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Good to see that entries have start coming for the contest- 😊
i will put all entries by numbering them-


ENRTY #1 BY twilight

Alright everyone and especially the judges - let me try this romantic scene of mine for Jai & Bani Walia.

(Scene in Jai & Bani's bedroom). Lights were off. Jai bought for Bani a diamond wedding ring and placed the ring in its box (opened). When Bani entered the bedroom and (wondering why the light were off) suddenly she saw this beautiful 'sheen' on the bed like a star shining their bedroom and when she on the light.......... wow to her surprise she saw the ring (in the box) and surrounded by roses with the design of love!!! and suddenly Mr.Jai Walia with his beautiful smile say: Happy Valentines Day! bravo ................ who knows it may come true (lets dialog rightfully belongs to 'twilight')

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ENTRY #2

BY TRINI1982

Ok here goes my shot at being romantic………..


Mr. Walia has to go on a trip to Mauritius, since it's a business trip he decides to take Bani with him 👏 . While on the plane Bani falls asleep, her head lolls and falls on Jai's shoulder, he is smiles and then rests his head on hers and he falls asleep too 😉 . During the flight his arm goes around Bani and he hugs her, she rests her arm on his 😳 …….the flight attendant looks at them and thinks how cute and sweet they both look together. At the end of the flight as they are about the leave the plane the attendant tells them that they make a beautiful couple and she can see it was a love marriage 😳 👏 .
At the hotel the business meeting is not going as Jai expects it, Bani decides to help Jai and ask to join the meeting, which Jai approves 😆 👏 . She is able to impress his foreign clients and they have come to deal. Jai is so happy that he asks Bani to dinner that night. Of course she agrees.
As she walks in, the music of violins plays softly in the background and the dim lights of the chandelier casts a golden glow on her. She is wearing a baby pink sari with a turquoise blue border that also shimmers in the light of the chandelier 😉 😳 . Bani walks up to Jai and is surprised to find that there is a single red rose on her chair. She looks at Jai with delight, noting that he looks outstandingly handsome in his black tuxedo 😳 . He watches her with a sweet smile and asks her to sit. He orders and when the food arrives, on one of the trays there is a black velvet box on top of hundreds of red rose petals, Bani looks at Jai with surprise 😲 . He gets up and takes the box of the, and goes to the side of Bani, Jai opens the box and gets down on one knee, Bani is shocked to see that inside the box is a beautiful diamond wedding ring set. Jai then takes Bani's hand and places the ring on her finger 👏 👏 👏 .
Jai then says to Bani " You are like a diamond, forever beautiful. To find a person like you is like finding a rare gem. I am so fortunate that I found you. I have always known that you were meant to be mine. You are the only woman for me, in this life and all I pray that I will get you as my partner in all my future births. You are perfect and I love you, now and forever!" Then the gets up and pulls her up gently with him, takes her in his arms and they embrace……both are smiling and very happy. 😉 😳

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ENTRY #3

BY DIVYA_123

ok heres my entry

after pia-pushkar marriage mohan brings jai to his house where he makes jai understand that pia is now married to someone else so now he should forget about her and think about his future where there is only bani by hearin bani's name jai becomes very angry😡 and drinks alot he leaves from there when he returns to his room he is totally drunk and sleeps on the bed where bani is also sleeping 😉in the morning we see bani huging jai very tightly😳(wow i can see mr.walia and bani together in one bed)😉
the suddenly the alaram clock rings 😡and both wake up and sees both sleeping in one bed while bani hugin jai, bani just looks into jai's eyes with lots of emotions 😳while jai just looks at bani with no emotions 😕then bani tries to wake up where her hand slips and she again falls on jai,😊this time jai also holds her from back where bani gets a sweet feelin of his touch and jai also notices it 😳
then somehow bani manages to wake up and goes strait to the bathroom.😃
jai and bani now dont behave like the enemies or the strangers since pia have gone,bani and jai are busy with their hotel work ,and jai has also accepted that pia is now someone else's wife and now he should forget about her and live his life with his wife,😛he now really cares for bani and so does bani.😳one night bani was sitting outside in the garden where she was lookin at the star and jai comes from behind
bani is lost looking at the stars while jai tries to call bani but she doesnt react jai gets angry and holds bani's hand and tells her" bani mein kabse tumhare picche khara hu u didnt notice me" then bani says no i didnt notice u😃 ( bani knewed that jai would really get irriated by this but she jus wanted to tease jai)😉
then jai says--ok to iska matlab agar mein yaha hu ya nahi tumhe koi fark nahi parta😃
bani-ji nahi
jai--sachi tumhe koi fark nahi parta
bani--ha ha sachi
then jai starts walking but suddenly he smiles and comes back 😃
jai--baniiii tumne kaha ke mein hu yah nahi ttumhe koi fark nahi parta to iska matlab (then he holds bani's hand) and says abbhi tumhe koi fark nahi parta right
bani--nahi😒
then jai holds bani's face and again akss her kya abbhi tumhe koi fark nahi parta
bani says nahi😕
then jai holds her really close to him and touches his lips (this time both jai and bani are lost they have just forgotted that they were just teasin each other) and jai again asks bani( by lookin into bani's eyes) kya abbhi tumhe koi fark nahi parta😕
this time bani doesnt reply anything just nods her head indicating NO😳
then jai really goes close to her and kisses on her neck and again asks bani softly in her ears kya abhbhi tumhe koi fark nahi parta
bani doesnt reply anything and hugs jai 🤗then jai was about to kiss bani on her lips but both suddenly realise that what were they doin and bani just shys and goes away.😃

The End

ok hope u all liked it😃

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ENTRY #4

sanya_s

Ok mine is just an extract..cudnt think of a whole story..

LOVE COMES SOFTLY....

Bani looked at her reflection..She looked almost double her age in the uniform...She was standing in the hotel. She had to take up some files from Jai's Cabin...She prayed Jai wud not b there...She opened the door..Thank Heavens..it was deserted..She searched in the drawer..Where was that stupid file... A slight breeze ran thru the window.and a paper flew out into her hands...She looked at it...It was in Jai's handwriting..She knew it coz she had seen his signatures and statements dozens of times...He wrote beautifully..Ought I read it...She wondered...The paper was smeared..as if by tears...She was just about to put it back..when she heard the door opening...she stuffed it into her pocket..Jai will go mad..if he sees me with his personal literature...Jai glared at her."Wat the hell r u doing in my cabin" ...There you go..its as if just seeing me makes him shout.." I needed the file of the Casablanca Project., It was urgent.." She explained calmly.. He threw the file at Bani.." Now get lost "...It hit her on her face..She felt tears springing up..She quickly stooped down and hid them, pretending to pick up the file...She turned around..and went out..Why was he giving me so much pain for something I didnt even do...
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Maybe I am being too harsh with Bani..But I cant help it. Jai thought . Everytime I see her I remember what Pia did to me..all the betrayals, all the pain comes back to me.

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Bani shed silent tears…She rummaged her pocket for a piece of tissue…Her hands fumbled on the paper she had taken..She took it out, and stared for a while. It was folded..she opened and read it silently " Pia..What have you done…My tears have dried up, My heart is turned to stone. I doubt each and every loving word spoken to me. I see nothing but pain and grief ahead, Everything beautiful has passed away, Now only sorrow remains"….Bani once again felt her eyes filling up..but this time not for herself, but for Jai..Her little sister had unknowingly broken him, She had scarred him for life…his sorrow overwhelmed her..She wanted to take him in her arms and comfort him..but she knew she could never do that.

