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Posted: 19 years ago

Hey guyz! Im back with a longer Fanfic, but before you guyz start reading it I would like for all of you to know that a dear member of the ks Parivaar has fallen ill and I know alot of you may already know, but KS parivaar's Tinkerbell (aka Becky) has a tumor and is having a surgery on the 11th of August. I would like all of you to say a little prayer before you start your reading. May god be with Becky and may she have a speedy recovery.

Recap: Our dear Pia tells Jai that she is starting to love him, but our dear Jai just smacks her
Jai tell Pia that he can only think of her as a mehmaan in his house and if he is standing her it is
because he respects Bani and anything related to her.
We see Bani overhear a confused Jai telling Pia that he does not love Bani
Jigyasa comes out from behind hearing all of Jai's and Pia's argument and says that she will teach Bani a lesson now

In the study we still see a sobbing Pia now she has her knees up and her head is resting on them. We then see Jiggy come in wearing too much makeup, really white teeth and a bright red sari on.
She sits on the chair opposite of Pia and says…

Jiggy: Arrey Pia, kya hua?
Pia: (looks up and wipes her tears away furiously) Aapko kya?
Jiggy: Arrey (smiles) main toh tumari help karney aayi thi! Kya hua hai? Batao nah.
Pia: (stands up quickly and flicks her hair back to show that she is fine and a bit annoyed with Jiggy) Main teek hoon. Now if you will excuse me, mujhay tora sa kaam hai.
Jiggy: (Says to herself while smiling at the back of Pia) Tum joh bhi karo Pia, tumsey main sabh kuch nikaal kar hee rahongi. Aur tumey aur tumari beheinon ko agar Jai bhaiya ke zindagi se nikaal kar phenk nahi diya, toh mera naam bhi Jigyasa nahi hai..

(We then see Jiggy stand up and flick the paloo of her sari and walk out of the room)

Meanwhile, we see Sahil and Rano walking around upstairs when Jiggy spots them both and hides behind a pillar.

Sahil: Ab toh keh doh nah! Please! (looking longingly at Rano)
Rano: (turns to Sahil and smiles) Kya kahon?
Sahil: Vohi, joh main sunah chahtha hoon.
Rano: Kya sunah chahthey hoa?
Sahil: (smacks his forehead) Oh hoa! Forget it! (Sahil rolls his eyes and stomps away to his room like a little kid)
Rano: (smiles and walks into his room with him with Jiggy following close behind).
Rano: Sahil…
Sahil: Nahi! Don't talk to me (he has his back facing Rano and is making faces like a little kid)
(Rano walks up to Sahil and turns him around and says…)
Rano: Sahil! Tumey malum hai ke yeh sabh kuch kehna mere liye mushkil hai!
Sahil: Then you don't love me!
Rano: I do love you!
(Sahil smiles at Rano and Rano finally figures out why he is smiling and turns around embarrassed of what she said and tries to run away, but Sahil grabs her hand and brings her close and whispers in her ear….)
Sahil: I love you too..
(We see Rano smile and put her head down and then we see Jiggy poo walk in clapping and both Sahil and Rano look up at her and immediately break away…)
Jiggy: Wah kya tamasha hai! (claps and gives her evil smile) Manaah parega Rano, tum apni behen se bhi kam nahi hoa!
Sahil: Mom please…
Jiggy: (turns her head to Sahil and gives him a big frown) You shut up!
(Jiggy pokes Rano in the chest and says….)
Jiggy: Tum mere betey se dhoor raho! You understand! Tum jaisi laadkhiyan main hazaron kareed sakthi hoon apnay betey ke liye ! Ithni bhi sharam nahi hai tum mein ek laadkhey ke kamrey main yeh sabh kartey huay?!

