FF: Jai & Bani Concluding part 5 - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
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no words for this story..... very sweetttttt

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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
plz continue. gr8 story. yeh pia bhi na!!! kabhi sudharagi nahi!!!! 😡 ke in dono love birds ke beech aa gayi.... ab tamasha kya hoga...
plz contiue soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
wow that was too good 👏
please cont. soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
wow kripa!!!!
amazing job 👏
keep it up 😳

later!!!!
lisa 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
is that true or you just make it up
if it is true then fantastic good job 😉 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part IV (sorry its a little late)

Bani is still in a shocked state, and looks on, Dadi touches her and she snaps back and follows dadi out to the living area where Pia is sitting with Rano. As soon as she sees Bani she comes and hugs her. Bani consoles a sobbing Pia.

Bani : Pia, kya hua, aab bas bhi kar, kab tak roti rahegi, mujhe bata ki baat kya hai. Getting no response from Pia, Bani gets agitated and shakes her from the shoulders and asks Pia, kya hua?

Pia : Di, woh, woh, mein us ghar mein nahi reh sakti. Pushkar ki maa, aur bhabhi mujhe hamesha sunati rahti hain aur woh bhi unhi ka saath deta hai.

Just then Jai walks in and stood besides Bani and gives a evil stare at Pia, seeing Jai there Pia got up and rudely tells him, "ye sub apki wajeh se hua hai, sub aap ka kiya hai, apne unka business mein nuksan karwaya, Pushkar ko frame kiya naukri se nikalwaya aaur iss sub ke liye un sub ne muje zimmedar thairaya. Aap samajhte kya hain apne aap ko." She raises her hand on Jai but he stops her right there, Bani is disgusted and screams "Piaaaaa", Pia looks at her and is kinda shoked to see her sister siding Mr. Walia. Before Bani could say anything, Jai woh is still holding her hand roughly throws it back and tells her " aaj to yeh galti tumne ki hai ageh se bhul ke bhi itni himmat mut karna, tum mere ghar mein kari ho yeh mat bhulna. Tumhari aukat kya hai, aab tum..tum mujhe bataogi ki maine kya kiya, pehle apne andar jhak ker dekho ki tum kya khud kya ho!" " Aaj mein bahut khush hoon ki mere shaadi tumse nahi hui, tum toh kisi se pyar kar hi nahi sakti, tum ek batamez aur self centered ladki ho, jo sirf apne matlab ke liye rishton ka isstimal karti hai." "Aur aaj jo tum yahan khari ho woh sirf issliye ki tum badkismati se mere Biwi ki bahen ho, warne kabka tumhe dhakeh maar ke bahar nikalwadiya hota." Jai walks off angrily. Bani just looks on and her heart is pounding ever so fast as she fears what destiny has in store for her next.

Rano, woh has been witnessing everything tells Bani "di aapko Mr. Walia ke paas jana chahiye woh kafi gusse mein hain, mein Pia ko apne kamre mein leh jati hoon." Bani nods and goes out looking for Jai.

Bani is searching for Jai around the house, she went to the room and he was nowhere there, she comes out and asks Tony weather he had seen Mr. Walia but he too had no clue, Bani goes about the entire house checking each room, she is panicking not having found him. With a heavy heart she goes back to the room. Its pretty late and Jai has still not returned, he's not answering his phone and Bani doesn't know what to do, she's walking back and forth in the room.. night rolled by and Bani had fallen asleep on the chair. Its morning and Bani gets up and finds herself on the bed besides Jai.. Bani stares at Jai woh is lost in deep sleep and smiles to herself. She gets up and goes in the bathroom to freshen up. By the time Bani comes out Jai is up and pretends to be asleep when he sees Bani coming, Bani comes near him and rubs her hand on his forehead and tells him " utho subah ho gayi hai…utho na" , Jai keeps making funny faces and pulls her near him and hugged her, he says very innocently yet naughtily "Bani, eek baat batao yeh subah itni jaldi kyun ho jati hai, aur agarr ho bhi jaye toh bhi… " he was trying to kiss her when Bani turns around and sits facing her back towards him. Jai gets up and turns her face and asks her "Kya hua Bani" Bani " itna pyar karte ho toh kal bine kuch kahe kahan chale gaye theh, ek baar bhi nahi socha ki mujhper kya beetegi?" Jai " Bani, kal raat jo hua, woh mujhe mere ateet mein le gaya, aaur mein tumhare paas apne ateet ki chaya mein nahi ana chahta tha. Bani mein nahi chahta ki mere kal mere aaj mein hum dono ke beech ayjaye." Bani kinda like questioning him says "Jai, humare beech itni jageh hai ki kuch/ koi humare beech aa sake?" This echoes in both of their heart and they pull in a hug, both with wet eyes yet love dwelling behind those tears.

Just then she has a look at the clock which is ticking 8:30 and is like " Jai, 8:30 baje hain aaur aab tak mein yahin hoon, dadi mera intzaar kar rahi hongi, aap bhi jaker tayaar ho jao tub tak mein bahar dekhti hoon. Jai just winks at her and she goes out all shy and smiling. And Jai is any guesses … back to sleep under the blanket…

Sorry guys, I know I'm posting this part after a week.. but I had to finish a project and wasn't getting enough time to sit and write..Hope that this is not too boring.

Kripa.

(will conclude in the next part, I'll try to have it in a day!)

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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
its awsome ...good job... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
wow Kripa...that was awesome!! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
wow!!!! amazing.....can't wait to read more 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
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good job cont. soon please

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