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Jai put on the keys and drove to the beach…His eyes were cold and calm..like the calm after a storm. He drove recklessly , not caring about time or space..only pain in his mind…He didn't see the deep canyon ahead..He just kept on driving. He felt himself plunging into thin air..He closed his eyes and resigned himself to fate..spent and wasted.

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Bani felt a sword plunging deep into her heart..Jai..In Hospital….He ..no he wouldn't do that …Walia Mansion was shocked..Jigyasa was having hysterics.....All ran towards their cars to race to Breach Candy Hospital. Bani ventured into one…"You..get out…U've brought him to this stage..U …" Jigyasa screamed….Bani could not control the rain of tears that came frm her….She took an auto ..and reached the hospital….
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She saw him…lying there so helpless..so vulnerable…She had reduced him to this state…The bed was wet with her tears…She was by his side for 3 days now..He had slipped into a coma…Day n night she prayed endlessly to her God to make him come back…to take her life and give his back….When had she begun to love him so much…His strength..his anger..his passion..his sorrow….his tears…everything was dear to her…everytime he taunted her…she was more deeply hurt than she showed…She had priced the quite time they shared…for one day in the room…when he had quietly taken up the robe she had taken for her…His single glance at her.She valued it more than all happiness in the world…When did she become such a lovelorn bird…She did not know..Everything just fell into place…Now the man that lay before…mattered so much, so much to her than he realized…
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He opened his eyes…Where was he…The green walls of the hospital room came to his view….A gentle form lay by his side,,,her head resting on his shoulders…Bani….He opened his eyes wide in surprise…but he knew it all along…He looked at her tear-stained face..her beautiful eyes..that calm and compassionate face…He wanted to say sorry to her and wipe away her tears..and make her forever his…O God..What am I thinking…Suddenly her eyes sprang open..seeing jai awake..she pulled back in surprise…A smile lit her face…He found in her face a deep affection…" Jai….Mr. Walia..when did u…"..Bani called out to Aditya and Rano…..

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ENTRY #5

spalle

Jai and Bani Forever

Okay guys, Here is a small romantic story of my kind, Its little bit detailed maybe with all the background information. Anyways, I hope you all like my story.

One fine morning Jai and Dadi are sitting in the living room, As Bani enters the room she hears Jai asking for coffee. So she goes into the kitchen and comes back with coffee for both Jai and Dadi 😊 , When Bani offers coffee to Jai, Somewhere in the corner of his heart Jai feels pleased 😉 to take coffee from Bani, but he does not want to show any sign of his emotions, he is trying hard to detest her and hence gives her an awful look at her and throws the coffee cup shouting who the hell she is to give coffee to him 😡 . Dadi who witness all these goes to Jai at once and says that she is no longer proud of Jai and that her hatred towards Bani has turned him into a monster. And then says that "Bani has every right in this house not only in this house but also on you and in your life. She is your patni !" unable to control her tears she leaves the room.

Jai leaves the room and goes out. On his way to his office he realizes that Bani is infact his wife and that may be he was little mean towards her 😛 😊 and he remembers the day when Bani cooked for his guests, the way she handles her clothes and stuff. He decides to work on his relationship with Bani 👏 .

That night Bani is in her (Jai's room) room cleaning the room and bed and just then Jai comes back from his office, Bani tries to leave the room as Bani is passing Jai he holds her hand, stops her, says 😳 'Bani……..' as sweet as he could, By hearing the word Bani from Jai's mouth in such a sweet manner, her heart starts thumping and has a layer of water in her eyes. Jai looks in her eyes then looks down at his hand, leaves her hand, unable to talk to her just says, " Bani !! …..he wants to express his sorry for his attitude, but his self-esteem stops him. 😳 As he looks into her eyes he keeps his hand on her cheek and goes into restroom. When he comes back, Jai see's Bani sleeping on the floor. He looks at her admiringly and tries to sleep. In the middle of the night, as window is open he hears Bani moving and shivering, he goes to her with his sheets and tries to cover her up, As Jai tries to cover her, Bani wokes up and sees Jai, Jai realizes how deep her eyes are as Bani looks at his eyes where she can now see all the love that is stored in his heart. A small tear drop comes out of her eye and falls on her cheeks, Jai looks at the tear drop and takes it with his lips. 😳 😳 As she senses his lips on her cheek, she keeps her hands on his shoulder, there is this awkward distance between them, he wants to break up this distance and hug her as tightly as he could, she wants to hug him too……. 😳 Realizing how close their bodies are, Jai feels little bit embarrassed and tries to get up, seeing Jai leaving her, Bani gets hold of his shirt tightly, 😳 Jai says " I am not going anywhere." Then his hand met her cheek and his fingers brushed away the remaining moisture. He leaned his head closer and Bani felt that wonderful feeling in the pit of her stomach- a mix of nervesness and excitment. She could feel his intense gaze as their faces are only inches away from each other. Jai whispered "You're so beautiful", They rested for a moment, then he kissed Bani gently twice more ever so sweetly. 😳 And, …

THE END

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ENTRY#6

BY SWEETSORROW18(KHUSH)

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"Bani, tum itni chup kyu ho? Kuch bolo bhi" said Jai, looking at Bani from the corner of his eyes.

It had been a long night and Jai was extremely tired from the Khanna's party they had just attended. All night, Bani had stayed away from Jai's side, she was distant and aloof and it made Jai angry inside. Now driving down the long dark and deserted road, Jai glanced at Bani and saw that she was looking out the window.

"BANI, tum sun rahi ho?" asked Jai again, almost angrily.

Bani turned towards Jai, stuck out her tongue at him and turned back to face the window.

Smart but shararti, thats what he loved about Bani. Jai laughed outloud at Bani's childish antics.

"Aare baba, kya hua, ab meine kya kiya?" ask Jai

lagtha hai bahut guse mein hai, uff yeh ladkiya bhi thought Jai.

"Gaadi roko" replied Bani

"Lekin Kyu?"

"Meine kaha, gaadi roko!" shouted Bani

Jai stopped the car and looked at Bani. She was looking gorgeous today. He immediately decided that blue sari's looked best on her, expecially when she was angry. A stray hair was on her face and Jai leaned over, about to gently brush it out of the way, when she suddenly got out of the car.

Quickly, Jai got out of the car and ran after Bani, who was walking rather quickly. Jai caught up to Bani and grabbed her hand.

"Bani ruk jaao, baatho kya baat hai?" he turned her around to face him and tilted her chin towards his face. He saw that she had tears in her eyes.

"Hey, tum ro kyu rahi ho?"

"Kuch nahi, kume kya parva", Bani pushed Jai away and turned around, arms crossed over her chest

Jai tighly wrapped his arms around her small waist and rested his chin on her shoulder. Her hair smelled like Jasmine and felt soft against his cheek.

"Bhai, agar hamari biwi ro rahi hai, tho sab log mujhe per ungliya utahenge..."

"Jai, hamesh tumari hi soch the ho...kabhi mere baare mein socha hai?"

Jai was reminded of the days when he only thought about his pain and anguish, never once thinking about how much he hurt Bani. He closed his eyes and repremended himself for doing those things. If only Jai could tell her how much more it hurt him when he hurt her.

Jai turned Bani around once again, and looked deep into her eyes. She looked straight back into his and his heart fluttered. He cleared his throat and smiled before he spoke the deep secrets of his heart..