(Grabs Ranos arm and swings her out the door and slams the door and poor sahil is completely silent as he sees the door of his room slammed)
Jiggy: Doh Kauri ki laadkhi!
Rano: (scowling) Jigyasa Aunty! Bas! Aap ek baat kijiye, aap apnay betey ko blame dena seekhiye samjhey! Aur haan aaj ke baadh main Sahil se nahi milongi (Jiggy smiles) Lekin jab takh voh nahi mujhay milney ki koshish nah karey, samjhi aap! Toh jaakey apnay betey ko samjhayey. (Rano stomps down the stairs leaving Jiggy totally dumbfounded due to this outburst by Rano for the first time. We then see Sahil come out and frown at seeing his mom, who grabs his arm as he is heading down to get Rano. Sahil looks at her with fury in his eyes and pulls his arm away and runs down the stairs leaving a fuming Jiggy watching after them both)
Sahil: Rano! Rano! Thero!
Rano: (starts walking faster)
(Sahil grabs Ranos arm and turns her around)
Sahil: (looking regretful) Im sorry … voh joh mumma ne kaha
Rano: Kya galath kaha aunty ne? Huh?
Sahil: Rano?
Rano: Sahil, jab tum apni mummi ko mere liye face nahi kar saktey, toh voh kya galath hain? Galath toh tum hoa! Tumey mere liye stand karna chaiyeh tha! Lekin nahi, tum toh…
(Rano shakes her head and walks away as Sahil is left standing at the bottom of the stairs annoyed not only at himself, but at Rano. We then see Aditya walk up to Sahil and say to him…)
Aditya: Arrey Sahil… kya hua? Tum kyon ithney ghum sumh lagh rahey hoa?
Sahil: Papa voh Rano…
Aditya: ACCHA main samajh gaya.. Voh tumsey root key chali gayi hai. Right?
Sahil: (looking sad) Haan
Aditya: Toh phir usey manao.
Sahil: manaon? Voh kaisey?
Aditya: Arrey, just show her you love her crazy, dekho voh bahar jah rahi hai. Jaakey usey manao varna haat se chali jayegi.
(Sahil looks sad and confused)
Aditya: Go! (pushes Sahil)

(We see Sahil run after Rano and Rano is walking around in a park quiet embarrassed that Sahil keeps yelling her name louder and louder every minute and everyone is turning to see who the lunatic is that's screaming… all of a sudden Rano turns around and stops and waits for Sahil to catch up and she says….)

Rano: Kya hai?! Kyon mera peecha kar rahey hoa?! You are embarrassing me!
Sahil: (holds Rano's hand) I'm sorry
Rano: Sorry my foot!

(Rano steps on Sahil's foot and starts running and laughing while leaving the poor guy injured, but not ready to back down)

We see Sahil run after his lady love and take her hand and spin her around and this song is used by him

<http://www.musicindiaonline.com/l/17/s/movie_name.121/&a mp;g t;

(Fourth song from the top Ishq toh Jadoo Hai)



Music (both looking at each other and Rano smiles and runs away while Sahil chases after, he grabs her and spins her around and looks into Ranos sings)

Pyar Se Nazar Mili Toh Pyar Hogaya (smiling and looking into Ranos eyes and spins her out)
Mera Dil Deewana Bekhraar Hogaya (spins Rano back in)

Music (Rano is frowning and trying to get away from Sahil's hold but he brings her closer by pulling her in by her waist)
Pyar Se Nazar Mili Toh Pyar Hogaya (moving his and rano's shoulders)
Mere Dil Deewana Bekhraar Hogaya
Rafta Rafta Dheerey Dheerey Chahthey Bari (hits Rano's hip with his )
Cha gaya Hai Ajeeb Sa Nasha (hits Rano's hip again with his while she is getting mad and trying to get out of his grasp)

Ishq toh Jadoo Hai (pushes Rano away who lands on the ground)
Jadoo toh Jadoo Hai (then looks down and offers his hand for her to get up)
Jadoo Chal Jaatha Hai Ohh Sanam (pulls her up to him)

Ishq toh Jadoo Hai
Jadoo toh Jadoo Hai (Sahil smiles at Rano who smiles back at him)
Jadoo Chal Jaatha Hai Ohh Sanam (Rano then takes his ear and twists it hard and then punches him in the stomach)

