bani, you taught me the meaning of the word and i feel it everytime i see you or feel you close to me...

As he is saying this he is coming closer to bani and takes her into his arms and starts to kiss her tears away...

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Posted: 19 years ago
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That was awesome dear!Great idea.I am under the weather today but will contribute something later.Untill then happing JBing! šŸ˜›
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Posted: 19 years ago
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got another 1:

its karva chauth and obviously bani keeps her fast.
In the morning as Jai is leaving for office mausi tells jai to come home early - he asks y to which she says its Karva chauth and he needs to be here to break bani's fast. He looks at bani - who blushes and looks down - and gives a very sweet smile and says of course he will be here. When he has left the front door - mausi follows and tells him to buy bani a nice gift.

anyway, every1 has finished the puja and are about to break the fast eg all the neighbouring couples mausi and dadi have invited.

Bani is still waiting for Jai who hasn't come. Roshni is taunting her that y is she waiting she knows Jai won't come for her.

Just then Jai walks in and tells bani to complete the rituals and then he breaks her fast. he then very shyly asks her to come with him. He takes her to their bedroom which has been decorated with candles and rose petals, and in the centre is a small table with a candlelight and some food - he tells bani that he too hasn't eaten all day and asks her to dine with him. They are both shy and slightly awkward but when they finish, jai gives bani a present and tells her to open it...inside is a beautiful red embroidered saree, with a matching set, some bangles and a bindi - shocked bani looks at him.

Jai says to her that it has taken a long time but i have realised what my feelings and what my heart have been trying to tell me ... i am in love with you bani and want you to be my wife...and i chose this day to tell you because it is a day made for couples and i have kept my fast wishing for a long life for my love for you...

Bani just looks at him with tears in her eyes and tells him that she has waited a long time to hear those words and loves him too .

They then begin to slow dance - Jai has some romantic songs playing - then he gradually brings her closer and tells her that he has been dreaming of that "night" and wants to love her like that again but this time with her in her senses šŸ˜‰ ....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow that is really good! šŸ‘
carry on! šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago
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VERY VERY GOOOOOOOOOOD šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

CARRY ON 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwww...
all of the scenes are so cute........... 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😳 😳 😳 .. so romantic and cute yaar .. all of them r fab .. am thinking of a scene ,will share it later ... šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago
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The doorbell rings...we see bani going to answer it, but roshni gets there first. seeing her bani turns around and starts to walk away. but Roshni tells her to stop and comes close to her with an evil smile on her face "So Jai is finally divorcing you"

Bani looks at her stunned. "These are your divorce papers, you better sign them and leave!"

She just leaves a heartbroken bani standing in the middle of the room holding an envelope with the divorce papers.

Dazed she slowly walks towards their bedroom with the KS title song playing slowly and sadly in the background. As she walks she thinks about her wedding day, the dori scene, the button scene, the consummation night etc. When she gets to the room she realises that she cannot stay here anymore and after receiving the papers realises that jai doesn't want her, and hence she cannot bear to face him. she quickly packs her stuff - only whatever she brought with her from mt. abu and leaves everything she got from either the wedding or jai etc.

she takes out the divorce papers and signs them, all the while letting her tears fall freely, some fall onto the papers too. then she takes out Jai's nightwear etc gets everything ready like usual, and gives tony the orders for Jai's dinner, then quietly leaves the house. She has no where to go - Rano has run off with Sahil and she had sent Pia bak to Pushkar. She doesn't want to go to Pia's as she has just finally settled, so she goes to the mandir.

Jai comes home and looks around lost. Mausi sees him and asks whats wrong - he says he doesn't know but has been feeling restless all day like something close to him has gotten lost, then he realises that he hasn't seen bani and that she is usaully there to meet him.

He asks mausi where she is, to which she replies she doesn't know, she hasn't seen her either, so he calls tony and asks him. Tony tells him that some courier had arrived earlier in the day and that after that Bani ma'am had given orders as usual and then she left, but she didn't seem happy about it.

Jai runs upstairs into his room to see if she has left any note for him, but all he see is the signed divorce papers, and the smudges caused by her tears.

It suddenly hits him that his restless feelings were to do with the depature of bani, and that although he thought he could give her a divorce easily, his heart feels as though it has stopped beating. it is in that moment that all his confusions regarding Bani are cleared and he realises that he cannot live without her and must find her and bring her back.

He leaves the house and drives like a madman to Pushkar's to see if she has gone there, but finds out that they haven't heard from her, he then searches everywhere but can see no sign of her.

He gets a phonecall from the Rustamji hospital telling him that his wife has just arrived there and is in serious condition.

Panic-stricken Jai drives through Park road and arrives at the hospital, where he finds out that bani had been going to the mandir but was mugged on the way and has a stab wound and needs to be operated. Jai goes to the temple in the hospital (They always seem to have them in indian serials) and prays for bani's well being and asks forgiveness for the park rd incident 7years ago and says please don't punish bani for what i have done...etc

Anyway, at the end of the op, we see her in recovery. The next day she wakes up and sees jai sleeping in the chair next to her bed holding her hand firm.

When he senses that she is awake he wakes up and comes near her. Bani can see his eyes full of concern and worry. He asks her why she left him?? What if something happened to you? I just found you and now you are leaving me?? Do you know how hard i was trying to find you, then the hospital rang and all i could think about was the void in my heart that can only be filled by you and i was praying that nothing should happen, i love you bani i can't live without you, please don't leave me...

They are both crying at the same time...

Bsni then says "Mr Walia, I am in love with you too and have been for a very long time, i didn't want to leave you but the divorce papaers..."

He tells her to forget and never mention them again. he teels her that he burnt them as soon as he saw them.

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