"Main ankhein band karta hun to tumhein dekhta hun
ankhein kholta hun to tumhein dekhna chahta hun
tum paas nahin hoti to tumhein charon taraf mahsoos karta hun"

Jai kept speaking as he noticed Bani blushing uncontrolably under his stare. She was still looking at him and slowly started to smile.

"Ise pyaar kaho, pagalpan ya meri dil ki dhadkan
mere liye aik hi baat hai,
Tum meri ho main tumhein zindagi bhar pyaar karunga
marte dam tak karunga aur uske baad bhi karunga..."

Before Jai even finished Bani looked away and blushed fervioushly. She wiped her tears away and looked back at Jai and before she could stop herself, she reached her full height on her tip toes and gently kissed Jai on the cheek. Jai shivered in delight and then felt the small drops of rain his hand. Both him and Bani looked up and laughed at the hard rain falling on their heads and soaking them through.

Failing to do so, Bani tried to hold her sari and run towards the car when Jai grabbed her hand and pulled her back towards him.

"Let me, my dear wife" said Jai with a devilish grin

With that, he gently picked up Bani as if she were a feather and started walking towards the car. Both of them stared at each other, their eyes, hearts and souls connecting as one.....

I guess good things do happen when it rains....thought Jai, smiling to himself.....


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ENTRY #7

BY

nellie_2

Ok so here is my entry !!! Warning it wont be very good!!!!

Jai is about to leave to go to the office and he realises that Bani is not ready to go to the office and he begins shouting at her😡, telling her that she has forgotten her responsibility and that she needs to be ready for work and if she isnt at work in 15 minutes there will be consequences! He begins telling her that he is not prepared to treat her any differently just because they are married. Bani is about to cry😕 when jai storms out of the house.

A clock is shown hanging from the wall and it is exactly 15 minutes past 10. Bani appears in the nick of time and Jai keeps staring at her.. he is looking deep into her eyes and she is looking straight back at him. They are disturbed by the receptioninst, "Bani, tum yahan? Lekin aj teri chooti hai!" Jais face is shown and he is looking gobsmacked. Bani is proceeding towards her cabin when the recetionist says, "bani tum ghar jasakti ho." but before she leaves she makes sure with jai that she can leave.. "Mr. Walia kya me jasakti hoon?" Then Jai answers feeling bad "haan Bani tum jasakti ho." 😆

After returning from the office he sees Aditya. And then Aditya tells him that bani has made all the food today and did all the work becasue Tony was away and teh workers were on holiday.

Jai feels really bad so he goes and gets drunk. Its late at night and there are colurful curtains blowing in the wind. 😛Bani is sitting on the floor nextt to the bed motionless, her head is resting on the bed and her arm is also on the bed. she has a pretty sari on and she is sound asleep because she is tired form a hard days work. Jai sees her and feels guilty, he lifts her up and puts her on the bed.👏 Just as she is put onto the bed her hand falls onto his and then he stops for a second. he tucks her in and changes into his nightclothes.

he lies in bed and not long later all is black. A spotlight appears and Bani appears under the light.. "Mr. Walia tum kya samajte ho... ke tum mera apman karoge aur me kuch nahin karoongi, me jarrahi hoon, hamesha ke liya. " Jai then realises that all he has is Bani. "Bani rukja" bani turns around and laughs and leaves and then all is black once agin. "Bani " he shouts, and then he wakes up and the nightmare is over. bani is awakened by the shouting. bani begins stirring and it is apparent that Jai and Bani fell asleep on the same bed. After a while bani opens her eyes fully. She then realises that jai must have put her on the bed as she doesnt remember falling asleep there. Jai looks embaressed. Bani being all wifely apolohgises for not waking up early. Jai says its alright as she has done a lot of work, he also comments that the dinner was nice. Bani is seen blushing. Jai gets up and goes inside the washroom, but Bani doesnt notice. She goes towards the window and keep looking out of the window. She can feel Jai holding her waist and his chin on her shoulder and he whispers, "Bani tum bohot kkhoobsoorat lagraheen ho" 😳 and she turns around but there is nobody there. She hits herself on the head for being so silly and goes inside the washroom. There she sees Jai in his vest putting on his shirt 😳 . Bani bursts out laughing and after a while mumbles sorry and leaves the room and closes the door. 😆 JAi comes out smiling and he says sorry there is no lock on the door. Bani is now looking very pretty all dressed up. AS jai is walking towards the bed he trips up and lands on Bani and Bani lands on the bed 😳 Bani can now smell him.. and he can smell bani. He is so close to bani there noses are touching. Millions of things are running through their minds but all you can hear is the wind blowing. They attempt to get up but he falls back down again. Then they get up and are about to leave when Banis mangalsutra is stuck on jais shirt button.😆 Both bani and Jai go to take it out and their hands touch and it feels as though electricity has run through them. They both go to take it out again and see each other and stop. they keep staring at each other and then Bani takes it out. Jai can feel her hand on his cheast😆 they both turn to go in oppostite direwctions but then they both stop and turn to look at each other and they both turn and see eaach other looking and they both turn away shyly.


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ENTRY#8

BY

anu_thegr8

today there is a party bani looking gorgeous in light blue n jai in a good black suit head towards the party in the party bani gets drunk by mistake she takes the wrong drink jai on a frend forcing him asks bani for a dance unaware tht shes drunk bani agrees n a romantic dance goes on suddenly bani looses balance n slips jai romantically handles her (in sujal kashish style) n brings her out of the party n asks her y she had drunk bani replies"main kuch bhi karo aapko kya fark padta hai " n faints jai holds her n takes her home n becoz he cant put the bed he makes her lie on his bed bani smiles while sleeping n says unconciously tht 'mr walia, jitne bure app apne aap ko dikhate hai utne bure aap hai nahin "jai is shocked listening to this as he has done so much bad to her still she says this then she says that "magar aap mujhse nahin pia se pyaar karte hain" "main bohot akeli hun" "koi mujhse pyar nahin karta " she also says tht "i am really sorry pia ki khushi ke liye maine anjane me aapko bohot dukh diye hain i am sorry "n sleeps off jai becomes emotional n remembers abt how mean he has been towards bani n turns his hands over bani's head bani is smilling jai sits on the sofa n admires bani sleeping with a smile on her face n remebers some romantic scenes he had with her with koi faryad in the background music morning bani gets up late becoz she wsa drunk jai is already ready for offfice she wakes up catching her head tony comes in with the cofee jai odered for bani -bani realizes shes on jai's bed she asks jai abt wht had happened n y he is heading towards his office so early jai tells her that its 9 he tells her to have the cofee as her head might be aching bani asks him that how did he know that he replies tht ppl who drink for the first time they often suffer from head ache she is shocked jai goes out n bani thinks "kahin maine nashe me kuch galat to nahin keh diya " bani comes down jai n bani along with others have breakfast n jai n bani go in the jai's car today jai drives the car n bani after some silence says "kal raat ko agar maine aap ko kuch galat keh diya ho to i m sorry jai smiles n thinks "yakeen nahin aata yeh vahin bani hai jo kal bacho ki taraha behave kar rahin thi "bani asks kya hua jai says "kuch nahin " its okay n they reach office work goes on n bani due to some extra work stays in the office late nigt n falls asleep on the table jai sees this admires her for sometime n wakes her up n says"tum abtak ghar nahin gayee " she says bas jaa hi rahin thi n he says "chalo main bhi abhi ghar hi jaa raha hun "they again go to gether in the car its raining (just imagine its not summer)n they both reach home jai is heading towards the entrance but bani is enjoying the rain in the garden jai with an umbrella screams loud from the entrance n asks her "barish mein kyun bheeg rahin ho she says "mujhe baarish bohot pasand hai "seeing bani, jai also leaves the umbrella n tries to enjoy rainhe romantically sees bani n smile n thr two stare at each other suddenly dadi calls both of them in n tells them to change other wise they will get cold
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ENTRY #9

BY MISTLETOE-

Fan-Fic - Ek Shaam...Pyaar ke Naam!