Rano then smiles and laughs and sings to him


Pyar Se Nazar Mili Toh Pyar Hogaya (Rano steps closer to him and Sahil steps back in fear she will hit him again)
Mere Dil Deewana Bekhraar Hogaya (Rano steps closer putting both of her hands over her heart and smiling)
Rafta Rafta Dheerey Dheerey Chahthey Bari (Rano takes two step closer and Sahil takes to two steps back but runs into a lamp pole)
Cha gaya Hai Ajeeb Sa Nasha (Rano grabs him and gives him a big hug)

Ishq toh Jadoo Hai (Rano lifts her head to give Sahil a smile and he smiles back)
Jadoo toh Jadoo Hai
Jadoo Chal Jaatha Hai Ohh Sanam (Sahil swings her around once by the waist)

Ishq toh Jadoo Hai (Sahil puts her down)
Jadoo toh Jadoo Hai (Sahil looks at Rano)
Jadoo Chal Jaatha Hai Ohh Sanam (Sahil kisses Rano on the cheek and we see Rano become embarrassed and run away)


Sahil:

Heyyy Pyaar Se Nazar Mili Toh Pyaar Hogaya (puts his arms out to call his lady love who is running away from embarassment)
Mera Dil Deewana Bekhraar Hogaya (Runs after Rano)

Music (We see it starts raining and Rano is running from the rain now and Sahil is running to get out of the rain and catch up with Rano)

Trumpets (We see Rano playing in the puddles and Sahil is watching her from under a tree, but Rano sees him staring and smiles and brings him out to play in the rain)

Electric Keyboard (Sahil dances with Rano in puddles, but then he pulls Rano close to him and holds her from the back and kisses her neck but she pushes him down into the puddle)

Sahil:

Aakhon Ki Shauki Toh Asar Kar Gayiii (smiling at a laughing Rano)
Sarey Jahan Se Be khabaar Kar Gayii (Sahil gets up and goes around Rano who is still smiling but at the ground)

Rano:

Koi baat hai iss mulakaath meiin (Rano turns to look at Sahil and smiles)
Behek Ne lagi mein tere saath meiin (Runs to hug him)

Sahil:

Oooh teri iss adha pey mein nisaar hogaya (wraps his arms around Rano)
Mere Dil Deewana Bekhraar Hogaya (pulls Rano and puts her hand on his heart)
Rafta Rafta Dheerey Dheerey Chahthey Bari (shakes Rano's shoulders)
Cha gaya Hai Ajeeb Sa Nasha (pushes Rano lightly away and runs his hands through his hair

Ishq toh Jadoo Hai
Jadoo toh Jadoo Hai
Jadoo Chal Jaatha Hai Ohh Sanammm (turns and smiles at Rano)

Ishq toh Jadoo Hai
Jadoo toh Jadoo Hai
Jadoo Chal Jaatha Hai Ohh Sanam (comes near Rano and taps her cheek as she smiles at him lovingly)

Rano:

Mmm Pyar Se Nazar Mili Toh Pyar Hogaya (wraps her arms around Sahils neck)
Mere Dil Deewana Bekhraar Hogaya (Hugs Sahil)

Music (We then see Rano dancing in the Rain with Sahil)

Bahon Mein Jaaney Jaa Mujhey Tham Le (Sahil spins Rano to him and holds her close)
Hooton Pe Hooton Ka Naya Jaam Leee (Rano looks up and taps Sahils lips then hers and then smiles shyly)

Sahil:

Ohhh Mein Tere Kheyaalon Mein Khoya Rahoon (turns Rano around and hugs her from the back)
Jagahh Rahon Chahey Soyahhh Rahoon (Puts his head on her shoulder pretending to sleep)

Rano:

Haal Mera Aisa Pehli Baar Hogaya (Pushes Sahil away not so lightly)
Mera Dil Deewana Bekhraar Hogaya (Puts her hand to her heart)
Rafta Rafta Dheerey Dheerey Chahthey Bari (Puts both of her arms on Sahils shoulders)
Cha gaya Hai Ajeeb Sa Nasha (Takes her arms off of Sahils shoulders and then runs her hand through her hair like Sahil did)

