New man in Bani's Life (END on pg 22) - Page 7

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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice yaar plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey u deserve a clap 👏 👏 👏
the story is goin great 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was good please write more
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Posted: 19 years ago
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HI all thanks for the appreciation, I will continue very soon, but righ now I am going to go watch the movie Fanaa 😃 I will write more after I return 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Please make it really!!!
It is so good right now!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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have fun at the movies tell us how it was keep up with the awesome work
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Posted: 19 years ago
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The movie was good...the acting was great 👏 and the songs ❤️ 😳.
Here is continuing on...

Mr. Walia and Aditiya are returning today. Bani who did not receive one call from Jai while he was gone decides she can no longer stay without seeing him. She is going to go the airport to recieve them. She is waiting at the airport, when she sees Mr. Walia and Aditiya arrive a smile appears on her face. She starts walking towards them when she sees Roshni appear from behind Jai and Aditiya. Bani's smile disappears, she is confused

Bani (thinkng): Roshni, what is she doing here? She went with them too?

...Aditiya and Roshni take one car and Jai and Bani go in another. In the car, Bani who is now unable to even speak, she does not know what to ask Mr. Walia. Jai turns and looks at Bani, he sees the sadness on her face.

Jai: You really miss them don't you? (Bani does not undersand, before she can ask what he means Jai again speaks) I know because of me....Why don't you go and spend some time at Pia's house, you can spend the night there.

Bani(thinking): It has been a long time since the three of us were together and now Mr. Walia himself is allowing me, a smile appears on her face. No matter what happens I will always have my sisters.

Jai: Driver Pushkar ke ghar chalo.

...Pia's sister-in-law answers the door.

Bani: Namaste, woh Pia...

Pia (comes to the door):Di!!! What are you doing here? I am so happy to see you.

Bani(smiling and hugging pia): Mein apni behno ke saath rehne aaye hu. Rano kaha hai, mein usko mil ke aaye.
Bani goes to meet Rano in her room.

Pia's sis-inlaw(sarcastically): Lo ab doosri behen bhi aa gayi, looks like we have opned an orphanage.

Pushkar(just entering the house): Bhabhi! Bani is my friend and Pia's sister.

Pia's sis-inlaw(sarcastically): When have I denied that, she is welcome anytime, we are rich like Mr. Walia you know, anyone who wants can come and stay with us.

Bani who is standing outside Rano's room hears all this and comes downstairs.

Bani(fighting her tears back): Pia I completly forgot but I have this urgent work to do, I am so busy these days you know...anyways I have to go.

Bani leaves. She comes home and goes straight to her room. Jai who is sitting in the living room is suprised to see Bani back. He follows her upstairs. He opens the door to his room to find Bani crying. He rushes to Bani.

Jai(with an extremely concerned look on his face, turning Bani towards him): What happened Bani? (Bani is quiet) Did someone say something to you, Jigyasa? Ranveer? (Jai is about to call Jigyasa, when Bani stops him)

Bani: Nobody said anything.

Jai: Bani please tell me what happened then? (Bani says nothing...Jai gets up, picks up the phone and dials pushkar's number, Bani realizes and gets worried that Jai might say something wrong)

Bani: Mr. Walia please...(she knows she has to tell him)..it was pia's bhabhi (Bani tells him what happened)

Jai(in an angry tone): Woh, usko to mein..woh apne app ko samjhte kya hai?
Bani: Mr. Walia please don't say anything to them, Pia Pushkar and Rano have to live in that house.

Jai leaves says nothing and leaves, but he knows exactly what to do.
Edited by Saregama_fan - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: fsam

Your really good. Ever thought of going pro.

omg, thank you so much, really nice of you!😃 I am glad you like the fanfic!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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you are very talented writer
keep up the great job 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Superb Fantastic Yaar..U are indeed a great writer ..waiting for more

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