One day at breakfast, everyone is assembled and only Bani is missing. Billo Mausi asks Jai where is his wife, Jai is clueless and embarassed and tells her that she wakes up much before him and hence he doesn't know where she is. Jigs makes some snide comment about Bani disappearing without telling anyone. Rano is sitting there very quietly, just then Bani is seen arriving inside the hall, with a Pooja Ki Thali in her hand. Rano immedaiately rushes to her and hugs her to wish her Happy Birthday. Everyone is stunned, especially Jai! Billo Mausi chides Jai that he never told anyone that it is his wife's birthday today, Jai is feeling too awkard to say anything...but Bani saves the day by telling Mausi that Jai was the first one to wish her....

Everyone wishes her one by one, even Jigs and Ranveer (though they are very unhappy doing so ) except Jai...because according to everyone, he has already wished her. Bani looks very sad and crestfallen that Jai was the only one to not wish her....

Later Jai leaves for Office without saying anything to Bani....later Bani reaches Office and as soon as she enters her room, she finds a huge bouquet of Red Roses (23 in number...its her 23rd Birthday ) and Bani's gloomy expression changes into one of unabashed pleasure and happiness...as the Card on the Bouqet reads, "Wishing you a lifetime of Health, Happiness and ...Love, Jai!" Then another Card is also enclosed which says, "Would you like to join your "Pyare Pati" for a Dinner at 8 tonight?" Bani is not able to stop smiling and blushing at the same time.....

Bani writes back on the same card, "Your darling wife would be honored to join you for the dinner. But the treat would be from my side." Bani hands over the Card to Mr. Chauhan and requests him to give the same to Jai.

Jai at that time is in a Board Meeting and Mr. Chauhand quietly hands over the Card to him, without disturbing the meeting. Jai at first is irritated and then realizes that Bani has sent the Card and is not able to supress his laughter after reading it...everyone turns around to look at Jai, who is now embarssed and just waves his hand to continue the presentation!

Jai tells Mr. Chauhan to hold on and write backs on the Card, "I have never had a free Dinner in my life...so this is going to be a first in many ways then...." Mr. Chauhan looks perplexed but quietly takes the Card from Jai and then goes to Bani's room to hand it over to him.

Bani is now totally thrilled and is openly laughing after reading what Jai has written and then again writes back, "There is always a first time for everything..." Mr. Chauhan is now wondering what has bitten the Boss and his wife today...

Mr. Chauhan again goes to Jai's room and hands him the Card, now everyone in the room is staring at Jai, who is the colour of beetroot now and just coughs and chokes with amusement and delight...and tells everyone to just go on with the presenation.

Bani is waiting for Mr. Chauhan to come back with Jai's reply and has her back towards the door of her room. Just then the door opens and without thinking, Bani jumps and says, "Mr. Walia ka Card laye..." and the moment she see's Jai standing there with a look of total enthusiasm and amusement on his face, Bani is totally taken aback and is not able to face Jai, who very teasingly tells her, "Bani, aaj lagta hai tumhare paas kaam kam hai..." Bani is all blushing and shy and splutters something and then starts fiddling through her files.....Jai smiles and tells her,
"See you at 8 then, Blue Danube, Corner Booth...."

Bani is in her room now, completely confused as to what she should wear and is prancing from one corner to another...just then Mausi drops by and asks her what is the Birthday girl doing tonight and where is her husband. Bani is pretty embarassed and tells Mausi that she is going out for Dinner with Jai...Mausi is very happy and asks Bani, so what is the big deal, you must have gone out with him so many times, why are you looking so anxious and nervous. Bani is confused and then after thinking for some time, confesses to Mausi, that this is the first time she is going out with Jai, she doesn't say anything more. Mausi kind of understands and keeps quiet on this front and then tells Bani to come with her to her room.

Mausi takes Bani to her room and then after making her wait, gets a lovely Pink Saree and some exquisite, antique jewellery to go with it. Mausi then tells Bani that this is her birthday present from herself. Bani is overwhelmed and thanks Mausi, but tells her that she cannot accept such an expensive gift without Jai's permission. Mausi is like, "Arre Chado tum Bahu, ab Jai mujhe bataega ki mein apni bahu ko kya de sakti hoon aur kya nahin?" Bani still looks very hesitant and then Mausi tells her that this Saree and Jewellery belonged to Jai's Mother and before dying, she had handed over her favourite Saree and jewellery to Billo and instructed her to give it to Jai's Bahu, whenever he gets married. Bani now has tears in her eyes and gets choked as she is not able to explain to Mausi that her she is just a Bahu in name and not really Jai's wife (even though their relationship has improved a lot for the past few days since Mausi dropped by!) But Mausi insists on Bani wearing the same Saree and jewellery and really decks up Bani, who looks bewitching!

Jai is shown in the restaurant talking to the owner there very animatedly and discussing some business issue. He has instructed the hostess for the evening that his wife, Bani Walia would be joining him soon and to get her to the reserved table. As Jai is talking to the owner with his face towards the main door, Bani makes an entry. She looks completely different tonight, in a rose-pink, zardosi saree, with her hair left loose, and she is wearing heavy jewellery and very light-make-up. Bani is shown looking confused and her eyes are searching for Jai, whom she hasn't noticed. Jai suddenly glances at Bani and is totally struck by how gorgeous she looks and without blinking his eyes, he keeps looking at her, while the owner keeps talking…..just then the hostess greets Bani and takes her to the table…while Jai is still rooted to the spot, gazing at his wife. The owner then says, "Phir bataie Jai Sahab, kab meeting rak sakte hain?" Jai is completely clueless about what the owner is saying, as the other guy also stares at Jai and again asks, "Mr. Walia….meeting kab kar sakte hain, phir?" Jai is like, "Meeting? Kaun si meeting?" The other guy is now convinced that Jai has gone Cukoo..and says, "Sir, abhi jo mein aap se baat kar raha tha…pur Business plan aapko bataya tha…usi meeting ki baat kar raha hoon.." Jai is embarrassed out of his life and mumbles something about, taking a time with his secretary and now he will take leave as his wife has arrived.