Ishq toh Jadoo Hai (Sahil is laughing at Rano's imitation)
Jadoo toh Jadoo Hai
Jadoo Chal Jaatha Hai Ohh Sanammm

Ishq toh Jadoo Hai
Jadoo toh Jadoo Hai
Jadoo Chal Jaatha Hai Ohh Sanam (Sahil smiles and hugs Rano lightly and we see them walking some more throughout the park without an umbrella in the rain)

Sahil:

Pyar Se Nazar Mili Toh Pyar Hogaya
Mere Dil Deewana Bekhraar Hogaya (Sahil has his arm around Rano's shoulders
Rafta Rafta Dheerey Dheerey Chahthey Bari &a mp;n bsp; &a mp;n bsp;and is walking home with her)
Cha gaya Hai Ajeeb Sa Nasha

Ishq toh Jadoo Hai
Jadoo toh Jadoo Hai &am p;nb sp; &am p;nb sp; &am p;nb sp; &am p;nb sp; (Both of them are still walking in the park)
Jadoo Chal Jaatha Hai Ohh Sanam

Ishq toh Jadoo Hai (Rano) (looks at Sahil lovingly)
Jadoo toh Jadoo Hai (Sahil)   ; ;   ; ;   ; ; (Sahil smiles at her squeezing her shoulder)
Jadoo Chal Jaatha Hai Ohh Sanam (Sahil)   ; ; (Both are seen walking)

(Park bystanders who looked at Sahil as if he was crazy before)
Ishq toh Jadoo Hai
Jadoo toh Jadoo Hai (Both Rano and Sahil turn around and see everyone staring at them)

Jadoo Chal Jaatha Hai Ohh Sanam (They both laugh at each other and wave to everyone )
We then see Aditya pull up in his white Honda and he says to Sahil…

Aditya : tum dono andhar aayo, agar tumari saap jaisi maa ne dekh liya toh voh tum dono ki jaan nikal deygi!

(We see both Rano and Sahil laugh and get in the car. Rano starts to shiver so Aditya throws his coat back to her)

Aditya: Tum dono abh ghar jaakey careful rehna. Rano tum peechey darwaazey se jaana, aur Sahil tum aaghey se. Hum sabh dinner ke liye jah rahey sivah Bani aur Jai.

Sahil: Mama aur Mami kyon nahi jah rahey hain?

Aditya: (smacks Sahil across the shoulder and says) Arrey Samjha karo yaar! The lovebirds need their time together!

Sahil: (laughs) Daaad!

(Rano is also laughing in the back seat)

Aditya: Okay Okay, actually voh Bani teek nahi hai, aur iss mausam main Jai keh raha tha ke voh dono ghar hi rehengey, and I think they should spend some time together. What do you guys think?

(Both Rano and Sahil smile at each other then at Aditya)

Rano and Sahil: Yes!

We then see Jai back at the Walia Mansion frantically searching for Bani. Everyone is downstairs now getting ready to leave, they are just waiting for Rano and Sahil. Jai is running around looking in rooms,but he cannot find his wife. Mausi sees Jai all worried and grabs him by the shoulder and says..

Mausi: Munna… (worried) Kya hua?
Jai: (thinking to himself) Agar mausi ko patha chal gaya toh voh saarey ghar ko ulhtah kar deengi Bani ko doontey doontey. Main kudh Bani ko doondh loonga, Mausi aur sabh ko kyon yahan pe rakhna chaiyeh. Main Bani ko kudh doondh loongah, mujhay sabh ko pareshaan karney ki zarurat nahi hai.

Mausi: (breaks Jai out of his thoughts) Jai! Kya hua ? (Jai turns to her and puts on a fake smile)

Jai: Voh.. Kuch nahi mausi, main bas ek paper dhoond raha tha. Aap fikar math kijeye main dhoond loonga.

