ss - Billo Masi Last Part PG 17 May 18

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I have been watching early episodes of KS and saw masi's entry...kya entry thi...masi her eyes glaring, clutching statue of Laxmi...anyway...I like the kind of happy, funny moments of masi and dadi...so am doing a story around her...of course situation will be changed from what they were in KS...please leave comments to say if I should continue...



Billo Masi

"Arre koi hai? Kahan gaye sab?" Billo stormed in to the Walia mansion in her usual fashion.

"Aree masi, namaste'aap aa gaye." Tony beamed a smile at masi.

"Tony'kahaan hai munna? Ghar mei koi hai ke nahi?"

Just then dadi came toddling out of her room, "Aree Billo, meri jaan'kabh ayee'ek phone bhi nahin kiya'achanak aa gayi."

Billo's face broke into a huge smile, "Biji'kyun mei phone karu'mera ghar toh hai'" She hugged dadi. "Par'kahaan hai sablog'"

Dadi's face fell, "mujhe nahi pata'sab pagal ho gaye hai'yeh teri Jigyasa toh dakan hai'lagta hai isse gaon mei lei jawoon aur koi hakim ke paas lei jawoon'uska bhoot nikal ne."

Billo laughed, "aree biji..kya kiya meri Jigyasa ne?"

"Mujhe nahi pooch'tera munna ko pooch'ek number ka gadha hai who bhi."

Billo laughed even more. "Chal'baith meri saath'kitni sari'ghup shup karni hai teri saath. Tony'dadi aur meri liye chai lei aa'"

The study door opens and Jai Walia comes out, a little sozzeled from the scoth he had consumed. He stops in his track as he hears masi's voice.

"Masi! Welcome'welcome'" he slurs loudly.

Billo glares at Jai. "Kya welcome'kahaan mar para tha'mujhe ek ghanta ho gaya'iss ghar ki undar anae pe."

Jai carefully walks over, He runs his hand through his hair, his face petulant, "Sorry masi'woh..you know'busy tha kaam mei."

Billo can smell alcohol. Now she looks mad, "Kaam tha'sach bol daru pi raha tha na'"

Jai shooks his head vehemently, feeling dizzy in the process, "Sach masi'cross my heart'"

"Never mind cross my heart'mera naak jooth nahi bolta'daru ki smell pehchanti hoon."

Then suddenly remembering, "Aree'meri bahu kahaan hai? Chal mei uski bhi khabar loon, kyun tujhe permission di'daru peene ki'" and then turning to dadi, "Arree biji..bahu ko bhi daru peene ki aadat hai kya?"

Dadi shakes her head, "Nahi'billo...who toh sachi soni kudi hai'par'kya kare."

Billo now anxious, "biji kya hua'aisa kyun boli jaa rahi hai'"

Dadi stays mum. Billo looks at Jai, "Munna'kahaan hai meri bahu? Saach bata'kuch kiya tune usko'mujhe pata hai'tujhe gussa zyaada aata hai'par abhi control karna sikh zara. Bola usko'mei bath karungi'meri zaroor sunegi who."

Jai looks pissed off for a moment and then seeing dadi shake her head, he recovers a bit, "Masi mujhe nahi pata'woh..woh'bahaar gayi hai'uski choti behen ki saath'pata nahi kab ayegi."

Billo looks a little relieved. "Koi baat nahi mei intezar karungi."

TBC'

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iloveserials thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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what a question to ask, Kanta? Ofcourse, u shud continue. A story around Billo Maasi to bring JB closer and to relive those moments is a wonderful idea and appreciate ur novel idea. Hats off.
Plz continue soon. Waiting for the next part.
Ramya / ILS
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Love the idea, its a great one.👏 The first part is awesome.
Please continue.
I've been watching KS from the beginning too and enjoying it.😉
By the way, anything you write is great and worth taking the time to read.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey kanta dii
do cont soon
good story
so where has bani gone?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi
So has Bani left the mansion or something like that. And Jai lying shamelessy to Massi. Well now waiting to see from where Bani is going to come. And Dadi will she tell the truth about the relaionship between her Munna and Bahu.
Bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great one kanta ben, do continue soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Divan, like what you have posted and yes, a definite 100% do continue.

Take care.


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Billo Masi PT 2



"Adi…Adi…mera jigri yaar…" Jai pulled Adi next to him on the sofa in the study.

Adi looked at the half empty bottle of scotch.

"Kyun…akela party maana raha hai…kish khusi mei…"

Jai growled, "Adi…stop it…I am in shit…"

Adi rolled his eyes, "I know…maa told me all about it…"

Jai hugging Adi, "Please Adi…my best buddy, my only jiju…nono…no jiju…my brother…yes…you are my only brother…help me find Bani…yaar nahi toh masi mujhe pitangi."

Adi laughing, "And that is what you deserve…salla…kitne dino se mei tujhe kuch acha shika raha tha…par tu aur teri behen…you two deserve to be beaten up by masi."

Jai not letting go of Adi…"Please yaar…take some pity on me…I will make you partner in my company."

"I am already a partner…"

"Oh…I forgot…how about CO of my company…"

Adi held his hands up, "No…I am not that desperate to be CO…I don't want all that responsibility…aur upar se teri behen meri piche par jayegi…usse zyaada shauk hai…CO ki khursi pe baithana…"

"Fine…name your price…"

Adi looked as if he was thinking and then said loudly, "Promise…you will never ever listen to Jigyasa…"

"I promise…I promise…I will only listen to masi…and you of course."

"Alright then if I find Bani…then you will give her respect she deserves as your wife."

"Done…I can do that…only don't tell me to sleep with her…you know she I can't do that…she doesn't turn me on…you know what mean…she looks like behenji type…in her salwar khameez and no makeup."

Adi thumps Jai, "Idiot…mujhe toh kisse angle se behenji nahi lagti…kitni pyaari ladki hai…sab ka dhyaan rakhti hai…and gadha tujhe behenji lagi…"

Jai reaching for the bottle of scotch, Adi slapped his hand. "I am not gadha…I am CEO of Walia Industries…top Businessman of the Year…four years in a row." Jai said glaring at Adi who had picked up the bottle of scotch.

"Phad mei jaye tere titles…life mei tu failure hai…Jai...failure…aaj Krishna maa hoti toh tera kan khicke tujhe ghar ke bahar phink deti…"

Jai starts crying, "I miss my maa…you are right Adi…I am a failure…I never kept any of the promises I made to her."

Adi feeling sorry, "I am sorry Jai…now stop crying…I will help you find Bani…come on lets go…we will both look for her."

Jai sniffles and kisses Adi on the cheek, "Thanks yaar…why didn't God make you Jigyasa?"

Adi makes a face, "Thank you God…who wants to be your sister. I like how God made mei…sheedha saada aam admi."

TBC…

Rockyy_ thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Divan, you made my morning, couldn't stop laughing, both

Jai and Aditya are a class act. Hope they find Bani, before Masi

knows she is not at WM.

Continue soon, take care.
Edited by cupidlicious - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ahahahahah, Jai is so sozzled and in a pickle. Haila, Bani is a behenji type. Kanta, please, just for me...give her a ultra-hot makeover in Anu's engagement. I want to read about Jai drooling when he looks at her.

and Adi is right...Jai might be businessman of the year, 4 years in a row, CEO etc, but he is also a gadha!
loved the read!
thank you!
Love,
R

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