Bani is totally self-conscious and flushing with anticipation of meeting Jai alone. And in order not to appear too conscious, she takes the Menu in the hand and pretends to go through it, but doesn't realize that she is holding it upside down! Jai comes from behind, gives one look at Bani and then at the Menu Card and smiles quietly…and without as much as a word, takes the Menu Card from Bani's hands and places it in the correct position back in her hand and says, "Muhje nahin pata tha ke tumhe ulta bhi pad na aata hai." Bani is totally red in the face and just chokes on her words. Jai comes and sits in front of her (looking his usual dapper self in his black formals) and places his hand on his chins and keeps staring at her with a half-amused, half mischievous smile on his face, and Bani is just not able to face him or even utter a single word. Bani pretends as if she is concentrating very hard on the Menu, but the fact is that she can listen to her heart-beat….she is that nervous and excited! Jai is still staring at her and then Bani unable to bear the whole scenario, blurts out, "Mr. Walia, aap kya khayenge?" Jai is taken aback and then bursts into a laugh and keeps laughing for sometime, making Bani totally embarrassed and flustered now! Bani is now really nervous and manages to ask him, "Maine aisa kya keh diya?" Jai somehow manages to control his laughter and tells her, "Kuch nahin…..kuch baatein aisi hoti hai, ki unhe kehne ki zaroorat hi nahi padti….hamara dil unhe khud b khud hi samajh leta hai…" Bani now down-casts her eyes and is still fiddling with the Menu, Jai keeps staring at her intensely, still the half-amused smile lingering on his face and then very gently keeps his hand over Bani's hand who is holding the Menu. Bani is shocked and really awkward and looks back at Jai, who's eyes are really twinkling with naughtiness now, Bani manages to ask, very softly and nervously, "Mr. Walia…aap kya kar rahe…sab ke saamne…." Jai then grins cutely and tells her, "Arre Menu Card le raha hoon, aur kya kar raha hoon. Khana khane toh aaye hai na?" As Jai is totally enjoying the whole scene, Bani is extremely shy and realizes that Jai is pulling a fast one on her and generally flirting with her (She is obviously very happy but also quite bashful!)

Jai manages to hide his face behind the Menu Card and keeps smiling to himself while Bani is also trying her best to avoid grinning and pretends to look out of the Window and gaze at the Ocean below…

The Dinner is over, its been a lovely evening and as the Steward gets Strawberry Ice-cream for Bani (Jai really teases her for this) and some Liquor for Jai (Bani chides him for having too much alchohol) Jai suddenly asks her, "Oh God, ab batao! Maine toh tumhein koi gift diya hi nahin, tumhare birthday par! Batao kya chaihey tumhein?" Bani who was busy tucking into her Ice-cream looks up and a loving smile spreads across her face and tells Jai, "Jo muhje chahiye, shayad who aap mujhe dena na chahe." Jai is now surprised and tells her, "Aisi kaun si cheez hai, jo tum mangogi aur mein tumhein nahin doonga." Bani has now stopped eating her desert and looks at Jai, without wavering her eyes and asks him, "Maang loo…aap denge…" Jai looks thoughtful for a moment and his lips have a hidden smile and he says in a soft voice, "Maang kar toh dekho…." Bani lowers her eyes and says, "Kya mein aapko, aapke naam se bula sakti hoon…." Bani doesn't look at Jai's face while saying this and Jai's expression is totally mesmerized and intense and he keeps quiet……Bani is now panicky as she thinks that she has spoken too much and that Jai would be upset….she looks up at Jai with worry in her eyes and in a very apologetic tone says, "I am sorry, Mr. Walia…mera matlab…." Jai keeps staring at Bani with the same intense gaze and places the palm of his hand over her mouth and tells her softy, "Jai…..mera naam Jai hai, Mr. Walia nahin…." Bani's cheeks are burning now, and she lowers her gaze from Jai's face as Jai withdraws's his hands from her mouth but keeps looking at her…..

The Dinner is now officially over and Bani looks around to see if someone would come to give the bill, but no one seems to be in sight. Jai is busy throwing cute glances at Bani! Bani then asks Jai very absent-mindedly, "Koi bill dene kyon nahin aa raha hai…." Jai keeps silent and suppress a smile on his face. Just then the owner guy comes and wishes Bani good evening and asks her how did both Mrs. and Mr. Walia enjoy their dinner. Bani is confused as to who this dude is, but in her usual polite manner thanks him and then gives one shy glance at Jai and tells the owner that she has never had a more enjoyable evening in her life….the Owner is very happy and then Bani asks him quite hesitantly that no one has come to take the money for the dinner yet and would he be able to help her out. The owner is taken aback and gives one look to Jai, who is sitting relaxed with his wrists covering his mouth, but his eyes have this immensely naughty look in them. Bani is also pretty mystified and looks at Jai and then at the Owner, who tells her pretty haltingly that, "Mrs. Walia…aap Dinner ke liye payment kyon dengi?" Bani is now totally perplexed and tells him, "Dinner kiya hai toh, payment toh dena hi padta hai na?" The owner and Bani are not staring at one another, both of them befuddled, while Jai is sitting back relaxed, enjoying the whole scenario! The owner then breaks into a grin and says, "Kya Jai Sahab aap bhi, kyon Mrs. Walia ko itna pareshaan kar rahe hain?" Jai keeps smiling in the same fashion but keep quite, while the owner very reverentially turns back to a now totally baffled Bani and tells her, "Mrs. Walia, shaayad aapko pata nahin, aaj hi hamare Hotel aur Mr. Walia ke beech business deal sign hui hai. Yeh Hotel ab unhi ka hai…..I mean aap dono ka hai…toh aap kyon dengi Dinner ki payment." As the owner takes leaves bidding good-bye to both Jai and Bani, she is sitting there totally flustered, as Jai breaks into a bratty laughter and teasingly tells Bani, "Maine kaha tha na tumhien, ke meine kabhi bhi Free Dinner nahin kiya hai…" Bani is now blushing furiously and keeps quiet, as both Jai and Bani take leave, with Jai placing his arms around Bani's waist in a very chivalrous manner and Bani just trying her best to suppress her smile!

As they both go out, Jai is now pretty open and cheerful and asks Bani, "Abhi sirf 9:30 baje hai, shaam jawan hai….aur kya karna chahti hai aap?" Bani who has been unusually quite till now, says in a mock anger tone, "Dinner toh meri taraf se tha….aapne mujhe bataya kyon nahin ki, yeh restarant aapne kharid liya hai…." Jai smiles and says humorously, "Accha, toh is liye ekdum se Chaand par grahan cha gaya hai….." Bani blushes furiously as Jai refers to her as the Moon and keeps quiet as she realizes that she just cannot match wits with Jai! Bani then realizes that they are standing right opposite to Queen's Necklace which is a beautiful spot near Nariman Point overlooking the Arabian Sea! Bani gazes at the Ocean and whispers to herself, "Kitna vishaal lagta hai na yeh samundar…..kitna gehra….." Jai who is leaning back against his Car (He has driven himself today and Bani as usual took an Auto!) looks at Bani and says very softy, "Haan bilkul tumhari aankhon ke jaisa…." Bani is stunned and keeps staring at the Ocean unable to face Jai….whom she knows is looking at her! Jai and Bani share a totally quiet moment and Bani suddenly splurts out, "Mr. Walia….kya hum beach mein chal sakte hai?" Jai is still looking at her but is completely expressionless and quiet and Bani becomes confused and asks again, "Mr. Walia….kya hua…aap chup kyon ho gaye?" Jai keeps staring quietly at Bani and then says, "Tum mujh se baat kar rahi ho?" Bani is now perplexed and says hesitatingly, "Ji…aap hi se….kyon…" Jai smiles quietly and says, "Maine tumhe kaha tha mera naam Jai hai, Mr. Walia nahin…..aur tumnein mujhe Mr. Walia keh kar mera Birthday present mujhi ko wapas kar diya?" Bani is now beet-root red and avoids looking at Jai and says after some time, "Maine pata nahin kya samajh kar aap se aisi baat kar daali…Main aapko aapke naam se kaise bula sakti hoon…" Jai places his hand on Banis' shoulder and she holds back her breath for a second as he places his hand under Bani's chin and turns her head towards him and coming very close to her face, almost whispers into her eyes, "Maangene se pehle soch lena chahiye tha…ab tum nein maang liya aur maine de diya….mein apne diye hue tofhe wapas nahin leta…." Bani almost has her breath in her throat as her face is going from red to redder and the poor girl is hardly able to breath. Jai then lets go of Bani's face and suddenly changes his tone to a casual one and says, "Chalo Beach chalte hai….pata nahin kitne saal hogaye, Beach par gaye hue….Dad and mein dono subah jogging ke liye jaaya karte the….." Jai gets a nostalgic tone in his voice and then taking Bani's hands in his own, walks towards the Beach....😳