Mausi: (smiles) Thu bhi nah. (smacks Jai lightly on the back of his head) Har baar kaam sujtha hai tumey. Aab Bahu par tora dheyaan dey aaj aur kaam par kam samjhey (smiling). Iss liye hum sabh tumey aur Bani ko chor rahey hain. Maukey ka faiyda utanah okay? (Smiles)

Jai: (shakes his head) Mausi … aap bhi nah

(We then see Rano and Sahil Join everyone else waiting for them downstairs Jiggy gives an evil frown to Rano and pulls Sahil by the arm to keep him away from Rano.)

Aditya: Chalo Sabh… lets go have some fun tonight! (Everyone starts walking out even Pia and Mausi is shown standing next to Jai. Aditya sees this and smiles and walks up between Mausi and Jai and says…)

Aditya: Arrey Mausi! Chalo nah! Inh dono love birds ko hum akela chor dethey hain! Chalo! (Smiles at Jai)

Jai: (shakes his head) Aditya tum bhi nah!
Aditya: (smiles lovingly at Jai and smacks him across the back) Good luck!
Jai: Arrey Aditya! (Aditya is already jogging outside the door)

(Jai is left standing and smiling until his grin vanishes again very quickly when he realizes that he doesn't know where Bani is and that he has to find her)

Jai: (saying in his mind) Yeh Bani gayi kahan?

(Jai is rushing around until he passes the back garden windows and sees Bani sitting out in the rain on the bench with her knees to her chest getting completely drenched and not even aware of it)

Bani in the garden….

Bani: (she is seeing the whole scene she saw between Jai and Pia in her mind and keeps on hearing) Pia kya aap Di se pyaar kartey hain? Nahi… Nahi … Nahi… (We see tears in Bani's eyes and she is just sitting there. Both of the tears run down her cheeks and mix in with the rain and she just sits there replaying the scene in her head over and over again.)

(We then see Jai open the glass doors leading to the garden and looking mighty fine in a black kurta pajama ( I can't stand his same night gown robe thing) and chappals and runs towards Bani while also becoming drenched in the rain. He stands in front of Bani, but notices she isn't paying attention and is crying. He slighty shakes her shoulder, but she doesn't notice so he picks her up off of the bench and takes her inside and Bani finally notices that Jai has picked her up and says furiously…

Bani: Mujhey neechey rakho Mr. Walia!

(Jai drops her on the sofa where is a dripping mess of water. Jai looks at her with anger in his eyes and says…)
Jai: Tum befkuf hoa kya?!

Bani: (looks at Jai with tears in her eyes)

Jai: Tumey malum nahi hai ke doctor ne tumey bheegney se manah kiya hai? Ketha tha nah , ke tumey tand nahi lagni chaiyeh! Tum bimaar hoa sakthi hoa?! Toh bahar kya kar rahi thi tum?! Huh?!
Bani: (with fury in her eyes and a bit of sadness gets up and looks jai in the face) Main jeeyon yeh maroon aapko kyon farak partha hai Mr. Walia?! Aap mere lagthey kaun hai?! Main sirf kehney ki biwi hoon nah! Toh agar main mar bhi jaon.. Aapko kyon farak parega?! Aap toh mujhsey koi pyaar vyaar toh nahi kartey nah?! Toh ithni fikaar kyon?! Kyon?! (Bani just has tears running down her cheeks and Jai looks at her with so much compassion, he looks as if he is about to come near Bani and he says…)

Jai: Bani (reaching out to grab Bani's shoulder)

Bani: (Moves away quickly before Jai can catch her shoulder and wipes away her tears and says very softly…) I'm sorry… voh main … kuch zada bol gayi… (turns around quickly so that Jai can't see more of her tears and Jai looks really sad about what she said too and can be seen behind her) Main bas doh minute main change karkey aathi hoon, aap tehriyeh, main aapka kahna lagathi hoon.

(We see Bani finish changing and she is wearing a white suit with little mirrors on them. She comes down the stairs and Jai is already sitting at the dinner table, while Tony is getting dinner ready. Bani walks downstairs and is about to serve the dinner when Jai says…)

Jai: (in a quiet voice) Bani… tum baitkay kahna kao Tony mushy kahna daal dega. Tumari tabiyath vaisey bhi teek nahi hai.

Bani: (looks at him) Ji.. (sits down)

They both eat in complete silence and Bani cleans up after Jai has finished eating while Jai sits in the family room and watches her clean up the table. As she finishes cleaning Jai still is staring at Bani and Bani feels his stare so she turns and sees Jai. Much to her surprise she finds Jai staring a her and turns back around. We then we see Bani leave the room to go into the entertainment room of Jai's home to relax a bit.

The entertainment room is absolutely beautiful, it has large French window/doors which lead to a large balcony, that connects to Jai's and Bani's bedroom. The windows have long flowing crme curtains with a delicate embroidery of pearls. The walls are a washed white. The floor in this room has crme marble that looks like it has sparkles in it. On two of the walls we see two paintings hung and on the other two walls we see built in stereo systems. In the center we see a white Piano.

Back in the family room we see Jai pondering about what he is feeling for his wife.

Jai: Kya Pia teek kethi hai? Kya main Bani ko pyaar nahi kartha? Kya main usey sirf ek dost ki nazar se dektha hoon?…… Lekin phir Bani ko jab dektha hoon aisey kyon lagtha hai ke main usey dektha rahon? Aur jab Sameer ko uskey paas dektha hoon mujhay gusa kyon chartha hai? Aur phir jab Bani hospital main thi, mujhay bechaini kyon hoa rahi thi? ……. Kya yehi pyaar hai? …
Kya main Bani se pyaar karney laga hoon? Yah phir… yeh kuch aur hai?.. (Jai deep in thought)

Back in the entertainment room we see Bani walk around the room and then stop after one round around the room and close her eyes and give a big sigh. As Bani closes her eyes she sees Jai's face staring back at her as it did a few minutes ago. Bani opens her eyes in a hurry and thinks to herself…

Bani: Yeh kya hoa raha hai mujhay?

(We see Bani open the French doors now and step outside. We then see Bani put her arms on the railing and she puts her one hand in a fist and lays her chin on her fist and looks out into the darkness.)


Back to the Family room again.

Jai: (thinking to himself) Kya main Bani se pyaar kartha hoon?

(Jai closes his eyes and sees Bani's face crying, laughing, filled with hate and in the the end… filled with love. (Jai opens his eyes))

Jai: Haan… main Bani se pyaar karney laga hoon.. Dheerey Dheerey voh mere dil main bas ne lagi hai… aur dheerey dheerey mujhay uski chintha aur aadath si honay lagi hai. Aur shayad yehi chintha aur aadath pyaar hi hai. (Jai smiles to himself) Yeh baat main kudh ko keh saktha hoon.. Lekin kya yeh baat main Bani ko kehey paon gah? (Jai smiles even wider) Nahi abhi nahi… Lekin bahut hi jald himmat karkey bataonga usko.(smiling like a fool) Lekin abhi ke liye… mujhay uska kheyaal rakhna parega aur yeh dekhna hoga ke voh teek rahey.

(Jai looks in the kitchen to try and see Bani, but she isn't there. He checks his room and still finds no sign of his wife. He then reaches his final destination.. Which of course is the entertainment room.. We see Jai silently open the door and find the French doors open to the balcony and there standing out on the balcony as if just a silhouette he sees Bani. He walks silently closer not to disturb Bani.. And just listens….)

Meanwhile Bani is standing outside while Jai is standing still behind the blowing curtains.

Bani saying to herself and Jai listening: (sighing) Patha nahi kya hoa jaatha hai mujhay? (Bani looks up at the sky that is filled with clouds and no stars.) Papa.. Mumma… Zindagi ne mere saath bahut bara khel khela hai. Ab kya karon main? Main kaisey baataon Mr. Walia ko ke main… (looks up in despair) Lekin jab unho ne Pia ko kaha ke voh mujhsey pyaar nahi kartey… aisey laga.. Aisey laga… ke… Burah laga… (Jai looks through the curtain and Bani's back and one can see the fire in his eyes.) Kya Mr. Walia mushy sirf maanthey hain ke main sirf unkhi biwi naam ki hoon? Patha nahi… (We see Bani's sad eyes. She puts her chin on her fists again. We then see Bani lift her chin off of her fists and look out into the darkness and rain. She puts out her one hand to touch the small raindrops with her fingertips. We then see her smile and put her whole head out of the balcony to get her head wet and she is smiling like a madwoman.)