Jai and Bani are taking a walk along the beach, the place is unusually crowded for this time of the day! Jai and Bani are standing with their fronts facing the Ocean and gazing at it….Jai then gets a brain-wave and tells Bani, "Paani mein chale?" Bani is astonished and looks at Jai, as if he has lost it and tells him, "Paani mein….but Mr. Walia….I mean….is waqt…" Jai has already taken off his blazer, ties, shoes and socks and is busy rolling his trousers! Bani looks shocked and amused at the sight and instinctively picks up his clothes which he has carelessly flung on the Sand! Jai looks like an enthusiastic child and as he is now busy rolling his shirt sleeves, absent-mindedly asks Bani, "Chalogi?" Bani is suppressing her grin and tells him, "Nahin aap hi jaayiye…meri sari kharab ho jaayegi." Jai gives one saradonic look at Bani and says, "Tum kab se Jigyasa ki tarah baatein karne lag gayi? Sari kharab ho jaayegi?" Bani bursts out laughing at Jai speaking in such a manner for his sister and says that, "Aur koi bhi kapde hote toh mujhe koi faraq nahin padta….yeh sari kuch khaas hai, kisi ne bahut pyaar aur mamta se sanjo ke rakha tha…." Jai is quiet for some time and says softly, "Ma ki di hui sari hai?"….Bani's eyes get slightly moist as she looks at Jai and says softly, "Haan Ma ki di hui sari hai." Jai and Bani look at one another for a moment, and then suddenly Jai says that I am going, you keep waiting here. As a bemused and cheering Bani looks on, Jai rushes towards the Ocean and Bani calls out…"Mr. Wa….Suniye….zyaada andar mat jaaiye…High tide hai….suniye….Mr. Wali….Ja…." Bani is not able to take Jai's first name and she knows that he will upset if she calls him Mr. Walia again.

Bani keeps waiting for Jai to come, he is busy enjoying the waves with some street kids and Bani cannot help smiling continuously at seeing him such a manner! Bani then waves out to Jai to come back, but he is too busy enjoying and tells her to join him, Bani nods her head in disapproval and points out to her Sari…Jai just grins back and makes a funny face, as if to compare Bani's obsession with her Sari to Jigyasa's obsession with all her Sari's! Bani just breaks into a laughter at seeing Jai in such a light mood and then folds her hand and mock pleads him to come back. Jai finally comes ashore, and is pretty wet, his hair is all dripping and he has sand falling all over him. Bani places her hand over her mouth to burst out from laughing loudly. Jai manages to somewhat clear himself of the sand and puts on his shoes ect, but Bani is still holding his blazer and then notices that he has sand left on his hair. Bani tells him that he still has sand on his hair, Jai is still engrossed in seeing the street kids play in the water and doesn't pay attention. Bani just shakes her head cutely and puts her hand through Jai's hair to get the sand out of it…Jai is stunned and looks back at her…and Bani is so embarrassed by the way he gazes at her, that she keeps standing with her hand entangled in his hair. Jai smiles quietly at Bani, who suddenly realizes how odd the whole scene looks and takes her hands off his head and starts walking trying to avoid Jai's gaze! "Arre Nariyal Pani….aap peenge Mr. Walia?" Bani says enthusiastically…Jai just gives her a very cool look and says, "Tum hawa se baat kar rahi ho, Bani?" Bani is embarrassed as hell and looks very uncomfortable and says, "Mujhe kuch waqt toh dijiye…mein aapko ek hi baar mein kaise, Jai bula sakti hoon?" Jai smiles and says, "Abhi bulya toh!" Bani is flabbergasted as she realizes that she just took Jai's name and turns her head to avoid blushing! After a while, as they go walk towards the Car, Bani mumbles softly, "Aap se jeetna mushkil hi nahin, na mumkin bhi hai…." Jai who is busy trying to make sense of his Nariyal, which seems to have very little Pani, says nonchalantly, "Bani, tum mujh se haar kar bhi hamesha jeet jaati ho…aur mein tumse jeet kar bhi hamesha haar jaata hoon…par mujhe who haar jeet se bhi acchi lagti hai…." Bani looks back at Jai and a warm smile spreads on her face, as she takes the Nariyal from Jai's hands and says, "Aap ne Naariyal ulta pakad kar rakha hai….toh paani kahan se aayega…" Jai and Bani both burst out laughing!

As they are inching towards their Car, a downpour suddenly begins and both of them get drenched as they run towards their Car. As Jai begins the ignition, both Jai and Bani say in unison, "Jab bin mausam barsaat hoti hai, toh samjho kuch aaccha hone waala hai…."

Both Jai and Bani look at one another in amazement and surprise as they both said the same thing in the same breath……and a smile spreads over their faces as Jai starts the Car and Bani looks out from her window, putting her hand over her mouth, but not able to hide her eyes from the happiness they reflect!

Love,

MT

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ENTRY #10

BY NIBBLES

~ Dil Ke Bat ~

Okay guys…this is my poor attempt at being romantic – I'm rubbish with romance!!!

So…my story hits off just before Jai's business delegates leave

Guy: Thank you Mr. Walia for having us here…and thank you to Mrs. Walia for the excellent food!

Bani smiles and looks down…Jai also smiles and gives the delegates one final greeting before they leave…Jai turns around, just as Bani looks up…their eyes lock…space and time seems to come to a stand still as she loses herself in his intense gaze…Jai slowly takes a step forward, causing her heart to beat harder and her breathing to become more shallower…suddenly a far away sound brings them both back to reality, and Bani immediately turns away, muttering something about clearing up. Jai watches her with a small smile on his lips as she walks over to the table and starts picking up the plates…she feels his gaze following her and bites her lips, trying hard to control herself from turning around, as she knows that if she becomes lost in his powerful gaze again, then anything can happen. She closes her eyes and breathes a sigh of relief as she hears his footsteps make their way steadily up to his room

***

Jai is in his room and is pacing backwards and forwards…he closes his eyes and an image of Bani, laughing comes to his mind…Jai opens his eyes quickly and runs his fingers through his hair

Jai: yeh mere saath kya ho raha hai? Joh bhi Pia neh mere saath kia, uskeliye meh Bani se nafrath karna chatha hu…usse barbad karna chatha hu…par jabhi uska chehra mere akho ke samne atha hai, tho patha nahi kyu…uske alawa mujhe kuch nahin dekhaye dehtha…

Tensed Jai starts pacing the room again…he takes a sharp turn and nearly bumps into Bani

Bani: I'm…I'm sorry Mr. Walia

Bani moves to the right and starts walking to the washroom. Suddenly she stops as Jai grabs her hand…Bani closes her eyes and tries to control her breathing…slowly Jai brings Bani backwards by her arm and looks at her innocent face, and notices the slight fear as she keeps her eyes firmly shut…he lifts his hands and brings it closer to her cheek…he yearns to touch her, to hold her, to make her his forever, but forces himself to stop

Jai: Bani…

he whispers softly

Bani: huh?!