(We then see Jai move the curtains and pull Bani from the shoulder to get her head out of the rain and he says….)

Jai: (angry) Yeh tum kya kar rahi hoa! Pagal toh nahi hogayi tum?! Bimaar par jaogi! Doctor ne mana kiya tha!

(We then see Bani smiling and then laugh quietly)

Jai: (still angry) Tum haas rahi hoa?!

(Bani laughs louder)
Jai: What is so funny?!

Bani: (smiling and laughing) Kuch nahi!

Jai: Kya?!

Bani : (laughing so hard she has tears in her eyes) Main sooch rahi thi (laughing) Yeh joh aap ke chup chup ke mujhay dekhney ke missions hai (laughing so hard) Hamesha flop hoa jaathey hain! (laughing so loud)

(Jai looks at her and smiles too and he starts laughing too. We see Bani put her hand on Jai's shoulder and laugh so hard that unconsciously she puts her head on Jai's shoulder. After a few seconds she realizes her head is on his shoulder and stops smiling; and looks up into Jai's face. Bani has a soaking wet face and water is running down her neck while her hair is slicked back and her suit is sticking to her. Jai looks as handsome as ever and is looking into Bani's eyes with a burning passion that takes her breathe away. We then see Jai come closer and closer about ready to kiss Bani, but then Bani moves away and turns around, but Jai grabs her hand and says….)

Jai: Bani… please…

(Bani looks into his pleading eyes and turns around and looks into the darkness. She can feel her pulse racing. She seems a bit nervous too. We then see Jai walk up to her and hold her from the back and say…)

Jai: Bani… aaj raat koi doori nahi… please

Bani: (breathing heavily) Mr. Walia… please

Jai: Bani… (Whispers in her ear)

(Bani is quiet and has her eyes closed and still breathing heavily, but when she opens her eyes it is to find Jai has let her go and has stepped away. Bani slowly turns around and stares and Jai… Who looks at her with burning eyes… Bani gets shy and runs into the entertainment room. There she stands in front of one of the paintings Just staring at them to keep her nerves under control. We then see Jai slowly look at her and then smile. He walks behind Bani and starts singing this song…)
http://www.musicindiaonline.com/l/10/s/album.3782/

(1st Song Barsaat)


Music (stepping toward Bani and holds her from the Back.The Wind is blowing and he moves her hair back and kisses her neck. Bani pulls away and he grabs her hand and sings…)

Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Mein Phir Tum Aao Naa (Jai looking at Bani's back)
Music (Bani pulls her hand out of his)
Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Mein Phir Tum Aaoo Naa (Jai is singing to Bani as she walks out to the Balcony again)
Music (Bani's smiling)
Aisi Barsaaton Mein..Aao Naa (Jai smiles at Bani's back outside on the balcony and tilts his head in a kiddish way to see her smile)

Music


Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Phir Tum Aaoo Naa.. (Jai walking out to the Balcony)

Ohh Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Phir Tum Aaoo Naa (Jai singing to Bani's back and smiling)

Aisi Barsaaton Mein … Aao Naa (Jai stands next to a Bani who is looking shyly out in the darkness and rain and he puts his hand out in the rain)

Music

Ohhh Aisi Barsaaton Mein (Turns to Bani takes her hand that is laying on the railing and spins her to him) … Aao Naa (Bani spins into his chest)

Saxaphone (Both are slow dancing with the rain falling behind them)

Dhadkhano Mein Aagaya Hai (Jai sings with his chin resting on Bani's head)
Ek Nagma Tere Pyaar Ka..

Jaisey Koi Sur Mila ho (Bani to pulls away but Jai grabs her shoulders from behind)
Dil Ke Taar Se Dil Ke Taar Ka (Pulls Bani towards him)

Pal Ki Hansi Mein (Wrapping his arms around Bani from the back)
Yun Hi Dillagi Mein (Smiles with his cheek resting on Bani's cheek)
Yeh Dil Gayaaa (Bani pulls away and runs to the other side of the Balcony and opens the door that leads to their room and goes in)

Humein Kya Mila Hai
Tumhey Toh Mera Dil Mil Gayaaa (Jai singing to Bani, while Bani looks outside smiling)

Lekey Pyaar Aankhon Mein (Jai standing on the Balcony sings)
Music (Bani sticks her head out the door)
Lekey Pyaar Aankhon Mein (Jai singing looking at Bani)
Aao Nah…(Jai opens his arms)

Music (Bani Runs into Jai's arms)

Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Mein (Jai holds Bani's face in his hands)
Phir Tum Aao Naa (Jai smiles at Bani)
Ohhh Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Mein (Jia takes Bani in his arms again)
Phir Tum Aao Naa
Aisi Barsaaton Mein .. Aao Naa.. (Cradles Bani in his arms)

Ohh… Aisi Barsaaton Mein … (Bani looks into his face and smiles while Jai is still holding her)
Aao Naa… Aao Naa…. Aao Naa.. (Jai hugging Bani tightly)


Flute (The wind is blowing and Jai picks Bani up and takes her into the entertainment room and sets her on the Piano bench while he sits next to her and plays the Piano)

Piano (Jai plays while Bani gets up and turns around, it seems as if she is doubting this happiness, as if she doesn't believe this is happening between her and Jai)

Aah Rahi Hain Teri Yaadein (Jai closes his eyes and remembers all the moments he had with Bani)
Dil Mera Phir Bekaraar Hai
Tum Milogi. Haan Milogi (Jai opens his eyes and stares at Bani's back)
Dil Ko Mere Aetbaar Haii (smiles slightly)

Khuli Hain Yeh Bahein (Jai stands up and opens his arms)
Dekhein Yeh Nigahein Rastha Teraaaa (Bani turns around and smiles)
Zara Muskrarkey Phir Se Dikhadey Vohi Adhaaa (Comes into Jai's arms)

Yah Toh Meri Yaadon Mein (says in Bani's ear)
Music
Yah Toh Meri Yaadon Meinnn…
Music
Aao Naa (smiles into Bani's face and she smiles back at him looking all happy and satisfied)

Music


Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Mein
Phir Tum Aao Naa (Jai picks Bani up)
Music
Ohhh Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Mein
Phir Tum Aaooo Naa (Walking to his room with Bani in his arms and looking into Bani's eyes)
Music
Aisi Barsaaton Mein … Aao Naa (still walking to his room)
Music
Ohhhh Aisi Barsaaton Mein … Aao Naa.. Aao Naa.. La la la (We see the door shut to Jai and Bani's room and the lights shut off)


Music (The entertainment room is seen with the moon shining on it and the curtains still blowing in the darkness)

Edited by praina - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
it was awesome plz do continue!!
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Posted: 19 years ago

VERY VERY NICE

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONT

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Posted: 19 years ago
awsome....
kitna romantic tha.... 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
dats was absolutely fabuloussssssssss 👏
i like the fact ppl show so much concern and love for Ks m8s i do hope that everything went well for Becky

cont soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
That was an awesome part!!! I really liked that part!!! Please please continue soon!!! 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
wonderful FF
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey praina ji app kahan ho??????
hope everything is okay i miss readin ur FF 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey guys after a loooong break I really do apologize for not getting back to ppl, but I have had alot of school to worry about and I was really becoming TOOO addicted to this portal, but Im back.. and hopefully my fanfic following hasn't forgotten me though the last post was in october.. I do heartly apologize... Its up to you guyz if you want me to carry on with this fanfic.. if you guyz do just post it in this post and I will gladly.. if ppl don't really post anything I'll take it as a no. Love you all!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Hey praina,
Please continue your fanfic.
It was lovely 😊

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