Bani quickly opens her eyes and is startled to see how close they are, but her heart refuses to move back

Jai: meh thumhe thanks kehna chatha tha…thumne joh kuch bhi aaj kiya…

Bani: it's ok Mr. Walia… Mr.Walia.

That word had so much respect in it…but made Bani sound miles away, when she was barely a few inches in front of him. Jai looked down

Bani: aapko kuch hor bhi kehna tha, Mr. Walia?

Jai looked up at her and gave a small smile

Jai: nahi…thum jao…thakgaye hogi…

He lets go of her hand and watches as her fingers slowly slide away from his own. Was it grief that he felt? He didn't know. Bani walked past him but stopped after a few steps. She turned round and put her hand up to say something, but stopped. Jai turned to face her Jai: kuch kehna tha Bani? She looked down

Bani: kuch bathe kahi nahi jathi…par samjhi jathi hai

She looked up

Bani: Dil se…

For the second time that day, their gaze met again and their eyes said everything. Bani smiled and turned round finally making her way into the washroom. as Jai watched her… a small smile playing on his lips…

Very long, so sorry if any of you guys found it boring!

~ Nibbles!😛

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ENTRY #11

BY ANA16

title: Romance with the flu.

by: ana16



This episode begins with jai and bani returning from a party... and its raining heavily. But no matter how bad the weather is... They both always look fantastic... as usual! They had to go a party for one of jai's friends. They are walking out of the car. Suddenly bani slips because of the rain... And jai grabs her... They stare at each other for a long time bani in jai's arms.. Jai holding bani in his arms... *sigh*... what a scene!! Then a dadi comes and says. Jai puter.. And teases him. That what a scene… it's just like a movie I saw with rani mukherjee and sharukh khan!! They both blush and go inside. Later on in the week… bani gets up to get ready... And notices that jai isn't ready yet... she goes to him.. and notices that h has a very high temperature! She quickly goes downstairs to tell everyone when she notices a letter on the table! It says that everyone had to go to the temple to pray with bua. And they were getting late so then they couldn't take them along.. So as u mite notice... jai and bani r in the house all alone.. With jai sick as ever. So then bani quickly prepares some tea… then gets some wet towels for his head. And she goes to him. Jai is awake and he tells her no need .. I am fine. I don't need any help. Bani says that she called the doctor.. he will be here soon. So until he comes he is her responsibility. She helps him get up. They stare at eachother.. for a while then bani gives him some soup.. and later she puts wet towels on his head. Then the doctor comes. He says that jai has a fever.. but with his beautiful wife aroud.. he is sure to recover faster. Jai looks at bani.

Then when the doctor leaves bani says that she will b rite bak.. as she has to give his prescription to the one of the waiters/or servants.. w/e u may call thm.. and to get his medicines. Then as she is bout to leave.. jai grabs her hand and says.. bani thank you.

Thn everyone comes home and notices jai.. they all get worried.. but he got better… thanx to bani. And then later when he is feeling much better and as his usual self.. he tells bani thank you for taking care of me.


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I Will keep on adding entries as they are posted-😊

cheers

Edited by monika.goel - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
Ok here goes my shot at being romantic………..


Mr. Walia has to go on a trip to Mauritius, since it's a business trip he decides to take Bani with him 👏 . While on the plane Bani falls asleep, her head lolls and falls on Jai's shoulder, he is smiles and then rests his head on hers and he falls asleep too 😉 . During the flight his arm goes around Bani and he hugs her, she rests her arm on his 😳 …….the flight attendant looks at them and thinks how cute and sweet they both look together. At the end of the flight as they are about the leave the plane the attendant tells them that they make a beautiful couple and she can see it was a love marriage 😳 👏 .
At the hotel the business meeting is not going as Jai expects it, Bani decides to help Jai and ask to join the meeting, which Jai approves 😆 👏 . She is able to impress his foreign clients and they have come to deal. Jai is so happy that he asks Bani to dinner that night. Of course she agrees.
As she walks in, the music of violins plays softly in the background and the dim lights of the chandelier casts a golden glow on her. She is wearing a baby pink sari with a turquoise blue border that also shimmers in the light of the chandelier 😉 😳 . Bani walks up to Jai and is surprised to find that there is a single red rose on her chair. She looks at Jai with delight, noting that he looks outstandingly handsome in his black tuxedo 😳 . He watches her with a sweet smile and asks her to sit. He orders and when the food arrives, on one of the trays there is a black velvet box on top of hundreds of red rose petals, Bani looks at Jai with surprise 😲 . He gets up and takes the box of the, and goes to the side of Bani, Jai opens the box and gets down on one knee, Bani is shocked to see that inside the box is a beautiful diamond wedding ring set. Jai then takes Bani's hand and places the ring on her finger 👏 👏 👏 .
Jai then says to Bani " You are like a diamond, forever beautiful. To find a person like you is like finding a rare gem. I am so fortunate that I found you. I have always known that you were meant to be mine. You are the only woman for me, in this life and all I pray that I will get you as my partner in all my future births. You are perfect and I love you, now and forever!" Then the gets up and pulls her up gently with him, takes her in his arms and they embrace……both are smiling and very happy. 😉 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok heres my entry

after pia-pushkar marriage mohan brings jai to his house where he makes jai understand that pia is now married to someone else so now he should forget about her and think about his future where there is only bani by hearin bani's name jai becomes very angry😡 and drinks alot he leaves from there when he returns to his room he is totally drunk and sleeps on the bed where bani is also sleeping 😉in the morning we see bani huging jai very tightly😳(wow i can see mr.walia and bani together in one bed)😉
the suddenly the alaram clock rings 😡and both wake up and sees both sleeping in one bed while bani hugin jai, bani just looks into jai's eyes with lots of emotions 😳while jai just looks at bani with no emotions 😕then bani tries to wake up where her hand slips and she again falls on jai,😊this time jai also holds her from back where bani gets a sweet feelin of his touch and jai also notices it 😳
then somehow bani manages to wake up and goes strait to the bathroom.😃
jai and bani now dont behave like the enemies or the strangers since pia have gone,bani and jai are busy with their hotel work ,and jai has also accepted that pia is now someone else's wife and now he should forget about her and live his life with his wife,😛he now really cares for bani and so does bani.😳one night bani was sitting outside in the garden where she was lookin at the star and jai comes from behind
bani is lost looking at the stars while jai tries to call bani but she doesnt react jai gets angry and holds bani's hand and tells her" bani mein kabse tumhare picche khara hu u didnt notice me" then bani says no i didnt notice u😃 ( bani knewed that jai would really get irriated by this but she jus wanted to tease jai)😉
then jai says--ok to iska matlab agar mein yaha hu ya nahi tumhe koi fark nahi parta😃
bani-ji nahi
jai--sachi tumhe koi fark nahi parta
bani--ha ha sachi
then jai starts walking but suddenly he smiles and comes back 😃
jai--baniiii tumne kaha ke mein hu yah nahi ttumhe koi fark nahi parta to iska matlab (then he holds bani's hand) and says abbhi tumhe koi fark nahi parta right
bani--nahi😒
then jai holds bani's face and again akss her kya abbhi tumhe koi fark nahi parta
bani says nahi😕
then jai holds her really close to him and touches his lips (this time both jai and bani are lost they have just forgotted that they were just teasin each other) and jai again asks bani( by lookin into bani's eyes) kya abbhi tumhe koi fark nahi parta😕
this time bani doesnt reply anything just nods her head indicating NO😳
then jai really goes close to her and kisses on her neck and again asks bani softly in her ears kya abhbhi tumhe koi fark nahi parta
bani doesnt reply anything and hugs jai 🤗then jai was about to kiss bani on her lips but both suddenly realise that what were they doin and bani just shys and goes away.😃

The End

ok hope u all liked it😃

Edited by divya_123 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
Are bani and Jai ever gonna get together
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
😊 Cool ones..divya n trini..
Ok mine is just an extract..cudnt think of a whole story..

LOVE COMES SOFTLY....

Bani looked at her reflection..She looked almost double her age in the uniform...She was standing in the hotel. She had to take up some files from Jai's Cabin...She prayed Jai wud not b there...She opened the door..Thank Heavens..it was deserted..She searched in the drawer..Where was that stupid file... A slight breeze ran thru the window.and a paper flew out into her hands...She looked at it...It was in Jai's handwriting..She knew it coz she had seen his signatures and statements dozens of times...He wrote beautifully..Ought I read it...She wondered...The paper was smeared..as if by tears...She was just about to put it back..when she heard the door opening...she stuffed it into her pocket..Jai will go mad..if he sees me with his personal literature...Jai glared at her."Wat the hell r u doing in my cabin" ...There you go..its as if just seeing me makes him shout.." I needed the file of the Casablanca Project., It was urgent.." She explained calmly.. He threw the file at Bani.." Now get lost "...It hit her on her face..She felt tears springing up..She quickly stooped down and hid them, pretending to pick up the file...She turned around..and went out..Why was he giving me so much pain for something I didnt even do...
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Maybe I am being too harsh with Bani..But I cant help it. Jai thought . Everytime I see her I remember what Pia did to me..all the betrayals, all the pain comes back to me.

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Bani shed silent tears…She rummaged her pocket for a piece of tissue…Her hands fumbled on the paper she had taken..She took it out, and stared for a while. It was folded..she opened and read it silently " Pia..What have you done…My tears have dried up, My heart is turned to stone. I doubt each and every loving word spoken to me. I see nothing but pain and grief ahead, Everything beautiful has passed away, Now only sorrow remains"….Bani once again felt her eyes filling up..but this time not for herself, but for Jai..Her little sister had unknowingly broken him, She had scarred him for life…his sorrow overwhelmed her..She wanted to take him in her arms and comfort him..but she knew she could never do that.

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Jai put on the keys and drove to the beach…His eyes were cold and calm..like the calm after a storm. He drove recklessly , not caring about time or space..only pain in his mind…He didn't see the deep canyon ahead..He just kept on driving. He felt himself plunging into thin air..He closed his eyes and resigned himself to fate..spent and wasted.

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Bani felt a sword plunging deep into her heart..Jai..In Hospital….He ..no he wouldn't do that …Walia Mansion was shocked..Jigyasa was having hysterics.....All ran towards their cars to race to Breach Candy Hospital. Bani ventured into one…"You..get out…U've brought him to this stage..U …" Jigyasa screamed….Bani could not control the rain of tears that came frm her….She took an auto ..and reached the hospital….
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She saw him…lying there so helpless..so vulnerable…She had reduced him to this state…The bed was wet with her tears…She was by his side for 3 days now..He had slipped into a coma…Day n night she prayed endlessly to her God to make him come back…to take her life and give his back….When had she begun to love him so much…His strength..his anger..his passion..his sorrow….his tears…everything was dear to her…everytime he taunted her…she was more deeply hurt than she showed…She had priced the quite time they shared…for one day in the room…when he had quietly taken up the robe she had taken for her…His single glance at her.She valued it more than all happiness in the world…When did she become such a lovelorn bird…She did not know..Everything just fell into place…Now the man that lay before…mattered so much, so much to her than he realized…
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He opened his eyes…Where was he…The green walls of the hospital room came to his view….A gentle form lay by his side,,,her head resting on his shoulders…Bani….He opened his eyes wide in surprise…but he knew it all along…He looked at her tear-stained face..her beautiful eyes..that calm and compassionate face…He wanted to say sorry to her and wipe away her tears..and make her forever his…O God..What am I thinking…Suddenly her eyes sprang open..seeing jai awake..she pulled back in surprise…A smile lit her face…He found in her face a deep affection…" Jai….Mr. Walia..when did u…"..Bani called out to Aditya and Rano…..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow nice work sanya_s and Trini1982
u ppl are really creativy ones 😃
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wow nice work sanya_s and Trini1982
u ppl are really creative ones 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Bravo Sanya.... very imaginative. are you thinking of writing any future dialogue???? 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Jai and Bani Forever

Okay guys, Here is a small romantic story of my kind, Its little bit detailed maybe with all the background information. Anyways, I hope you all like my story.

One fine morning Jai and Dadi are sitting in the living room, As Bani enters the room she hears Jai asking for coffee. So she goes into the kitchen and comes back with coffee for both Jai and Dadi 😊 , When Bani offers coffee to Jai, Somewhere in the corner of his heart Jai feels pleased 😉 to take coffee from Bani, but he does not want to show any sign of his emotions, he is trying hard to detest her and hence gives her an awful look at her and throws the coffee cup shouting who the hell she is to give coffee to him 😡 . Dadi who witness all these goes to Jai at once and says that she is no longer proud of Jai and that her hatred towards Bani has turned him into a monster. And then says that "Bani has every right in this house not only in this house but also on you and in your life. She is your patni !" unable to control her tears she leaves the room.

Jai leaves the room and goes out. On his way to his office he realizes that Bani is infact his wife and that may be he was little mean towards her 😛 😊 and he remembers the day when Bani cooked for his guests, the way she handles her clothes and stuff. He decides to work on his relationship with Bani 👏 .

That night Bani is in her (Jai's room) room cleaning the room and bed and just then Jai comes back from his office, Bani tries to leave the room as Bani is passing Jai he holds her hand, stops her, says 😳 'Bani……..' as sweet as he could, By hearing the word Bani from Jai's mouth in such a sweet manner, her heart starts thumping and has a layer of water in her eyes. Jai looks in her eyes then looks down at his hand, leaves her hand, unable to talk to her just says, " Bani !! …..he wants to express his sorry for his attitude, but his self-esteem stops him. 😳 As he looks into her eyes he keeps his hand on her cheek and goes into restroom. When he comes back, Jai see's Bani sleeping on the floor. He looks at her admiringly and tries to sleep. In the middle of the night, as window is open he hears Bani moving and shivering, he goes to her with his sheets and tries to cover her up, As Jai tries to cover her, Bani wokes up and sees Jai, Jai realizes how deep her eyes are as Bani looks at his eyes where she can now see all the love that is stored in his heart. A small tear drop comes out of her eye and falls on her cheeks, Jai looks at the tear drop and takes it with his lips. 😳 😳 As she senses his lips on her cheek, she keeps her hands on his shoulder, there is this awkward distance between them, he wants to break up this distance and hug her as tightly as he could, she wants to hug him too……. 😳 Realizing how close their bodies are, Jai feels little bit embarrassed and tries to get up, seeing Jai leaving her, Bani gets hold of his shirt tightly, 😳 Jai says " I am not going anywhere." Then his hand met her cheek and his fingers brushed away the remaining moisture. He leaned his head closer and Bani felt that wonderful feeling in the pit of her stomach- a mix of nervesness and excitment. She could feel his intense gaze as their faces are only inches away from each other. Jai whispered "You're so beautiful", They rested for a moment, then he kissed Bani gently twice more ever so sweetly. 😳 And, …

THE END
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it really so nice....

i felt as it really took place in the serial and i hope this scene comes

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